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Title: [SWITCH] Paper Mario: The Origami King - "Snif City Royal Hotel" by mastersuperfan
Post by: Zeta on October 31, 2020, 10:39:59 PM
Submission Information:

Series: Paper Mario
Game: Paper Mario: The Origami King
Console: Nintendo Switch
Title: Snif City Royal Hotel
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: mastersuperfan (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=3561)

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Title: Re: [SWITCH] Paper Mario: The Origami King - "Snif City Royal Hotel" by mastersuperfan
Post by: mastersuperfan on October 31, 2020, 10:40:23 PM
Title: Re: [SWITCH] Paper Mario: The Origami King - "Snif City Royal Hotel" by mastersuperfan
Post by: Latios212 on November 14, 2020, 03:46:31 PM
Nice one! Only a few minor things to add - near flawless :P
- I don't hear the Ab below the melody at the end of m. 9, nor the Bb at the beginning of m. 10.
- The dyad at m. 12 doesn't sound rolled to me
- Bn in m. 14 should be Cb
- Include Intelligent Systems in the copyright info
Title: Re: [SWITCH] Paper Mario: The Origami King - "Snif City Royal Hotel" by mastersuperfan
Post by: mastersuperfan on November 14, 2020, 04:14:08 PM
Quote from: Latios212 on November 14, 2020, 03:46:31 PM- I don't hear the Ab below the melody at the end of m. 9, nor the Bb at the beginning of m. 10.
- Bn in m. 14 should be Cb
- Include Intelligent Systems in the copyright info
Updated.

Quote from: Latios212 on November 14, 2020, 03:46:31 PM- The dyad at m. 12 doesn't sound rolled to me
It's not, but I made it rolled to distinguish it better from the melody line (i.e. so that it doesn't sound like a continuation of the melody).

Thanks for having a look!
Title: Re: [SWITCH] Paper Mario: The Origami King - "Snif City Royal Hotel" by mastersuperfan
Post by: Latios212 on November 14, 2020, 04:17:55 PM
You're welcome! Looks great, much approve
Title: Re: [SWITCH] Paper Mario: The Origami King - "Snif City Royal Hotel" by mastersuperfan
Post by: Maelstrom on November 24, 2020, 12:42:15 PM
LH first
-m2b1.5 - I hear an F here followed by a restrike on b1.75, which you have written in. It sounds like it might still be there in m6, but it's so faint it's hard to tell for sure.
-m14 - I'm hearing some harmonies here below what you have written. For b1.25-1.75, it sounds like it's Eb-Ab-Ab and maybe another Ab on b2 but it's hard to tell.

RH m11 - I am not convinced by those quarters, since the sound is distinct from the progression in the following measure. I think a Gb-Bb is more accurate than the Bb-Db, but I'm not 100% positive on what the notes are, just that it's not what's written here.

Aide from that it looks fantastic, great work
Title: Re: [SWITCH] Paper Mario: The Origami King - "Snif City Royal Hotel" by mastersuperfan
Post by: mastersuperfan on November 25, 2020, 05:58:01 PM
Quote from: Maelstrom on November 24, 2020, 12:42:15 PMLH first
-m2b1.5 - I hear an F here followed by a restrike on b1.75, which you have written in. It sounds like it might still be there in m6, but it's so faint it's hard to tell for sure.
There are a few faint restrikes here and there that I purposefully omitted since I felt they were too faint compared to the subsequent note and didn't like the sound of the same note being played twice in a row. This was one of them.

Quote from: Maelstrom on November 24, 2020, 12:42:15 PMLH first
-m14 - I'm hearing some harmonies here below what you have written. For b1.25-1.75, it sounds like it's Eb-Ab-Ab and maybe another Ab on b2 but it's hard to tell.

RH m11 - I am not convinced by those quarters, since the sound is distinct from the progression in the following measure. I think a Gb-Bb is more accurate than the Bb-Db, but I'm not 100% positive on what the notes are, just that it's not what's written here.
I pretty clearly hear just what I have currently written.
Title: Re: [SWITCH] Paper Mario: The Origami King - "Snif City Royal Hotel" by mastersuperfan
Post by: Maelstrom on November 26, 2020, 10:49:39 AM
Talked over discord longer than we really should have and I'll accept it
Title: Re: [SWITCH] Paper Mario: The Origami King - "Snif City Royal Hotel" by mastersuperfan
Post by: Zeta on November 26, 2020, 10:49:44 AM
This submission has been accepted by Maelstrom (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4119).

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot