Here are my sheets for this project! I've added them to the Dropbox folder.
Kirby Super Star - Milky Way Wishes [Original] (https://downloads.khinsider.com/game-soundtracks/album/kirby-super-star/49%2520Milky%2520Way%2520Wishes.mp3)
Rhythm Tengoku - Night Walk [Original] (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tiJSSs4kNYk)
The title for the first is self-explanatory, but for the second here's a gameplay video for those unfamiliar with the game:
If you guys will allow, I may propose adding in another one (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?topic=6703.msg425309;topicseen#msg425309) since this and my other submissions above are fairly straightforward and don't contain a lot of unique material when considering loops.
Yoshi's Crafted World - A Teeny, Tiny Universe [Original] (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8HybgQK5U-c)
This takes place in "space". Example video (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=auolOv7SBr8)
I think I might have an arrangement of that 3rd one lying around somewhere, time to dig through my drive again..
Milky Way Wishes- m8 LH beat 4.5 should be F instead of C
- m9-17: Some dynamic swelling/fading would be nice here. You could just put < > in m10-11 and put simile in m12, since space is tighter there.
Regarding the Crafted World sheet, I think that would be fine since it's pretty short and simple.
Night Walk
this pulls no punches on the modulations lol
-m1-2: From m1 beat 3 there's a lower octave too, you could add that in for the L.H., with the R.H. playing a higher octave in m2, like this:
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/863709312067829811/971855100693864458/unknown.png
-m33: Maybe you could add another A in the second layer of the R.H. on beat 2, since there are chord hits on all beats.
That's all I think ^^
Quote from: Static on May 03, 2022, 11:34:01 AMMilky Way Wishes
- m8 LH beat 4.5 should be F instead of C
- m9-17: Some dynamic swelling/fading would be nice here. You could just put < > in m10-11 and put simile in m12, since space is tighter there.
Yep updated these!
Quote from: Bloop on May 05, 2022, 12:25:37 PMNight Walk
this pulls no punches on the modulations lol
-m1-2: From m1 beat 3 there's a lower octave too, you could add that in for the L.H., with the R.H. playing a higher octave in m2, like this:
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/863709312067829811/971855100693864458/unknown.png
-m33: Maybe you could add another A in the second layer of the R.H. on beat 2, since there are chord hits on all beats.
That's all I think ^^
Sure doesn't lol. It jumps up just like the guy in the minigame ^^ Changes sound good, file updated!
Quote from: Static on May 03, 2022, 11:34:01 AMRegarding the Crafted World sheet, I think that would be fine since it's pretty short and simple.
Neato, added it in~
Awesome, approving Night Walk!
Milky Way Wishes
Maybe also put a decrescendo in m9. I'll approve either way though
Sounds good, added that~
Night Walk
The only thing I can think is that it might be nice to emphasise bars 10/18/26 etc. over bars 4/12/20 etc. somehow (in the original they feel more emphatic due to the extra part playing it). Maybe staccato-tenutos or tenutos? Something like that maybe. Otherwise this looks great.
Quote from: Libera on May 21, 2022, 07:51:24 AMNight Walk
The only thing I can think is that it might be nice to emphasise bars 10/18/26 etc. over bars 4/12/20 etc. somehow (in the original they feel more emphatic due to the extra part playing it). Maybe staccato-tenutos or tenutos? Something like that maybe. Otherwise this looks great.
Thank you! I agree those parts would appreciate some emphasis. Looking at it again I think octaves would convey that extra part even better than additional articulation, so I've updated that!
Night Walk
I can't see that change in the file on dropbox. Will accept whenever it appears.
Milky Way Wishes
The only thing that I really noticed is that in the B section the RH seems slightly different on the second and fourth iterations. To be specific, I mean that I can hear the lower note appear on beat 1 of bar 13 and 17 (Dn in 13, En in 17). I hear 11 and 15 as written.
This also might be one of those sheets where the 6cm staff size is worth it, but I don't really mind that much.
Night Walk
Oops, got that updated!
Milky Way Wishes
Ah yeah I think you're right, added those notes in. I'm not sure exactly what you mean by the 6cm staff size though?
We talked about the staff size a little on discord. Both look great, so I'll accept them both.