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Title: [NES] StarTropics - "Dungeon" by stellarlights24
Post by: Zeta on December 06, 2020, 05:25:25 AM
Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: StarTropics
Console: Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Dungeon
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: stellarlights24 (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4348)
Title: Re: [NES] StarTropics - "Dungeon" by stellarlights24
Post by: JacopoTore on December 16, 2020, 12:31:55 AM
Title: Re: [NES] StarTropics - "Dungeon" by stellarlights24
Post by: Latios212 on December 25, 2020, 08:22:27 PM
For reference, a shorter video (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tz5L7hsG79I) is nice :)

This is great! Rhythm, notes, everything is all in place. Just have two things to bring up.

1 - Duration/articulations on the notes. What you have right now has a tendency to "fill in" space by extending note durations where the original piece has rests. Not a big deal with the left hand accompaniment, but for the right hand it makes a notable difference in how the melody is articulated.

So measure 1 should look something like this (different part highlighted)...
(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/401094846107877377/792109460968439848/unknown.png)

and m. 5-6 like this (check the rest of the piece for similar parts).
(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/401094846107877377/792109526009511936/unknown.png)

2 - Text and page margins should be consistent - see this topic (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?topic=10719.0)
Title: Re: [NES] StarTropics - "Dungeon" by stellarlights24
Post by: stellarlights24 on January 01, 2021, 02:18:12 AM
I edited this with the changes based on your suggestions including the rhythm and the page margins!!
Title: Re: [NES] StarTropics - "Dungeon" by stellarlights24
Post by: Latios212 on January 01, 2021, 05:31:24 PM
Cool, looks great now! Just a last couple of things - it looks like the page number on the second page is still too high, and the D.C. is missing a second period after the C.

Once that's done, I looks good to me~
Title: Re: [NES] StarTropics - "Dungeon" by stellarlights24
Post by: stellarlights24 on January 02, 2021, 01:32:20 AM
Alright, changes are done! :D
Title: Re: [NES] StarTropics - "Dungeon" by stellarlights24
Post by: Latios212 on January 02, 2021, 01:36:25 AM
Awesome, thanks for the quick update :) (You can move the music down on page 2 a bit to give the header more room; there's lots of space on the lower portion of the page.)
Title: Re: [NES] StarTropics - "Dungeon" by stellarlights24
Post by: stellarlights24 on January 02, 2021, 02:23:45 AM
I lowered it just a little. Does it look good?
Title: Re: [NES] StarTropics - "Dungeon" by stellarlights24
Post by: Latios212 on January 02, 2021, 02:38:39 AM
Yep ^^
Title: Re: [NES] StarTropics - "Dungeon" by stellarlights24
Post by: Maelstrom on January 07, 2021, 11:07:23 PM
Numbers in the time sig are bolded and shouldn't be. The numbers were actually written in the text font, not the number font so it was super easy to fix

Everything else looks great so I'll just fix that and accept it

Title: Re: [NES] StarTropics - "Dungeon" by stellarlights24
Post by: Zeta on January 07, 2021, 11:09:55 PM
This submission has been accepted by Maelstrom (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4119).

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot