Submission Information:
Series: Rhythm Heaven
Game: Rhythm Heaven Fever
Console: Nintendo Wii
Title: Exhibition Match
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: ThatHiddenCharacter (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=5110)
Yay, more Rhythm Heaven stuff :)
First things first - the rhythm. I think this would be better written in 4/4 swing rather than 12/8. The melody and percussion heavily imply swing by sticking almost exclusively to a swung rhythm, and I think triplets here and there for the bass would look pretty natural and actually help get the point across better.
Take m. 15, for instance:
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It's a bunch of quarter and eighth notes together, and it's hard to tell where the four beats lie at a glance (which is important especially for RH pieces that are driven by the beat). Consider this instead (the rhythm, not the pitch)
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Easier to see where the beat lands, and highlights the irregularities in the rhythm - the triplets on beats 1 and 3. Similar thing goes in other places. As a bonus, you wouldn't have to deal with staccato dotted notes either.
Psst... you still there?
I'm going to archive this for inactivity. Feel free to resubmit whenever you have the time to work on this again.