Submission Information:
Series: EarthBound
Game: EarthBound
Console: Super Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Apple Kid's Theme
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Yug Guy (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4424)
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One of these days I need to go back & fix the composer info on my earlier EarthBound sheets to match official sources (https://vgmdb.net/album/3442)...
- Regarding the composer info: I'm always an advocate for the Oxford comma (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Serial_comma).
- I would suggest a courtesy natural on the Bn in m13 RH since the LH plays Bb on beat 1.
- I would beam the first four beats of the last measure like 4/4 (i.e. beam the LH notes together in groups of four).
Everything else looks nice.
Quote from: mastersuperfan on August 20, 2020, 05:52:57 PM- Regarding the composer info: I'm always an advocate for the Oxford comma (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Serial_comma).
Normally, I advocate for the Oxford comma, but I don't think it's really necessary in this case.
The other stuff is fixed.
Nice, approved
- Because this is in swing, offbeat 8th notes should be aligned with the 3rd note in triplets; m8 is not currently aligned properly.
- m13 beat 1 LH would be better as just a staccato quarter note, it lines up nicely with the RH (feel free to adjust spacing as necessary).
- The melody in m10-17 should be a mostly staccato, right now you have it written the same as m1-8.
- Both the title and the copyright info are not within the page margins.
Quote from: Static on September 06, 2020, 12:26:30 PM- Because this is in swing, offbeat 8th notes should be aligned with the 3rd note in triplets; m8 is not currently aligned properly.
Not sure how to do this in Finale, but I do agree on the principle.
Everything else should be fixed.
Quote from: Yug_Guy on September 09, 2020, 04:50:03 PMNot sure how to do this in Finale, but I do agree on the principle.
Go to "Special Tools" and click on "Note Position Tool" (it looks like a note with some arrows around it), then click on the handle by the note to move it horizontally.
The other changes look good, except for the m13 thing; I meant m12 LH, sorry about that
Well, it doesn't look super pretty, but it is aligned.
You can decrease the space of the empty 3/4 measure if you want, but honestly I think it looks fine as it is. The only thing I have to say is the m12 thing; it looks the same as it did before.
Quote from: Static on September 09, 2020, 05:05:28 PMThe only thing I have to say is the m12 thing; it looks the same as it did before.
You never mentioned m12 - I added a staccato to m13 LH beat one if that's what you're referring to?
Quote from: Static on September 09, 2020, 04:53:35 PMThe other changes look good, except for the m13 thing; I meant m12 LH, sorry about that
Sorry about the confusion here; you can remove the one in m13.
Quote from: Static on September 06, 2020, 12:26:30 PM- m13 beat 1 LH would be better as just a staccato quarter note, it lines up nicely with the RH (feel free to adjust spacing as necessary).
Quote from: Static on September 09, 2020, 04:53:35 PMThe other changes look good, except for the m13 thing; I meant m12 LH, sorry about that
m12 LH doesn't have a note on beat 1...
Quote from: Yug_Guy on September 10, 2020, 04:32:55 PMm12 LH doesn't have a note on beat 1...
aaa you're right I can't read
I'm dumb
m13 beat 1 LH is an 8th note; It would look nicer as a staccato quarter note to match the RH. That's what I meant originally. Hopefully that makes sense now.
I apologize for all that, I should be able to read...
I accept
This submission has been accepted by Static (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4960).
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