Submission Information:
Series: Final Fantasy
Game: Final Fantasy III
Console: Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Battle 1
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Yug Guy (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4424)
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Sorry about the quality - it's either this or a video that's 15 minutes long.
It's not so much the quality, more that it randomly cuts out part way through the first loop which is a bit of pain. Anyway...
-The run in bars 8 and 16 should be G# -> A -> B -> C ->D -> D# -> E. You could also slur these runs if you wanted to.
-I'd recommend using slurs in the alternating staccato non-staccato bar 10. It'd make it far clearer to read.
-The middle voice resolves to an E at the start of bar 10 if you wanted to add that.
-Did you want a courtesy Gn in bar 26 in the left hand?
-http->https.
-The composer and arranger info look oddly spaced out.
-The segno could be broughta bit more to the left.
-The page number and title on page 2 aren't aligned to the margin (or to each other).
Quote from: Libera on October 31, 2020, 04:59:06 AMIt's not so much the quality, more that it randomly cuts out part way through the first loop which is a bit of pain. Anyway...
Oh no. I didn't listen far enough into the original to know that it did that. I mean, I guess I could have just linked my own video, but I really don't want to be
that guy...
Everything is fixed except for:
Quote from: Libera on October 31, 2020, 04:59:06 AM-The run in bars 8 and 16 should be G# -> A -> B -> C ->D -> D# -> E.
I'm still hearing what I have written there.
Quote from: Yug_Guy on November 24, 2020, 05:11:00 PMOh no. I didn't listen far enough into the original to know that it did that. I mean, I guess I could have just linked my own video, but I really don't want to be that guy...
No harm in that if your video consists of just the original audio :P
Quote from: Libera on October 31, 2020, 04:59:06 AM-The run in bars 8 and 16 should be G# -> A -> B -> C ->D -> D# -> E.
I'm hearing what Libera said as well. Also watch the slur in m. 8, it bends down a bit much and touches the bottom staff.
Nothing else to add :)
Alright, I took a much more thorough look, and it is what you guys said it was. I have changed it.
Woo, approved
And accepted!
This submission has been accepted by Libera (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=5291).
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