Submission Information:
Series: Sonic
Game: Sonic the Hedgehog (Game Gear/Master System)
Console: Multiplatform
Title: Bridge Zone
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: LeviR.star (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=5007)
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Looks great, some small things:
-Be careful with the slurs hitting the accidentals (bar 9, bar 13 is a little close also).
-Beats 2.5-3 in bar 12 and 14 sound like echoes to me; had you considered notating that in?
^What libera said. That's all I can find though, fix that and I'll approve or accept, depending on if libera responds first or not
Quote from: Libera on February 12, 2021, 02:27:44 PMLooks great, some small things:
-Be careful with the slurs hitting the accidentals (bar 9, bar 13 is a little close also).
-Beats 2.5-3 in bar 12 and 14 sound like echoes to me; had you considered notating that in?
Quote from: Maelstrom on February 13, 2021, 12:52:19 PM^What libera said. That's all I can find though, fix that and I'll approve or accept, depending on if libera responds first or not
- I adjusted the slurs so that the accidentals aren't touching/almost touching anymore
- listening to the melody a little more closely, I found that I had notated some of the echoes as main line, so I got rid of them. No echo notes remain
Files are now updated.
Cool, I approve for real this time
Great, accepting...
This submission has been accepted by Libera (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=5291).
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