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Title: [NES] Dr. Mario - "Chill" by Nine Lives
Post by: Zeta on August 19, 2021, 11:10:19 PM
Submission Information:

Series: Super Mario
Game: Dr. Mario
Console: Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Chill
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Nine Lives (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=5395)
Title: Re: [NES] Dr. Mario - "Chill" by Nine Lives
Post by: NineLives on August 19, 2021, 11:11:00 PM
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Title: Re: [NES] Dr. Mario - "Chill" by Nine Lives
Post by: Static on August 28, 2021, 08:09:56 PM
Looks pretty good overall
Title: Re: [NES] Dr. Mario - "Chill" by Nine Lives
Post by: NineLives on August 28, 2021, 11:14:02 PM
Mkay. The sheet has been updated. The falls were left out.
Title: Re: [NES] Dr. Mario - "Chill" by Nine Lives
Post by: Static on August 29, 2021, 12:05:58 AM
Looks good, just a few more additional comments:
Title: Re: [NES] Dr. Mario - "Chill" by Nine Lives
Post by: NineLives on August 29, 2021, 12:27:31 AM
I'm pretty sure I did set it to "chromatically" and it ended up the same. Well, either way, I believe I got everything above. Anything I missed?
Title: Re: [NES] Dr. Mario - "Chill" by Nine Lives
Post by: Static on August 29, 2021, 12:36:13 AM
Not sure why it changed the accidentals then, but whatever, it looks fine now. I'll approve
Title: Re: [NES] Dr. Mario - "Chill" by Nine Lives
Post by: Latios212 on August 29, 2021, 03:56:58 AM
Looks great, just a few comments on rhythm groupings:
- m. 26/28/30/32 have a quarter going through beat 3 in the RH. Change that to eighth + half rest
- Similar for the quarter rest in m. 48
- I would suggest not beaming together groups of three eighth notes in places like m. 7 LH, opting to break the beam at the beat. This isn't mandatory of course, though I and others think it tends to look a little neater. To easily change this everywhere, go to document > document options > beams and uncheck "include rests when beaming in groups of 4" and "beam three notes before/after an eighth rest" (thanks MSF)

Title: Re: [NES] Dr. Mario - "Chill" by Nine Lives
Post by: NineLives on August 29, 2021, 07:01:28 AM
Mkie dokie! Sheet's been updated with the fixes!
Title: Re: [NES] Dr. Mario - "Chill" by Nine Lives
Post by: Latios212 on August 29, 2021, 05:22:42 PM
Neato! Good to go!
Title: Re: [NES] Dr. Mario - "Chill" by Nine Lives
Post by: Zeta on August 29, 2021, 05:22:46 PM
This submission has been accepted by Latios212 (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4344).

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot