I've been meaning to arrange this piece for a while, but I finally got around to sitting down and doing it. Feedback is appreciated.
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1tIIKguBwsCh9KD-QaYpnVtNnoKap-dn4?usp=sharing (https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1tIIKguBwsCh9KD-QaYpnVtNnoKap-dn4?usp=sharing)
Update:
- Fleshed out the LH part with the low strings part
- Fixed the RH part from measures 5-8 to make it more playable
- Added more dynamics and articulations
Some quick stuff:
The notes you currently have look pretty good at a first glance
8va clefs are not piano notation, use an 8va instead. Those clefs are for vocal pieces or some orchestral instruments instead.
I'm hearing a lot more going on in the left hand than you currently have. Fleshing out that would give the song more character.
I hear harmonies for the melody in most places, and the part where you have the 2 layers (e.g. m5) is downright unplayable. I would recommend messing with the octaves of notes to make them playable by the same hand.