Here's the sole sheet I'll be contributing towards the Colors Update, the first zone theme from Game Gear version of
Sonic Chaos:
[GG] Sonic Chaos - "Turquoise Hill Zone"[MUSX] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/yvuav4mll4girj7/Sonic%20Chaos%20-%20Turquoise%20Hill%20Zone.musx?dl=1)
I don't see this in the Dropbox folder and that zip link 404s. Did you cancel it?
Sorry, Gav, it turns out I didn't have shared access to the folder, so it wasn't actually syncing my sheet through. This should be resolved now!
Nice work on this one!
-m. 1 and 9: I'd renotate the first two beats enharmonically so it outlines a F-Bb-Eb quartal chord (so all E#'s become Fn's, all A#'s become Bb's. all D#'s become Eb's, etc). The Fn's and E's are more natural to read, and it works better in a descending line like this (Eb-D-Db in the top notes instead of D#-D-Db)
-m. 8 L.H.: Beats 3.25 and 3.75 should be F# and E (instead of A and F#)
-m. 12 R.H.: I'd rewrite the Eb as D# (#4 in the A major chord instead of b5 - or 6 instead of b7 in F#m)
Again x2, Levi isn't able to make edits at the moment and so asked me to.
Quote from: Bloop on September 01, 2021, 02:05:12 AM-m. 1 and 9: I'd renotate the first two beats enharmonically so it outlines a F-Bb-Eb quartal chord (so all E#'s become Fn's, all A#'s become Bb's. all D#'s become Eb's, etc). The Fn's and E's are more natural to read, and it works better in a descending line like this (Eb-D-Db in the top notes instead of D#-D-Db)
-m. 8 L.H.: Beats 3.25 and 3.75 should be F# and E (instead of A and F#)
-m. 12 R.H.: I'd rewrite the Eb as D# (#4 in the A major chord instead of b5 - or 6 instead of b7 in F#m)
I fixed all of these, hopefully. I also changed the Dn grace in bar 12 to a C## to match with bar 16.
The other edit I made was adding in a second time ending for the repeated section. Bar 15 is not the same the second time around. Unfortunately, this meant the sheet had to go to three pages, so I also adjusted the spacings and system distribution to account for this.
I have updated the file in the dropbox and have nothing else to add. Approved.
Nice! The first ending just needed to be extended to m15, as it started at m17 now, but I fixed that for you too! I had to move the accidentals a bit too as my version of Finale is a bit older, but this should be alright. If there does seem to be a problem, just ping me!
With that said, I'll accept this!