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Title: razer84's arrangements (5/2) (updated/changed song)
Post by: razer84 on April 19, 2008, 04:30:47 PM
Submission:
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Waiting (please give feedback):
[PS2] Metal Gear Solid 3 - 'Snake Eater' (http://www.mediafire.com/?lcmmlycuwwy) - razer84
[Wii] Super Smash Bros. Brawl- Bramble Blast (http://www.mediafire.com/?gwwypwzjlyl) - razer84

Previous Submissions:
[PS2] Metal Gear Solid 2 - Updated Main Theme (http://www.mediafire.com/?qxujitx9hfm) - razer84
Title: Re: razer84's arrangements
Post by: G-Han on April 19, 2008, 07:41:37 PM
You won a refridgerator, as you're the only one who submitted his sheet right. =p
Title: Re: razer84's arrangements
Post by: razer84 on April 19, 2008, 09:50:39 PM
You won a refridgerator, as you're the only one who submitted his sheet right. =p

yipee!

so when can i submit the non-Nintendo stuff?
Title: Re: razer84's arrangements
Post by: G-Han on April 19, 2008, 10:29:23 PM
Can't really say.
Title: Re: razer84's arrangements
Post by: razer84 on April 21, 2008, 08:26:03 PM
Can't really say.

Anyway, how does next week sound?

i take that as an answer...
Title: Re: razer84's arrangements (4/21)
Post by: G-Han on April 21, 2008, 08:44:51 PM
Next week is not this week heh. =p So submit a Nintendo-sheet this week, and a Sony one next week.
Title: Re: razer84's arrangements (4/21)
Post by: razer84 on April 21, 2008, 09:08:03 PM
Next week is not this week heh. =p So submit a Nintendo-sheet this week, and a Sony one next week.

i know, but if i submit it this week, it will most likely be added next week.
Title: Re: razer84's arrangements (4/21)
Post by: G-Han on April 21, 2008, 10:02:16 PM
Uhm, yeah. xD
Title: Re: razer84's arrangements (4/23)
Post by: razer84 on April 25, 2008, 10:31:24 PM
could you guys check out Bramble Blast and tell me what you think? i think either something is missing or out of place, but i'm not quite sure what exactly it is.
Title: Re: razer84's arrangements (4/23)
Post by: Beethoven II on April 26, 2008, 08:17:57 AM
Hey bud, you needed a key sig.  fix'd: http://www.mediafire.com/?0nh4mxtt2wx

Now there are no sharps, flats, or naturals ;)

As for sound, i can't tell because my speakers are off, and i'm supposed to be in bed.
Title: Re: razer84's arrangements (4/23)
Post by: razer84 on April 26, 2008, 01:14:25 PM
enigma binary code.

but i can fix that one myself. thanks.
Title: Re: razer84's arrangements (4/23)
Post by: pumpy_heart on April 27, 2008, 02:29:20 PM
Dude....Snake Eater justs sounds wrong.
Not a good rendering of it.
First off, it goes too fast. Secondly, it looks messy. Finally, it's missing some key parts. This is why it sounds so empty in a couple of places.
I started this about 2 weeks ago and here is what mine is. I think some comparisons can be made for the better. I havent finished this, but you can use this as an aid to improve your own.
http://www.mediafire.com/?izpzj1iynmz
Yeah. I never felt the main theme restated in your version, but it gets restated many times. That's why I like this song so much.
Anyways, I hope I dont sound like a snob or anything, but I think you can fix some stuff in leui of comparing our version.
Title: Re: razer84's arrangements (4/23)
Post by: razer84 on April 27, 2008, 02:49:07 PM
yeah, i'm still real new in arranging stuff so any advise or criticism is totally welcome and appreciated.

EDIT: enigma binary file.
Title: Re: razer84's arrangements (4/23)
Post by: Limbo on April 27, 2008, 02:56:42 PM
I'd love to hear the Snake Eater one, but it's a Enigma Binary file. Both of them are. Well, to me they are.
Title: Re: razer84's arrangements (4/23)
Post by: blah54 on April 27, 2008, 04:28:23 PM
your bramble blast arrangement is fairly accurate... but it's basically just melody at this point, very little harmony, making it not really a very good piano arrangement at the moment (no offense to you)...

try and find something to add for bass/harmony, then it shouldn't sound as empty...
Title: Re: razer84's arrangements (4/23)
Post by: razer84 on April 27, 2008, 05:19:37 PM
your bramble blast arrangement is fairly accurate... but it's basically just melody at this point, very little harmony, making it not really a very good piano arrangement at the moment (no offense to you)...

try and find something to add for bass/harmony, then it shouldn't sound as empty...

thanks, i'll work on that.
Title: Re: razer84's arrangements (4/23)
Post by: random_goldfish on April 27, 2008, 05:44:43 PM
Yay! Metal Gear Solid music! There's one point in the Sons of Liberty where the left hand is too loud; I'm sure that's not your fault though since Finale at times likes to be a jerk like that. Very nice though.
Title: Re: razer84's arrangements (4/23)
Post by: pumpy_heart on April 27, 2008, 06:55:38 PM
Is Mediafire just failing then??
Here it is again. I reuploaded it to two different sites. this should work.
http://www.mediafire.com/?izpzj1iynmz
http://www.savefile.com/files/1526875
And if those dont work.....I'll save it in Finale Notepad 08 and try uploading it. Just let me know.
Title: Re: razer84's arrangements (4/23)
Post by: razer84 on April 27, 2008, 07:14:56 PM
Is Mediafire just failing then??
Here it is again. I reuploaded it to two different sites. this should work.
http://www.mediafire.com/?izpzj1iynmz
http://www.savefile.com/files/1526875
And if those dont work.....I'll save it in Finale Notepad 08 and try uploading it. Just let me know.

the savefile one worked.
Title: Re: razer84's arrangements (4/23)
Post by: random_goldfish on April 27, 2008, 07:19:34 PM
I don't know...I opened them all just fine.
Title: Re: razer84's arrangements (4/23)
Post by: G-Han on April 28, 2008, 09:30:46 AM
Ehm.. The MGS2 Main Theme sounds not like I know it. Someone able to confirm if it sounds like the real thing?
Title: Re: razer84's arrangements (4/23)
Post by: razer84 on May 02, 2008, 09:52:11 PM
Ehm.. The MGS2 Main Theme sounds not like I know it. Someone able to confirm if it sounds like the real thing?

i changed it around a little (added an entire new intro), i think it sounds more accurate now.

and also, could someone put 8va's on the treble clef from measure 68 to the end of the piece (not the last 2 bars with the low note though)? thank you.