Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Silkworm
Console: Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Ending
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arrangers: Jacopo Tore (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4805) & Chiara Basolu (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=7556)
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Quote from: ChiaraBasolu on March 15, 2022, 08:59:56 AM
Could you please add "Chiara Basolu" as arranger?
Thanks
Do you mean change the arranger name to "Chiara Bsaolu" with a space in the middle? ChiaraBasolu is already listed as an arranger in the NSM Panel
If so, I've updated the arranger name accordingly in the system.
Quote from: Latios212 on March 29, 2022, 02:38:22 PMDo you mean change the arranger name to "Chiara Bsaolu" with a space in the middle? ChiaraBasolu is already listed as an arranger in the NSM Panel
If so, I've updated the arranger name accordingly in the system.
Thank you so much as always <3
Off to a good start! Might I suggest adding some articulation to the sheet? Some notes aren't held as long as you have them written, so adding staccato markings would be in order.
Also, the middle layer in measures 13-14 is too far a stretch to play. You'll need to take some liberties here, so here are some options I came up with: (feel free to choose one, or come up with your own!)
- Move the middle layer down an octave and play it with the left hand
- Move the bottom layer up an octave and play the middle layer with the left hand
- Move the middle layer up an octave and play it with the right hand (I wouldn't recommend this as it clashes with the top layer)
- Play the first note of the middle layer with the right hand, and play the other 3 with the left hand. You won't be able to sustain the note in the bottom layer.
Hope this helps!
Quote from: XiaoMigros on April 01, 2022, 01:52:56 PMOff to a good start! Might I suggest adding some articulation to the sheet? Some notes aren't held as long as you have them written, so adding staccato markings would be in order.
Also, the middle layer in measures 13-14 is too far a stretch to play. You'll need to take some liberties here, so here are some options I came up with: (feel free to choose one, or come up with your own!)
- Move the middle layer down an octave and play it with the left hand
- Move the bottom layer up an octave and play the middle layer with the left hand
- Move the middle layer up an octave and play it with the right hand (I wouldn't recommend this as it clashes with the top layer)
- Play the first note of the middle layer with the right hand, and play the other 3 with the left hand. You won't be able to sustain the note in the bottom layer.
Hope this helps!
Did it thanks!
I'm afraid I'm not seeing any changes compared to the previous version, did you save/update the files correctly?
Quote from: XiaoMigros on May 12, 2022, 11:44:39 AMI'm afraid I'm not seeing any changes compared to the previous version, did you save/update the files correctly?
I change the last note
Ah, I think I missed that. The last 3 half notes in this excerpt will also need changing:
m13-14
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/844835144242298910/974401312462614629/unknown.png
Quote from: XiaoMigros on May 12, 2022, 01:03:49 PMAh, I think I missed that. The last 3 half notes in this excerpt will also need changing:
m13-14
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/844835144242298910/974401312462614629/unknown.png
ok can you try now?
It still looks the same to me. If you want that lower layer to be played by the left hand, I think that should be made more clear.
Quote from: XiaoMigros on May 15, 2022, 02:38:53 AMIt still looks the same to me. If you want that lower layer to be played by the left hand, I think that should be made more clear.
Did it
Awesome! There are some more minor things I found, such as:
- Measure 1: I think the forte marking should be moved down a bit, so it is centered between the staves, and right a bit, so its starts at the same place as the notes.
- The sheet also doesn't have a tempo marking yet, you should probably add one of those.
- There is also a lot of vertical space between the first system and the composer/arranger text, so after adding the tempo marking you should change that.
Quote from: XiaoMigros on May 16, 2022, 07:45:53 AMAwesome! There are some more minor things I found, such as:
- Measure 1: I think the forte marking should be moved down a bit, so it is centered between the staves, and right a bit, so its starts at the same place as the notes.
- The sheet also doesn't have a tempo marking yet, you should probably add one of those.
- There is also a lot of vertical space between the first system and the composer/arranger text, so after adding the tempo marking you should change that.
Did it
Quote from: XiaoMigros on May 16, 2022, 07:45:53 AMAwesome! There are some more minor things I found, such as:
- Measure 1: I think the forte marking should be moved down a bit, so it is centered between the staves, and right a bit, so its starts at the same place as the notes.
- The sheet also doesn't have a tempo marking yet, you should probably add one of those.
- There is also a lot of vertical space between the first system and the composer/arranger text, so after adding the tempo marking you should change that.
Did it
-m1: L.H. note should be a G.
-You could try and add some articulations (so staccatos and/or tenutos) to some notes, since not all quarter notes are the same length here. For example, m9-10 in the L.H. are very clearly staccato, while in m11-12 they are tenuto.
-m15: I hear the G in the L.H. an octave up (so in the R.H.). This allows you to move the C down an octave to its original octave too, if you want.
Btw, if you want the low C in m13-14 down an octave too, you could use the damper pedal and put the high C in the R.H.
What do you think now?
btw thanks you your help
Sorry for the wait on my response, but looking better already!
-m1-8: All L.H. quarter notes in this section are just as staccato as the ones in m9-10, so I think you can add staccatos to these too. Maybe you can also add a staccato mark to the first dotted 8th note in both R.H. and L.H. in m6 and 8.
-m14: The first half note in the second layer of the R.H. should be an E (I think this was like that before too)
-There's an empty measure on a second page that could just as well be deleted.
Quote from: Bloop on July 15, 2022, 10:59:32 AMSorry for the wait on my response, but looking better already!
-m1-8: All L.H. quarter notes in this section are just as staccato as the ones in m9-10, so I think you can add staccatos to these too. Maybe you can also add a staccato mark to the first dotted 8th note in both R.H. and L.H. in m6 and 8.
-m14: The first half note in the second layer of the R.H. should be an E (I think this was like that before too)
-There's an empty measure on a second page that could just as well be deleted.
did it
Great, then I'll approve!
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/895351643024015360/906174785795522560/BloopActuallyApproves.png
This looks good, the only thing I have to say is that the developer (Tecmo) should be added to the copyright, and that "Sammy Japan" should be "Sammy Corporation," the official name of the business. The copyright info should look like this:
Tecmo, Sammy Corporation © 1990
Quote from: Static on August 27, 2022, 03:40:44 PMThis looks good, the only thing I have to say is that the developer (Tecmo) should be added to the copyright, and that "Sammy Japan" should be "Sammy Corporation," the official name of the business. The copyright info should look like this:
Tecmo, Sammy Corporation © 1990
Did it
Looks good
This submission has been accepted by Static (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4960).
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