Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: AI: The Somnium Files
Console: Multiplatform
Title: Arcane Incantation
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: mastersuperfan (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=3561)
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RH looks good
LH:
m7 - I can't tell where the G# is coming from. It sounds better without it.
m8 same deal with the G#
That's it. Great sheet.
Quote from: Maelstrom on January 07, 2021, 12:28:23 PMRH looks good
LH:
m7 - I can't tell where the G# is coming from. It sounds better without it.
m8 same deal with the G#
That's it. Great sheet.
The G# is an octave higher in the original, but I brought it down below the melody. I like how it sounds and I feel that the chords are too empty without it.
Sounds fine.
Approved
- For the LH figure in m. 13-14, I think the B would be better written as part of the upper layer that goes into 14, rather than tied to bar 15.
- In m. 16 I'm also hearing the ninth (F#) which would be written in the RH
- Since this is in 3/4 I think the dotted quarters in m. 36-39 would be better off as eighth-tied-quarters
Quote from: Latios212 on January 16, 2021, 02:58:10 PM- For the LH figure in m. 13-14, I think the B would be better written as part of the upper layer that goes into 14, rather than tied to bar 15.
- In m. 16 I'm also hearing the ninth (F#) which would be written in the RH
- Since this is in 3/4 I think the dotted quarters in m. 36-39 would be better off as eighth-tied-quarters
Updated. Didn't hear an F# in m16 but I heard a G so I added that.
Looks good :)
This submission has been accepted by Latios212 (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4344).
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