Submission Information:
Series: Mega Man
Game: Mega Man
Console: Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Guts Man Stage
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: LeviR.star (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=5007)
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My journey to finish MM1's catalogue of sheets continues. This one is about 14 years overdue, but as they say, there's no time like the present!
I was gonna say a joke about how it takes guts to arrange this, but I think BlueKirby already did that in the server... So instead I'll give you some feedback:
- Your performance note is just a little bit outside the page margins.
- You can have the simile start on m6 if you want. I think it's pretty clear either way.
- It might be nice to include the C's in m1 like this:
Spoiler
(https://i.imgur.com/87P9vPS.png)
Not really much harder to play than what you had before, and it helps convey that D7 sound instead of just a Dmaj chord.
- I hear the bass in m15/17 play on the downbeat of beat 3. Perhaps something like this would be more accurate:
Spoiler
(https://i.imgur.com/28nBvg4.png)
Might seem more difficult, but I think with a 4-1-4 fingering on the Bbs on beat 2, sliding down to the A's is pretty easy after messing around on my keyboard a bit. Same fingering works for the Ab-G movement between m15-16 as well.
Quote from: Static on June 29, 2021, 01:40:04 PM- Your performance note is just a little bit outside the page margins.
- You can have the simile start on m6 if you want. I think it's pretty clear either way.
- It might be nice to include the C's in m1 like this:
Spoiler
(https://i.imgur.com/87P9vPS.png)
Not really much harder to play than what you had before, and it helps convey that D7 sound instead of just a Dmaj chord.
- I hear the bass in m15/17 play on the downbeat of beat 3. Perhaps something like this would be more accurate:
Spoiler
(https://i.imgur.com/28nBvg4.png)
Might seem more difficult, but I think with a 4-1-4 fingering on the Bbs on beat 2, sliding down to the A's is pretty easy after messing around on my keyboard a bit. Same fingering works for the Ab-G movement between m15-16 as well.
- found the button that shows the margins, and moved the note accordingly
- works for me!
- thank you, it was feeling empty without them but I wasn't sure I could add them
- something felt off. I knew I shouldn't have rushed this!
Files are updated.
Looks good to me!
- Tempo marking's pretty high up... maybe lower it?
- Any reason why m1 RH beat 3.75 doesn't have the C?
- The lower note on m16 RH beat 1 should be Db instead of D.
- Any reason why the minor seconds aren't included in m18?
- Do you want to extend the slurs at the end of m14/16 RH to beat 1 of the next measure like you do elsewhere?
- Maybe include an asterisk in the performer's note (e.g. "*Performer's Note:") to clarify that that's what the asterisk in m4 refers to? You might also consider moving the asterisk in m4 up a bit so that it more clearly corresponds to the minor seconds instead of just hanging out between the LH and RH.
Quote from: mastersuperfan on July 18, 2021, 09:43:03 PM- Tempo marking's pretty high up... maybe lower it?
- Any reason why m1 RH beat 3.75 doesn't have the C?
- The lower note on m16 RH beat 1 should be Db instead of D.
- Any reason why the minor seconds aren't included in m18?
- Do you want to extend the slurs at the end of m14/16 RH to beat 1 of the next measure like you do elsewhere?
- Maybe include an asterisk in the performer's note (e.g. "*Performer's Note:") to clarify that that's what the asterisk in m4 refers to? You might also consider moving the asterisk in m4 up a bit so that it more clearly corresponds to the minor seconds instead of just hanging out between the LH and RH.
- sure thing
- no reason good enough to leave it out
- got that
- I'll fill in that spot with another
Wily Wars figure
- as long as you approve
- good ideas, I'll do that
Files fixed!
Looks good!
This submission has been accepted by mastersuperfan (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=3561).
~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot