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Title: [DELETED] [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Exhibition Match" by ThatHiddenCharacter
Post by: Zeta on February 06, 2021, 11:05:56 PM
Submission Information:

Series: Rhythm Heaven
Game: Rhythm Heaven Fever
Console: Nintendo Wii
Title: Exhibition Match
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: ThatHiddenCharacter (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=5110)
Title: Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Exhibition Match" by ThatHiddenCharacter
Post by: ThatHiddenCharacter on February 06, 2021, 11:06:15 PM
Title: Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Exhibition Match" by ThatHiddenCharacter
Post by: Latios212 on February 13, 2021, 03:48:33 PM
Yay, more Rhythm Heaven stuff :)

First things first - the rhythm. I think this would be better written in 4/4 swing rather than 12/8. The melody and percussion heavily imply swing by sticking almost exclusively to a swung rhythm, and I think triplets here and there for the bass would look pretty natural and actually help get the point across better.

Take m. 15, for instance:
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/308725569124696064/810290228094304276/unknown.png

It's a bunch of quarter and eighth notes together, and it's hard to tell where the four beats lie at a glance (which is important especially for RH pieces that are driven by the beat). Consider this instead (the rhythm, not the pitch)

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/308725569124696064/810291128863686656/unknown.png

Easier to see where the beat lands, and highlights the irregularities in the rhythm - the triplets on beats 1 and 3. Similar thing goes in other places. As a bonus, you wouldn't have to deal with staccato dotted notes either.
Title: Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Exhibition Match" by ThatHiddenCharacter
Post by: Latios212 on April 06, 2021, 08:42:29 PM
Psst... you still there?
Title: Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Exhibition Match" by ThatHiddenCharacter
Post by: Libera on April 18, 2021, 10:45:05 AM
I'm going to archive this for inactivity.  Feel free to resubmit whenever you have the time to work on this again.