Submission Information:
Series: Animal Crossing
Game: Doubutsu no Mori e+
Console: Nintendo GameCube
Title: Reset Surveillance Center
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Static (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4960)
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Last time I checked, this isn't on YouTube, so here (https://drive.google.com/file/d/1LV7kEKQcp4-QR4jJXe3F25j11fZrpMWW/view?usp=sharing)'s a rip directly from the game.
There are no official track titles for this game, so I picked this one based on what the building is called in City Folk and New Leaf, which I think would help people find it.
The phrase where the E starts on beat 4.5 of m6/14/20 messes with my brain
- missing dynamic
- idk what happened but the measure numbers are off
Spoiler
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/892557518759415858/913205643912032296/unknown.png
- it sounds like there's a missing Bb on beat 1 in the bass for m17/19/21
- the 7th/9th dyads of measures 18, 20, and 22 sound like they come on beat 1 instead of beat 3
Everything should be fixed now, plus some additional changes. The measure number thing was because I had originally copied this from my other Resetti sheet without changing the numbers back.
Quote from: Static on November 25, 2021, 10:37:28 AMThe measure number thing was because I had originally copied this from my other Resetti sheet without changing the numbers back.
you mean you didn't resetti the numbers
I have nothing to add, this looks great
I don't have anything to say about the notes either, looks great! There's just two things I thought about:
-I'm not sure if a key signature is that necessary here, as the track doesn't seem really feel that much like Bb-major (or lydian-mixolydian I guess). It's really just there for the low Bb's every few bars.
-Maybe you could consider raising the notes of the higher knocks one or two stave lines, so the player may think about finding something to knock on that sounds higher.
I basically hear that lydian-mixolydian/acoustic scale vibe with the tonic as Bb, so it still sounds major to my ear at least. The melody itself outlines the scale. For the percussion, since I just kept it to one knock (instead of multiple types written on different lines/spaces), the pitch is ambiguous imo regardless of what line it's on. For a performance, almost anything that's knocked on would work fine. I think I'd rather just keep it as it is.
Alright, that sounds logical! In that case, I'll accept this!
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/895351643024015360/906174892746108988/BloopApproves2.png
This submission has been accepted by Bloop (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=1023).
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