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Title: [N64] GoldenEye 007 - "Byelomorye Dam" (Replacement) by XiaoMigros
Post by: Zeta on March 18, 2023, 09:29:31 AM
Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: GoldenEye 007
Console: Nintendo 64
Title: Byelomorye Dam
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: XiaoMigros (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=6725)


Replacement Information:

Links to Existing Sheet: MUS (http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/mus/333) | MIDI (http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/mid/333) | PDF (http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/pdf/333)
Replacement Type: Challenge (new arranger)

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Title: Re: [N64] GoldenEye 007 - "Arkangelsk Dam" (Replacement) by XiaoMigros
Post by: XiaoMigros on March 18, 2023, 09:36:24 AM
Title: Re: [N64] GoldenEye 007 - "Arkangelsk Dam" (Replacement) by XiaoMigros
Post by: Kricketune54 on April 10, 2023, 10:13:46 AM
Sorry I didn't get to this sooner, I had looked at the notes quite awhile ago when you first posted this to the replacement thread and I don't have anything to add in that regard.

- Don't forget some sort of credit for the James Bond theme
- For the LH you could mark the 8va with a dotted line and put simile after a couple bars or so, that way you can hide most of it (which would give copyright at bottom of first page more space, for example) like this screenshot
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https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/892557518759415858/934712356922085486/unknown.png
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- There's no second ending marker like there is for the first, this should be at m51 because it looks a little confusing otherwise to not have it
- m39 and m42 I know this is defaulting this way but the bottom ties in the RH could be flipped here? Would look a bit better
- last measure I think you could put a staccato on LH beat 2.5

Great job on this replacement, I don't think I have anything else to add from here
Title: Re: [N64] GoldenEye 007 - "Arkangelsk Dam" (Replacement) by XiaoMigros
Post by: XiaoMigros on April 10, 2023, 12:04:24 PM
Quote from: Kricketune54 on April 10, 2023, 10:13:46 AM- For the LH you could mark the 8va with a dotted line and put simile after a couple bars or so, that way you can hide most of it (which would give copyright at bottom of first page more space, for example)
I agree that it would save space, but I prefer having a consistent marking throughout (it's easier to read imo).
Good point with getting too close to the copyright text though, I readjusted the spacing on the first page.

Quote from: Kricketune54 on April 10, 2023, 10:13:46 AM- I think you could put a staccato on LH beat 2.5
Is there a particular measure you're referring to? Most of the LH's beat 2.5s do have staccatos on them.

Quote from: Kricketune54 on April 10, 2023, 10:13:46 AMGreat job on this replacement, I don't think I have anything else to add from here
Thanks! Thanks also for taking the time to look over it. Everything else should be addressed :)
Title: Re: [N64] GoldenEye 007 - "Arkangelsk Dam" (Replacement) by XiaoMigros
Post by: Kricketune54 on April 10, 2023, 12:17:01 PM
Quote from: XiaoMigros on April 10, 2023, 12:04:24 PMI agree that it would save space, but I prefer having a consistent marking throughout (it's easier to read imo).Good point with getting too close to the copyright text though, I readjusted the spacing on the first page.
Okay, I figured it probably is easier with the 8va continuously written out than trying to remember

Quote from: XiaoMigrosIs there a particular measure you're referring to? Most of the LH's beat 2.5s do have staccatos on them.
clarified over Discord, meant the last measure of the track.

Approved
Title: Re: [N64] GoldenEye 007 - "Arkangelsk Dam" (Replacement) by XiaoMigros
Post by: Bloop on April 16, 2023, 11:27:16 AM
Three maybes apparently, nice track!

-Maybe you could give some differences in dynamics in this sheet: for example, the sections at m1 and m19 seem pretty forte-y, while others like m7 and 35 seem a bit more mezzo-forte-y
-m33: Maybe you could restrike the G and E in the R.H. here, as the notes might have faded out a bit too much compared to the other voices by this point. Same thing in m45 and 49
-Maybe this is an interesting alternate take on the repeats in page 3:
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https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/863709312067829811/1097223970715078696/image.png
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It saves repeat bars in m31-34, and the shorter first ending possibly makes it easier to skip to the next section
Title: Re: [N64] GoldenEye 007 - "Byelomorye Dam" (Replacement) by XiaoMigros
Post by: XiaoMigros on April 18, 2023, 05:28:44 AM
Quote from: Bloop on April 16, 2023, 11:27:16 AM-Maybe you could give some differences in dynamics in this sheet: for example, the sections at m1 and m19 seem pretty forte-y, while others like m7 and 35 seem a bit more mezzo-forte-y
Added some in

Quote from: Bloop on April 16, 2023, 11:27:16 AM-m33: Maybe you could restrike the G and E in the R.H. here, as the notes might have faded out a bit too much compared to the other voices by this point. Same thing in m45 and 49
I orginally restruck every note in the chord for the fade reason, but this is a nice inbetween version. updated

Quote from: Bloop on April 16, 2023, 11:27:16 AM-Maybe this is an interesting alternate take on the repeats in page 3:
This looks more navigable, I like it :p also updated
Title: Re: [N64] GoldenEye 007 - "Byelomorye Dam" (Replacement) by XiaoMigros
Post by: Bloop on April 25, 2023, 11:15:59 AM
The repeat symbols at m31-34 should be left out, since the repeat is now in m35-38. Aside from that all looks good!
Title: Re: [N64] GoldenEye 007 - "Byelomorye Dam" (Replacement) by XiaoMigros
Post by: XiaoMigros on April 25, 2023, 12:11:44 PM
Oops, those definitely shouldn't be there. Fixed!

I also removed a tie in m48 to restrike the strings part similar to previously in the sheet.
Title: Re: [N64] GoldenEye 007 - "Byelomorye Dam" (Replacement) by XiaoMigros
Post by: Bloop on April 27, 2023, 11:51:56 AM
Awesome, then I'll accept!
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/895351643024015360/906174892746108988/BloopApproves2.png
Title: Re: [N64] GoldenEye 007 - "Byelomorye Dam" (Replacement) by XiaoMigros
Post by: Zeta on April 27, 2023, 11:52:20 AM
This submission has been accepted by Bloop (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=1023).

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot