Poll
Question:
A NEW CHAPTER?!
Option 1: WHAT?!
votes: 5
Option 2: SRSLY?!
votes: 3
Option 3: orly?
votes: 4
Option 4: I don't believe you.
votes: 5
Table of Contents: (Chapters without URLs haven't been released yet)
Season One
Chapter 1: New Horizons Dawning (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg142478#msg142478)
Chapter 2: A Bright Sun (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg142507#msg142507)
Chapter 3: Like New Meetings, but Not Really (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg142692#msg142692)
Chapter 4: To Kanto, and... (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg142947#msg142947)
Chapter 5: A New Region? (Must've Missed the Memo...) (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg142980#msg142980)
Chapter 6: Beginning the Adventure (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg143120#msg143120)
Chapter 7: A Pleasant Town (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg143566#msg143566)
Chapter 8: A First Battle (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg143714#msg143714)
Chapter 9: There's Always People Like THEM (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg143859#msg143859)
Chapter 10: Training? (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg144205#msg144205)
Chapter 11: Begin the Crazy Training! (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg144222#msg144222)
Chapter 12: The Fruits of Training (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg144250#msg144250)
Season Two
Chapter 13: The First Gym Battle (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg144887#msg144887)
Chapter 14: The First Gym Battle (Part 2) (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg145799#msg145799)
Chapter 15: The First Gym Battle (Part 3) (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg145843#msg145843)
Chapter 16: The First Gym Battle (Part 4) (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg145876#msg145876)
Chapter 17: The Stone Quarry (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg146354#msg146354)
Chapter 18: Et tu, Spitllama? (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg146475#msg146475)
Chapter 19: A Chance in Vermillion (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg146505#msg146505)
Chapter 20: Matt versus Atticus (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg146539#msg146539)
Chapter 21: Lucky Seven (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg146662#msg146662)
Chapter 22: Jackpot (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg146703#msg146703)
Chapter 23: Jackpot (Part 2) (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg147314#msg147314)
Chapter 24: A Corrupted Dream (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg151388#msg151388)
Chapter 25: Jerry's Departure (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg151773#msg151773)
Season Three
Chapter 26: Gregory and the Purity Forest (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg151817#msg151817)
Chapter 27: The Bulbasaur (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg154066#msg154066)
Chapter 28: A Quick Battle (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg159484#msg159484)
Chapter 29: (Re)United (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg159494#msg159494)
Chapter 30: Memories REALLY Suck Sometimes (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg159665#msg159665)
Chapter 31: Memories REALLY Suck Sometimes (Part 2) (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg160065#msg160065)
Chapter 32: On the Bridge (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg160066#msg160066)
Chapter 33: Splitting Up (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg160067#msg160067)
Season Four
Chapter 34: Island of Fire (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg160068#msg160068)
Chapter 35: Fleeting Star (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg160069#msg160069)
Chapter 36: Burnin' Up (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg160070#msg160070)
Chapter 37: In the Line of Fire (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg160071#msg160071)
Chapter 38: Oh, Really? Where's Chuck Norris? (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg160072#msg160072)
Chapter 39: Battle Link (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg160337#msg160337)
Chapter 40: Out of the Frying Pan and into the...Iceburg (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg160579#msg160579)
Chapter 41: Radio Tower Takeover (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg160824#msg160824)
Chapter 42: The Plan is Revealed (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg160864#msg160864)
Chapter 43: Cool as Ice (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg160899#msg160899)
Chapter 44: On the Mainland (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg161209#msg161209)
Chapter 45: Team Maqua (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg161346#msg161346)
Chapter 46: Warnings (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg161442#msg161442)
Chapter 47: Collest. Treehouse. EVER. (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg161873#msg161873)
Chapter 48: Nice to See You Again (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg162462#msg162462)
Season Five
Chapter 49: It's All in the Cards (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg172982#msg172982)
Chapter 50: Frivolously Frivolous Frivolity (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg173554#msg173554)
Chapter 51: Totes a Frivolously Frivolous Battle (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg173569#msg173569)
Chapter 52: The Resistance (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg174291#msg174291)
Chapter 53: PokeCross (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg174726#msg174726)
Chapter 54: Cross-Training (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg175752#msg175752)
Chapter 55: Taking the Fight to Them (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg175776#msg175776)
Chapter 56: Battles and Betrayals (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg175909#msg175909)
Chapter 57: This Place About to Blow (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg175930#msg175930)
Chapter 58: Old Friends and New (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg176033#msg176033)
Season Six
Chapter 59: The Tournament Begins (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg176782#msg176782)
Chapter 60: The Preliminaries (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg177019#msg177019)
Chapter 61: A Dance? (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg177100#msg177100)
Chapter 62: Her Best Interests (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg177445#msg177445)
Chapter 63: Alan's Power (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg177532#msg177532)
Chapter 64: Encouragement (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg178117#msg178117)
Chapter 65: Resolve and Apathy (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg178238#msg178238)
Chapter 66: Time to Shine (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg178616#msg178616)
Chapter 67: Nice to See You Again (2nd and 3rd Iterations) (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg180195#msg180195)
Chapter 68: Cool vs Calm (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg194524#msg194524)
Chapter 69: Some Odd Shenanigans (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg196105#msg196105)
Chapter 70: A Bewitching Blunder (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg203996#msg203996)
Chapter 71: Sadistic Little Saria (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg219706#msg219706)
Chapter 72: Rutatoes (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg225810#msg225810)
Chapter 73: Family Matters
Chapter 74: Hail to the Chief
Chapter 75: Concerto's Grand Finale
Chapter 76: Kelsey's Determination
Chapter 77: Oh, K?
Chapter 78: Confessions
Chapters 79-86: (Top 16 Battles)
Chapters 87-90: (Top 8 Battles)
Chapter 91: Promises, Promises
Chapter 92: Untitled
Season Seven
Chapter 93: Preparing for the Final Battle
Chapter 94: Like a Thief in the Night
Chapter 95: The Final Battle Begins
Chapter 96: The Plan Begins
Chapter 97: Hopeless
Chapter 98: Failure?
Chapter 99: Tears of Life
Chapter 100: Epilogue
Region Overview:
(http://desmond.imageshack.us/Himg833/scaled.php?server=833&filename=imagewpr.jpg&res=landing)
The Terrari Region is a region that sprang up in the world during the great battle of Groudon and Kyogre in Hoenn a few years ago. Almost completely untouched by humans and Pokemon until just recently, it is a perfect place for trainers seeking a new, controlled environment with minimal wild Pokemon.
Terrari Region Towns and Landmarks:
Maron City, Where People Come Together.
Hidavel City, The Town etched from Gravel!
Ruukisiven City, a city with shady nightclubs and casinos.
Smogoff City, a huge city with skyscrapers and factories polluting the air.
Porthide Town, the Only Port in Terrari
Isle del Fuego, a small volcanic island off the coast of Porthide where Firebreathers go to hone their skills.
Iceburg City, a moderately sized town hidden in an iceberg in the middle of the Terrarian ocean where the weather is always freezing. Holds a radio tower where the Gym Leader hosts his own program.
Roundhouse Town, a small village where fighters train constantly.
Treeview Town, the Town in a tree.
EVille, NOTHING SUSPICIOUS HERE. DEFINATELY NOT HOUSING EVERY EVIL TEAM IN EXISTENCE.
FrivVille, The Most Frivolous Town in the WORLD
NSM Pokemon Adventure Teams
(All listings imply the entire evolutionary line is taken)
(Some teams subject to change)
Marty (K-NiGhT): Totodile, Riolu, Electrike, Rufflet, Growlithe, Pansage
Nebu (Nebbles): Cyndaquil, Drifloon, Solosis, Venipede, Sentret, Trapinch
Jordan (SlowPokemon): Chikorita, Minccino, Spinda, Misdreavus, Ralts, Litwick
Davy (davy): Squirtle, Pineco, Pawniard, Porygon, Exeggcute, Natu
Matt (Ragster): Treecko, Magikarp, Skarmory, Tynamo, Abra, Gible
Roz (Roz~): Charmander, NidoranMale, Poliwag, Shroomish, Dratini, Bronzor
Stepney (Clanker37): Mudkip, Snorunt, Budew, Vulpix, Sneasel, Murkrow
Atticus (vermilionvermin): Farfetch'd, Voltorb, Arbok, Sandslash, Beartic, Magcargo
Taylor (RAWRZEZ~): Poocheyena, Bulbasaur, Aron, Cubone, Snubble, Minun
Gregory (Gzgregory): Drowzee, Zebstrika, Zangoose, Dusknoir, Pansear
Dudesworth (Dude): Diglett, Drillbur, Donphan
Nik (DrP): Umbreon, Deino, Cacnea, Sandile
Blue Flower (Blueflower999): Zubat
Fleet (Fleetstar the Flygon): Tepig, Heatmor, Flareon
Forrest (Winter): Glaceon, Shellder, Castform
Raymond (Raymondbl): Chimchar, Meinfoo, Meditite
Jerry (Jub3r7): Turtwig, Lotad, Hoppip, Snover, Leafeon
Francois (Mashi): (secret)
Ruto (Ruto): Psyduck, Espeon, Cherrim, Grumpig, Maractus, Sawsbuck
Saria (Saria): Lopunny, Quagsire, Musharna, Glameow, Kecleon, Eevee
Korbin (spitllama): Snivy, Smeargle, Zorua, Ditto, Ninjask, Shedinja
Kelsey (Kman96): Chatot, Buizel, Pichu, Axew, Magby, Tangela
Eric (shadowkirby): Piplup, Hoothoot, Spiritomb, Torkoal, Pikachu
Mike (Shadoninja): Kecleon, Aerodactyl, Beldum, Scraggy, Slowpoke, Larvesta
Alan (the_last_sheikah): Blaziken, Gallade, Froslass, Jolteon, Seismitoad, Scizor
Joel (fingerz): Fearow, Tyranitar, Milotic, Salamence, Rampardos, Leavanny
Jonathan (Olimar12345): Shiny Bisharp, Durant, Ferrothorn, Mawile, Magnezone, Steelix
Ryan (Wrydryn): Gallade, Hippowdon, Luxray, Seviper, Carnivine, Camerupt
Otso (Reapr): Mareep, Togepi, Jigglypuff, Miltank, Buneary, Clefairy
Caroline (FSM): Lapras, Starmie, Yanma, Politoed, Shuckle, Gliscor
Marcus (FSM): Ambipom, Pinsir, Heracross, Hitmonlee, Mamoswine, Stantler
Jake (FSM): Exploud, Tauros, Snorlax, Persian, Bellossom, Slowking
Jari (Jamaha): Conkeldurr, Shiftry, Kangaskhan, Kingler, Bastiodon, Unfezant
Concerto: Golurk, Sudowoodo, Kabutops, Mr. Mime, Gothitelle, Pelipper
Mae (Bubbles7896): Samorott, Absol, Blissey, Darmanitan, Armaldo, Hariyama
Sabin (SocialFox): Vaporeon, Sableye, Sigilyph, Druddigon, Ursaring, Crustle
Kefka (KefkaticFanatic): Claydol, Bouffalant, Wobbuffet, Skuntank, Sharpedo, Mothim
Mobo (MoboMoga): Kingdra, Liepard, Rhyperior, Mr. Mime, Drapion, Accelgor
Ben (Bespinben): Bibarel, Elgyem, Gigalith, Staraptor, Victreebel, Rapidash
Otso Jr. (Waddle Bro): Cofagrigus, Throh, Sawk, Toxicroak, Nidorina, Emolga
[PDF] [DOCX] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/100322825/Marty%27s%20Stories/The%20Great%20NSM%20Pokemon%20Adventure/The%20Great%20NSM%20Pokemon%20Adventure.docx)
Can I just pick my character and write the bio later? I wanna be Cyndaquil.
Chikorita, also I'll tell you who I want to catch.
Squirtle (will PM the rest later)
Can you choose which ability your pokemon have?
Quote from: davy on March 16, 2012, 02:42:23 PMCan you choose which ability your pokemon have?
i'm not planning on using abilities :/
(http://db.tt/8hreJxhe)
this is a great example of what to do for a post. Thanks Ragster!
I want Charmander! I'll write the rest later tonight when I'm done with mah homework.
Update!
Because the response i've gotten for this has been great, i unfortunately have to say that some of you will be either minor characters or Gym Leaders in the new region i'mma make. In which case, after the other 2 Hoenn starters get taken, i'm going to end the starter bid and give people a chance to vie for gym leader/elite four positions. I already have a champion in mind...
Also, i've made it safe to just post in the thread now. I'm gonna make a seperate thread for the story. This thread will then be used for discussion, so people can read it straight through without having to look through pages of posts to find the next chapter.
One more thing. If you are already registered, (meaning your name is next to the starter you picked) please give me a first name at least to work with so i don't have to use usernames. I don't want your FULL name, just your FIRST name. Thanks! :)
The names Matt.
Need region+town+gym ideas. As per the thread title, discuss.
Same as everyone else, I'll PM soon. Could I take Snivy?
Quote from: K-NiGhT on March 16, 2012, 06:25:20 PMI already have a champion in mind...
Shado!
Quote from: spitllama on March 16, 2012, 08:28:02 PMShado!
You hit the nail right on the head.
Another Update: I will select the most detailed character descriptions to become main characters. Probably 4-5 other people including myself, so this is more like an audition than a registration. I will post a list of accepted main characters once all the teams and bios are done. When making a bio, remember to include age, physical characteristics, what you normally wear, personality traits, and a fairly detailed backstory.
Edit: Remember a few things. You are starting as a new trainer, so you DON'T have any experience with Pokemon yet. Also, if you've already sent me a bio, feel free to revise it and send it to me again in a message marked, "Bio For: (insert your first name here)"
Quote from: K-NiGhT on March 16, 2012, 08:24:21 PMNeed region+town+gym ideas. As per the thread title, discuss.
Seriously guys. I want the whole community to come up with the basics. I'm just the storyteller.
I choose you, Turtwig!
Stuff will be sent later.
So you're making an entirely new region, right?
Quote from: Ragster on March 17, 2012, 06:56:20 AMSo you're making an entirely new region, right?
Yes.
I take Chimcar!
Will PM you everything in two days.
Yeah, Bulbasaur. :)
K guys, since i wanna get this kinda started, i'm gonna set the registration deadline for 12 noon tomorrow CST. For those of you who have turned in your bio, thank you very much! You will definately be a character somehow based on the responses i've been getting.
Those that didn't have time to fill in a bio, sorry. :( if you are on the list, you will be automatically an Elite 4/high ranking Gym Leader.
(elite 4 is just kinda gonna be like important people in the league tournament. Say...final 16?)
Quote from: K-NiGhT on March 16, 2012, 08:24:21 PMNeed region+town+gym ideas. As per the thread title, discuss.
The Island of SodorTown/Cities
Stupendous City, A truly stupendous City
Hidavel City (A cookie to whoever can guess where I got that from! :D) The Town etched from Gravel!
Treeview Town, the Town lost in Time
Maron City, Where people come and meet
Bugville, People and Bugs in perfect Harmony
Lolsipops City, The City of happiness
Porthide, the Only Port in *Insert Region here*
Trololville, the Village of Trolls
Shoe City, the City of Shoes. xD
Moooo! The city where Cows are in control
Rooble Jooble, the mining City
Spooner City, the Dancing City
OK so more of them are ridiculous than real ones. But I don't care. Take what you want, change it to be better, I don't care. I'm not good at names xD
Other people, suggest stuff! I really don't want the best idea to be Moooo!
Quote from: K-NiGhT on March 16, 2012, 08:24:21 PMNeed region+town+gym ideas. As per the thread title, discuss.
Can't have an NSM-related story without this little gem: FriVilleous
Shado I love you
Towns i like so far:
Quote from: Clanker37 on March 17, 2012, 11:03:19 PMStupendous City, A truly stupendous City
Hidavel City (A cookie to whoever can guess where I got that from! :D) The Town etched from Gravel!
Treeview Town, the Town lost in Time
Maron City, Where people come and meet
Bugville, People and Bugs in perfect Harmony
Porthide, the Only Port in *Insert Region Here*
Rooble Jooble, the mining City
Spooner City, the Dancing City
Gonna change the name on the last two. Also the town order is gonna change up a bit.
Quote from: Shadoninja on March 17, 2012, 11:15:37 PMCan't have an NSM-related story without this little gem: FriVilleous
THIS. MASHI SHALL BE GYM LEADER.
Eville, the town with the bad team's hideout
^ Like
Atrocity, the city of appalling awfulness...okay I'll stop
Character List has been moved to the front post.
..auditioning? You told me I'd be in this. So I just wasted time on a team and biography that won't be used?
I had to leave and wasn't done with the character list yet. Don't fret!
Followers of Giratina? D: That... that sounds really cool omg
If you saw spit's bio you'd know why.
Quote from: spitllama on March 16, 2012, 09:57:50 PMHey K-Night, I look forward to the story. Should be cool. I apologize ahead of time for the very intricate backstory but you asked for detailed :P I can change it if you want.
Name: Korbin
Starter: Snivy
To be caught: Smeargle, Zorua, Castform, Ditto, Shedinja (no this can't be caught.... but I have no interest in the other 2 xD if you need to make this Nincada, that's fine)
Backstory: (Again, if this one is too obscure, let me know and I'll change it)
My parents were Pokemon researchers, typically of legendary stories and entities. I was just a baby at the time, and my parents were killed in their attempts to interact with forces they didn't understand (ala Unown?). In my mother's final moments, she prayed (much like the elderly do in the real games) for her child's protection. Giratina was her answer- who scooped up the child (my character) and brought it to the Distortion World to be raised.
I come from the Distortion World, and I have little to no knowledge of the world parallel to that of the Torn World. At the age of 5, Giratina, a parental sort of figure, brought Snivy to be a friend. On my 18th birthday, Giratina opened the way to the Pokemon World, and suggested a sort of "rites"- to venture out and then decide which world to reside in after having experienced both. My body, having become tied to the Distortion World much like Giratina and its origin forme, required a suit composed of elements much like the Griseous Orb to keep me from illness. Thus, my adventure sets out with Snivy in the Pokemon World! (cue music).
Personality: Quiet, but with a commanding persona. People typically avoid talking to me, though I'll willingly speak with anyone if approached. Trust is a hard thing for me to form, and an indifference towards everyone is a solid characteristic.
Physical Characteristics: 18 years old. Male. Short blonde hair. My character is dressed like this: (http://desmond.imageshack.us/Himg714/scaled.php?server=714&filename=487giratina.jpg&res=medium). However it doesn't have the appendages, wings, or headgear. Just the suit.
I'll post some region/town/gym ideas in the thread.
I'm gonna keep the entire outfit for him tho :3 looks cool.
That outfit is awesome omg D:
My bio is so lame compared to that XD I might fix it up later if that's okay with you.
Go ahead :P
Quote from: K-NiGhT on March 18, 2012, 09:41:20 AMMashi (? Type)
is this a tacit way to coerce me into sending an application
I already decided to make you the leader of
Quote from: Shadoninja on March 17, 2012, 11:15:37 PMFriVilleous City
Besttttttttt.
Just wondering, are you going to use (something of) the region idea I PM'd you?
Yah i may use the mapping, but i need ze kewl name
I got worried when I didn't see my name that my bio had gone to nothing D:
But yay I shall be evil. FriVilleous City win.
Need a region map! If you want to make one go here. (http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=190230)
How have I not seen this.
Just made Dude a gym leader. pm me your team of 2-5 pokemon of a specific type. Also give me a name (first), and physical appearance and personality k? :)
Guys, I made the greatest team ever.
It's so overpowered and you will all probably lose to me. B)
It's six Magikarp isn't it? -_-
Really really close.
Quote from: SlowPokemon on March 18, 2012, 07:34:44 PMIt's six Magikarp isn't it? -_-
No actually it's even better.
Just found this, please tell me Im not to late, this is fully awesome! If you can fit me in, Id appreciate Torchic as my starter. I'll give you a bio asap, just give me another day!
Unfortunately, i've finished registration. I'm looking for more notable people for the pokemon league tho! You're in luck too cuz i only have two spots left. Pm me a first name, personality, appearance, and team of 6 pokemon. (yes you can include Torchic/Blaziken)
Do you want a back story still?
Nah that's ok. I'll save you the trouble.
Also, character list has been moved to the front post. I've also started forcing people to become part of this story, so i'm going to add up to 32 people in the pokemon league trainers category.
Quote from: K-NiGhT on March 18, 2012, 08:27:17 PMNah that's ok. I'll save you the trouble.
Also, character list has been moved to the front post. I've also started forcing people to become part of this story, so i'm going to add up to 32 people in the pokemon league trainers category.
XD do you still want me around?
Quote from: spitllama on March 18, 2012, 09:13:41 PMAre we being serious here?
Whatever could you mean? Are you implying that i'm not taking this srsly? This story is srs bsns.
totes srs rolls
Also, can my nickname be The Please, K-NiGhT? That would be sooooo great. You could be my Wolf Partner!!!!!!!!! ;)
Then I'm taking "secret" to mean ? ? ? type
Which means Mashi gets to have-
Ghost type pokemon with Curse
Sole flying pokemon with roost
? ? ?-type Arceus
Shadowy Sky Castform
Wooo! Sounds good.
Quote from: Mashi on March 18, 2012, 09:35:20 PMtotes srs rolls
Also, can my nickname be The Please, K-NiGhT? That would be sooooo great. You could be my Wolf Partner!!!!!!!!! ;)
You shall see, but you're the eighth gym leader cuz yur teh pleez so you may have to wait.
Quote from: spitllama on March 18, 2012, 09:35:53 PMThen I'm taking "secret" to mean ? ? ? type
Which means Mashi gets to have-
Ghost type pokemon with Curse
Sole flying pokemon with roost
? ? ?-type Arceus
Shadowy Sky Castform
Wooo! Sounds good.
Again, you shall see. Let's just say the eighth gym is one no one will forget.
Ruukisiven City, a city with shady nightclubs and casinos.
Keep em coming Slow! I need one that goes with each type of gym :3
Tell me the types you need and the cities you already have, as well as other cities you may need or have
http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4275.msg141842#msg141842
Update: I'm gonna ask people to be in the story now before i start forcing them lol.
Quote from: K-NiGhT on March 18, 2012, 06:42:45 PMNeed a region map! If you want to make one go here. (http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=190230)
I hope someone decides to use this. A map would be great.
Ideas for poison city: Smogoff City, a huge city with skyscrapers and factories polluting the air.
Ideas for fighting city: Roundhouse Town: a small town in the mountains where some come to train as black belts. Needs a Dunkin' Dojo
Ideas for ice city: Iceburg City (get it? ...nvm): a moderately sized town where the weather is usually freezing. Radio tower (so winter can run his radio show)
Ideas for psychic city: you should already know what I'm thinking Ruukisiven City: a big city with shady nightclubs and casinos. Pickpockets use subtle hypnosis techniques to snatch money.
Ideas for dark city: I can't see the keyboard Mushroom Town: a small village where strange giant mushrooms grow, shielding the town from any sunlight.
S'all I got for now.
Actually i ised Ruukisiven for Dark. Seemed to fit lol.
That's what I originally thought too. You get the name, right?
It's the literal Japanese translation of "lucky seven"...I remember when me and my friend first found out about Mario Kart 7, the wikipedia page had the literal translation for that item and we just thought "ruuki seven" was hilarious to say
Lol @Slow
Cities have been organized in order. Also, the main character bios have been put up on the story thread. I took out appearance except for me.
The bio post will be updated with the gym leaders when they're met. Same goes with elite 4/extra league challengers/champ. Chapter 1 will be posted by next week at the latest.
Aah you left out our appearances? Are you going to describe us in story or something?
Also
1. Ragster is totes the treeview gym leader
2. You wrote "roundhose town" XD
Quote from: K-NiGhT on March 18, 2012, 10:12:52 PMI hope someone decides to use this. A map would be great.
Can't download it. Rapidshare says file not found and Megaupload has been removed from the Internet.
Dangnabbit, I want to be a blundering james-style villan!
Quote from: SlowPokemon on March 19, 2012, 07:46:04 AMAah you left out our appearances? Are you going to describe us in story or something?
Si senor.
Quote from: SlowPokemon on March 19, 2012, 07:47:38 AMAlso
1. Ragster is totes the treeview gym leader
2. You wrote "roundhose town" XD
1. No he's a main.
2. Mah bad, i'll fix it. Stoopid iPod keyboard.
Quote from: K-NiGhT on March 18, 2012, 10:12:52 PMI hope someone decides to use this. A map would be great.
These no longer work, but I'll be more than happy to make a map for you if you can get some more details on the region.
and if operation hero goes according to plan, this will be perfect for the next operation...
I'll pm you the layout.
SAFARI ZONE IDEA!!!
the Kaiser Memorial Park: Come from far and wide to take the Legendary Challenge!
*if you get the reference, you know why this must be done*
Quote from: the_last_sheikah on March 19, 2012, 06:14:27 PMSAFARI ZONE IDEA!!!
the Kaiser Memorial Park: Come from far and wide to take the Legendary Challenge!
*if you get the reference, you know why this must be done*
Unfortunately, this won't work. I'll explain why in the first chapter, which hopefully comes out tonight.
Also, the list of taken pokemon are up. Make sure you look at it before you send me bios, people!!
Ah yeah, Misdreavus has no O in it.
Hmmm...STOOPID IPOD KEYBOARD!!!
Dratini is on the claimed Pokemon list twice. I'm not sure if two people claimed Dratini, but I thought I should point that out.
Thanks verm. If you find anything else let me know. Also still waiting on your bio! :)
CHAPTER ONE IS HALF UP FOR PPL TO READ WHILE I FINISH THE REST OF IT!
Suggestion:
vermilionvermin is my crazed fanboy.
Love that ^
Huh, apparently I live in Johto. I swore I told you Hoenn was my fav, but whatever. Johto's like my 3rd XD
Ooh I get Minccino yay ^_^ love it! I'm sure it'll be even better once stuff starts happening and we meet other people.
Quote from: Nebbles on March 19, 2012, 08:57:44 PMHuh, apparently I live in Johto. I swore I told you Hoenn was my fav, but whatever. Johto's like my 3rd XD
I tried to go with what fit the best :( cuz your starter was Cyndaquil. Plus slow and roz both gave me specific cities, so... :/
And don't be hatin. Johto is legiter than sh-
PLUS it made me think of your let's play :3
K i'm done xD
Quote from: SlowPokemon on March 19, 2012, 09:00:50 PMOoh I get Minccino yay ^_^ love it! I'm sure it'll be even better once stuff starts happening and we meet other people.
Mwahahaha
Quote from: spitllama on March 19, 2012, 09:11:35 PMMwahahaha
GET BACK INTO THE TORN WORLD RITE NOW. YOU ARENT SUPPOSED TO COME OUT YET.
Also gonna start on chapter 2 tonight. Probably won't get it done, but oh well.
Chapter 2 Get!
Wow these are kinda short. I need to write more longerer...
I SAID I WANTED TO BE THE BUMBLING REOCCURING BAD GUY
YUR ALREADY A GYM LEADER.
And...that gives me a great idea tho!!!!! Thx shadowkirby >:)
MAKE THAT PERSON BE A GYM LEADER
OH NO YOU DIDN'T I'M THE BUMBLING REOCCURRING BAD GUY, NOT Kman!!
No, Shadowkirby, we can be the Bumbling Reoccurring bad guys together!!! :D
This is gonna be funny and altogether hilarious :3
wut are the chapters out yet I can't see them.
http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.0
Megusta mucho! Btw my name is written with a "s", not a "z" :P
I just spell Roz with a "z" 'cause kewl.
Quote from: K-NiGhT on March 19, 2012, 08:32:19 PM(or LAX LOL!)
LOL, The Dutch translation of Lax is Laks, which is short for Landelijk Actiecomité Scholieren (which means something like Rural Students Action Committee)
Quote from: Roz~ on March 20, 2012, 10:34:54 AMMegusta mucho! Btw my name is written with a "s", not a "z" :P
I just spell Roz with a "z" 'cause kewl.
Well i spell it with a "z" cuz kewl too.
Quote from: davy on March 20, 2012, 10:45:07 AMLOL, The Dutch translation of Lax is Laks, which is short for Landelijk Actiecomité Scholieren (which means something like Rural Students Action Committee)
Actually it was meant to sound like Los Angeles International Airport.
I Absolutely Loved the second chapter. Mostly cause it included my bestest friend Roz as well as the no less awesome Nebbles and K-NiGhT. Moar.
Quote from: spitllama on March 20, 2012, 10:27:29 AMhttp://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.0
Thanks!
Chapter 3 GET!
Nebbles "OH MAH GAWD" was so fitting
Quote from: spitllama on March 20, 2012, 10:05:13 PMNebbles "OH MAH GAWD" was so fitting
Glad i'm not the only one who thinks so.
Also, i'm only going to do one chapter a night, depending on the amount of time i have.
Wahh I don't have much time at all XD
For now, just give me a Psyduck or something <3
I LOVE IT! NEED MOAR NOW
Quote from: Clanker37 on March 21, 2012, 12:42:16 AMI LOVE IT! NEED MOAR NOW
Well, now i figure i can write during school if i don't have anything else going on, so i may have a whole bunch of chapters done by the time i get home from school.
That was great! I like how your chapters are more short and episodic like mine are.
Awsm! Can't wait for the next chapter :D
Quote from: SlowPokemon on March 21, 2012, 05:56:36 AMThat was great! I like how your chapters are more short and episodic like mine are.
I feel like they're almost TOO short lol.
Can't wait to see myself appearing in the story.
Quote from: K-NiGhT on March 21, 2012, 09:50:28 AMI feel like they're almost TOO short lol.
I feel the same.
Quote from: SlowPokemon on March 21, 2012, 05:56:36 AMThat was great! I like how your chapters are more short and episodic like mine are.
I like how Cobraroll's chapters are long and cinematic.
Yaah but this way we get more, more often. It makes it harder for K-NiGhT to forget about it like this, and it answers Clanker's craving for MOAR
^I completely agree
They're just different styles ^_^ I admire cobra for being able to make a long chapter that is coherent and flows well. I can't do that. Mine have minimal description and 80% dialogue -_-
Quote from: spitllama on March 21, 2012, 11:26:05 AMYaah but this way we get more, more often. It makes it harder for K-NiGhT to forget about it like this, and it answers Clanker's craving for MOAR
My thoughts on doing it this way have just been explained.
Quote from: SlowPokemon on March 21, 2012, 01:17:40 PMThey're just different styles ^_^ I admire cobra for being able to make a long chapter that is coherent and flows well. I can't do that. Mine have minimal description and 80% dialogue -_-
Yours are still good tho. And i like to think mine are too.
This is pretty coll. Is it too late to be a part of the story? :L
Quote from: Olimar12345 on March 21, 2012, 04:46:31 PMThis is pretty coll. Is it too late to be a part of the story? :L
actually i was wondering if you would! Shadowkirby doesn't want to be a gym leader, so would you? I need a dark type.
Sure, do I pick out a team of 'mons or sometnin?
Yah. Plus a first name, quick bio, and appearance.
There aren't that many dark pokemon...can I pick a couple other types?(as long as the majority is dark)
Quote from: Olimar12345 on March 21, 2012, 05:37:41 PMThere aren't that many dark pokemon...can I pick a couple other types?(as long as the majority is dark)
They can be Dark and Another Type
Hey, can Fleet join? :D
If so, what kinds of people are most needed right now?
Quote from: Fleetstar The Flygon on March 21, 2012, 06:56:55 PMHey, can Fleet join? :D
If so, what kinds of people are most needed right now?
Right now we need just extra trainers.
Gonna do sum new chaptuhz tonite! If i work quick, i may finish two in the next hour :)
I shouldn't rush this tho :/
Actually, scratch that. I need to sleep. I have a start on the next chapter tho!
Yeah, I fell asleep a little after posting that. XP
I shall pm my entry after I think one up.
I'na try to work on chapter 4 today after lunch.
These are great! :D Keep it up, I'm thoroughly enjoying this.
Quote from: Ragster on March 22, 2012, 04:03:18 PMThese are great! :D Keep it up, I'm thoroughly enjoying this.
Me too. Can't wait to be in it. :D
I'm gonna keep working on chapter 4 when i finish homework.
CHAPTER 4+DAVY GET!
ALSO PAGE 10 GET!
This is gunna be, the best story. Ever.
BTW sweet avatar ;)
Yah I kinda really want your avatar
I like the way you write the story. I want MOAR
Quote from: Roz~ on March 22, 2012, 08:35:37 PMI like the way you write the story. I want MOAR
Yes, Roz-sama.
CHAPTER 5 GET!
Cuz i felt bad about not doing one last night.
Quote from: K-NiGhT on March 22, 2012, 09:55:13 PM"We've started colonizing this new region, just without trainers and wild Pokemon. We've named it Terrari."
Quote from: K-NiGhT on March 22, 2012, 09:55:13 PM"To see if Trainers like the region. If they do, maybe we could start up a land for Trainers only. Plus they wouldn't have to worry about running into any wild Pokemon," Rowan explained at length.
Confused :-\ There are already gym leaders there right?
Quote from: spitllama on March 22, 2012, 10:05:38 PMConfused :-\ There are already gym leaders there right?
yeah.
*Looks at chapter in its entirety*
Sh-shut up! I'm tired! Lol :P
Edit: Wait. I see. See they started colonizing it, but they only recently put trainers in.
I liked the part where they all broke out in a huge, "GOGOGOGOGOGOGOGOGOGO..." :P
Quote from: Olimar12345 on March 22, 2012, 10:09:30 PMI liked the part where they all broke out in a huge, "GOGOGOGOGOGOGOGOGOGO..." :P
I'm trying to incorporate a few NSM jokes in it lol
But no frivolity yet. We'll wait for Mashi :)
^what Olimar said
And thanks for the clarification
Quote from: spitllama on March 22, 2012, 10:11:59 PMAnd thanks for the clarification
that's what the thread is for! :) questions or comments! (maybe even both ;D)
I'm loving this so far! I will pm you with my character info soon. ;)
WE HAVE TO WAIT A WHOLE YEAR???? D:
Even though I've yet to comment on this story, I still enjoy it and am looking forward to the next update!
Quote from: Kman96 on March 22, 2012, 10:46:12 PMWE HAVE TO WAIT A WHOLE YEAR???? D:
I'm pretty sure he meant one year in the story.
Quote from: K-NiGhTYou can not train your Pokemon while travelling
That's great! I've never liked training pokémon anyway. :)
Quote from: K-NiGhTSince there are seven of you, you qualify for a group acceptance. If you each get one badge, save for one person who needs to acquire two, you all gain entry in the Pokemon League.
I especcially like this. I've never aspected a group acceptance, but that'll make it really fun!
Quote from: Kman96 on March 22, 2012, 10:46:12 PMWE HAVE TO WAIT A WHOLE YEAR???? D:
yes >:3
Quote from: vermilionvermin on March 22, 2012, 11:43:53 PMEven though I've yet to comment on this story, I still enjoy it and am looking forward to the next update!
Glad you like it :)
Quote from: Olimar12345 on March 22, 2012, 10:16:39 PMI'm loving this so far! I will pm you with my character info soon. ;)
coll.
Quote from: davy on March 23, 2012, 01:40:26 AMThat's great! I've never liked training pokémon anyway.
Well, I meant while they're out catching the teams.
Quote from: davy on March 23, 2012, 01:40:26 AMI especcially like this. I've never aspected a group acceptance, but that'll make it really fun!
Well, it was either that or make everyone fight gym leaders individually, which would be dumb.
Don't worry about training, guys. The groups will have a nightly training session in the story each night, except the night before a gym battle. That way they can have the experience to continue without having to fight all the wilds. Plus i'll add some of the notable trainers in before the Pokemon League. (SO SEND ME YOUR BIOS, PEOPLE!)
Just as long as that's not a real-time year, then I might just about lose it ;).
I'ma work on Chapter wutever today hopefully. If i can manage to get it done today diring skool, i'll have three chapters done tonight! I like doing it this way.
I'm always about to finish my entry, but then something big and important gets in the way. I should be finished right about now... I hope. :P
CHAPTER 6 GET.
It seemed like you forgot me a little bit. Everyone's name appeared in the chapter except for mine.
Omg i am SO sorry :( i'll fix it.
This is really awesome especially with the updates almost every day. Just by doing that makes it even better. But when do I show up in the story?
I find it funny we can select two options so I selected "Yes, totally" and "what story?"
I didn't have time to do another chapter tonight. I'll do two tomorrow to make up for it.
I haven't posted here because I've been super busy, but I just wanted to say A+++++++++.
Needs more Jub3r7 though.
EDIT: wait jub3r7 why didnt you send in a biography
we could be like epic tag team partners or something
"Oh my god, are your pilots okay?" Matt asked, worried.
"Meh, who cares," Nebu said. "My pilot was kind of a jerk."
HAHAHAHAHA that reaction is insanely perfect omg
I'm loving the story so far! :D Everyone is written so well.
I know what y'all are thinking.
"WHAT?! NO NEW CHAPTER TWO NIGHTS IN A ROW?! HAS HE GIVEN UP?! ALL CAPS RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGE!!!"
Yeah, well deal with it for another day or two, cuz i need to recouperate from shtuff. PLUS I need to edit the last chapter cuz i forgot davy :(
No quitters here! (http://freemasonry.bcy.ca/biography/service_r_w/the_quitter.html)
I ain't quittin'
Quote from: K-NiGhT on March 25, 2012, 07:54:54 PMPLUS I need to edit the last chapter cuz i strategically misplaced davy to keep you all guessing ;)
Fixed
Have you finished the layout yet so I can make you a map?
CHAPTER 6 FIX GET.
DAVY GET.
CHAPTER 7, 8, and 9 NOT GET YET. MAYBE TONIGHT.
You should try to write something tonight even if it is short. It would probably help you get into the habit of writing the story.
However, don't feel that you owe us chapters, go at your own pace. (Just as long as it doesn't take a month to update.)
CHAPTER 7 GET.
OMG IT'S SOOOOOO SHORT. But it's k cuz i just wanted to use that chapter to explain the region layout for sheikah.
(https://encrypted-tbn0.google.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQ1CZPCdrZb0VbfJBJP9gfTBYpDodwP21e5JFLcDgZXGMyveXM)
Very nice, with plenty of room for creative interpretation. I shall begin tomorrow and I hope to be done before the month is out.
P.S.
QuoteLittle did they know they were being watched from the moment they had set foot in the Terrari Region...
DUN! DUN! DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Uh...month? D:
Lol jk take yo time.
ALSO ME GUSTA
*thinks about doing chapter 8 tonight*
...
*remembers ITED's are tomorrow*
FUUUUUUUUUUUU-
I think I know who/what the mystery person/thing is! o:
Quote from: Wrydryn on March 26, 2012, 08:36:07 PMI think I know who/what the mystery person/thing is! o:
Orlyz? Pm meh
I know who it is too! Hah ha! XD are you gunna include the thing that I specially wrote, k-night?
Wow, kinda fogaut 'nbout this. bio in TONIGHT.
*Gets ready to pm bio* *looks at 1st post*
Wth? So is DrP now the Dark Gym Leader?
Edit: **Le me reads moar** oooooh, I'm gonna be an Elite four dude. Okay then :J
Quote from: K-NiGhT on March 26, 2012, 08:31:53 PMUh...month? D:
I believe I said BEFORE the month was over, as in, within a week or two.
Quote from: the_last_sheikah on March 27, 2012, 12:07:42 PMI believe I said BEFORE the month was over, as in, within a week or two.
Ohhhhhhh ok.
*phew*
Putting up a new poll...
What do you guys think of me putting up links to youtube music that you can listen to during battles 'n shit?
Good idea!
Oh and K-Night BTW when I was voting in the poll it displayed the earlier poll and I thought "Do I have to vote again?" and so I did, and then you changed it and the votes went into the new poll. So I don't think your new idea is "BLAH >:(", I actually like it. Sorry about that.
I reset it so you can vote again
Thank ye! :D
CHAPTER 8 PARTIAL GET.
I'm not done yet. I have to edit it on my iPod though.
FINISHED CHAPTER 8 GET.
Do you still need twelve people?
Yessir
ooohh...k-night, im excited...they are coming... hehehe...
this shall be gooood. >:D
Lol it shall!
Ppl, get ready for sum awesomeness!
See this is what happens when you leave for three weeks
You miss awesome stuff like this
Where are you slotting in those 12 characters?
As extra trainers who we meet on the journey and @ the pokemon league.
New Poll!
plz to only vote once until i figure out how to fix it.
i call jub
Mashi totes has an affair with me...jk but anyway yeah definitely, and I don't care if you make it awkward, sometimes it's more interesting that way XD
But he's using your real names... maybe if they were usernames. Ehhhh idk.
If you do, it better not be like Ash and Misty or I will burn your house down with lemons. >:(
But seriously, it might make the story a little more interesting, so I shall egg you on with the words of my people.
DO IT! YOU WON"T!
I call Mashi
I smells a love octagon brewing...
CHAPTER 9 GET!
Another short character intro chapter, but awesome still.
"Let's GOGOGOGOGO"
XD I love you
Oh my gosh... I can't believe you made an evil team song. So sweeet ;D
Kman and shadowkirby will rock this
EDIT: Nice job Kman
You can actually thank Kman for the motto. He came up with the entire motto himself!
I would like to participate in this, but I don't quite understand how it works.
Also, where are the chapters? Can we read them?
EDIT: Found the story, don't mind that question.
EDIT2: From what I understand, I send you a Bio, and you do all the rest?
EDIT3: Alright, I understand now. I'll send you a Bio sometime this week.
Read the first post for all the info you rly need.
YEEESSSSS!!!!! WOO-HOO!!! :D
K-night, I'm so glad you used it!!! ILY :) It only took me one period at school to write it!!! :D
At this moment, Kman and Shadowkirby are obviously the most awsome characters in the story.
This so far is pretty awesome.
Thank you guys for all the positive comments! It makes me wanna work harder!
Quote"Right, then," Marty said. "We're gonna leave now."
BWAHAHAHAHA!!! I died of laughter there. Keep going man, this is gold!
Quote from: davy on March 29, 2012, 12:05:16 AMAt this moment, Kman and Shadowkirby are obviously the most awsome characters in the story.
<3
I just wanted to keep it short and simple. Lol
Must...write...new...chapter...
SO...TIRED...
zzzzzzzzzzzz...
*SNORT!*
Oh...hmm...uh...
zzzzzzzzzzzz...
Quote from: K-NiGhT on March 29, 2012, 08:22:39 PMMust...write...new...chapter...
SO...TIRED...
zzzzzzzzzzzz...
*SNORT!*
Oh...hmm...uh...
zzzzzzzzzzzz...
SHADO used UPROAR
SHADO caused an UPROAR
Quote from: Shadoninja on March 29, 2012, 08:25:05 PMSHADO used UPROAR
SHADO caused an UPROAR
pssst.
Hey. You. Yeah you.
K-NiGhT is sleeping. He'll do the next chapter tomorrow.
Quote from: Fleetstar The Flygon on March 30, 2012, 03:22:45 PM...and it was super-effective!
WRONG! Foe K-NiGht has the ability sound proof! UPROAR is ineffective!
That, or he's part Ghost type.
K-NiGhT woke up!
K-NiGhT used WRITE FURIOUSLY!!!
But, it failed!
K-NiGhT used Procrastinate!
It was super-effective!
K-NiGhT used Rest!
zzzzzzzzzzzz...
K-NiGhT fell asleep!
/me used wake-up slap!
Jub3r7's attack missed!
K-NiGhT woke up!
K-NiGhT used Hyper Beam!
Jub3r7 and Shado fainted!
K-NiGhT must recharge!
K-NiGhT used rest!
K-NiGhT fell asleep!
Clanker37 used Worry Seed!
K-NiGhT's Ability was changed to Insomnia!
Raymondbl's pressure complements Clanker37's Worry Seed and K-NiGhT is forced to use Sketch!
K-NiGhT woke up!
K-NiGhT used Spacial Rend!
Critical Hit!
K-NiGhT used Fusion Flare and Fusion Bolt @ the SAME TIME!
It was suuuuuuuuuuper effective!
Raymondbl fainted!
K-NiGhT used V-Create!
It's not very effective...
It's a One-Hit-KO!
Clanker37 fainted!
Excuse my french, but shut the fuck up and write a chapter already.
Actually, i'm just about to leave for a bit. I'll write in the car k? Lol :)
K-NiGhT used CHAPTER 10 GET!
It's super effective!
Quote from: K-NiGhT on March 31, 2012, 12:59:18 PMK-NiGhT used CHAPTER 10 GET!
K-NiGhT's attack missed!
No, I love your work so far. :3
Quote from: K-NiGhT on March 31, 2012, 12:59:18 PMK-NiGhT used CHAPTER 10 GET!
It's super effective!
It was not very effective... it needs more power... (Meaning more chapters)
Slow and DrP used complain!
It annoys spitllama!
Fleet asks why we are still talking like this!
K-NiGhT used Counter!
K-NiGhT used CHAPTER 11 GET!
Quote from: SlowPokemon on March 31, 2012, 10:34:06 AMExcuse my french, but shut the fuck up and write a chapter already.
Bahahaha I love this!
QuoteYes. Anyway, this is a free-for-all match between 42 different Pokemon.
QuoteNebu's Drifloon, Jordan's Minccino, Davy's Pawniard, Matt's Treecko, Roz's Charmander, Stepney's Budew, and Marty's Riolu were standing in the midst of all the chaos, where 36 other Pokemon lay resting off to the side.
:o
LOL Verm, i think an egg hatched^^^
...and it feels like the giant mass of battling pokemon is slightly resembling The Hunger Games...?
Did I math wrong?
Quote from: Kman96 on March 31, 2012, 02:28:11 PMLOL Verm, i think an egg hatched^^^
...and it feels like the giant mass of battling pokemon is slightly resembling The Hunger Games...?
It's funny cuz that's kinda what I was going for, with the movie just coming out and whatnot.
oh okz. so i got that reference pretty good!
and yeah. you mathed wrong by a whole 1 pokemonz.
Quote from: Kman96 on March 31, 2012, 02:48:33 PMyeah. you mathed wrong by a whole 1 pokemonz.
please excuse me while i go kill myself.
NO WE NEED MOAR STORY!!!
Fixed.
K-NiGhT used CHAPTER 12 GET!
Is that now like, 3 chapters just today? Lol :)
Are you updating character bios as they are introduced?
Quote from: K-NiGhT on March 31, 2012, 03:55:51 PMK-NiGhT used CHAPTER 12 GET!
Is that now like, 3 chapters just today? Lol :)
Holy Flygons you type fast o.O
Quote from: DrP on March 31, 2012, 04:04:39 PMAre you updating character bios as they are introduced?
Uhz...yeah.
...
I missed someones.
I feel like that last segment was cut short.
Based on how the characters have been written so far it would feel appropriate that some of the trainers comment on the battle ending like that.
Hmmmm...
Do I sense Ch 13?
Quote from: DrP on March 31, 2012, 05:46:54 PMDo I sense Ch 13?
you must be able to sense pretty far ahead...i'm not planning to post that for a few hours >;3
Ahahaha GO MINCCINO
No Budew! D:
WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY? :'(
what happened to chapter 13
I haven't written it yet.
^April fools day joke hopefully?
Quote from: Raymondbl on April 01, 2012, 06:11:12 AM^April fools day joke hopefully?
If you look at when i wrote the message, it was still the 31st my time. So i was completely srs.
Chapter 13 Get!
He be trollin'
I LOVE IT!!!
such a beautiful ending...it made me cry :')
Oh. Good i'll leave it that way :3
I didn't even show up. ;~;
... so touching.
amazing ending.
Charmander's a monster~
Also chapter 13 = best chapter in the history of life.
Oh yeah, by the way guys April Fools. That chapter was
FAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAKE! (http://objection.mrdictionary.net/go.php?n=5673356)
I'll make the real chapter 13 soon.
D: So that means we didn't win... :'(
Your link gave me a virus! D:<
OBJECTION!
THAT'S TOTAL BS!
Lol, it screamed OBJECTION! then tried to install some security software. Pos...
Well that hasn't done that on any of the like, three computers i've done it on. So i think you're lying >:(
Quote from: K-NiGhT on April 03, 2012, 01:49:02 PMWell that has happened on all three of my computers, so I'll quit lying and make a new chapter :P
Huh. I thought you said that.
OBJECTION!!
That chapter 13 wasn't fake! It was the perfect ending.
I quite agree ^^^^ 8)
Finally caught up. What a perfect ending! :U
I had the sound all the way up, and when I clicked on the link... I was in for it. D:<
LOL. I loved the customized gif.
how did you get it to say that?
here. (http://objection.mrdictionary.net/index.php)
>:C (http://objection.mrdictionary.net/go.php?n=5674173)
http://objection.mrdictionary.net/go.php?n=5674191
dat poll
I'm curious
very curious
Quote from: blueflower999 on April 03, 2012, 07:01:53 PMhttp://objection.mrdictionary.net/go.php?n=5674191
Let us see what my lawyer (http://objection.mrdictionary.net/go.php?n=5674943) says about that.
Or we could just listen to me.
http://objection.mrdictionary.net/go.php?n=5675289 (http://objection.mrdictionary.net/go.php?n=5675289)
how do you get it to change the URL into words??
http://objection.mrdictionary.net/go.php?n=5675430
YA KNOW WHAT. Im not even gonna look at that, just to prove my point.
But I made it the coffee guy :(
NOPE. NOT DOING IT. >:(
Coffee guy?! HE HAS A NAME D:
That's Godot.
But you type (coffee) to get him.
Well, that's because Godot has a coffee obsession. XD
That explains a lot. He drinks coffee for 10 seconds before he actually says his objection. xD
That made me lol. :P
While you're all here, check out my performance thread :)
Quote from: blueflower999 on April 04, 2012, 07:04:11 PMThat explains a lot. He drinks coffee for 10 seconds before he actually says his objection. xD
Yup. And he always has it in any court. Which is odd. I didn't know coffee was allowed in court?
it's over. (http://objection.mrdictionary.net/go.php?n=5675629)
Quote from: Nebbles on April 04, 2012, 07:23:59 PMYup. And he always has it in any court. Which is odd. I didn't know coffee was allowed in court?
Apparently Brewster isn't the only one who can magically draw a coffee cup to his hand. XD
I think Godot and I have some similar interests. :3
Now that I have the new Kureig coffee maker, I can never be found without a cup of decaf.
^DECAF??
Lame.
Drink some caffeine and be a real man! You cannot usurp the King of Coffee. Just look at my sig. You don't want to go down that road. . . mwahahahahaha.
Quote from: DrP on April 04, 2012, 08:24:29 PM^DECAF??
Lame.
Drink some caffeine and be a real man! You cannot usurp the King of Coffee. Just look at my sig. You don't want to go down that road. . . mwahahahahaha.
I'm a woman, thank you very much! >:s
And you would not want to see me with caffeine in my system, trust me on that.
Lol off topic stuff aside, i'll start work on the REAL chapter 13 tomorrow. And i'll get a whole bunch done over our 5-day break.
Let's see...if i did three chapters that one day, and only took half the day to do it, that means if i had nothing at all going on, i could do 6 chapters a day. 6 chapters x 5 days = 30 chapters.
But of course, i have stuff to do tomorrow night. Make that 27. (Unless i somehow did 6 tomorrow morning...magically)
Quote from: Fleetstar The Flygon on April 04, 2012, 09:01:36 PMI'm a woman, thank you very much! >:s
I seriously had no idea... my mistake (I'm sorry). I seriously don't notice the obvious... or anything for that matter anymore.
Decaf wouldn't help me at all. I need a few shots of espresso to even get things moving...
I tried coffee for the first time two weeks ago.
Bleh.
Nahh, how are you supposed to notice those tiny little gender signs at the bottom? I just assume everyone is a male, too. :D
Ooh, 30+ chapters get??
Quote from: Fleetstar The Flygon on April 05, 2012, 07:35:05 AMNahh, how are you supposed to notice those tiny little gender signs at the bottom? I just assume everyone is a male, too. :D
Ooh, 30+ chapters get??
there are no wimmin on the interwebz :P
Quote from: Shadoninja on April 05, 2012, 07:44:21 AMthere are no wimmin on the interwebz :P
I guess I don't really count as a woman since I'm a hard-core gamer, I wouldn't be caught dead wearing a dress, I despise the colors pink and purple, all of my charries in the Pokemon games are male, and when I observe other girls I'm like, "wow, women are pretty strange.."
Is that weird?
How did this conversation even start? O.o *Reads past posts*
ANYWAY
No more off-topic stuffs. lol
Alright, did you say something about posting 30 chapters? :3
Quote from: K-NiGhT on April 05, 2012, 08:26:59 AMNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
D:
Bai Nebu :( i'll have like 30 chapters done by the time you get back! :D
Holding you to this cause no jk
Quote from: spitllama on April 05, 2012, 10:08:58 AMHolding you to this cause no jk
well i am on spring break for the next five days. last weekend i got like 3 chapters done in one half of saturday...so if i apply that logic, by monday night i'll be 30 chapters farther along.
Chapter 13 get!!
On the road right now. No wifi soon. Will keep working diligently.
WTF how did their pokemon grow so fast from level 5??? that giant battle wasn't THAT big!
Quote from: Kman96 on April 05, 2012, 02:09:06 PMWTF how did their pokemon grow so fast from level 5??? that giant battle wasn't THAT big!
yes. It really was. Lol.
At least one of the pokemon must not have managed to beat anyone, and thus would not have gained any experience under normal conditions. :P
So they get experience by inflicting damage or something?
Quote from: Fleetstar The Flygon on April 05, 2012, 02:37:31 PMSo they get experience by inflicting damage or something?
in a way, yes. but it's rather minimal. but you also have to remember that they are lower levels and not needing as much experience to level up. plus they went quite a bit without fainting, if you read in context. the battle took like, half to 3/4 of a day.
The Pokemons are just professional and level up quicker because of FRIENDSHIP.
And frivolity.
Frivolous.
Quote from: Mashi on April 05, 2012, 04:25:21 PMThe Pokemons are just professional and level up quicker because of FRIENDSHIP.
And frivolity.
Frivolous.
That too.
Which Nidoran does Roz have?
Quote from: Mashi on April 05, 2012, 04:25:21 PMAnd frivolity.
Frivolous.
Almost like something else in the Creativity Corner Forums...
Actually Mashi is the God of Frivolous
REALLY? :0
*Bows down*
aaaaaand...
TA-DA!!! :P
Sorry guys, i focused more on arranging than the story. I'll pull an all nighter tonight (cuz i also have a biology paper to do)
Strength...fading...eyelids...closing...
No......
Must...say...
I can't finish any chapters tonight...i'm really sorry everybody. I promise i'll find the time to do them. I just have to finish the school year out strong. I'll continue for sure in the summer and write as much as i can during the rest of the school year in my spare time. I'm sorry D:
But K-Niiiiiiiiiiiight....
otay :-\
School is more important. Good luck to you Mr. Sir.
School always comes first.
I've put off lots of stuff to do until the summer because of my busyness... only 7 more weeks to go.
Only two more...months.
Fml.
And i probably could've done those chapters over break...i just got caught up with my arrangement.
Why would school be more important? ::)
Does this mean there won't be ANY more chapters until summer, or they'll just be farther between?
Quote from: blueflower999 on April 10, 2012, 03:19:44 PMDoes this mean there won't be ANY more chapters until summer, or they'll just be farther between?
there will be chapters still, just not daily. Maybe weekly. Can everyone live with that?
Quote from: K-NiGhT on April 10, 2012, 04:11:57 PMthere will be chapters still, just not daily. Maybe weekly. Can everyone live with that?
Thanks! I can!
Quote from: blueflower999 on April 10, 2012, 04:14:04 PMThanks! I can!
I must specify that they will MAYBE be weekly. If not then bi-weekly for sure.
Pfft, as long as we still get story updates.
CHAPTER 14 GET!
Since i'm gonna start posting less frequently, i figure make the stories longer, so people stay interested. So i'm cutting the first Gym Battle into two stories- the battle, and what happens with everyone else. This will also be a multi-part story, if you couldn't already tell.
GASP! A cliffhanger!
MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!! >:D
Quote from: K-NiGhT on April 10, 2012, 09:02:52 PMIn the Pokemon Center, Nebu had just woken up from a nice dream. She couldn't remember what it was about, though. She got dressed, and got her stuff ready when she noticed-
"AIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!"
Hey, I was in the middle of narrating-
"NO. THIS IS A CRISIS! SHUT UP!"
Is she...talking to me? I'm the narrator! I'm not supposed to exist in her world...I-
Made me lol
Quote from: K-NiGhT on April 10, 2012, 09:02:52 PM"Budew...NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!" Stepney began to cry uncontrollably.
Perfect! :D I love how you write! It's so accurate using the least amount of words.
I just realized...I NEVER GOT A BIO FROM SHADOWKIRBY'
GOGOGOGOGOGOGO WRITE ONE!
I put up chapter 14 again, after fixing a few minor details. :3
What did you change?
I made the gym battle 3-3 instead of 2-2. Very minor, but it'll add more content :D
CHAPTER 15 GET!!!!!!!!
pfff, the motto ruins everything.
Also, about the poll, what romance are we gonna be seeing here? I'm very curious.
Probably between some of the mains, just havent decided who...
Plus there's only two girl mains. I suppose i could let the two of you pick your boyfriend ;3
Quote from: Nebbles on April 11, 2012, 08:52:45 PMpfff, the motto ruins everything.
Do you not like it? D:
XD No, the motto's funny! I was commenting on how it ruined FoG's plan to steal all of the pokemon. XD
Pick my boyfriend? Oh geez... xD
Lololololol. And i can come up with funny couple names xD
Roz+Jordan=Rozan? Or maybe Joz?
Roz+Stepney=Rozney?
Nebu+Marty=Neby? (that one doesn't really work)
Jordan+Matt=JKLOL.
Mashi+Everyone=YUS.
Also, i'm gonna work on finally finishing the first gym battle chapters tonight!
Pfff xD Half the fun of pairing people up is making names for them.
Quote from: Nebbles on April 11, 2012, 09:03:41 PMPfff xD Half the fun of pairing people up is making names for them.
REALLY!
Edit: Also, no chapter 16 tonight, although i'm close to finishing it. I need sleep! History test tomorrow 2nd hour D:
OMG ROZ YOU SHOULD GO TO THE DARK SIDE WITH SHADOWKIRBY
Quote from: shadowkirby on April 11, 2012, 10:16:18 PMOMG ROZ YOU SHOULD GO TO THE DARK SIDE WITH SHADOWKIRBY
SHADOWKIRBY.
SEND ME YOUR BIO!!!!
E: PAGE 25 GET!
CHAPTER 16 GET!!!
Now, to go to school.
Quote from: K-NiGhT on April 05, 2012, 12:09:14 PMChapter 13: The First Gym Battle!
Trainer: Marty
Totodile: Level 13
Growlithe: Level 9
Rufflet: Level 10
Pansage: Level 15
Totodile: Level 14
Riolu: Level 20
K-Night, why did you use the clone glitch?
QuoteThey had just finished their motto when they noticed that the six kids that were standing there were gone, as well as the bag.
Protagonists with common sense!?!?!?!?!
Quote from: davy on April 12, 2012, 07:11:33 AMK-Night, why did you use the clone glitch?
Fixed. It was supposed to be Electrike instead of TOtodile
shadow and K-man.... you're fired
You can't fire them! You're not even paying them!
>:-l And who are you to say that, a person who slashes people for giggles?
Um...well, yes. Yes I am.
New poll!
SPITLLAMA!!!
... wat?
That was my (other) vote.
Ohhh. I don't think I'm an extra character. I (believe) I'm a main character.
8)
(only person that voted for pumpy_heart)
(Only person that voted Greg)
Quote from: spitllama on April 12, 2012, 04:09:58 PM>:-l And who are you to say that, a person who slashes people for giggles?
I c wut u did thur.
Gonna close the poll in 40 minutes. Vote while u can!
I want to see Wry and Mashi. :<
You're an elite 4 and Mashi's the 8th gym leader so you'll have to wait for a while, yet.
I voted Cobra and Fleetstar. I really was gonna vote Cobra and Pumpy but Fleetstar just stood out to me. Looks like I wasn't the only one o_O
Not even a super tiny cameo at the moment?
Quote from: Wrydryn on April 12, 2012, 07:34:03 PMNot even a super tiny cameo at the moment?
unfortunately, no. Sorreh :( it'll keep you reading though! xD
But that's why I keep on reading. I'm always like, "Do I show up this chapter? :D...... Aww, nope. Maybe next time."
Lol :)
But ash meets elite 4 leaders without ever reaching them!!!
WELL WE'RE DIFFERENT!
Jub does have a point.... but Ash is just some kid that's always getting lucky.
Chapter...17 GET!
QuoteMarty silently thanked Jerry a vermillion times.
Vermillion A+es.
Just got caught up. You Have utterly destroyed the 4th wall!! I LOVE YOU MAN!!! No Homo
What did I miss? :p
Not too much. You're coming up soon :D
Whaat?! Oh my flygons.
This is the moment I've been waiting my entire life for. I'm touched. :D
CHAPTER 18 GET!!!
Also going to add in spitllama's and shadowkirby's bio!
Quote from: Mashi on April 15, 2012, 12:57:19 PMVermillion A+es.
Well, you know, I figured i'd like to throw in a few NSM references here and there, as that's what the story is based on AND exclusive to.
So, since Funktastic has not sent in a bio, i'm going to gove the fire type gym leader position to Fleetstar, because her bio is perfect for it.
That means you won't be coming up next, Fleety. Sorry :(
What it does mean, however, is that the next runner up, vermillionvermin, is going to be featured in chapter 19!
Yay!
My crazed fanboy!?!?!?!?!
Winning by losing. 8)
Quote from: Mashi on April 15, 2012, 10:05:06 PMMy crazed fanboy!?!?!?!?!
Yes. Your crazed fanboy. Don't worry he'll be there later on to obsess over you ;)
CHAPTER 19 GET!!
That'll be the last chapter tonight. I have school tomorrow, and I need to sleep.
Well so much for having school today. I'm sick.
I guess i'll write as much as i can today! :D
I feel like since you told us to expect less chapters, you've been writing more. xD
I feel that way too D:
Chapter 20 get!
Atticus bio get!
Do like insertion into story
Gracias K-NiGhT
De nada ;)
"Just then, a black portal appeared in between Eric and Kelsey, and someone stepped out." XD
CHAPTER 21 GET!!
Nik Get!
Also, see if you can spot the oddities about the timing of this chapter.
I'm more than happy with a draw! I expected to lose that battle!
I'm not gonna be that predictable... xD
The most surprising thing in that chapter was the fact that Nik's cafe actually sold something other than coffee
Great chapters! Keep 'em rolling. I'll bet 50 cents that Nik is the gym leader.
Quote from: K-NiGhT on April 16, 2012, 08:32:42 PMAlso, see if you can spot the oddities about the timing of this chapter.
-Ch 21. 21 is a multiple of 7.
-This chapter was k-NiGht's 1111th post!
Quote from: Raymondbl on April 17, 2012, 09:28:12 AMGreat chapters! Keep 'em rolling. I'll bet 50 cents that Nik is the gym leader.
I concur with this statement.
Also if you get 3 sevens its the jackpot. 7 times 3=21.
Also a reference to the movie 21.
Also Ruukisiven, as slow pointed out, translates to lucky seven in japanese.
CHAPTER 22 GET!
I'm copying Dude with this one, but
expected/10
...only I would accept coffee from a stranger. XD Oh well DrP and I are coffee buddies anyway :U
I can't wait for my gym battle...
COFFEE COFFEE COFFEE COFFEE COFFEE!!!!!!!! <3 (Too bad, no emoji)
Lol i'm coming up with a theme that everything is based on.
How about, "dreams?"
hmm... sure.
I really like the café thing. I kinda want to start a café/bakery in Santa Barbara (just like from the movie It's Complicated)... I'D LOVE MY JOB!!!! Maybe I'll retire early and do that. It would be kinda cool!
Hey DrP i just realized.
OSHAWOTT BUDDIES?!
yeah!
Lol offtopic discussions.
Anyway, i'm working on 23. I'll get it done tonight.
Also just realized that i have almost 3 times as many chapters as the great NSM novel.
Unless the latest chapter was 9?
Then nvm...
K-Night, who is Nik?
Our local berry doctor
Mr. Grapefruit!
Dr. P?
EDIT: OH HE OWNS A COFFEE SHOP I get it! I am such a dork...
Quote from: K-NiGhT on April 17, 2012, 04:07:38 PMLol offtopic discussions.
Anyway, i'm working on 23. I'll get it done tonight.
Also just realized that i have almost 3 times as many chapters as the great NSM novel.
Unless the latest chapter was 9?
Then nvm...
TRYING TO OUTSHOW ME HUH? WELL I DON'T GO AROUND ASKING OTHER PEOPLE FOR IDEAS
...I just watch everyone do stupid random crap and then write about it, and boom! Story. It's a solid process, I swear.
^ Should I do more stupid random stuff so I get more parts in the story?
...I kid, I kid.
K-NiGhT, can some of my Pokemon be fully evolved, since I'm a gym leader now?
I'm actually quite busy right now, I don't think I'll have much time to think of all the stuff like teams, etc. If you still think I should join in, put me off until later, lol...end of term projects aren't fun^^ Or you can just put the details however you like.
I'll put you towards the end, maybe.
Quote from: SlowPokemon on April 17, 2012, 05:31:28 PMTRYING TO OUTSHOW ME HUH? WELL I DON'T GO AROUND ASKING OTHER PEOPLE FOR IDEAS
...I just watch everyone do stupid random crap and then write about it, and boom! Story. It's a solid process, I swear.
Hey, except for the bios and region, I have come up with the ENTIRE story. Yes, the entire story, except for a few minor details SUGGESTED to me by people. Other than that, I know exactly what's going to happen through the rest of the story. And I may be reconsidering which main character i'm going to kill off... >:(
WHY ARE YOU KILLING PEOPLE OFF
NO
BAD K-NIGHT
Quote from: K-NiGhT on April 17, 2012, 09:46:04 PMAnd I may be reconsidering which main character i'm going to kill off... >:(
I hope that main character happens to not exsist...
Oh, he exists.
And I know EXACTLY who it is.
NO, DON'T BE THE JOSS WHEDON OF NSM!
(A+ for anybody who knows who that is.)
Well it's only gonna be Stepney, Matt, Jordan, or Davy.
Quote from: Wrydryn on April 18, 2012, 10:11:17 AMNO, DON'T BE THE JOSS WHEDON OF NSM!
(A+ for anybody who knows who that is.)
-takes the A+-
But killing is bad D:
Yeah, especially in POKEMON!!!!
but, would that then tie into some kind of memorial tower in a town (like Pokemon Tower in Lavendar town)?? *introduces new un-thought-of thought*
Well if I die then I better take someone with me. >:(
Another hint. The person that will die fights in one of the first six gym battles :3
But...but...you can't kill off anybody D:
It'd make me sad.
Really Really Sad
This discussion about killing in pokemon reminds me of 1:36 *profanities warning*
^mmd
But... it's been established rather often in canon that Pokémon don't kill. Perhaps each other, for food, but even then they can be resurrected (look up the Sinnoh myths). I've never heard of Pokémon killing humans before.
I didn't say anything about a Pokemon killing the person, did i?
This better be the most glorious death ever if you're set on doing it D:<
And they better come back to life because of floating tears after being turned to stone!
Quote from: Wrydryn on April 18, 2012, 02:07:00 PMThis better be the most glorious death ever if you're set on doing it D:<
oh, don't worry. I have the ENTIRE story mapped out.
Quote from: Jub3r7 on April 18, 2012, 02:13:14 PMAnd they better come back to life because of floating tears after being turned to stone!
oooh...tear revival. hadn't thought of that [/sarcasm]
Quote from: K-NiGhT on April 18, 2012, 12:15:40 PMAnother hint. The person that will die fights in one of the first six gym battles :3
Can Fleet be a murderer?
It's been my lifelong dream
GUESS: It's gonna be me
Fail. You fight the seventh.
Well how am I supposed to know that? At least let me be the killer.
Quote from: SlowPokemon on April 18, 2012, 04:42:32 PMWell how am I supposed to know that? At least let me be the killer.
No! I wanna be the killer! 8)
I could do it! I could kill people with my adorableness!
....no? Okay.
If it wasn't obvious enough who the killer was gonna be...
Kman and Shadowkirby :D
D:< my bio doesn't give me an aggressive nature of any kind!!!
Unless... O.O
Quote from: blueflower999 on April 18, 2012, 06:25:45 PMKman and Shadowkirby :D
Wouldn't korbin me more likely...
I GOT IT! Colonel Mustard, in the library, with a wrench.
Hahaha I dressed up as Colonel Mustard for the last dance, so I think that answer still counts.
New poll!
To prove how far ahead i've planned this story, I made a bracket of the top 16 in the Pokemon League. I may even make a 32 for more chaptuhz. At that point i'd have to add more extra characters. To the favorite Pokemon thread!
CobraRoll is super coll, he should be in this.
As it turns out, i need sum more characters..
How many characters are you planning on putting into this story. XD
Lol i could never keep all the characters straight! Though i guess u need a lot in this story ^_^ its really good and i love it
Quote from: gzgregory on April 20, 2012, 03:06:09 PMHow many characters are you planning on putting into this story. XD
well let's see...
Enough to make a top 32 for the league
A few more FoG ppl
Forcefully inserting JaMaHa and Concerto as important plot characters later on
8 gym leaders, 4 elites, 1 champion
7 mains :0
60 PEOPLE!?!?!? :o
Idk how you're going to tie all of them in story-wise, but if anyone needs the wishing of luck, it's you. I wish you luck.
Actually 40 cuz you gotta count the mains, elites, and champion into the top 32 for teh league.
(https://encrypted-tbn0.google.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRpmQHXdAz7x6rHik2OUS4WxyLYqw3oz0zKz-_8IXZj609pkUJwfw)
Damnit. Maybe I should go retake 3rd grade math...
This could either turn out really bad with all the characters feeling tossed in and underdeveloped, or it could be really great with a worthwhile ensemble cast. I'm hoping it'll be the second. :J
...This must turn out to be a pretty long story.
Quote from: SlowPokemon on April 21, 2012, 08:56:11 AMThis could either turn out really bad with all the characters feeling tossed in and underdeveloped, or it could be really great with a worthwhile ensemble cast. I'm hoping it'll be the second. :J
developing characters...i forgot about that D: this is gonna suck
Quote from: Fleetstar The Flygon on April 21, 2012, 09:58:44 AM...This must turn out to be a pretty long story.
yeah especially since now i have to add character development chapters xD i was planing sum for gym leaders :0
Hey, sheikah, have you finished the region map yet?
You don't really need development besides for the seven mains and perhaps gym leaders. That doesn't mean adding them in to places they don't need to be there, it just means characterizing them in a way that leaves an impression.
Yeah i guess yur right. Also, I'm sorry I havent updated in a while. I'm having a bit of a block with this gym battle :/ i'll try to finish it today.
No rush, bro XD
I feel like drawing some of the characters. But other than Link I can't draw a human to save my life.
Try it! Or mebbe Nebbles can :3
When iz next chapter?
Quote from: K-NiGhT on April 21, 2012, 01:51:33 PMAlso, I'm sorry I havent updated in a while. I'm having a bit of a block with this gym battle :/ i'll try to finish it today.
Quote from: Kman96 on April 21, 2012, 10:35:36 AMHey, sheikah, have you finished the region map yet?
I'm almost done with the general "town map" version, but I need to know if there are any mountains, lakes, ect. that I need to put in. After I finish though, I'll start the actual maps of the towns.
^actually, sheikah, i was gonna see if you wanted to add lakes, forests, bridges? I'm not that creative.
Really? SWEET! CREATIVE LIBERTIES HERE I COME!!!!!
(https://mail.google.com/mail/?ui=2&ik=2e16322d57&view=att&th=136dc13fdd829f8b&attid=0.1&disp=thd&realattid=f_h1cn7gl90&zw)
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNDDDDDDDDDDDDD...DONE! I can still make changes if need be. Here's a map rundown, starting with the top-most town, following the road:
Maron City
Hidavel City
Ruukisiven City
Purity Forest
Smogoff City
Millennia Bridge
Porthide Town
Isle del Fuego (to the north)
Iceburg City (to the south)
Roundhouse Town
Mountain Pass
Treeview Woods
Treeview Town
EVille
FrivVille
Please let me know what you think.
Hm it doesn't seem to be showing the picture for me.
That's odd...
Well here's a dropbox link: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/55566712/MAP.bmp (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/55566712/MAP.bmp)
btw it's a bitmap file
FrivVille? That's an insanely frivolous name for a town! ;)
1.I think it would be more convenient if you scaled it larger.
2.there needs to be connections between the cities. Right now there seems to be only one road through the whole region. Even if the characters are going in that path, realisically there should be many more roads that connect the whole thing into a big circle with stuff in between.
I like the map. It looks great! Almost exactly as i pictured it.
The only difference is the rotation of it. Maron city starts in the southeast, and the spiral starts by traveling northeast.
Edit: also, the islands are switched around lol
Quote from: Raymondbl on April 22, 2012, 04:10:31 PM2.there needs to be connections between the cities. Right now there seems to be only one road through the whole region. Even if the characters are going in that path, realisically there should be many more roads that connect the whole thing into a big circle with stuff in between.
I agree. Other than that, the map looks like the shit! Sweet, sheikah! How do you make maps like that?? I've got a region I really wanna plot out, and using that program would be awesome!!
Quote from: K-NiGhT on April 22, 2012, 04:12:51 PMThe only difference is the rotation of it. Maron city starts in the southeast, and the spiral starts by traveling northeast.
Edit: also, the islands are switched around lol
So would you like me to leave it or rotate it 180 degrees?
Quote from: Kman96 on April 22, 2012, 04:13:59 PMHow do you make maps like that?? I've got a region I really wanna plot out, and using that program would be awesome!!
(https://encrypted-tbn0.google.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQGPWXXQRLe0ixrnH-c_LhKkCchX2oNo01V8NhxSSzveo5-x2ulAg)
This was the face i made when I read that. I used MS paint and sprites from http://spriters-resource.com/. *insert laughing face here* No offence.
If it's not too much trouble, could you?
Just flip the mainland around, and the spiral.
And move the islands.
Other than that, it's EXACTLY how i pictured it, sheikah :D
(https://mail-attachment.googleusercontent.com/attachment/?ui=2&ik=2e16322d57&view=att&th=136dc7d7b09b32d4&attid=0.1&disp=inline&realattid=f_h1crbrdo0&safe=1&zw&saduie=AG9B_P8KGb-QAqrb8l__NwiZqn2t&sadet=1335139102353&sads=hzncwk3CchJvN-CwdmE8qjC11OI)
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/55566712/MAP.bmp (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/55566712/MAP.bmp)
I flipped it, fixed the islands, some other stuff, so yeah, anything else?
pssh...
I think it's good. Other than needing some extra routes in between. Like, K-NiGhT, aren't you planning for the players to be going back to a certain city at one point and need a shorter path?
What about a random mountain that just happens to be in the middle of the region that you could go through to get to places faster? Or an underground unit? Or......... Eh, i dunno
Quote from: Raymondbl on April 22, 2012, 07:32:53 PMI think it's good. Other than needing some extra routes in between. Like, K-NiGhT, aren't you planning for the players to be going back to a certain city at one point and need a shorter path?
by that point, they'll be able to fly :P
MUSIC!
For while you read.
Gym Leader Battle (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/54269865/NinSheetMusic/Music/Gym%20Leader%20Battle.wma)
Rival/Pokemon League Battle (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/54269865/NinSheetMusic/Music/Rival%20Battle-League%20Battle.wma)
Sweet Dreams/Pleasantries/Flashback (Kyle Landry's improvisation no. 94) (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/54269865/NinSheetMusic/Music/Sweet%20Dreams-Flashback.wma)
Nightmare/Flashback (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/54269865/NinSheetMusic/Music/Nightmare-Flashback.wma)
Final Battle (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/54269865/NinSheetMusic/Music/Final%20Battle.wma)
^ I have immense amounts of bro love for you for these!
Finally!
CHAPTER 23 GET!
I got over that block I had...
That meal won't be free!!!
I'll be using Saffron!
The inevitability of being a gym leader... I have to lose at some point.
By the way, DrP, you should tell me what the meal you're making is gonna be! ;3
K-Night, if Kadabra was battling dark-type pokemon, then shouldn't his psychic moves be uneffective?
The psychic part wasn't what did Sandile in, it was the throwing it around everywhere.
K-NiGhT, my friend just said the exact same thing as your picture caption while we were playing Spirit Tracks. :3
EDIT: Bump.
A bump is after a month, not six days...
Well, Fleet was growing impatient! D:<
Plus, that's the way they do it on my old forum; but usually an hour after someone posts. :3
Sorry...i'm having a block with this chapter and I'm getting swamped with homework cuz it's the end of the year. It'll be a while until I do another chapter.
Tomorrow marks 3 weeks! (friendly nudge). How's dat end of the year stuff goin'?
Three days left of school...i'll be done Thursday morning because I have 2 exams to take.
I have time tonight to write if I can get some creativity going.
Starting back up!!!
CHAPTER 24 GET!!!
And Nik is the only one unaffected by this curse?
How convenient. xD
Of course. XD
Hipster community into cursed city at night. That's honestly the best plot twist I've ever heard.
^ Yes.
QuoteFinding a stray Umbreon
INCONCEIVABLE!
Also I wonder if Nurse Joy is an ass during the Night too:
"GTFO of my Pokémon Center, where we tell your pokemon to suck it up. Would you like me to take your Pokémon? Okay, I'll take your Pokémon for... just a few seconds. Your Pokémon are now mine. Hope to see you again beeotch." D:
XD
Just imagine a Pokemon boot camp. "YOU'RE PARALYZED? TOUGH LUCK PRIVATE, SUCK IT UP."
May be old...
(http://i.qkme.me/3ov2la.jpg)
pftht don't forget burn
Quote from: gzgregory on May 24, 2012, 02:28:45 PMAnd Nik is the only one unaffected by this curse?
How convenient. xD
Naturally.
Quote from: Nebbles on May 24, 2012, 02:39:54 PMHipster community into cursed city at night. That's honestly the best plot twist I've ever heard.
Sarcasm?
Quote from: spitllama on May 24, 2012, 02:47:10 PMINCONCEIVABLE!
Also I wonder if Nurse Joy is an ass during the Night too:
"GTFO of my Pokémon Center, where we tell your pokemon to suck it up. Would you like me to take your Pokémon? Okay, I'll take your Pokémon for... just a few seconds. Your Pokémon are now mine. Hope to see you again beeotch." D:
I may have to write that in...if I can find space.
Not sarcasm at all. XD
K-night, how soon do you need that chapter from me and Shadowkirby?? Were working on it, slowly, but we can pick up the pace if needed...message me the deets.
Quote from: spitllama on May 24, 2012, 02:47:10 PMAlso I wonder if Nurse Joy is an ass during the Night too:
"GTFO of my Pokémon Center, where we tell your pokemon to suck it up. Would you like me to take your Pokémon? Okay, I'll take your Pokémon for... just a few seconds. Your Pokémon are now mine. Hope to see you again beeotch." D:
You mean like this?
(http://pokemonx.comicgenesis.com/comics/20030908.png)
I love Pokemon-X.
I'm gonna try to do chapter 25 today
I'm still writing 25.
CHAPTER 25 GET!
...sorry, Jub. I had to lighten the character load just a bit. I hope you understand :)
Jub3r7. :(
Also, A+. I especially liked how you integrated our comments in this thread into the story.
Quote from: Mashi on May 26, 2012, 10:51:53 PMI especially liked how you integrated our comments in this thread into the story.
Haha, I noticed that XD good job, k-night!
Is there a word that describes legit love for a piece of literature? Because if so I have it. MUST HAS MORE.
I have heard your cries for more!!!
AND...
Too bad!
CHAPTER 26 GET!
Nice reference to past games. But who's Akiro?
Old member. From what I've read of his posts, he was quite the troll. And he was only a guest.
It only says "Guest" on his posts 'cus his account was deleted.
*headbang*
*bang*
*bang*
*bang*
ANYWAYS, the story's awesome. XD
Quote from: Olimar12345 on May 27, 2012, 01:20:33 PMIt only says "Guest" on his posts 'cus his account was deleted.
That's what I thought.
Quote from: gzgregory on May 27, 2012, 01:21:09 PM*headbang*
*bang*
*bang*
*bang*
? Did you not like it? D;
No, that's my in-story self after the fact.
Oh.
Don't worry you'll be coming back later ;)
PROGRESS ON CHAPTER 27?!
I've...got the title done! :D
These are all pretty good. Keep it up!
I really need to continue working on my story, but it's a Pages document and im on windows and I can't switch back until tomorrow.
I just use the Notes app on my iPod.
i should get the Pages app for my iPad
Oooh maybe i'll have to check that out. Is it good?
I'll let you know tomorrow!
Don't worry guys, I haven't given up. I've been pretty busy. I'll start 27 tomorrow evening.
Right.
Pages app is pretty awesome, but you should have a Mac with iWork and iCloud to really get the best out of it!
I just use google docs. :P I find it highly convenient and it's very usable. But not for an iPod.
Guys omg i keep losing track of this :/ tomorrow at the latest. If I forget again...yeah.
Go into iCal (or Google Calendar) and PUT IT IN YOUR SCHEDULE. Then it will send you a notification to DO IT!
(that's what I do so I don't get behind on writing)
Quote from: K-NiGhT on June 04, 2012, 11:16:45 PMGuys omg i keep losing track of this :/ tomorrow at the latest. If I forget again...yeah.
Y u no make chapters!?
Y U NO READ THE I'M AWAY TOPIC, PEOPLE?!
Chapter 27 GET!
Lol, I think I know who the man that incinerated the grunt it. XD
Can't wait for my gym battle!
Guys! EMERGENCY!!!!!
I didn't realize this, but when my old iPod broke, all the notes I had didn't transfer over to my new one. Without these notes, I can't continue the chapter I'm currently working on. Even if you have already been introduced into the story, PLEASE send me your teams! (and bio for those who haven't been introduced yet.)
THANK YOU!!
PS: If you want your bio slightly modified, now would be a perfect oppurtunity.
I'll be more specific. Gym leaders that haven't battled yet and Elite 4 members+Champion. Send your stuff in ASAP.
I sent mine last night.
I know, but I need all the Gym Leaders', and 2 other Elite 4's plus the Champion.
Quote from: K-NiGhT on June 22, 2012, 08:48:51 AMGuys! EMERGENCY!!!!!
I didn't realize this, but when my old iPod broke, all the notes I had didn't transfer over to my new one. Without these notes, I can't continue the chapter I'm currently working on. Even if you have already been introduced into the story, PLEASE send me your teams! (and bio for those who haven't been introduced yet.)
THANK YOU!!
PS: If you want your bio slightly modified, now would be a perfect oppurtunity.
do you need mine and shadowkirby's?
Actually, I'm about to pm you two.
You got mine, right? Just making sure.
Yes I did :)
They're not saved under the old messages? Unless you deleted them....
I deleted my messages after putting them on my notes, which got destroyed.
Did you get them all back yet?
Hopefully I saved mine as a .txt and I can resend it easily.
Otherwise, I'll try to get a new one to you as soon as I can.
I've gotten a bunch from people that I don't need. I need:
Blueflower999
Fleetstar
Winter
Raymondbl
Wrydryn
Olimar12345
the_last_sheikah
fingerz
Shadoninja
And all extras.
I'm pretty sure I sent mine, but just to be sure I'll send it again.
-_- I sent mine, but I'll send it again...
Second page of messages find :/ sorry guys!
I changed one of my characters in the PM I just sent, is that change ok?
It's acceptable.
Finally!
CHAPTER 28 GET!!!
readreadread
commentcommentcomment
gogogo
No kman and shadowkirby... :(
Not yet. You guys will come soon. I'm still working on the next chapter. Shit's about to get deep.
I barely have any lines/parts, it seems...
With seven main characters + whoever else is in the chapter, it gets tough. Sorry, Nebbles :(
Also,
CHAPTER 29 GET!
I feel like I'm missing some backstory on this. Or do I not want to know?
You are intentionally missing some backstory. This is fiction and does not necessarily represent any real life events.
And now you're gunna tease us with not telling the back story until sometime towards the end. God do I hate good stories. ;)
THAR MUST BE MOAR DRAMAZ!
So i just read all 40 pages of this thread instead of write chapter 30.
There've been a lot of memories in this thread.
I just want to say thank you to all of you who have read since chapter 1. Here's to a bunch of more chapters from now.
I also wanted to say that I know I was going to buckle down and do a bunch this summer. That didn't happen and I am sorry. Technical difficulties suck. And now that I have a job, I'll have even less time to write, ESPECIALLY when school starts. So that's why I'm speeding up the story a little bit and getting as far as I can before junior year starts, because I know how it happened this last year, and I want to get this done or really close before I get REALLY busy.
Thanks, everyone!
Adding a table of contents that I will finish later.
Quote from: K-NiGhT on July 21, 2012, 03:00:47 PM"Go! Crobat!" Blue Flower called. A purple bat with four all wings emerged from the ball.
"Go, Xatu," Davy said coolly.
"Crobat vs Xatu," the ref declared. "Begin!"
"Xatu, Psychic," Davy said completely blankly. Xatu quickly followed Davy's orders and released a strong Psychic blast at Crobat.
"Crobat, Air Cutter!" Blue Flower ordered. Crobat fired a sonicboom at Xatu, which didn't make it past Xatu's Psychic attack. Crobat took the full force of the attack and fell over, fainted.
"Crobat is unable to battle!" the ref said. "Xatu wins! The winner is Davy from Cinnabar Island!"
Everyone was dumbstruck. No one thought the battle would be over that quickly. Davy still stared forward at Blue Flower, steel-faced.
"Wow," Stepney said. "Just...wow."
"I can't believe it," Roz gasped.
"Did anyone time it?" Nebu asked.
"I did," Jordan answered, Pokenav in hand. "17 seconds."
So, I send you a huge message containing a battle strategy, and you decide that I end my match in 17 seconds?
Don't understeand me wrong, I'm neighter mad at you nor dissapointed, but I hoped you'd use something from my strategy at least.
I was going to, but it was lost in my stuff. Plus I needed to speed up the story. Sorry davy :(
Okay than, I hope you are going to include that other thing I sent you (if you want me to resend it, plz ask).
Resend it cuz idk what you're talking about.
The love interests are going to make this story for me ;D
Oh but let's just make an agreement right now that the evil super mastermind cannot be involved in relationships because that would just be absurd!
spitllamashi
:)
i have a feeling that a certain jub3r7 may not take a liking to that
:(
Jub3rspitllamashidryn
hot
The Table of Contents has been fixed! I've also included names of future chapters so you guys have an idea of what is coming up next!
Also, I'm working on a little something-something behind the scenes with a couple people that will be released in the next chapter. I'm waiting on them, so we all must be patient!
Also, with chapter 30 brings an announcement from me. After it's released, of course.
Quote from: K-NiGhT on July 22, 2012, 10:39:32 PMThe Table of Contents has been fixed! I've also included names of future chapters so you guys have an idea of what is coming up next!
Also, I'm working on a little something-something behind the scenes with a couple people that will be released in the next chapter. I'm waiting on them, so we all must be patient!
Also, with chapter 30 brings an announcement from me. After it's released, of course.
I told you, I'm almost dooooonnnnneeeee! I just gotta finish up the tourney and then type it!!
It's okay! No pressure! Totes srs. :)
Quote from: K-NiGhT on July 22, 2012, 04:21:22 PMJub3rspitllamashidryn
Weeell since two of them had a recent sex change ::)
Still liking it! There are some stories where after 30 chapters it gets boring and lame.
You keep it alive!
Keep it up!
You think I might come back in a future cameo?
Yes.
I hope people aren't losing interest...this is still gonna get seen through to the end! Promises!
Tentative chapter names up to chapter 40 have been released.
CHAPTER 30 GET!
MORE TENTATIVE CHAPTER TITLES GET!
A+++++++++. Best so far.
Want to be the coolest kid on NSM? Do you want to know when the next chapter of The Great NSM Pokemon Adventure is released before everyone else? Well now you can!
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Ooh...I got chills reading that. Even though I wrote the flashback, it just feels great now that its official.
More write is to be done.
Oh, yeah that reminds me, thank you very much to Kman for writing this awesome chapter and the one coming up! I may make this an option for main characters, to explain their backstory a little better. It also gives more story, so this doesn't have to end as soon.
Also, if you have been checking out that table of contents, you may notice that a few of the chapters have been highlighted green. These are chapters that I have finished, but cannot release yet. Just keeping you posted on how I'm doing, and letting you know how big this next update will be.
I'm liking how this is turning out! I had to catch up on the story, so it took me a while to read the new chapter (great btw :D).
Quote from: K-NiGhT on March 15, 2012, 09:55:11 PMTable of Contents: (Chapters without URLs haven't been released yet)
Chapter 1: New Horizons Dawning (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg142478#msg142478)
Chapter 2: A Bright Sun (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg142507#msg142507)
Chapter 3: Like New Meetings, but Not Really (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg142692#msg142692)
Chapter 4: To Kanto, and... (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg142947#msg142947)
Chapter 5: A New Region? (Must've Missed the Memo...) (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg142980#msg142980)
Chapter 6: Beginning the Adventure (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg143120#msg143120)
Chapter 7: A Pleasant Town (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg143566#msg143566)
Chapter 8: A First Battle (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg143714#msg143714)
Chapter 9: There's Always People Like THEM (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg143859#msg143859)
Chapter 10: Training? (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg144205#msg144205)
Chapter 11: Begin the Crazy Training! (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg144222#msg144222)
Chapter 12: The Fruits of Training (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg144250#msg144250)
Chapter 13: The First Gym Battle (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg144887#msg144887)
Chapter 14: The First Gym Battle (Part 2) (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg145799#msg145799)
Chapter 15: The First Gym Battle (Part 3) (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg145843#msg145843)
Chapter 16: The First Gym Battle (Part 4) (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg145876#msg145876)
Chapter 17: The Stone Quarry (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg146354#msg146354)
Chapter 18: Et tu, Spitllama? (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg146475#msg146475)
Chapter 19: A Chance in Vermillion (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg146505#msg146505)
Chapter 20: Matt versus Atticus (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg146539#msg146539)
Chapter 21: Lucky Seven (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg146662#msg146662)
Chapter 22: Jackpot (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg146703#msg146703)
Chapter 23: Jackpot (Part 2) (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg147314#msg147314)
Chapter 24: A Corrupted Dream (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg151388#msg151388)
Chapter 25: Jerry's Departure (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg151773#msg151773)
Chapter 26: Gregory and the Purity Forest (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg151817#msg151817)
Chapter 27: The Bulbasaur (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg154066#msg154066)
Chapter 28: A Quick Battle (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg159484#msg159484)
Chapter 29: (Re)United (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg159494#msg159494)
Chapter 30: Memories REALLY Suck Sometimes (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.msg159665#msg159665)
Chapter 31: Memories REALLY Suck Sometimes (Part 2)
Chapter 32: On the Bridge
Chapter 33: Splitting Up
Chapter 34: Island of Fire
Chapter 35: Fleeting Star
Chapter 36: Burnin' Up
Chapter 37: In the Line of Fire
Chapter 38: Oh, Really? Where's Chuck Norris?
Chapter 39: Battle BL
Chapter 40: Out of the Frying Pan and into the...Iceburg
Chapter 41: Radio Tower Takeover
Chapter 42: The Plan is Revealed
Chapter 43: Cool as Ice
Chapter 44: Team Aqua/Magma Attacks
Chapter 45: On the Mainland
Chapter 46: Warnings
Chapter 47: Treehouse? No. TREE CITY!
Chapter 48: Nice to See You Again
Chapter 49: Back to Maron
Chapter 50: Frivolously Frivolous Frivolity
Chapter 51: Totes a Frivolously Frivolous Battle
Chapter 52: Kidnapping the Main Character is NOT Okay
Chapter 53: ???
Chapter 54: Taking the Fight to Them
Chapter 55: Battles and Betrayals
Chapter 56: This Place About to Blow
Chapter 57: Debriefing
Chapter 58: Together Again
Chapter 59: Old Friends and New
Chapter 60: The Tournament Begins
Check out how many chapters you guys get in the next update so far! Lots of reading! (My finished chapters are in green)
Chapter 56: This Place About to Blow
Ke$ha
xD
Quote from: spitllama on July 24, 2012, 12:44:46 PMChapter 56: This Place About to Blow
Ke$ha
xD
You win!
Ten chapter update has been reduced to 8. It'll make things easier for me. And keep you guys from falling too far behind. So READ IT ALL TOMORROW OR YOU WILL FALL BEHIND.
Prepare to joy puke your face off.
CHAPTERS 31-38 GET!!!!
*vomits*
OH. EM. GEE.
Lol what'd you think? I think I wrote too fast.
I think everything sounds fine. I just think that my chapter (31) sounds kinda weird because I was uber tired last night...and I was rushing to get it done. But yeah, I'm loving it!
Awesomeness. I can't wait to make a Ro-...er, I mean, good job, sounds like it would make a fun game to actually play in...
A ROM would be a cool idea. Or maybe a graphic novel :0
A Rom? What a great idea you thought of! Maybe when the story is finished I'll give it a shot! ;)
:o by yourself?
Hell no! What do you think I am? A genius?...er, bad example. No, me and a friend of mine are trying to do one now with some software he downloaded, and it seems to make it simpler to do. So yeah, if this one goes well, we might give it a go.
Well you should wait until it's over. I have some good ideas that have been hidden.
Yay, my battle with korbin got through!
Just wondering if you would have written it without me sugesting it too.
Edit: Suggestion: as korbin's pokemon come fron the torn world, wouldn't it be a nice idea to give them their hidden abilities (that would make servine a real badass).
water you talking about his pokemon come from teh real world. totes srs.
I actually did something? :O
*Begins reading*
You BETTER read cuz if you don't you'll fall behind!
CHAPTER 39 GET!
:>
Best.
I knew you'd like it ;)
Chapter 40 will be a little late. I just got home from the fair a little while ago because I got sick :( so this chapter will be late and also somewhat short. I don't have much to put in it. I kinda wanted to use the awsm chapter name tho.
New Poll!!!! Lol
Ahahahahahahahahahahaha.
EDIT: I take it that I can't vote for both Nebu + Davy/Stepney and Roz + Davy/Stepney?
Why not?
omg yes
Nebu + Eric FTW
uh
this is awkward
i don't know who i want to be paired with hahah whoops
That's okay then Nebbles. The general public will decide who you love! It's very efficient.
The poll was to be up for approx. 12 hours. I cut it short cuz I has doctor appt. and won't be able to close it.
oh man
just one thing
do not make my romance the super cliche things. I like romances that come naturally :U
Okay. You can always pm me suggestions ;)
CHAPTER 40 GET!
It's short, but I'm also kinda behind now, so I'm going to focus more on Chapter 41 today.
Sorry K-NiGT, I'll have the form done soon... I was trying to find the first one, but failed.. XD
Too late, you were already in the story. I found your team and remembered part of your bio, so I made something up.
By the way, I liked how you wrote my gym battle. :D The last resort strategy with Drifblim was nice.
Bonus points for making me always complain about the weather. seriously, that's all I do.
I actually just kinda randomly picked you both times...lol!
Quote from: K-NiGhT on July 28, 2012, 02:03:03 PMToo late, you were already in the story. I found your team and remembered part of your bio, so I made something up.
Oh, really? Thanks! I always love it when people do work for me.
No problem ;D
omg I went back and reread the bio section
"Ms. Fleet (Fleetstar the Flygon): The Leader of the Gym on Isle del Fuego. A total pyromaniac who loves to blow things up with dynamite. She's also a very nice girl to be around."
Lol the contrast!!!! XDDD so hilarious
Finally had time to read everything. Omg the chapter with me and Shado made me laugh hard xD
Pretty good story, I still love it! Can't wait to see my gym battle too~
Also the poll made me laugh.
why is the poll locked?
Quote from: K-NiGhT on July 28, 2012, 07:29:42 AMThe poll was to be up for approx. 12 hours. I cut it short cuz I has doctor appt. and won't be able to close it.
CHAPTER 41 GET!
Lol, I had been so devastated when I couldn't have a flygon... X3
Lol flygon isn't a fire type.
a cliffhanger oh noes!!
K-Night, you better write the next chapter fast so I can learn what Korbin's plans are!!!
Don't worry, I'm almost done with chapter 42! And it has a HUGE plot twist that I think everyone will LOVE and TOTALLY not see coming!
Quote from: K-NiGhT on July 29, 2012, 06:01:58 PMDon't worry, I'm almost done with chapter 42! And it has a HUGE plot twist that I think everyone will LOVE and TOTALLY not see coming!
Is it going to be another huge 4th wall breaking? -__-
Quote from: blueflower999 on July 29, 2012, 06:02:54 PMIs it going to be another huge 4th wall breaking? -__-
Actually, that doesn't even qualify as a plot twist.
O...M...G... Giratina is going to appear for some reason, and Davy will attempt to kill it, and its death will cause the distortion world(and the real world cause they are connected) to be destroyed. Korbin, knowing this, is trying to stop Davy and save the world!
.
.
.
That or he really is going to destroy the world, and just before giratina destroys everything, he discovers true friends and sacrifices himself.
Just a thought...
CHAPTER 42 GET!
SUPER PLOT TWIST GET!
W.T.-WHAT! Yeah, I like your plot twist better.
what oh SNAP
Told you guys you wouldn't see it coming.
*Spoiler*
HOLY CRAP!
I'm a bad guy?!
Try not to give any spoilers until most everyone has read please D: this is a huge twist and I'd hate to ruin it.
Quote from: K-NiGhT on July 29, 2012, 06:52:47 PMTry not to give any spoilers until most everyone has read please D: this is a huge twist and I'd hate to ruin it.
Sorry. Fixed.
Thanks, bud. Just cuz that, I'ma do the next chapter!
Quote from: K-NiGhT on July 29, 2012, 06:42:42 PMTold you guys you wouldn't see it coming.
Ya know, I had an inkling that a gym leader might be a part of FoG...but I was thinking more of Forrest, because
A. He was calling them on their Pokénavs without have getting their numbers (yeah right, so and so gave it to them)
B. He was non-chalantly persuading them to come to iceberg island, setting them up for a trap to be unveiled by Korbin.
C. He went "home" to get his pokémon while he was at the gym. Wtf are you doing at the gym without your pokémon?!? I call BS.
Idk. Just somethings I noticed about Forrest that made me suspicious.
A. Jerry gave him the numbers because he knew Forrest.
B. He was there just for his Radio Show
C. I'm pretty sure they would've gone there anyway.
Also, TWG suspicion elements ftw.
BAH KMAN WHY U SPOIL THIS FOR ME
WHY YOU READ HERE FIRST?!
I guess there's no way to know about spoilers, so if there is a new post in the discussion thread, assume that there may be a new chapter and check there first.
Quote from: spitllama on July 29, 2012, 07:24:31 PMBAH KMAN WHY U SPOIL THIS FOR ME
Water u talking abowt? Spoil wat?
The super epic plot twist.
Will there be other plot twists later we need to worry about spoiling?
Possibly?
also
when are we gonna learn the results of the poll
-stares-
Lol guys I'm still on Ch. 34 xD
But I do have a spoiler- ...
FoG WINS
The End.
Quote from: Nebbles on July 29, 2012, 07:43:41 PMalso
when are we gonna learn the results of the poll
Sometime after chapter 60.
Quote from: spitllama on July 29, 2012, 07:45:32 PMBut I do have a spoiler- ...
FoG WINS
The End.
DAMMIT NO SPOILERS!
whaaaat
Yeah.
Phew! Finally caught up. I'd just like to say that only a fool would care about Girafarigs.
Nice job K-Night. I thought it'd get boring to read so many chapters at once, but I was pretty hooked (for lack of a better word) the whole time. Spitllama requests you continue.
I will tomorrow. I'm playing HeartGold right now.
CHAPTER 43 GET!
No text alert cuz it's 11:39 PM
Korbin's plan...whoa.
How dare you say that Girafarig is a worthless Pokemon ;~;
Quote from: Roz~ on July 30, 2012, 10:45:49 AMHow dare you say that Girafarig is a worthless Pokemon ;~;
Lol blame Kman he wrote it first.
So anyway, I was just watching the first Pokemon movie. Saw Davy's father :0
Show of hands, how many people cried during that movie? *raises hand*
Quote from: Roz~ on July 30, 2012, 10:45:49 AMHow dare you say that Girafarig is a worthless Pokemon ;~;
I sowwy, Roz, I was just thinking of a pokémon to use that could be a part of an environmentalist group that started with "G." since Girafarig is kind of a rare pokémon...it just kind of worked out like that. I don't honestly despise girafarigs, but apparently KORBIN does!! :3
Quote from: the_last_sheikah on July 30, 2012, 11:39:46 AMShow of hands, how many people cried during that movie? *raises hand*
*raises hand*
Quote from: the_last_sheikah on July 30, 2012, 11:39:46 AMShow of hands, how many people cried during that movie? *raises hand*
I cried more during Pikachu's vacation when Charizard cried than the rest of the movie. I probably cried when I first watched it tho.
Quote from: Kman96 on July 30, 2012, 12:04:15 PMI sowwy, Roz, I was just thinking of a pokémon to use that could be a part of an environmentalist group that started with "G." since Girafarig is kind of a rare pokémon...it just kind of worked out like that. I don't honestly despise girafarigs, but apparently KORBIN does!! :3
It's k I forgive you. :3
I'll work some more tomorrow. I work from 5:30 to 8:00 tomorrow morning.
You... ... ...
*silence*
Just sitting at Panera Bread, updating the story. Cuz I love you guys.
CHAPTER 44 GET!!!
Quote from: K-NiGhT on August 01, 2012, 10:41:57 AMJust sitting at Panera Bread, updating the story. Cuz I love you guys.
CHAPTER 44 GET!!!
We love you too, K-NiGhT. Now keep writing.
Quote from: blueflower999 on August 01, 2012, 12:15:43 PMBut not me, apparently... :'(
That's a different thread :3
CHAPTER 45 GET! That makes two chapters today.
fdsklhsdk STOP WITH THE CLIFFHANGERS
Did anyone else read Maxie's lines in his voice from the anime? No? Just me? Odd...
Do you still take bios? I'd love to join the story!
Quote from: Nebbles on August 01, 2012, 10:38:53 PMSTOP WITH THE CLIFFHANGERS
But that's what makes it good!
Quote from: the_last_sheikah on August 02, 2012, 06:24:58 AMDid anyone else read Maxie's lines in his voice from the anime? No? Just me? Odd...
I hate Maxie's anime voice :/
Quote from: FSM-Reapr on August 02, 2012, 07:00:38 AMDo you still take bios? I'd love to join the story!
Unfortunately, since we're at least halfway through the story, no. I might have a use for your band though, so PM me some names of members, and what instruments they play.
What if I would make an epic comeback in the chapter(s) 59/60?
hahhaha maxie's anime voice
CHAPTER 46 GET!
Quote from: FSM-Reapr on August 02, 2012, 09:46:33 AMWhat if I would make an epic comeback in the chapter(s) 59/60?
That's not the end of the story. I still have more chapters after that, and I know where you are going to fit in.
Quote from: Nebbles on August 02, 2012, 10:42:14 AMhahhaha maxie's anime voice
That guy was the worst voice actor ever. Of all time. I just saw an episode with him in it on Boomerang the other day. It was horrid.
As we near the Pokemon League, a thought came to me.
I only have 18 people planned for the Pokemon League. I need 32.
This is what I propose. People who are reading faithfully make bios for users that haven't expressed an interest in the story/read it?
Also, FSM, make a team of six and describe your personality plz. Read the rules AND the taken Pokemon list (which still needs to be updated so wait for a little bit)
Totes would have taken their pokemon while I had the chance. Group morale is so last generation.
(http://desmond.imageshack.us/Himg833/scaled.php?server=833&filename=imagewpr.jpg&res=landing)
.... ??
K-Night, just wanted to say thanks for being so proactive at updating your story. I wish I could write my story as fast as your write yours!
Quote from: blueflower999 on August 02, 2012, 06:58:23 PMK-Night, just wanted to say thanks for being so proactive at updating your story. I wish I could write my story as fast as your write yours!
This ^^
Yar welcome! I appreciate your supports!
Quote from: K-NiGhT on August 02, 2012, 04:09:57 PMAlso, FSM, make a team of six and describe your personality plz. Read the rules AND the taken Pokemon list (which still needs to be updated so wait for a little bit)
I'll do that when I come back.
EDIT: Some people might guess who's one of my pokemons. ;)
Kirby!
SPOILER ALERT
SPOILER ALERT
SPOILER ALERT
Damn it spit!
Who stole my dynamite?? >:(
Sorry, guys! I'm falling behind, I know. Chapter 47 is ALMOST finished. I've been working a lot, keeping up with friends, practicing instruments, etc., so I haven't had a whole lot of time to write. The next chapter will MOST likely be up late tonight. Like REALLY late, so no txt alert prolly.
Also, I still need people for the pokemon league. Send me names of members you would like to see there with possible teams for them and a (fake) name, and that would be really fantastic ::)
Quote from: K-NiGhT on August 04, 2012, 12:48:06 PMAlso, I still need people for the pokemon league. Send me names of members you would like to see there with possible teams for them and a (fake) name, and that would be really fantastic ::)
Would it be possible for me and Eric to be like a last-minute addition to the tournament (assuming we somehow managed to get our pokémon back? I think you could pull some kind of plot twist with that, I don't know. Think about it. There's a lot of potential with that.
Welllllll if you were in the skype group...
Quote from: shadowkirby on August 04, 2012, 04:34:37 PMWelllllll if you were in the skype group...
???
What does that have to do with anything? I don't have skype.
CHAPTER 47 GET!!!
Omg this one took forever...
Is it just me, or did anyone else imagine this
Quote from: K-NiGhT on August 04, 2012, 10:49:08 PM"Charizard's a monster~"
"So is Lucario~"
"And Scolipede~"
as a barbershop quartet(triplet?) ?
Quote from: Kman96 on August 04, 2012, 11:04:11 PMIs it just me, or did anyone else imagine this
as a barbershop quartet(triplet?) ?
Wow you're really good at guessing things ;)
Way to read in context.
Oooh, the neglected by family role... interesting.
Well i thought of it after looking at your bio for a little bit.
Um, in the Pokemon that are already taken, you have 2 Slowpokes there. ???
slowpoke.jpg
Quote from: FSM-Reapr on August 07, 2012, 06:39:59 AMUm, in the Pokemon that are already taken, you have 2 Slowpokes there. ???
Well then you'll have to change one because they were there first.
Quote from: K-NiGhT on August 07, 2012, 09:52:45 PMKorbin wins. Game over.
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAT?!?!?!?
EDIT: wtf just happened? ???
Wellllll if you had skype...
CHAPTER 48 GET!!!
Um...it has come to my attention that I have spelt a word wrong...for the entire story. I sincerely apoligize. I usually pride myself on my spelling and grammar when I write. I will fix ALL the mistakes.
Quote from: K-NiGhT on August 07, 2012, 09:03:38 AMWell then you'll have to change one because they were there first.
Then why is there a Ralts and a Gallade on the list?
Quote from: K-NiGhT on August 07, 2012, 11:17:50 PMUm...it has come to my attention that I have spelt a word wrong...for the entire story. I sincerely apoligize. I usually pride myself on my spelling and grammar when I write. I will fix ALL the mistakes.
what word? ???
Quote from: FSM-Reapr on August 08, 2012, 12:36:41 AMThen why is there a Ralts and a Gallade on the list?
because one is gardevoir and one is gallade.
Wait...nvm
Quote from: K-NiGhT on August 13, 2012, 09:07:55 PMdefinitely.
You know what? I think you psychologically got me to continue to spell that word wrong after I read it in the story. I was typing an essay recently, and every time I wrote "definately" it said it was wrong...and I was like, "dafuq?"
...now I know. -_-
All part of my master plan... >:)
It's soon been a week without chapters... :(
Yeah.. D:
Could be worse, I've seen webcomics that go months without updates, sometimes a whole year.
Sorry, guys! I've been kinda busy and haven't had much chance to, and when I have the chance I always get stuck :| I need to come up with the FoG part of the chapter, which is suprisingly very difficult. I'm going to the dentist so I'll write on the way.
I just got caught up and I'm excited for the next chapter!
Well...here's the deal.
School has started, which means I will have exactly 0 hours, 0 minutes, and 0 seconds to write per day. So unfortunately, Season Four of The Great NSM Pokemon Adventure is over. (now for the season two preview...)
Wait, you mean you had time to write this?! :P Can't wait for S2!
does this mean that we have a new theme song
But anyhow, don't feel bad about this, if you do, K-NiGhT. Although it's greatly enjoyable to read your story, it's not worth reading if we know that it's detrimental to your time in reality. We're happier knowing that you're happy, so take as much time to write as you wish!
ilu Mashi <3
What Mashi said... don't fret about us! Don't force yourself to write. :D Take your time!
What Mashi said, except with a few edits!
Quote from: Mashi on August 24, 2012, 02:29:01 PMdoes this mean that we have a new theme song
But anyhow, don't feel bad about this, if you do, K-NiGhT. Although it's greatly enjoyable to read your story, it's not worth reading if we know that it's detrimental to your time in reality. We're happier knowing that you're happy [writing], so take as much time to write as you wish [can]!
(Kidding.)
Haha Jub. You're just mad cuz I stopped right before your idea.
Also, I realized one season of 48 chapters is way too long, no matter how short the chapters are. That's why I have split it up into (6?) seasons, with more tentative chapter titles coming, possibly.
SEASON ONE: In which the group forms and the adventure begins.
SEASON TWO: In which the group's Gym Challenge finally begins.
SEASON THREE: In which the group is deemed worthy to travel by themselves, as they get stronger.
SEASON FOUR: In which the group splits up to get all the badges faster, and the FoG begins to become a major threat.
SEASON FIVE: (coming soon!)
SEASON SIX: (coming after season five!)
NEW POLL.
Okay, so far the majority says yes. The only problem is, I can't draw worth a poop, let alone animate something. Does anybody know someone who would actually be willing to do this? :O
That would be awesome! I can't draw either, but I'd be willing to help out anyway you need for this.
Well I was thinking we could have each member voice their own characters, if we actually DID this.
I can finally do some voice acting... even if it's my own voice! XD
I could be the narrator, since I haven't been in the story yet. I can also do a few different types of voices for minor characters if need be.
If we can't find an animator, we could even just do an audiobook.
Quote from: K-NiGhT on August 26, 2012, 11:44:03 AMIf we can't find an animator, we could even just do an audiobook.
LOL yes!!! But we should all voice our own roles, shouldnt we? I think that would be best.
Quote from: Kman96 on August 26, 2012, 11:55:22 AMLOL yes!!! But we should all voice our own roles, shouldnt we? I think that would be best.
I'm in.
Quote from: Kman96 on August 26, 2012, 11:55:22 AMBut we should all voice our own roles, shouldnt we? I think that would be best.
Definitely not for me. I hate my voice.
Hey, I sound like a 14-older! My voice, if what is awful.
Quote from: K-NiGhT on August 26, 2012, 10:44:00 AMWell I was thinking we could have each member voice their own characters, if we actually DID this.
Quote from: Kman96 on August 26, 2012, 11:55:22 AMLOL yes!!! But we should all voice our own roles, shouldnt we? I think that would be best.
omg lrn 2 read.
I just realized something. I have my computer now, and I type a lot faster on a computer, with less mistakes. So if I took a few minutes on the weekends, I could just go ahead and start on season five.
(yes, I said FIVE. Read back a few pages if you are confused.)
Quote from: K-NiGhT on August 26, 2012, 12:17:03 PMomg lrn 2 read.
Lol sorry ::)
Quote from: K-NiGhT on August 26, 2012, 12:23:22 PMI just realized something. I have my computer now, and I type a lot faster on a computer, with less mistakes. So if I took a few minutes on the weekends, I could just go ahead and start on season five.
Hooray!!! :D
but, to be true to mah words, I will take a one week break. For today, however, I will work on the season five preview.
Yay!!
Hay guys I can draw and stuff
I can draw but not animate, and my drawing would take a while cuz I'm a perfectionist. I could do the Pokemon, though honestly I have no idea what your storys about
Quote from: Bubbles7689 on August 26, 2012, 03:10:02 PMhonestly I have no idea what your storys about
D: D: D: D: D: D:
You must read! (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.0)
Haha I posted in the wrong thread...whoops
Basically I think instead of animating we should make a comic so we dont need animation software, voice acting, etc
Quote from: Bubbles7689 on August 26, 2012, 06:07:40 PMIm still reading the story, but my best bet would be not an animation, but rather a comic sort of style. It would take too long to draw then animate pictures without it looking like a complete joke, plus you would need voice acting. How about each person (regardless of their drawing skills) draws one page or panel of the comic, thensubmits it until eventually the story up to the present it finished?
This sounds like a cool idea, but then again, everything on this site sounds cool B) (see what I did there?)
QuoteHow about each person (regardless of their drawing skills) draws one page or panel of the comic, thensubmits it until eventually the story up to the present it finished?
I don't know if that's the best idea either, because we'll get one strip that looks like this
http://pettyartist.deviantart.com/gallery/29771926#/d4uw817 (http://pettyartist.deviantart.com/gallery/29771926#/d4uw817)
and then one that looks like this
http://www.nuzlocke.com/pokemonhardmode.php?p=1 (http://www.nuzlocke.com/pokemonhardmode.php?p=1)
Then one that looks like this
http://pokemonx.comicgenesis.com/d/20030609.html (http://pokemonx.comicgenesis.com/d/20030609.html)
I think a consistent artist would be needed. What we could do is combine ideas and have a comic with an audiobook of the lines. Regardless, it comes down to what K-night wants.
I only suggested multiple artists since one would feel overwhelmed. Maybe two or three that try to keep a consistent style, or one artist that draws the Pokemon,one the people, and the other puts them together?
we could make a team of animators that try to draw in a consistent style. I'm not sure how many people are on the average animation team, but I'm sure it's no small feat. That's why anyone who can draw on a computer is welcome to help out. If you know someone who would like to do something like this, don't hesitate to contact them! This would be cool.
What software will you use to animate it? And will there be color or will everything be black and white to make it easier?
I can't animate, and I don't have a program for it. That's up to whoever decides to be on the animation scene.
I might be able to draw, but my style is rather distinct, so it wouldn't really fit with everyone else's...
You don't say...
(http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?action=dlattach;attach=1428;type=avatar)
:P
that wasn't very nice.
I was kidding. But I love your drawings Fleet!
I was just picturing myself myself looking like that Link. lol so funny.
Actually, I didn't draw that XDD
I finished reading, but noticed that I wasnt in it >:(
Though Im not blaming anyone, of course. But what was the surprise?
The story isn't over yet. And you're not in it because you haven't submitted a team or a bio. Please check the list of taken pokemon (on the first post of this thread), and send me a bio ASAP.
Sorry. I didnt mean to sound like I was angry, I was only kidding. Im sending you the bio right now
So I just caught up on it.. awesome writing, and glad to see you've updated frequently!
Korbin actually managed to unite all the teams... I'm impressed. Especially Magma and Aqua, heh.
Quote from: Bubbles7689 on August 28, 2012, 04:25:52 PMSorry. I didnt mean to sound like I was angry, I was only kidding. Im sending you the bio right now
i know you didn't mean it that way. I was actually gonna ask if you wanted to be in it, anyway :)
super animated version of chapter 1 will be posted on September 4th
:o
(https://encrypted-tbn1.google.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcSFzGBZqjUSsOfkSPOMKaC1Zu0cXAwjBLof0wI6a_HTkv9zD-AF)
YES DO WANT
Quote from: Jub3r7 on August 29, 2012, 05:27:52 PMsuper animated version of chapter 1 will be posted on September 4th
lies.
Omg I wish I wasn't grounded so I could start the new season over this weekend :(
And that is why Arceus invented the pen and paper.
Quote from: the_last_sheikah on September 02, 2012, 11:00:25 AMAnd that is why Arceus invented the pen and paper.
This^^^
That's what I have to do. I CANNOT compose at a computer. I have to write everything down.
zomg animation is so hard
I would like to be in this. My lead Pokemon will be another Mr. Saturn.
Boing.
But...that's not a Pokemon :o
Quote from: K-NiGhT on September 02, 2012, 06:12:53 PMBut...that's not a Pokemon :o
But they were made by the same people.
Still not a Pokemon xD
I'd like to have an elgyem and a clefairy, then.
I already took Clefairy. Sorry. :D
And you should pick 6 instead of just 2
Jub, I hope the first episode will be done tomorrow :0
Tomorrow I may or may not finish it, but if I do, I won't post it until I've read the next chapter!!!!
WHY MUST YOU MAKE US WAIT ALL OF YOU
Okay, I lied, character bios animation will be up later today instead of chapter 1!!!
better than nothing
Can't wait to see it! And just to let you know, season five will not begin until around thanksgiving, just because I want to make a good start this year.
Spoiler Alert: Kman and Shadow survive. ;)
Quote from: Jub3r7 on September 04, 2012, 02:20:08 PMOkay, I lied, character bios animation will be up later today instead of chapter 1!!!
Five days later...
Dem delays
One WEEK later...
Almost one month later. >:(
It's okay, everyone! I did it myself!
The Great NSM Pokemon Adventure Animated:
(http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-HM5nK3U46dw/T0snNQuDJpI/AAAAAAAACb0/Wdua2iUoyQw/s1600/White+Page.jpg)
It's animated at one frame per yoctosecond.
Beautiful.
Well, guys. I'm questionably ungrounded. For now. So maybe in my spare time I can continue.
Yay!
I happen to have forgotten where I left off :|
Quote from: K-NiGhT on October 06, 2012, 12:51:48 PMWell, guys. I'm questionably ungrounded. For now. So maybe in my spare time I can continue.
Hooray!
Quote from: K-NiGhT on October 06, 2012, 02:17:46 PMI happen to have forgotten where I left off :|
It's a new season! Start off with a
BANG!
Wait, Are we still alloud to make bios for a pokemon not on the claimed list, or is it too late.
Hey guys. How ya doin? Cuz I'm ungrounded. That's right. UN-Grounded. So as my sorry-for-disappearing present to y'all, I'll be doing an all-nighter just for you guys! Stay tuned!
Quote from: SocialFox on October 06, 2012, 05:03:40 PMWait, Are we still alloud to make bios for a pokemon not on the claimed list, or is it too late?
WE WANT YOU! Make sure you follow the rules.
This is pro, and I can't believe I haven't seen this before!
... But... I'm not sure how this whole thing works...
Quote from: K-NiGhT on October 15, 2012, 07:59:35 PMHey guys. How ya doin? Cuz I'm ungrounded. That's right. UN-Grounded. So as my sorry-for-disappearing present to y'all, I'll be doing an all-nighter just for you guys! Stay tuned!
*GAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSPPP!!!!!!*Oh, K-NiGhT!!! :') I'm uber excited. You just made my night.
I've been doing a little organizing, and I have come up with a current listing (to my knowledge) of who will be in the tournament.
People in Tournament as of now:
Marty (K-NiGhT)
Nebu (Nebbles)
Rozalie (Roz)
Jordan (SlowPokemon)
Davy (davy)
Matt (Ragster)
Stepney (Clanker37)
Atticus (vermillionvermin)
Gregory (gzgregory)
Taylor (RAWRZEZ~)
Alan (the_last_sheikah)
Ryan (Wrydryn)
Jonathan (Olimar12345)
Joel (fingerz)
Mike (Shadoninja)
Kelsey (Kman96)
Eric (shadowkirby)
Korbin (spitllama)
Reapr (FSM)
Caroline (FSM)
Jake (FSM)
Marcus (FSM)
Mae (Bubbles7869)
Total: 23
Possible Additions: >2
Still Need: 9
This is everyone so far. As you can see, we need nine more people. I have a few people lined up, but I can't be bothered to write bios for all of them. That's where you come in. Yes, you. I'll be providing a list of who I want. PM me saying if you'll take one.
People that have expressed interest:
SocialFox
JDMEK5
Possible Tournament Additions?
Bespinben
Jamaha
Concerto
Cobraroll
Other Suggestions?
Quote from: K-NiGhT on October 15, 2012, 10:37:01 PMPeople that have expressed interest:
SocialFox
JDMEK5
Possible Tournament Additions?
Bespinben
Jamaha
Concerto
Cobraroll
Other Suggestions?
Will the Story continue after the Tournament, because I don't want to appear untill then.
Sent bio.
Quote from: SocialFox on October 15, 2012, 10:42:41 PMWill the Story continue after the Tournament, because I don't want to appear untill then.
Sent bio.
It's very unlikely that I will continue after the tournament, but it is possible.
Got your bio. Replied.
I am really excited for this to continue :D
Quote from: Nebbles on October 15, 2012, 10:49:49 PMI am really excited for this to continue :D
I am too, but I wanna get this organization stuff out of the way if I can.
Quote from: K-NiGhT on October 15, 2012, 10:49:22 PMIt's very unlikely that I will continue after the tournament, but it is possible.
Got your bio. Replied.
K-NiGhT, didn't you previously state that the story would continue for a certain time after the tournament? Like, not very long, but maybe for you to just wrap it up? I remember you telling me or somebody that.
I may do a few chapters, but it's also possible that we could have a whole new series on our hands. A new region after your Alyos story :O
Quote from: K-NiGhT on October 15, 2012, 10:58:57 PMI may do a few chapters, but it's also possible that we could have a whole new series on our hands. A new region after your Alyos story :O
Ah, yes, that'd be great! But I'm still planning my Alyos adventure for when this is finished...speaking of which...
Story: http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4830.0
Discussion: http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4669.0
/promo
I fell asleep :( sorry guys.
:o Wow K-NiGhT, you've gotten far into the story. I need to catch up *goes and grabs a bag of popcorn*
Gym leaders can't be in the Tournament, right? :(
I was thinking about it at one time, but decided against it.
Okay guys, I'm gonna buckle down and do some work tonight!
YAY
Waiting for my iOS to update. I'll start after it's finished.
Dang it. Every time I get ready to write, my body decides to shut down on me. Like, seriously. What the actual fuck?
Wait so is the other story just cancelled midway or...?
Quote from: spitllama on October 16, 2012, 10:02:55 PMWait so is the other story just cancelled midway or...?
No no, he said he's thinking about doing another NSM pokémon story after this one, although perhaps sometime after my Alyos story.
Yeah. Something like that.
K-night... >:(
CHAPTER 49 GET!!!
And thus begins Season 5!
Okay, guys. I've done a little extra housekeeping and finished a few people's teams. Please find your name on here and let me know if you have any changes you'd like to make. This also serves as the taken pokemon list for those of you who are still submitting.
NSM Pokemon Adventure Teams
Marty: Totodile, Riolu, Electrike, Rufflet, Growlithe, Pansage
Nebu: Cyndaquil, Drifloon, Solosis, Venipede, Sentret, Trapinch
Jordan: Chikorita, Minccino, Spinda, Misdreavus, Ralts, Litwick
Davy: Squirtle, Pineco, Pawniard, Porygon, Exeggcute, Natu
Matt: Treecko, Magikarp, Skarmory, Tynamo, Abra, Gible
Roz: Charmander, NidoranMale, Poliwag, Shroomish, Dratini, Bronzor
Stepney: Mudkip, Snorunt, Budew, Vulpix, Sneasel, Murkrow
Atticus: Farfetch'd, Voltorb, Arbok, Sandslash, Beartic, Magcargo
Taylor: Poocheyena, Bulbasaur, Aron, Cubone, Snubble, Minun
Gregory: Drowzee, Zebstrika, Baltoy, Zangoose, Dusknoir, Pansear
Dudesworth: Diglett, Drillbur, Donphan
Nik: Umbreon, Deino, Cacnea, Sandile
Blue Flower: Zubat
Fleet: Tepig, Heatmor, Flareon
Forrest: Glaceon, Shellder, Castform
Raymond: Chimchar, Meinfoo, Meditite
Jerry: Turtwig, Lotad, Hoppip, Snover, Leafeon
Francois: (secret)
Ruto: Psyduck, Espeon, Cherrim, Grumpig, Maractus, Sawsbuck
Saria: Lopunny, Quagsire, Musharna, Glameow, Kecleon, Eevee
Korbin: Snivy, Smeargle, Zorua, Ditto, Castform, Shedinja
Kelsey: Chatot, Buizel, Pichu, Axew, Magby, Tangela
Eric: Piplup, Hoothoot, Spiritomb, Torkoal, Rotom, Pikachu
Mike: Stunfisk, Aerodactyl, Beldum, Scraggy, Slowpoke, Larvesta
Alan: Blaziken, Gallade, Froslass, Jolteon, Seismitoad, Scizor
Joel: Fearow, Tyranitar, Milotic, Salamence, Rampardos, Leavanny
Jonathan: Shiny Bisharp, Durant, Ferrothorn, Mawile, Magnezone, Steelix
Ryan: Gallade, Hippowdon, Luxray, Seviper, Carnivine, Camerupt
Reapr: Mareep, Togepi, Jigglypuff, Miltank, Buneary, Clefairy
Caroline: Lapras, Starmie, Yanma, Politoed, Shuckle, Gliscor
Marcus: Ambipom, Pinsir, Heracross, Hitmonlee, Mamoswine, Stantler
Jake: Exploud, Tauros, Snorlax, Persian, Bellossom, Slowking
Jari: Conkeldurr, Shiftry, Kangaskhan, Kingler, Bastiodon, Unfezant
Concerto: Golurk, Sudowoodo, Kabutops, Mr. Mime, Gothitelle, Pelipper
Mae: Samorott, Absol, Blissey, Darmanitan, Armaldo, Hariyama
Sabin: Vaporeon, Sableye, Sigilyph, Druddigon, Ursaring, Crustle
(Some choices were made using a random team generator.)
I had Castform not Ninjask
Noctowl is shiny
Oh ok
If you can guess who my character's namesake is you get $100.
What, no comments on the latest chapter?
Quote from: K-NiGhT on October 18, 2012, 11:26:45 PMReapr: Mareep, Togepi, Jigglypuff, Miltank, Buneary, Clefairy
BOW TO THE ULTIMATE TEAM
Quote from: K-NiGhT on October 19, 2012, 03:22:34 PMWhat, no comments on the latest chapter?
K-NiGhT, I enjoyed the most recent chapter, and I am curious as to what the hell Eric and I are up to.
...also, is that a bit of foreshadowing I can see? Oooh :o
Yeah K-Night what the hell am I doing
Oops K-N, apparently Saria already called dibs on Lopunny. My bad. Replace my Buneary with Snubbull. ;)
This story keeps getting better and better. Glad to see you're back at it K-NiGhT!
Quote from: FSM-Reapr on October 20, 2012, 03:42:57 AMOops K-N, apparently Saria already called dibs on Lopunny. My bad. Replace my Buneary with Snubbull. ;)
Snubbull is taken too :(
D: Dunsparce?
okay :)
Working on chapter 50!
Yay!!!
I always get excited when I see this :)
(http://i48.tinypic.com/11iq061.png)
Good ;)
WTF no give me back my rotom, I don't want a FREAKING LEDYBA
Quote from: shadowkirby on October 21, 2012, 09:27:44 PMWTF no give me back my rotom, I don't want a FREAKING LEDYBA
NO ROTOMS. You're lucky I didn't catch that before now.
Unless you have a different pokemon you want (besides Rotom) that isnt on the list, you get Ledian.
Um no. Why already had this disscussion. We agreed that rotom wasn't a legendary.
And seriously.
A FREAKING LEDYBA.
Give me an oshawott, a lucario, or an ampharos
Rotom's definitely not a legendary. The fact that a sorry looking lady in a trailer can trade you one is proof of that.
Well I went off the fact that it's an event Pokemon, and there is only one in the game. I had turned down like, two or three people before finally giving it to shadowkirby.
If you really don't want me to have a rotom, pick one of the three I already listed.
Also there was only one Snorlax in Blue version.
Quote from: shadowkirby on October 21, 2012, 09:50:48 PMIf you really don't want me to have a rotom, pick one of the three I already listed.
Also there was only one Snorlax in Blue version.
All three were already taken, and there were actually two Snorlax. But now you can get wild Munchlax in D/P/Pt with the Honey trees. There's still only one Rotom per game. I'm sorry for the trouble, but I want to stay consistent.
Dugtrio!
No, there were two Snorlax in RBY. One blocking cycling road from celadon and one blocking route 12 east of Vermillion/south of Lavender Town.
CHAPTER 50 GET.
FRIVOLOUS FRIVOLOUS FRIVOLOUS FRIVOLOUS FRIVOLOUS FRIVOLOUS FRIVOLOUS FRIVOLOUS
What type does the gym leader normally use?
And will I appear before the tornament?
Quote from: SocialFox on October 21, 2012, 10:53:17 PMWhat type does the gym leader normally use?
And will I appear before the tornament?
Which gym leader?
I'm still deciding that. You will find out within two chapters.
Here's the current tournament listing. We're so close! It's getting really hard to pick Pokemon that aren't already taken...
People in Tournament as of now:
Marty (K-NiGhT)
Nebu (Nebbles)
Rozalie (Roz)
Jordan (SlowPokemon)
Davy (davy)
Matt (Ragster)
Stepney (Clanker37)
Atticus (vermillionvermin)
Gregory (gzgregory)
Taylor (RAWRZEZ~)
Alan (the_last_sheikah)
Ryan (Wrydryn)
Jonathan (Olimar12345)
Joel (fingerz)
Mike (Shadoninja)
Kelsey (Kman96)
Eric (shadowkirby)
Korbin (spitllama)
Otto [nickname: Reapr] (FSM)
Caroline (FSM)
Jake (FSM)
Marcus (FSM)
Mae (Bubbles7869)
Sabin (SocialFox)
Jari (JaMaHa)
Concerto (Concerto)
Ruto (Ruto)
Saria (Saria)
Kefka (KefkaticFanatic)
Mobo (MoboMoga)
Ben (Bespinben)
Total: 30
Still Need: 2
*needs a team
Quote from: K-NiGhT on October 21, 2012, 11:02:32 PMKefka
Let's hope he doesn't try to destroy Hopes and Dreams
And to answer your question.
The Frivilious Gym leader.
I also read your Pokemon Creepypastas and for some reason I want to make Pokemon Strangled Red.
Quote from: SocialFox on October 21, 2012, 11:06:08 PMLet's hope he doesn't try to destroy Hopes and Dreams
Not what I was going for :|
Quote from: SocialFox on October 21, 2012, 11:06:08 PMAnd to answer your question.
The Frivilious Gym leader.
You'll find out tonight, after I finish this chapter.
CHAPTER 51 GET!!!!
Now excuse me while I go pass out.
Quote from: K-NiGhT on October 22, 2012, 01:07:46 AMNow excuse me while I go pass out.
I SAID 5 MINUTES!!!
YOU STOLE FROM SUPERSKARMORY.
And is it okay if I change my characters backstory a bit?
My name is "Otso", not Otto! >:(
Also Ben yaay. He's like the best fan FSM could ever have!
Quote from: SocialFox on October 22, 2012, 01:25:48 AMYOU STOLE FROM SUPERSKARMORY.
And is it okay if I change my characters backstory a bit?
Actually, Mashi stole from SuperSkarmory.
Sure?
Scroll down to Destruction Rains from the Heavens (http://shrines.rpgclassics.com/snes/ct/eattacks.shtml)
Also, last three chapters were A++++++++++.
Thank you :)
Still reminding that my real name is Otso!
Awesome! Trying not to laugh since Im at musical rehersal while reading this! Ps. I see you! Rock that violin xD
I was going to do this thing where I made an ironically horrible animation of the first chapter but instead of being ironically horrible it was on the track of just being horrible. XD
I'll try to contact some of my connections
Quote from: FSM-Reapr on October 22, 2012, 02:00:44 PMStill reminding that my real name is Otso!
I'll get to it.
Quote from: RAWRZEZ~ on October 22, 2012, 06:21:57 PMAwesome! Trying not to laugh since Im at musical rehersal while reading this! Ps. I see you! Rock that violin xD
lol <3 don't forget we're having lunch tomorrow!
Quote from: Mashi on October 22, 2012, 01:50:08 PMScroll down to Destruction Rains from the Heavens (http://shrines.rpgclassics.com/snes/ct/eattacks.shtml)
Also, last three chapters were A++++++++++.
I wasn't aware that SuperSkarmory was the creator of Chrono Trigger.
Quote from: Mashi on October 22, 2012, 09:20:35 PMI wasn't aware that SuperSkarmory was the creator of Chrono Trigger.
He wasn't, but he was the first one to make the Magikarp/Destruction Rains joke.
SocialFox, are you really this dense.
K-N, Jake had Snorlax first and now Ben has that too. Are you gonna fix that?
sounds like someone's having roasted snorlax for dinner
Last chapter was MARVELOUS.
Quote from: Mashi on March 18, 2012, 07:31:08 PMGuys, I made the greatest team ever.
It's so overpowered and you will all probably lose to me. B)
Remember that? It was totes true.
Quote from: FSM-Reapr on October 23, 2012, 03:29:42 AMK-N, Jake had Snorlax first and now Ben has that too. Are you gonna fix that?
Quote from: FSM-Reapr on October 23, 2012, 03:29:42 AMK-N, Jake had Snorlax first and now Ben has that too. Are you gonna fix that?
Quote from: FSM-Reapr on October 23, 2012, 03:29:42 AMK-N, Jake had Snorlax first and now Ben has that too. Are you gonna fix that?
yeah. Its getting hard to find good Pokemon now.
K-N, I don't really get why we should exclude people from taking pokemon that were allready taken. If you don't want that two pokemon of the same species battle eachother, you could just write the story so that those pokemon's owners never battle eachother.
Omg FrivVille is the best town ever
you'll know why ;)
It's taking a while to write this chapter, which is good. That means it'll be longer!
Quote from: davy on October 24, 2012, 02:06:16 AMK-N, I don't really get why we should exclude people from taking pokemon that were allready taken. If you don't want that two pokemon of the same species battle eachother, you could just write the story so that those pokemon's owners never battle eachother.
because then if people chose the same pokemon, and them battling was an important plot point, it would ruin the story. Also, it prevents ten people from running around with, say, Rotom.
Are the music links from Black/White 2?
No
OH MY GAWD I HAVE A FEELING WHAT THIS CHAPTER IS GOING TO BE
***POSSIBLE SPOILER***
fsm should be in this chapter[/color]
iPod WiFi is going weird. Hopefully I can fix it and have chapter 52 done tonight.
CHAPTER 52 GET!
SWEET GHANDI'S TITS, THIS CHAPTER'S HUGE!!!
Best chapter ever. lmao
You couldn't possibly have read it yet :o
I'm a fast reader. :P
I'm very excited to see this all come together...!
Yay yay story time :)
Great job, K-NiGhT! Sounds awesome.
Just caught up. Nice work K-Night.
Nice job "Adding romance as long as it's not awkward." :P
But with all seriousness, the story is great. Keep it up!
Can you add a list of the persons character name and their usernames? Im a newb who doesnt know everyones names :P
I don't think that's allowed. We're trying to not make names and usernames too public.
Check the second post on the first page of the story:
http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4285.0
If the character you're looking for isn't there... well... then pester K-Night to put him/her there. :P
Oh nvm. I never did catch who Stepney or Atticus were.
I have quite a few new bios to write, I know. I'll get to it tomorrow.
I would like to take this time to point out that I'm trying to at least do two chapters a week. That is my plan, anyway.
There's one thing I regret I didn't do.
Name the club "Marowhacks". XD
Quote from: K-NiGhT on March 15, 2012, 09:55:11 PMOtso (Reapr): Mareep, Togepi, Jigglypuff, Miltank, Buneary, Clefairy
Fun fact: I was named after him. So I'm Otso too. :P And I can see you're still into normal types.
K-NiGhT, if it's okay, I would love to join the story too! :D Going to PM you soon.
Oh gawd no. He's gonna be like "I must beat you and stuff" on me. :( I know you.
Quote from: Waddle Bro on October 28, 2012, 04:12:23 AMFun fact: I was named after him. So I'm Otso too. :P And I can see you're still into normal types.
K-NiGhT, if it's okay, I would love to join the story too! :D Going to PM you soon.
thanks! That fills up the tournament!
People in Tournament as of now:
Marty (K-NiGhT)
Nebu (Nebbles)
Rozalie (Roz)
Jordan (SlowPokemon)
Davy (davy)
Matt (Ragster)
Stepney (Clanker37)
Atticus (vermillionvermin)
Gregory (gzgregory)
Taylor (RAWRZEZ~)
Alan (the_last_sheikah)
Ryan (Wrydryn)
Jonathan (Olimar12345)
Joel (fingerz)
Mike (Shadoninja)
Kelsey (Kman96)
Eric (shadowkirby)
Korbin (spitllama)
Otso [nickname: Reapr] (FSM)
Caroline (FSM)
Jake (FSM)
Marcus (FSM)
Mae (Bubbles7869)
Sabin (SocialFox)
Jari (JaMaHa)
Concerto (Concerto)
Ruto (Ruto)
Saria (Saria)
Kefka (KefkaticFanatic)
Mobo (MoboMoga)
Ben (Bespinben)*
Jordan (ETFROXX)*
Otso Jr. [Waddle Bro (FSM)]
Total: 32
We're all ready!
*needs a team
Actually Otso Jr. is not a part of FSM. Why didn't you put "Waddle Bro"?
Edit: Again, you put Otto instead of Otso. :l
EDIT2: Look at my team now,
and now Otso Jr.'s. Funking fantastic. X(
Quote from: FSM-Reapr on October 28, 2012, 10:41:51 AMActually Otso Jr. is not a part of FSM. Why didn't you put "Waddle Bro"?
EDIT2: Look at my team now,
and now Otso Jr.'s. Funking fantastic. X(
Yeah, why?
Mwahahahahahaa
MAJOR ANNOUNCEMENT!
Since I want to work on my new story as well as this one, I'm going to schedule weekly updates, alternating the two stories. That way I can get you all some variety. So after I finish this week's chapter of TGNSMPA, I'm going to start mapping out the plot for my new story.
Why start a new one when you still have another to complete? Just curious.
Quote from: spitllama on October 28, 2012, 09:10:04 PMWhy start a new one when you still have another to complete? Just curious.
As I was just saying to Kman, I'm starting to run low on creativity for this story, and I feel that taking small breaks and working on another separate story while I think of good details for this one will suit me well. I also want to try something other than Pokemon.
Also, I want you guys to have something new to read. I'm not giving up on this one, and it's pretty close to being finished as it is.
Thats 33 people.
Also made a tournament matchup removing one of FSM's alts.
^...what?
You have four people representing you in the tornument so I removed one.
I have 1 person representing me. The other 3 are my friends who read this story.
Quote from: FSM-Reapr on October 28, 2012, 09:24:24 PMI have 1 person representing me. The other 3 are my friends who read this story.
This is correct.
CHAPTER 53 GET!
It's still not 32 though.
Then you could remove yourself. ;D
Fixed.
People in Tournament as of now:
Marty (K-NiGhT)
Nebu (Nebbles)
Rozalie (Roz)
Jordan (SlowPokemon)
Davy (davy)
Matt (Ragster)
Stepney (Clanker37)
Atticus (vermillionvermin)
Gregory (gzgregory)
Taylor (RAWRZEZ~)
Alan (the_last_sheikah)
Ryan (Wrydryn)
Jonathan (Olimar12345)
Joel (fingerz)
Mike (Shadoninja)
Kelsey (Kman96)
Eric (shadowkirby)
Korbin (spitllama)
Otso [nickname: Reapr] (FSM)
Caroline (FSM)
Jake (FSM)
Marcus (FSM)
Mae (Bubbles7869)
Sabin (SocialFox)
Jari (JaMaHa)
Concerto (Concerto)
Ruto (Ruto)
Saria (Saria)
Kefka (KefkaticFanatic)
Mobo (MoboMoga)
Ben (Bespinben)*
Otso Jr. (FSM)
Total: 32
We're all ready!
*needs a team
Who was removed?
Quote from: FSM-Reapr on October 28, 2012, 09:32:32 PMThen you could remove yourself. ;D
that was rude.
Quote from: SocialFox on October 28, 2012, 09:34:30 PMWho was removed?
Jordan (ETFROXX)
She doesn't read the story, to my knowledge.
Should I keep the matchups.
Quote from: SocialFox on October 28, 2012, 09:38:19 PMShould I keep the matchups.
Let me see them first. I have an idea of how I want the tournament to go from the top eight on.
Sent matchups via PM.
Chapter 53 is A++. Also ETF should make a guest appearance or something, if not in the tournament.
Quote from: Jub3r7 on October 28, 2012, 09:53:59 PMChapter 53 is A++. Also ETF should make a guest appearance or something, if not in the tournament.
that's a good idea.
Also, thanks for your positive comment. This chapter worried me because I thought that people wouldn't like the PokeCross concept.
(http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/352/a/7/volcarona_gijinka_by_diablos_darkos-d4jhgsf.png)
This is the idea for PokeCross as demonstrated with Mike's character. It's basically gijinka forcing its way into the Pokemon universe.
Good Chapter.
But who invented Pokecross?
I bet 5 internets that whoever the bad team leader is will turn into Giratina with pokecross.
Quote from: SocialFox on October 28, 2012, 09:58:48 PMGood Chapter.
But who invented Pokecross?
I'll get to that.
Quote from: SocialFox on October 28, 2012, 09:58:48 PMGood Chapter.
But who invented Pokecross?
I bet 5 internets that whoever the bad team leader is will turn into Giratina with pokecross.
SHHHHHH!!!! SHUT UP!
dat outfit
I couldn't resist :3 (http://img.tapatalk.com/d/12/10/29/yma8uqe3.jpg)
^I laughed so hard! XD
Quote from: Kman96 on October 28, 2012, 10:57:23 PMI couldn't resist :3 (http://img.tapatalk.com/d/12/10/29/yma8uqe3.jpg)
made me lol. so hard.
I was late from the doctor's appointment because I missed my bus because I was reading your story again.
Thanks a lot for making a so good story that it makes me forget the real life.
Jerk.
I added the rest of the chapter titles to the front post, if anyone is super interested.
Sweet Jesus, that's a lot of chapters...it's like we're only halfway done with the story!!
Quote from: Kman96 on October 31, 2012, 09:06:59 PMSweet Jesus, that's a lot of chapters...it's like we're only halfway done with the story!!
well i'm only planning on doing one battle per chapter, so they won't be extremely long. I also figured 100 would be a nice number.
In my haste to begin my new story and enter it in NaNoWriMo, I'll try to get this season done by this weekend, if possible. Then we'll take a break for the month of November and start back up in December.
Is it possible to have Pokecross moves that are incorparated from other media?
Quote from: SocialFox on November 02, 2012, 09:02:47 PMIs it possible to have Pokecross moves that are incorparated from other media?
What do you mean by that?
So practicly, Moves not from Pokemon.
Quote from: SocialFox on November 02, 2012, 09:45:15 PMSo practicly, Moves not from Pokemon.
I don't think so? Can you give me an example?
Skip ahead to Phantom Rush.
I'm not sure. And really, only the ten main characters, Mike, and Korbin are going to use PokeCross. Don't have much need for any others. And it'd be boring if EVERYONE could use it.
K-N, you made me see that spoiler before you made it small. :(
CHAPTER 54 GET!
Also, I'll be providing some pictures of the characters who used PokeCross, to give you a rough idea of what they look like.
(http://th02.deviantart.net/fs26/300W/f/2008/108/e/c/gijinka_Lucario_by_bluestraggler.jpg)
Here's Marty!
(http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs46/f/2009/172/0/6/gijinka_Drifblim_by_pokesonic.jpg)
Nebu!
(http://i699.photobucket.com/albums/vv360/BaSSutadoragon/Gijinka/006CharizardF.jpg)
Roz!
Don't have one for Jordan :( they don't make any good male Cinccino gijinkas.
(http://28.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m1thc4BbRu1qgj2rto1_500.png)
Davy!
(http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m6q1sirBpW1rvviaxo1_400.png)
Matt!
(https://www.google.com/search?q=male+roserade+gijinka&hl=en&client=safari&tbo=d&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ei=ATmXULGLNOnOyQHVt4DgBw&ved=0CAgQ_AUoAQ&biw=320&bih=416#i=0)
Stepney's image is broken :(
(https://ws.elance.com/file/venus_gijinka.jpg?crypted=Y3R4JTNEcG9ydGZvbGlvJTI2ZmlkJTNENDU3ODI0MDklMjZyaWQlM0QtMSUyNnBpZCUzRDQxMTY3NTE=)
Taylor!
(http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2012/049/4/7/farfetch__d_gijinka_by_mirikyu-d4q5te1.jpg)
Atticus!
(http://i213.photobucket.com/albums/cc162/TehArtMonkey/ZangooseGijinkasmall.png)
And Gregory!
dat FoG.
I looooove readin a chapter about us ;)
Great job, K-NiGhT. Question: will you be writing more than one tournament battle at a time, or will you be doing a battle a week like normal chapters?
I will be doing one chapter a week. One battle per chapter. I may start releasing extra chapters if I'm free.
Dayum, Roz and Taylor be sexy as pokemon 8)
Quote from: the_last_sheikah on November 04, 2012, 08:07:36 PMDayum, Roz and Taylor be sexy as pokemon 8)
hey that's my girlfriend you're talking about :|
There shall be no infiltrating of my base >:(
*slaps K-Night*
Quote from: spitllama on November 04, 2012, 08:11:19 PMThere shall be no infiltrating of my base >:(
*slaps K-Night*
*slaps back*
You can't do anything about it, anyway. You're stuck in the Distortion World right now :P
When did that happen? (I legitimately don't remember)
I'm working on Chapter 55 tonight. I hope to have it finished tonight, so stay super tuned!
Sorry if I sound ungrateful but is it okay if you try not to put Sabins backstory too much during the story?
Quote from: spitllama on November 04, 2012, 08:14:03 PMWhen did that happen? (I legitimately don't remember)
Quote from: K-NiGhT on October 21, 2012, 10:40:55 PMKorbin sat in the middle of his room and meditated on the Distortion World. He knew every nook and cranny of that old place. He used to live there, after all. He had been in the Distortion World for as long as he could remember. He remembered his guardian, Giratina, telling him that only the bravery of his mother saved him. It never told him what his mother saved him from, or what happened to his parents, but he tried not to think about it much. Now was an especially bad time to be thinking about it. He should've been concentrating on the task at hand. He took a few deep breaths and began to open a portal. This portal had to be much larger than the ones he usually made, so he had to concentrate much harder. After a few minutes of intense concentration, the floor underneath him was covered by the same black energy Korbin used in his portals. It began to slowly expand until it covered the entire floor. The temperature in the room began to decrease dramatically. The black energy began to creep up the walls and quickly covered the rest of the room. The portal was complete. The plan could continue.
Quote from: SocialFox on November 04, 2012, 08:17:19 PMSorry if I sound ungrateful but is it okay if you try not to put Sabins backstory too much during the story?
Honestly, I'm not planning on having much of Sabin, Mobo, and Concerto anyway. I really need them for the tournament, and I just thought it'd be cool if they were part of the resistance.
Thanks.
CHAPTER 55 GET!
Definitely wrote that in 30 minutes. Get at me, bros.
And since i'm on such a roll, why not just keep going? So i think i will.
Quote from: K-NiGhT on November 04, 2012, 09:01:54 PMCHAPTER 55 GET!
Definitely wrote that in 30 minutes. Get at me, bros.
Quote from: K-NiGhT on November 04, 2012, 09:11:28 PMAnd since i'm on such a roll, why not just keep going? So i think i will.
Totes good job, but...
Quote from: K-NiGhT on July 25, 2012, 07:38:46 AM"I know where they're being kept," Kelsey told him. "I just don't know which twelve out of the hundreds are ours."
Quote from: K-NiGhT on November 04, 2012, 09:00:36 PM"Sure did!" Kelsey said with a huge grin on his face. "They were hidden behind a bunch of boxes, just as we thought."
Wait...wut. where did teh boxes come from??
Obvious plot holes are obvious :O oh noez.
Actually, they were obviously smart enough to look in the back because they knew Korbin was smart enough to know that they would end up looking for them.
Quote from: K-NiGhT on November 04, 2012, 09:16:37 PMObvious plot holes are obvious :O oh noez.
Actually, they were obviously smart enough to look in the back because they knew Korbin was smart enough to know that they would end up looking for them.
Aggghhhhhh, this makes me more confused! Why would Korbin place our Pokémon in an easily accessible area if he knew we were going to go look for them!?!? NO, DON'T DO IT!!!! XDDDDDDDDD
...I'm getting a very ominous vibe from this whole plot...
Quote from: Kman96 on November 04, 2012, 09:32:32 PM...I'm getting a very ominous vibe from this whole plot...
DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUNNNNN
I'm feeling pretty sick tonight :/ I should try to sleeep. If i'm lucky in the morning, mom will allow me to stay home from school tomorrow. I'll keep working after sleeping a bunch.
I'm actually a bit dissapointed that I cross with Bisharp, as it was my least favorite pokémon of my team. The order of pokémon I would have liked to pokecross into would be: Forretress>Blastoise>Exeggutor>Xatu>Porygon>Bisharp.
As my pokécross hadn't made much of an appearance yet, would it be possible if I cross into a pokemon that is higher on the order?
Quote from: davy on November 04, 2012, 11:03:02 PMI'm actually a bit dissapointed that I cross with Bisharp, as it was my least favorite pokémon of my team. The order of pokémon I would have liked to pokecross into would be: Forretress>Blastoise>Exeggutor>Xatu>Porygon>Bisharp.
As my pokécross hadn't made much of an appearance yet, would it be possible if I cross into a pokemon that is higher on the order?
I'll consider it. I've already noted that you cross with Bisharp once in the story, and I also have a few nice plot points that go with Bisharp. I'll do a little work with this, but I do think you'll like it!
Nice job on this chapter as usual.
Quote from: K-NiGhT on November 04, 2012, 08:10:26 PMhey that's my girlfriend you're talking about :|
Twas a complement my good man. You can say whatever you want about my girlfriend if that makes you feel any better.
Quote from: the_last_sheikah on November 05, 2012, 07:39:47 PMNice job on this chapter as usual.Twas a complement my good man. You can say whatever you want about my girlfriend if that makes you feel any better.
lololololol i'm messing with ya. I know she doesn't care
CHAPTER 56 GET!
Man Pokecross is neat.
All I ask of you is I get to rain down a flurry of shadow balls at the enemies because wow that'd be cool
CHAPTER 57 GET!!
Omg 57 is my favorite number!!!
CHAPTER 58 GET!
This marks the end of Season Five. Season Six will commence after a short break to plan the tournament and plot out battles and such. Also I have homework. LOTS AND LOTS OF HOMEWORK.
Yay! A good, happy season finale :) I TOLD you it was falling action! Great job! Can't wait until the tournament!
Wow, how do you even write so fast.
Quote"Korbin is definitly finished now," Atticus remarked.
hey wait a minute
jynx is not one of my pokemon
I'm so excited for more of this story!!
So suddenly I'm grounded. Which means that "short break" means "until further notice"
Geez, stop getting grounded. D:
Quote"Just fine," Nik said to her, smiling. "Do you guys have any coffee around here?"
Brilliant XD
Quote from: Nebbles on November 07, 2012, 02:00:52 PMGeez, stop getting grounded. D:
Would if I could. My mom is really good at overreacting.
On the bright side, I got the tournament planned already!
Tournament Round 1
1. Marty vs Jake
2. Alan vs Marcus
3. Kefka vs Atticus
4. Matt vs Sabin
5. Taylor vs Caroline
6. Ben vs Nebu
7. Roz vs Mae
8. Joel vs Gregory
9. Stepney vs Mobo
10. Jordan vs Saria
11. Mike vs Ruto
12. Otso vs Otso Jr
13. Jari vs Davy
14. Jonathan vs Concerto
15. Ryan vs Kelsey
16. Eric vs Korbin
Weeeeellllll I'm fucked.
Awww I have to verse a main character :'(
Quote from: shadowkirby on November 07, 2012, 03:25:13 PMWeeeeellllll I'm fucked.
Someone has to be. Don't worry, 15 other people share your pain.
Quote from: SocialFox on November 07, 2012, 03:30:40 PMAwww I have to verse a main character :'(
Yup.
i bet korbin is going to lose round 1
Quote from: Mashi on November 07, 2012, 03:35:08 PMi bet korbin is going to lose round 1
*SPOILER ALERT*
I hope I get Tobias Syndrome.
ilu2 Mashi
http://pokemon.wikia.com/wiki/Tobias
So, I'll still be able to write at night. I guess. I kinda have a deadline that I want to have this story done by. I will have it done by then.
Quote from: K-NiGhT on November 07, 2012, 03:18:06 PM12. Otso vs Otso Jr
Quote from: K-NiGhT on March 15, 2012, 09:55:11 PMOtso (Reapr): Mareep, Togepi, Jigglypuff, Miltank, Buneary, Clefairy
Quote from: K-NiGhT on March 15, 2012, 09:55:11 PMOtso Jr.: Cofagrigus, Throh, Sawk, Toxicroak, Nidorina, Emolga
well fuck
K-N where are the character bios???
Quote from: Waddle Bro on November 08, 2012, 12:55:38 PMK-N where are the character bios???
Thanks, but I could have asked him myself.
:o Why? :(
Because people weren't giving me much of anything, and I didn't feel like updating it.
Could you send me the bios you had? It would help a lot with my story.
It also helps people like me who have trouble keeping track of who represents what NSM member.
Quote from: blueflower999 on November 08, 2012, 03:50:14 PMIt also helps people like me who have trouble keeping track of who represents what NSM member.
I'll add usernames to the front post later.
Quote from: blueflower999 on November 08, 2012, 03:50:14 PMIt also helps people like me who have trouble keeping track of who represents what NSM member.
Quote from: K-NiGhT on November 09, 2012, 03:53:36 PMI'll add usernames to the front post later.
I did it.
Quote from: gzgregory on November 06, 2012, 09:10:23 PMWow, how do you even write so fast.
goes a lot faster when you don't write such huge chapters.
Quote from: K-NiGhT on November 10, 2012, 11:14:03 PMWe'll also have to announce to the others what we have been planning... >:3
Soooo....
Ok, so I've had this plan for the end of my spin-off story (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4669.0) that the government leader (governor-person,etc.) would come up to me and Eric after we beat the badguys and champion, etc, and give us a proposal.
He would tell us that There is trouble abroad in the lower Union, and our help (mine and Eric's) is needed in protecting the Union from evil, based on what he's seen us capable of. So he tells us that this plea for help comes directly from the president-person, etc. of the Union, and we would need to go down to the "lower Union" (Lower 48, pretty much) and help save the Union....
...
but here's the catch. I was talking to K-Night earlier today, and he talked about how he was going to create a new region for
his spin-off story, and that if we got enough people to participate in making their own spin-offs after TGNSMPA, we could have a kind-of reunion story that in a way
would be like the Avengers, where we all reunite and gang up to beat bad guys and save the Union!!
...and to be honest, until I talked to K-night earlier today, I had no intention of making that idea a reality. But I'll help collaborate on a project like this if we get enough people in on it. There's really no obligation. I could just have my story have an ambiguous ending. K-Night and I were just discussing possible tangents.
As per my sudden interest in Pokémon's government...
(I need to figure out how the government is run in a region, whether based on fact or fiction, because the champion of my region is already a big part of my story in a completely different area of theme. Him being the person who rules the region just won't work with what I had in mind. nor will having a president.)
^I know that looks like one of my chapters, but it's really important so please read it! I want everyone to get hyped for what's going to happen after this story is done.
Oh, also new poll up!
SEASON SIX COMMENCES NOW!!!!!!
CHAPTER 59 GET!!!!
Quote from: K-NiGhT on November 10, 2012, 11:50:31 PM"We have these," Kelsey said, pulling something out of his pocket, while Eric did the same. In their hands they held a single badge. However, this badge had a picture of all eight other badges.
"Those are Terrari League Aptitude badges!" Nik exclaimed. "How did you get those?"
"Uh..." Kelsey said, staring at him for a moment.
WHAT DID WE DO AND WHAT ARE THOSE??? O.o
Quote from: K-NiGhT on November 10, 2012, 11:50:31 PM"He's screwed us over!" Kelsey whisper-shouted to everyone.
BAHAHAHAHA. I lol'd so hard at this...not something you wanna do in the bathroom in like the middle of the night.
You counted wrong.
32, not 27.
Hmm. This is a very good story, although I've only had time to read all of Season Five.
Quote from: K-NiGhT on November 10, 2012, 11:51:36 PMSEASON SIX COMMENCES NOW!!!!!!
CHAPTER 59 GET!!!!
I LOVE YOU K-NIGHT
NOW I DON'T HAVE TO WAIT UNTIL I GET BACK TO READ YOUR STORY
Who was the asshole that voted for "Meh."?
Quote from: SocialFox on November 11, 2012, 12:21:18 AMYou counted wrong.
32, not 27.
27+4 elite four+champion=32
Quote from: Waddle Bro on November 11, 2012, 12:58:05 AMWho was the asshole that voted for "Meh."?
Me. More that I'm not extremely excited so that seemed closest.
Quote from: davy on November 11, 2012, 01:30:45 AM27+4 elite four+champion=32
Oops.
Quote from: davy on November 11, 2012, 01:30:45 AM27+4 elite four+champion=32
wow, Davy, I didn't even put that together, lol :P
Wait, I was just reading through the Thread and it said something about the fourth wall being broken.
What chapter was this?
and if it happens between matt and me i will be happy forever.
Quote"The catch," Jerry said, "is that you may not give your Pokemon any orders."
Ahahahaha, that's one way to pull a few strings.
Quote from: Kman96 on November 11, 2012, 12:04:17 AMWHAT DID WE DO AND WHAT ARE THOSE??? O.O
Korbin gave them to each FoG member when they arrived in Terrari.
Quote from: FSM-Reapr on November 11, 2012, 12:31:13 AMI LOVE YOU K-NIGHT
NOW I DON'T HAVE TO WAIT UNTIL I GET BACK TO READ YOUR STORY
How much longer do you have? This is gonna take a while.
Quote from: davy on November 11, 2012, 01:30:45 AM27+4 elite four+champion=32
Thank god someone got that.
Quote from: SocialFox on November 11, 2012, 02:01:19 AMWait, I was just reading through the Thread and it said something about the fourth wall being broken.
What chapter was this?
and if it happens between matt and me i will be happy forever.
You should read and find out.
Quote from: Mashi on November 11, 2012, 05:27:20 AMAhahahaha, that's one way to pull a few strings.
Nah, they only did that because it's frivolous.
About two weeks. :-\
Quote from: FSM-Reapr on November 11, 2012, 09:34:01 AMAbout two weeks. :-\
I'll write as fast as I can, but there's still over 30 chapters to write.
As long as I get to see my final battle I'm satisfied. :) Take your time.
Quote from: Kman96 on November 10, 2012, 11:35:16 PMSoooo....
Ok, so I've had this plan for the end of my spin-off story (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4669.0) that the government leader (governor-person,etc.) would come up to me and Eric after we beat the badguys and champion, etc, and give us a proposal.
He would tell us that There is trouble abroad in the lower Union, and our help (mine and Eric's) is needed in protecting the Union from evil, based on what he's seen us capable of. So he tells us that this plea for help comes directly from the president-person, etc. of the Union, and we would need to go down to the "lower Union" (Lower 48, pretty much) and help save the Union....
...but here's the catch. I was talking to K-Night earlier today, and he talked about how he was going to create a new region for his spin-off story, and that if we got enough people to participate in making their own spin-offs after TGNSMPA, we could have a kind-of reunion story that in a way would be like the Avengers, where we all reunite and gang up to beat bad guys and save the Union!!
...and to be honest, until I talked to K-night earlier today, I had no intention of making that idea a reality. But I'll help collaborate on a project like this if we get enough people in on it. There's really no obligation. I could just have my story have an ambiguous ending. K-Night and I were just discussing possible tangents.
As per my sudden interest in Pokémon's government...
(I need to figure out how the government is run in a region, whether based on fact or fiction, because the champion of my region is already a big part of my story in a completely different area of theme. Him being the person who rules the region just won't work with what I had in mind. nor will having a president.)
READ THIS. GIVE RESPONSES.
*Insert generic Responce*
WOOO GUYS I MADE A SPIN-OFF (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4971.0)
Quote from: SocialFox on November 11, 2012, 03:00:40 PM*Insert generic Responce*
oh, really?
Also, I just finished chapter 60, but there's no WiFi for me to post it from my ipod, so you'll have to wait until I get home tonight.
You wrote a chapter on an iPod? :o
respect
Quote from: FSM-Reapr on November 11, 2012, 04:04:12 PMYou wrote a chapter on an iPod? :o
respect
I write all my chapters on my iPod.
CHAPTER 60 GET!!
That means we're 3/5 of the way done with this story! Downward slide!
Quote from: K-NiGhT on November 11, 2012, 05:45:22 PMDress formal and bring a date!
FUUUUUUCCCCCKKKKKK......Alright, who wants me? I'm not hauling around that big load of attitude they call Shadowkirby. For all I know, with that new updater status, he'll just talk about work all night. xD (Just kidding, broski. but not really.)
Any takers? No homo.
:(
Alright, you know what, fine!
I don't need you! Nebbles wil take me!
Right, Nebbles?
darn i dont know whom to ship with whom
Would You like a Dance Mae?
Bewarned thugh i dance like a legless lumberjack
Quote from: shadowkirby on November 11, 2012, 06:02:03 PMAlright, you know what, fine!
I don't need you! Nebbles wil take me!
Right, Nebbles?
what
uh
ok??
Yay <3
*Looks at first page of topic-sees Pokemon and Stuff
*Looks at last page of topic-sees soap opera
Quote from: BonusPwnage on November 11, 2012, 06:48:40 PM*Looks at first page of topic-sees Pokemon and Stuff
*Looks at last page of topic-sees soap opera
Welcome to NSM ;)
Hmph, welcoming me. I guess that would be the right thing for a gentlemen to do, right?
Quote from: BonusPwnage on November 11, 2012, 07:42:25 PMHmph, welcoming me. I guess that would be the right thing for a gentlemen to do, right?
"That's what a gentleman does."
I know were' a little off topic here, but I'm really excited for Arzan Legacies to come out!
Quote from: BonusPwnage on November 11, 2012, 07:48:05 PMI know I'm EXTREMELY off topic here, but I'm really excited for Arzan Legacies to come out!
Fixed. O.O
yay a fellow whateveryoucalllaytonfans!
Laytonians? XD
but I want the next chapter!! A dance ooo this is gonna be interesting!
Quote from: BonusPwnage on November 11, 2012, 07:42:25 PMHmph, welcoming me. I guess that would be the right thing for a gentlemen to do, right?
Well, yes, but I did that in the sense to sum up all of NSM. We are all goofballs- we begin with one intention, but, as you demonstrated, we get off topic (yet on topic at the SAME TIME) and just have a good time.
I was welcoming you, because that's who we are.
Quote from: Nebbles on November 11, 2012, 07:57:45 PMLaytonians? XD
but I want the next chapter!! A dance ooo this is gonna be interesting!
Yes, I would think so. And he's working on it.
I are who I are :D
Im really not sure with all the different people, but isnt there alot more boys than girls? Haha this should be interesting
Quote from: Bubbles7689 on November 11, 2012, 08:30:32 PMIm really not sure with all the different people, but isnt there alot more boys than girls? Haha this should be interesting
You didn't answer my request :-(
CHAPTER 61 GET!
Ok, I swear I'll explain later.
Totally didn't see THAT coming ::)
I would've expected my reaction to be more like "lol ok"
And then starting to sing "Never Gonna Give You Up" while they were dancing.
Because I've done that before.
Quote from: K-NiGhT on November 11, 2012, 08:58:25 PMCHAPTER 61 GET!
Ok, I swear I'll explain later.
That was a very fun chapter! :P
Quote from: shadowkirby on November 11, 2012, 09:12:44 PMTotally didn't see THAT coming ::)
I would've expected my reaction to be more like "lol ok"
And then starting to sing "Never Gonna Give You Up" while they were dancing.
Because I've done that before.
Lol!
Quote from: BlackDragonSlayer on November 11, 2012, 09:19:32 PMThat was a very fun chapter! :P
Thank you!
Ok, I guess I better explain. I started looking at my list of characters, and thought, "This was the worst idea ever. Of all time." But I couldn't just scrap it all of a sudden. So I threw Jerry in there to f*** s*** up.
No srsly. You should go change my reaction. And have Jordan throw something at me and have me run away giggling.
Quote from: shadowkirby on November 11, 2012, 09:24:15 PMNo srsly. You should go change my reaction. And have Jordan throw something at me and have me run away giggling.
fixed.
aww that was cute, dancing in the hallway and stuff. how sweet.
i am so addicted to this story. it's kind of sad. XD
A+++++++++
This chapter was high in frivolous points.
Quote from: Mashi on November 11, 2012, 09:37:30 PMA+++++++++
This chapter was high in frivolous points.
You're welcome.
Quote from: Nebbles on November 11, 2012, 09:37:06 PMi am so addicted to this story. it's kind of sad. XD
Sad as in, the story has a sad plot, or the fact that you are so addicted?
sad that I'm so addicted. Then again, any story I'm in is already loved by me.
It's excellent either way, though.
Quote from: Nebbles on November 11, 2012, 09:41:54 PMsad that I'm so addicted. Then again, any story I'm in is already loved by me.
It's excellent either way, though.
Thanks! I'll be updating a lot these next few weeks, with Thanksgiving break coming up. I hope to be finished with the first round by next week!
Bet you 1000 internets that matt wins the first round just because He's a protaginest.
Quote from: SocialFox on November 11, 2012, 09:45:34 PMBet you 1000 internets that matt wins the first round just because he's a protagonist.
fixed for spelling.
Also, you never know. I could do something weird like that to keep you all guessing.
Quote from: K-NiGhT on November 11, 2012, 09:58:46 PMAlso, you never know. I could do something weird like that to keep you all guessing.
This is what I hope the fight will be like.
Skip to 7:46
This is great, but it has a severe lack of something...me.
QuoteA brilliant flash of light indicated the summoning of over 900 Pokemon
IT'S OVER NINE HUNDREEEEEEEEEEED
Just did a little stat checking...The total number of posts in the Story Telling thread is around 3000. This topic has just over 1100. That means *does math* this topic counts for about a third of the Story Telling board's posts.
Thank you all from the bottom of my heart.
Quote from: FSM-Reapr on November 12, 2012, 05:29:36 AMBack off, she's mine.
In complete seriousness, you have no idea how much that means to me. I still love you too Social
Quote from: K-NiGhT on November 12, 2012, 04:33:07 PMJust did a little stat checking...The total number of posts in the Story Telling thread is around 3000. This topic has just over 1100. That means *does math* this topic counts for about a third of the Story Telling board's posts.
Thank you all from the bottom of my heart.
Yayy (though I have about 5 of those :P)
Quote from: K-NiGhT on November 12, 2012, 04:33:07 PMJust did a little stat checking...The total number of posts in the Story Telling thread is around 3000. This topic has just over 1100. That means *does math* this topic counts for about a third of the Story Telling board's posts.
Thank you all from the bottom of my heart.
That...that is kind of awesome.
Because I was bored of A midsummer night's dream I decided to look for Pokecross versions of my pokemon, and I found these.
(http://i48.servimg.com/u/f48/17/58/66/01/ursari10.jpg) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=76&u=17586601) Pokecross with Ursurang.
(http://i48.servimg.com/u/f48/17/58/66/01/tumblr10.gif) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=77&u=17586601)Pokecross with Sableye, I am teh sexiness.
(http://i48.servimg.com/u/f48/17/58/66/01/010.jpg) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=78&u=17586601) First picture that appeared for Crustle Pokecross.
(http://i48.servimg.com/u/f48/17/58/66/01/25rmre10.jpg) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=79&u=17586601).
Which one do you think I should pokecross into (assuming I use pokecross).
sigilyph omg
it reminds me of skull kid
I like the Sableye one.
Quote from: SocialFox on November 12, 2012, 09:38:25 PM(http://i48.servimg.com/u/f48/17/58/66/01/010.jpg)
omg transformers
oh k-night, do you have a picture of what my pokecross looks like? I'm curious!
Quote from: K-NiGhT on November 04, 2012, 08:01:35 PM(http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs46/f/2009/172/0/6/gijinka_Drifblim_by_pokesonic.jpg)
Nebu!
Dang, I look a like a ninja. Neat.
And Pokecross with Other Resistance Members.
Couldn't Find one for JaMaHa :'(
(http://i48.servimg.com/u/f48/17/58/66/01/samuro10.jpg) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=80&u=17586601) Mae.
(http://i48.servimg.com/u/f48/17/58/66/01/230_ki10.jpg) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=81&u=17586601) Male version of this for Mobo.
(http://i48.servimg.com/u/f48/17/58/66/01/th_kab10.png) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=82&u=17586601)Concerto.
I'll stop now.
Nah keep going. I like these. You can do one for all the characters if you really wanted to ;)
I HOPE I USE POKECROSS HINT
:)
CHAPTER 62 GET!
Quote from: K-NiGhT on November 13, 2012, 09:33:12 PM"Also, for this tournament only, touching your Pokemon during the battle will be allowed starting after the first round!"
Sounds only mildly Perverted.
Now I have no chance of winning :'(
Also The Members of FSM!
(http://i48.servimg.com/u/f48/17/58/66/01/182_be10.jpg) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=83&u=17586601)Jake the Transvestite.
(http://i48.servimg.com/u/f48/17/58/66/01/_gijin10.png) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=84&u=17586601)Marcus the Transvestite.
(http://i48.servimg.com/u/f48/17/58/66/01/lapras10.jpg) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=85&u=17586601)Caroline the Non transvestite.
(http://i48.servimg.com/u/f48/17/58/66/01/mareep10.jpg) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=86&u=17586601)Otso the Futamari!
Please don't hurt me for calling you and your band transvestites.
WRONG!!!
I use Flaaffy. :)
Also very epic chapter K-Night. :)
Quote from: FSM-Reapr on November 13, 2012, 11:52:19 PMWRONG!!!
I use Flaaffy. :)
Also very epic chapter K-Night. :)
Wait.
You don't care about the fact I called you a Futamari?
Nope.
Yes. after searching it from google
Mae is a girl :P
CHAPTER 63 GET!
Well that sucked
Quote from: FSM-Reapr on November 14, 2012, 04:33:21 PMWell that sucked
you did say in your bio that Marcus was an "epic failer" tho. Also, Agent Alan is a bit of a badass.
PLEASE tell me you got that reference, sheikah
yes, but i think we have different opinions what "epic" means ::)
Quote from: FSM-Reapr on November 14, 2012, 04:37:27 PMyes, but i think we have different opinions what "epic" means ::)
apparently so.
Hell. F***ing. Yeah.
And yes I got the reference. You sir, are my hero.
This chapter made me sound so cool, I like my digital life so much better than my stupid real life. ;)
Glad you liked it. I'll make our battle even cooler :0
I'm already giddy with excitement. Keep up the amazing work!
I'll keep doing my best!
I can't wait for my battle :D
mewtwo
SPOILERS
I figured that K-N is going to do something like from a 1-3 situation I just start sweeping his team.
Why do I feel like simulating battles in pokemon showdown now?
Quote from: SocialFox on November 14, 2012, 10:17:37 PMWhy do I feel like simulating battles in pokemon showdown now?
if you could get them exactly the way K-NiGhT writes them, then I think that that would be a sick idea! Go for it! :)
Hmm, with all these spin-off stories, I'm thinking about making one myself. But I was wondering if you guys would like it/read it. I was thinking about writing a story about my back story/how I became a member of the Elite 4. What do you guys think?
A sheikah that was also a member of the elite four...hmmmm...i'd read it!
Quote from: the_last_sheikah on November 17, 2012, 04:45:52 PMHmm, with all these spin-off stories, I'm thinking about making one myself. But I was wondering if you guys would like it/read it. I was thinking about writing a story about my back story/how I became a member of the Elite 4. What do you guys think?
I'd read it when I come back. :)
Quote from: the_last_sheikah on November 17, 2012, 04:45:52 PMHmm, with all these spin-off stories, I'm thinking about making one myself. But I was wondering if you guys would like it/read it. I was thinking about writing a story about my back story/how I became a member of the Elite 4. What do you guys think?
sounds cool.
Also, I never had time to write during All-State :/
CHAPTER 64 GET!
Well, considering Atticus is Matt's rival and Atticus made it through, I just know I'm going to lose.
Quote from: SocialFox on November 18, 2012, 09:45:15 PMWell, considering Atticus is Matt's rival and Atticus made it through, I just know I'm going to lose.
will you just be quiet. like seriously. not everyone is going to make it through the first round. and you said yourself that you didn't even want a huge part so here you go. so please quit complaining.
Ahaha, reverse psychology win.
Sorry if that came across as a bit rude, but I'm sick of everyone going, "OMG WHY DO I LOSE IN THE FIRST ROUND WTF"
Also, I realize that I'm being a little bit lazy with writing. But this first round kinda bores me and I want to get moving with this.
Thats fine.
CHAPTER 65 GET!
More lazy writing, but I REALLY want to finish this round ASAP :/
...
Quote from: SocialFox on November 19, 2012, 09:03:29 PM...
xD
In K-NiGhT's defense, you really asked for it, man, and I think punishment was rightfully served. After nonstop buggering, that was a seemingly strange yet rightful ending to your part of the adventure.
Yeah it was.
But still... that kind of fits with my personality.
Quote from: Kman96 on November 19, 2012, 09:22:34 PMxD
In K-NiGhT's defense, you really asked for it, man, and I think punishment was rightfully served. After nonstop buggering, that was a seemingly strange yet rightful ending to your part of the adventure.
I agree, but I also felt sympathy for the character Sabin. :P k-NiGhT "wrapped it up" very well. :P
Also, Elite four Pokecross.
(http://i48.servimg.com/u/f48/17/58/66/01/blazik10.jpg) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=88&u=17586601) Alan.
(http://i48.servimg.com/u/f48/17/58/66/01/leavan10.jpg) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=89&u=17586601) Joel if he was female.
(http://i48.servimg.com/u/f48/17/58/66/01/steeli10.jpg) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=90&u=17586601) Jonathan.
(http://i48.servimg.com/u/f48/17/58/66/01/tumblr10.jpg) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=91&u=17586601)Ryan.
Did I get the Elite 4 correct?
Pretty good for the most part. Definitely like Alan and Ryan. Except Jonathan would be more likely to cross with his Shiny Bisharp and Joel would more likely cross with Salamence.
Couldn't find pictures for them.
Couldn't find one for shiny bisharp, but here's a Salamence one. (http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/230/7/6/salamence_by_boolsajo-d2p1ksp.jpg)
I'll never understand how people can be so good at drawing.
Quote from: BonusPwnage on November 20, 2012, 03:01:42 PMI'll never understand how people can be so good at drawing.
oh i didn't draw it xD i found it on deviantart
Quote from: K-NiGhT on November 20, 2012, 03:14:31 PMoh i didn't draw it xD i found it on deviantart
I know. I was talking about the person who drew it.
dat salamence
damn
Quote from: Nebbles on November 20, 2012, 03:24:35 PMdat salamence
damn he sexy
finished your thought for you xD lol jk
no actually that was my thought >_>
Writing more chapters for K-NiGhT, yay! ^^
See if you can tell which of the next few chapters are written by me!
dat Salamance is so bad ass.
Quote from: Kman96 on November 20, 2012, 04:06:35 PMWriting more chapters for K-NiGhT, yay! ^^
See if you can tell which of the next few chapters are written by me!
:O So you write this too?! Congratulations!
Although I would love to see some more Alyos...
Quote from: FSM-Reapr on November 20, 2012, 04:35:02 PM:O So you write this too?! Congratulations!
Although I would love to see some more Alyos...
well, I'm more of a guest writer, really. Have you read chp. 30 *nd 31? (Memories REALLY suck sometimes) I wrote both parts of those two (well, the flashbacks, anyway).
If you want more Alyos, the best I can do for you is to tell you to reread the afore mentioned chapters numerous times, as well as my prequel that I published a few months ago. I've begun work on Episode 1, but because of it's length, it will still be a while...plus, K-NiGhT said I should wait until his story has ended to really post much on mine, seeing how it IS a sequel/spin-off...
Patience is a virtue, FSM, and although yours will grow to be much higher than any of ours, I assure you that Alyos will be coming shortly.
Oh yeah. Almost forgot to mention that. Huge thank you to Kman for making this daunting first round a little less painful.
QuoteHe left for his home country, and no one ever heard from him again.
lol
Quote from: Jub3r7 on November 20, 2012, 08:20:27 PMlol
Damm, I didn't see that part, kind of ruins half of the story I was going to make.
Quote from: SocialFox on November 20, 2012, 08:27:22 PMDamm, I didn't see that part, kind of ruins half of the story I was going to make.
whoops. sorry about that, mate.
Quote from: K-NiGhT on November 20, 2012, 08:30:16 PMwhoops. sorry about that, mate.
Don't worry, the story more depends on.
-Whether Mae wins or loses in the first round
-Whether Kman would let me in his Alaska story
-Whether Kefka would drive a boat, or be a passenger.
-And whether Otso likes Mae.
These are the things that would be big changers to the story.
Also notice the change of name in my story thread.
Quote from: SocialFox on November 20, 2012, 09:45:01 PM-And whether Otso likes Mae.
I think we all know the answer to that ;)
Fsm I said the exact same thing but my 3ds glitched and didnt post it :D. And social Im really not that big of a character
Quote from: Bubbles7689 on November 20, 2012, 09:51:35 PMFsm I was said the exact same thing but my 3ds glitched and didnt post it :D. And social Im really not that big of a character
It's a mild conversation when I ruin any chance of FSM having a love life before I leave the city.
-Whether Mae wins or loses in the first round - I don't know
-Whether Kman would let me in his Alaska story - AW HELL NO.
-Whether Kefka would drive a boat, or be a passenger. - idk
-And whether Otso likes Mae. - well what do you think.
Quote from: SocialFox on November 20, 2012, 10:05:27 PMIs that sarcasm?
probably not, but I need details. Social, I pm'd you. please respond.
Responded.
Responded to that PM.
CHAPTER 66 GET!
Good job but I got two things.
1. I thought I would be the last member of FSM?
2. Never and I mean NEVER could an Aggron wipe out a Shuckle with Hyper Beam. :P
There was also a (super-effective?) earthquake at the same time.
Quote from: K-NiGhT on November 23, 2012, 02:12:57 PMThere was also a (super-effective?) earthquake at the same time.
1: Ground is 1x effective against Shuckle. Normal is 1/2 effective.
2: Ground is 4x super-effective against Aggron. :P Normal is 1/4 effective.
CHAPTER 67 GET!
We are now just a little bit over two-thirds done with the story! Yay!
This chapter was hard to write.
Also, new poll coming soon.
Best chapter ever. totally not because I kicked butt in battle but, yeah. Great chapter. B]
Wow, that was really touching. Great job on referencing Ben's mission, as well as touching more on Nebbles' background!
Loved it! It was worth it!
Dawww them feels. Great chapter as always!
Quote from: Kman96 on December 01, 2012, 12:17:24 PMWow, that was really touching. Great job on referencing Ben's mission, as well as touching more on Nebbles' background!
Loved it! It was worth it!
Accurate summary. I can say nothing else but to agree.
Quote from: the_last_sheikah on December 01, 2012, 12:23:12 PMDawww them feels.
I'm not feeling anything.
Attempting to make people call me heartless again.
Haters gonna hate.
I also noticed you checked Neither on my poll. That's cool.
How do you know that?
And Neither anime or manga was what I had in mind, I was thinking of a ROM Hack.
I could totes be the artist.
Pleeaaaaasssssseeeeeee
Quote from: shadowkirby on December 01, 2012, 01:54:01 PMI could totes be the artist.
Pleeaaaaasssssseeeeeee
if you want to, go ahead!
Quote from: SocialFox on December 01, 2012, 01:52:48 PMHow do you know that?
And Neither anime or manga was what I had in mind, I was thinking of a ROM Hack.
I KNOW ALL :0
Also, if I remember right, I think sheikah mentioned something about it earlier. I'll add it to the poll in a sec.
Fixed poll. Vote again.
(http://cdn.memegenerator.net/instances/400x/31127522.jpg)
I would like to learn how to make a Pokemon ROM hack... for some obvious reasons... :P
Quote from: blueflower999 on December 01, 2012, 02:20:28 PM(http://cdn.memegenerator.net/instances/400x/31127522.jpg)
lol'd so hard
Quote from: K-NiGhT on December 01, 2012, 02:02:17 PMAlso, if I remember right, I think sheikah mentioned something about it earlier. I'll add it to the poll in a sec.
WORKING ON IT. I've got a lot of stuff on my metaphorical plate at the moment, but I will try to move it up if I can get my friends to help.
How you can help:Hello kind sir/madam reading this post, I want YOU, yes you, to help me make this ROM hack possible. You can help by designing your or other people's battle/overworld sprites to make my job easier and the whole process go by faster. Some, but not much, artistic talent is optimal. You have two options:
Option 1: less artistic option
Step 1: go to http://spriters-resource.com/gameboy_advance/pokefrlg/index.html (http://spriters-resource.com/gameboy_advance/pokefrlg/index.html)
Step 2: pick an NPC overworld sprite and a battle sprite for your character
Step 3: copy the image on the page into Microsoft Paint, Photoshop, ect.
Step 4: after croping out everything but the sprites you will edit, EDIT AWAY! Make your character look like you/how you want to look. Be sure to zoom in 800% to edit it pixel by pixel with the pencil or paint brush.
Step 5: send me the file via dropbox, email, Facebook, ect.
Option 2: more artistic option
Step 1: open up Microsoft Paint, Photoshop, ect.
Step 2: MAKE YOUR CHARACTER! Use a sprite as a size guide if needed, we don't want people looking too big/too small.
Step 3: send me the file via dropbox, email, Facebook, ect.
Together, we can make this story a game. It may take a while, it may suck, but it will be our game none the less.
-sincerely, the_last_sheikah <3
So practicly you want us to learn how to sprite and animate (http://ssf2expansions.motionforum.net/t4351-one-piece-ace).
That won't be much of a problem for me.
Quote from: SocialFox on December 01, 2012, 09:13:59 PMSo practicly you want us to learn how to sprite and animate (http://ssf2expansions.motionforum.net/t4351-one-piece-ace).
That won't be much of a problem for me.
No, I simply request people to just design the sprites, that is it. So how to sprite, in easier terms, yes, how to animate, in specific terms, no. This way, people look how they want
and the work gets done faster.
Does it have to be a GBA sprite or can we use DS?
Quote from: spitllama on December 01, 2012, 09:41:42 PMDoes it have to be a GBA sprite or can we use DS?
Probably not, but we might be able to use older system sprites
efufufufufufufufufufufufu
I know what most of you are probably thinking.
"OH MY GOD HE KEEPS UPDATING THAT PMD STORY BUT NOT THIS ONE WTF!"
I know, I know. But the PMD one is SO much easier to write. Plus I'm getting bored of battle after battle. But I don't want any extra chapters cuz it works out to 100 and I like that. A lot. So bear with me while I get my creative juices flowing and whatnot.
(Which is code for bathroom break...)
Quote from: K-NiGhT on December 02, 2012, 08:22:59 PMI know what most of you are probably thinking.
"OH MY GOD HE KEEPS UPDATING THAT PMD STORY BUT NOT THIS ONE WTF!"
I know, I know. But the PMD one is SO much easier to write. Plus I'm getting bored of battle after battle. But I don't want any extra chapters cuz it works out to 100 and I like that. A lot. So bear with me while I get my creative juices flowing and whatnot.
(Which is code for bathroom break...)
that is totes my thought at every second of every day.
Also, while we're on a page while we're talking about this ROM, I would like to being something to the attention to the composers of NSM. This game is going to need a soundtrack. And it's gonna be frakin ossim possims.
Here is an example of something for the final boss battle (aka korbin)
Also, the theme from 0:30-0:50 is what I want the main theme for the game to be based off of.
K-NiGhT, what I recommend to do is that you should hide the soundtrack in your story like this:
Quote from: FSM-Reapr on November 12, 2012, 07:55:44 AMShe came forward and the battle was now able to begin. (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xb9ee9lWSbg)
I found it more useful than going on a different page to search music, because it just ruins the epic feeling.
Quote from: K-NiGhT on December 03, 2012, 09:21:56 PMAlso, while we're on a page while we're talking about this ROM, I would like to being something to the attention to the composers of NSM. This game is going to need a soundtrack. And it's gonna be frakin ossim possims.
Here is an example of something for the final boss battle (aka korbin)
Also, the theme from 0:30-0:50 is what I want the main theme for the game to be based off of.
I actully have an idea of what the Final Boss battle could be, I may or may not PM you it.
Quote from: Waddle Bro on December 03, 2012, 09:59:28 PMI like this
If we go with my secret idea the final battle would be something similar to
Not EXACTLY dancing mad pt 4, but something like having something morunful at the end of the track, showing that it's his final stand.
I voted "all of them" and "none" at the same time
Quote from: Jub3r7 on December 03, 2012, 10:05:10 PMI voted "all of them" and "none" at the same time
What a rebel. :3
Quote from: Jub3r7 on December 03, 2012, 10:05:10 PMI voted "all of them" and "none" at the same time
(http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20121109155714/thefanfictionwikiofgtfandphazon/images/thumb/8/81/Genius-meme.png/623px-Genius-meme.png)
I really liked the song K-NiGhT suggested. Also, after looking up some ROM hacking stuff, I think the ROM's story won't be exactly the same as the original story, but more as a new character tagging along with/just behind our heroes, with a slightly modified ending to accommodate for the lack of being able to play as *insert name of character who fights Korbin here*.
That's a good idea sheikah.
Also, another option would be to switch between the characters. We could do like Chrono Trigger did and let you choose the name of each character. Also, for PokeCross stuff, do you think it would be possible to make it a 2D fighter, like SSB with 2D graphics? That would be cool.
Quote from: K-NiGhT on December 04, 2012, 01:31:21 PMAlso, for PokeCross stuff, do you think it would be possible to make it a 2D fighter, like SSB with 2D graphics? That would be cool.
Or, you actually use it in battle... :P
That's no fun :(
Quote from: K-NiGhT on December 04, 2012, 01:38:31 PMThat's no fun :(
That would be interesting to do, with the 2D fighter-style, and reminds me of an idea for a parody/turn-based strategy game I have...
It might, however, in a Pokemon ROM hack, take away some of the... atmosphere, would you say?... of the game, but, in the end (obviously), it's not my decision. I'm just trying to give a few suggestions.
Well I'm just saying as a separate mode from regular battles. This would just be for PokeCross battles.
That might be kinda difficult for a ROM hack, but we shall see.
Quote from: the_last_sheikah on December 04, 2012, 12:11:11 PM*insert name of character who fights Korbin here*.
OMG that's me! :D
EDIT:
AW HELL NO.(http://i.imgur.com/3doRH.png?1)
I like the idea of the borders, but there's like NOTHING in Alaska!!! :(
I feel threatened.
Since the only place people will read this is here, y'all gotta know that I'm starting a weekly schedule with my three written stories. This way I can keep focused on all of the stuff I'm doing while simultaneously adding variety to your proverbial plates. I hope you will enjoy, and hope this will get you to see some of my other works ;D
I have finished the chapter I promised to write for K-NiGhT! It took me longer than it should have, but I can promise it will be über epic.
Post it. Now. That's an order.
Can't, it takes place way far ahead of where we are now.
It's seven chapters from now. We won't get to it for a little while yet.
I need new chapterssssss :c
And i need free time.
Would it be considered OP if someone in Pokecross used a pokemon's abilities to assume a second form of Pokecross? So something like pokecross bankai or resurrection.
You know, I was thinking about doing that, but wasn't sure how it'd work.
I was thinking about something that if the user and the pokemon have a strong enough bond, and if user/pokemon are strong enough, they could initiate a second form that gave a unique gimmick to it. I thought up of a few before I went to bed.
Would you like to see them?
Sure!
Here's one I thought up of
Heart of Fire
Can be used by: Usurang (I think that's how you spell it), most mainstream Fire type pokemon.
Abilities: Can double the size of any atom in the body, Can turn any atom in the body to fire, allowing the user to turn body parts into an inferno.
idk, the ones I'm thinking up of are in development and haven't been finalised yet.
I also have another Pokecross/bankai idea called Grand Cross, but I want to keep that a secret for now. :P
it sounds cool. let me know more about this Grand Cross idea through pm. I'm definitely interested.
NEW CHAPTER YAY
CHAPTER 68 GET!
Finally!
"Yay I'm battling this round!"
"Oh its against Roz. I lost"
Quote from: Bubbles7689 on January 27, 2013, 06:00:04 PM"Yay I'm battling this round!"
"Oh its against Roz. I lost"
sorry :(
Yay a new chapter!!
Omg. K-Night. I'm so proud of you :')
I didn't even have to bug you at all ::)
Quote from: Nebbles on January 27, 2013, 06:11:11 PMYay a new chapter!!
finally, right. This one was really hard to write. They keep getting more difficult for some reason.
Also i need a title for Chapter 69 that's better than Lol, 69. Googogo
Battle of the Pornstars
Quote from: K-NiGhT on January 27, 2013, 06:10:30 PMsorry :(
Nah, its fine. I'm not exactly a major character :P
Quote from: Yugi on January 27, 2013, 06:18:05 PMquote from wariopiano's alt
dude you scared the crap out of me.
Mariolegofan is NOT wariopiano's alt -_-
Also voted none
Quote from: SlowPokemon on January 27, 2013, 07:05:07 PMMariolegofan is NOT wariopiano's alt -_-
Also voted none
it was a joke :p
Good XD
Honestly? Because I'm a realist and not only do I know none of them would be made, I know that it's doubtful any of them would be worthwhile.
Wait a moment.... Roz's favorite Pokemon... It's Poliwhirl D:
Not here it's not >:0 Charizard's a monster~
Quote from: K-NiGhT on January 27, 2013, 07:45:07 PMNot here it's not >:0 Charizard's a monster~
Heart of Fire?
That's actually brilliant. I love it.
K-NiGhT I really hoped to see the chapter where I battle posted. ;_;
But you have to write it before I leave again!!! :D
I've been working on it.
I just sent K-NiGhT a PM that will MAKE HIS DAY.
That was fantastic :O
Quote from: Kman96 on January 31, 2013, 02:47:12 PMI just sent K-NiGhT a PM that will MAKE HIS DAY.
why is everyone suddenly raving about your personal messages
are you sending people naked pictures or something
Quote from: SlowPokemon on January 31, 2013, 05:26:40 PMwhy is everyone suddenly raving about your personal messages
are you sending people naked pictures or something
and suddenly a picture appears in k-nights sig
(http://i.imgur.com/UiGh6l9.jpg?1)
Quote from: FSM-Reapr on January 31, 2013, 05:28:46 PMand suddenly a picture appears in k-nights sig
wat picture do you mean
hey there mister you weren't even there
you have not laid eyes on the gorgeous beast that is the Masked Gentleman of Monte Nore.
QuoteI'm on a website where some people have very bizarre senses of humor... XD
its Monte n'Or silly
I understand the joke better though XD
I'm wracking my brain trying to think of something like that again XD
Knappbadain? If you pronounce it Britishly XD
LOL
Quote from: FSM-Reapr on January 31, 2013, 06:13:09 AMK-NiGhT I really hoped to see the chapter where I battle posted. ;_;
But you have to write it before I leave again!!! :D
Why am I tempted to make a half assed chapter that is super short.
Quote from: SlowPokemon on January 31, 2013, 05:26:40 PMwhy is everyone suddenly raving about your personal messages
are you sending people naked pictures or something
I want in!
I'm working on something extra special for y'all! Expect it sometime this weekend!
YES
CHAPTER 69 GET!!
Notice the lack of innuendos.
Hey guys guess what?
I have a PDF for you guys.
It has the whole story thus far so you can read it anywhere!
[PDF] (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/100322825/NinSheetMusic/Extra%20Forum%20Items/The%20Great%20NSM%20Pokemon%20Adventure.pdf)
Quote from: K-NiGhT on February 03, 2013, 08:37:10 AMHey guys guess what?
I have a PDF for you guys.
It has the whole story thus far so you can read it anywhere!
[PDF] (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/100322825/NinSheetMusic/Extra%20Forum%20Items/The%20Great%20NSM%20Pokemon%20Adventure.pdf)
OMG I LOVE YOU
YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH THIS MEANS TO MENow I can finish my story's details much easier!!! :D
Thank you K-NiGhT!
I was going to say something like that, but then FSM ninja'd me. So...yay!
Also I fixed a bunch of spelling/grammatical errors that I missed in my rush to write.
Good lord...238 pages? My parents are gonna kill me -_-
EDIT: Uhhh...K-NiGhT? I was reading the PDF, and it just so happens that in chap. 30 on page 81, the word REGION is a hyperlink from the document to the webpage where that chapter is located....wut.
EDIT: the word "Next" on page 86 sends you to the same page.
Those annoying ad links that only show up on my laptop probably made their way onto that. I'll try to fix it.
lol "not enough data"
I can understand why honestly.
Also a PDF, awesome.
Quote from: gzgregory on February 03, 2013, 11:33:24 AMlol "not enough data"
I can understand why honestly.
Also a PDF, awesome.
I promise I'll make your next battle twice as epic!
I noticed a mistake in the PDF. In chapter 21 you call Nik 'Nick'.
Omg. After making the font small as shit it's still like a kazillionbillionvermillion pages. -_-
Quote from: davy on February 03, 2013, 12:29:00 PMI noticed a mistake in the PDF. In chapter 21 you call Nik 'Nick'.
i'm still working on the errors. that was probably accidentally autocorrected. i kinda rushed through corrections.
I got it down to 48 if anyone wants it?
EDIT: Whoops meant 22. Thats only 11 pages if you print front and back
^ Is it, like, size 0.5 font? :P
8 excuse you
So, since we have these fancy new spoiler tags, I suggest we use them here.
For example:
The chapter you are referencing
the spoiler
Quote from: SlowPokemon on January 27, 2013, 07:34:58 PMWait a moment.... Roz's favorite Pokemon... It's Poliwhirl D:
QUOTED FOR TRUTH
:3
I like Charizard a lot too so it's okay. :3
and what's this I should've totes spored that threat what the hell
lolol I'm kidding. =P I didn't have time to read the story for a long while, so it was great to catch up! The story is even better than what I remembered :)
Thank you, Roz!
I started reading this because I'm not sure why I haven't yet, and when I saw that the main character was "Jordan" I almost jumped clean out of my chair.
See, my name's Jordan too.
Oh lol. Jordan is SlowPokemon tho xD
And ETF!
Yes, and ETF.
Also, I've got a block on this chapter. Haven't written much.
Good luck!
*encouragement faces*
But during my block, I've written out almost the entire final season cuz I know exactly how it'll go. Lol what are priorities?
Quote from: K-NiGhT on February 17, 2013, 07:21:29 PMBut during my block, I've written out almost the entire final season cuz I know exactly how it'll go. Lol what are priorities?
wait, so you wrote all of the chapters in the final season, but not the battle ones? I'd say that's pretty smart- you wanted to finish the story around the time you started, so let's just get a move-on for those battles! I'll pitch in when I can, if I can.
So this writing backwards thing is working out quite nicely.
Scarlett O'Hara wrote the first chapter of Gone With the Wind last, and the last chapter first.
Quote from: SlowPokemon on February 18, 2013, 09:01:32 AMScarlett O'Hara wrote the first chapter of Gone With the Wind last, and the last chapter first.
yeah, but that wasn't released one chapter at a time, now was it?
It doesn't make a difference. I don't know what you're trying to say. If it's easier for him to write like that, let him write like that.
I think hes unhappy cuz that means no updates for a while xD
Quote from: K-NiGhT on February 18, 2013, 12:08:05 PMI think hes unhappy cuz that means no updates for a while xD
this^^^ :(
Waiting does suck, but if the final product is really good, it's worth it, right?
Quote from: Nebbles on February 18, 2013, 04:44:42 PMWaiting does suck, but if the final product is really good, it's worth it, right?
I do have a goal in mind...
Quote from: K-NiGhT on February 18, 2013, 04:55:20 PMI do have a goal in mind...
Deadlines are good for focus and all, but if you're a person who can focus and be relaxed at the same time, then it would probably be better to get rid of dealines altogether and let things flow naturally (of course, as long as you don't take breaks for weeks at a time!).
Well, BP, he's trying to finish the story altogether by the 1-year anniversary of his posting of the first chapter, which is really kind of neat!
Quote from: Kman96 on February 19, 2013, 08:15:59 AMWell, BP, he's trying to finish the story altogether by the 1-year anniversary of his posting of the first chapter, which is really kind of neat!
I think so, too. I write, and I write often, but I could never stay as focused toward a goal as he is.
If you get better as you write something, and you start a long story from the ending, isn't the story just going to get worse and worse? XD
LMAO
Quote from: Jub3r7 on February 19, 2013, 08:42:11 AMIf you get better as you write something, and you start a long story from the ending, isn't the story just going to get worse and worse? XD
Quote from: SlowPokemon on February 19, 2013, 08:58:39 AMLMAO
:(
So, I finally read all the new stuffs from the last month or so..
FANTASTIC.
That is all.
Good to see you, DrP!
Also:
Spoiler
Someone needs to thank Kman for saving their life.
Okay, I just got the pun behing Ruukisiven City. Very clever, K-NiGhT.
Quote from: K-NiGhT on February 24, 2013, 01:53:39 PMAlso: Spoiler
Someone needs to thank Kman for saving their life.
;) <3
I'm doin WORK tonight! You are all gonna get that anniversary update, I promise!
So i finished season seven. Now I just have to write all the tournament battles.
But fret not, dear readers! I have enlisted the help of one Kman96! He will be my cowriter for season six cuz it's ridiculously huge!
I should probably send in that Pm soon.
Not necessary, SocialFox! I've got everything I need.
However, if you want to pm it to me for series 3, I would love that!
EDIT: yes. I said series 3. More info later.
I meant grand cross.
Quote from: Yugi on February 27, 2013, 08:46:01 PMI meant grand cross.
I know exactly what you meant.
So...12 days until the deadline. I haven't gotten any sleep, nor have I gotten any chapters done. Guh...
Okay guys. I can do this. I've got you guys backing me and Kman helping me out! I just need a little bit of encouragement :)
GOGOGOGOGOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Ladies and gentlemen...
I give you...
A special chapter...
Written by our very own Kman96!
CHAPTER 70 GET!
Amazing chapter. If this is the quality of writing we're about to see, I can't wait for your Alyos story, Kman.
Quote from: FSM-Reapr on March 17, 2013, 06:58:49 AMAmazing chapter. If this is the quality of writing we're about to see, I can't wait for your Alyos story, Kman.
By the way, this kinda ties in to something that I'm making up for Tuesday, since I probably won't make the deadline in time. I've still got at least 16 chapters myself.
Quote from: FSM-Reapr on March 17, 2013, 06:58:49 AMAmazing chapter. If this is the quality of writing we're about to see, I can't wait for your Alyos story, Kman.
Thanks, FSM! That means a lot to me!
EDIT2:(http://1lifeisallwegot.files.wordpress.com/2012/11/happy-oh-stop-it-you1.png)
EDIT: PAGE 90 GET!
It's a smiley face?
Quote from: K-NiGhT on March 17, 2013, 09:47:50 AMIt's a smiley face?
Then idk why he didn't use this? :)
Maybe he just wanted to be different.
Only 2 more chapters until I get to kick FSM's ass ::)
Excited.
Oh, rearry?
mobo you are a dirty and cheating pervert
So, since the first post in the story thread was today one year ago, i'm gonna count this as the one year anniversary of the story.
My next post is gonna be what I was going to post after the story would've been finished, but i've edited it to fit the fact that we didn't finish.
One year. Seventy chapters. Two writers. One big story.
There are a couple people I want to thank for making this story into what it has become.
First, a HUGE thank you to Kman96 for helping me attempt to meet this deadline. Sadly, we weren't quite able to make it, but it's the thought that counts, really! Perhaps thirty chapters in such a short amount of time was impossible.
Also, I want to thank someone very special. A HUGE thank you goes out to Clanker37. If it wasn't for the story you've been writing, I wouldn't have gotten the inspiration to write this story. You're the reason I found my niche on the site, and I owe you so much.
Now, I'd like to look toward the future. The adventure doesn't end with the end of this series. This is where I officially accept Kelsey and Eric's Adventures in Alyos as the official sequel to this series. I know Kman will do an excellent job with his series. I also have a few propositions to make with a couple people about spin-off stories and such.
Lastly, I'd like to thank all of you for sticking through with me through the past year. I know I haven't been the best with updating regularly, and I know my chapters aren't always the longest. Thank you all so much for helping this series become what it has.
♫Happy Birthday The Great NSM Pokemon Adventure ♫
Wasn't there going to be a threequal to the story?
Shhhh we're getting to that.
(Also Yugi, expect a pm shortly)
Okay then.
Also if you need help writing some battles I can help if you like.
Mobo.
Ahahahahaha.
Anyways, phenomenal writing in that last chapter!
So.
Some of you may be wondering as you read.
"I TOTALLY FORGOT WHAT THESE PEOPLE LOOK LIKE!"
Well, forget no more! Taylor has started drawing some fantastic character models! She already has one done of Nebu, which I may edit in later.
:D oooh yay!
(http://imageshack.us/a/img5/2715/imagewpc.jpg)
i'm kawaii as hell omfg i love it
Quote from: Nebbles on March 22, 2013, 03:28:23 PMi'm kawaii as hell omfg i love it
In true face to the name topic fashion...
"Is that a Drifloon in the background?"
Where would I be without my lovely Driffy?
It also fits nice with your pokecross :0
Quote from: K-NiGhT on March 22, 2013, 02:48:05 PM(http://imageshack.us/a/img5/2715/imagewpc.jpg)
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It does!
SO MANY NEW CHAPTERS! It'll take me forever to catch up. I hope you didn't make my character die or something ;)
Good to see you're back Ragster!
So I've kinda gotten a little discouraged ever since all like, 13 chapters that I'd had were lost when I got my new iPhone. So for now I'm gonna take a short break from this story to work on some other projects.
you mean you weren't on a break all this time?
KIDDING
Well, in a way I was, but I just hadn't announcement.
THIS IS THE OFFICIAL ANNOUNCEMENT.
In light of this story's hiatus
Bubbles and shadowkirby would like to announce:
THE GREAT NSM POKEMON ADVENTURE:
THE ANIMATED SERIES.
There's one thing I'll need you all for:
Voice acting.
I'm sure I can get someone to replace people who aren't here anymore, or don't want their voice used.
ARE YOU GUYS PSYCHED FOR THIS?
I'm
(http://ih2.redbubble.net/image.10995195.9007/sticker,375x360.png)
For this
Quote from: shadowkirby on April 17, 2013, 05:52:11 PMI'm sure I can get someone to replace people who aren't here anymore, or don't want their voice used.
Ooh! Ooh ooh! Pick me! Pick me!
Quote from: shadowkirby on April 17, 2013, 05:52:11 PMI'm sure I can get someone to replace people who aren't here anymore, or don't want their voice used.
Or who just aren't interested
ARE YOU NOT INTERESTED D:
Quote from: Dudeman on April 17, 2013, 05:57:20 PMOoh! Ooh ooh! Pick me! Pick me!
Dudeman can voice for me. ;)
and me
Quote from: shadowkirby on April 17, 2013, 05:52:11 PMIn light of this story's hiatus
Bubbles and shadowkirby would like to announce:
THE GREAT NSM POKEMON ADVENTURE:
THE ANIMATED SERIES.
There's one thing I'll need you all for:
Voice acting.
I'm sure I can get someone to replace people who aren't here anymore, or don't want their voice used.
ARE YOU GUYS PSYCHED FOR THIS?
before you even START on this, I want that *thing* finished for our story!!!! You know I said the end of April!!!
otherwise, cool beans. and stop going over your head on things. you have like 3 animated serieseses you're planning right now.
serieseseseses
requirements:i must have a sassy voice or sound like riza hawkeye
If available space is permitting, I'd be interested in voice acting.
I approve.
If anyone needs a low voice, I'm your man.
possibly comes with a cute finnish accent
I'm still waiting for that PM K-Night.
Forgot about that.
Small update: I'm considering dropping this because I've been disgusted with the loss of like 20 chapters. Note that this is merely an idea at this point. I would have a replacement author finish out the story in my absence.
Did I miss something, or did something happen to your files?
I got a new phone back near the anniversary update and lost a bunch of chapters. That's why I've taken a break. But now I've been trying to move my writing in a different direction with Overwatch (which nobody reads anyway) and I'm kinda bored with just writing about Pokemon all the time.
*cough*
...
*cough cough*
...
SUPER BUMP OF EPICOSITY!!!
We're back, bitches! Hope you didn't miss me too much. I'll be back in your faces with brand spanking new chapters of THE GREAT NSM POKEMON ADVENTURE starting TOMORROW!!!
overhyped bump is overhyped
YEAH
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So i AM working on the next chapter.
BUT!
I'm also working on a little something behind the scenes ;)
so.
i've been working on fixing the PDF up so it looks nice.
but.
omg it's taking forever i have so many uncaught spelling errors that i had no idea were there. i'm probably gonna work on this before i continue. after i get everything fixed, i'll edit all the posts and put the corrections in. i apologize for all of the uncaught errors.
Here is the new PDF. I've fixed most all glaring errors in spelling, grammar, and punctuation. However, since it's late and I want to go to bed, I only have the first 31 chapters done.
[PDF]
I'm trying hard not to be mean here, but why post the PDF before you're finished editing it? Wouldn't it be better to just finish it tomorrow and then post the completed one?
Since it's in my dropbox, won't it just add the rest after I save?
oh. derp.
xD
i'm an idiot
wutever
ALSO HUGE THANK YOU TO KMAN FOR FINDING AND RECOVERING SOME OF THE CHAPTERS THAT WERE LOST BACK IN MARCH
Quote from: K-NiGhT on July 11, 2013, 11:52:24 PMi'm an idiot
wutever
ALSO HUGE THANK YOU TO KMAN FOR FINDING AND RECOVERING SOME OF THE CHAPTERS THAT WERE LOST BACK IN MARCH
:D <3
mmkay.
i'm scrapping the pdf for now since the story isn't complete. i have the word document now instead. if you can find a way to shorten it without making the text too much smaller, that'd be great. also, please keep the formatting i have of making a break between chapters, if you plan to do any editing. thank you!
[DOCX] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/100322825/Marty%27s%20Stories/The%20Great%20NSM%20Pokemon%20Adventure/The%20Great%20NSM%20Pokemon%20Adventure.docx)
NEXT TIME ON TGNSMPA:
things get awkward. like, super awkward. look out.
good thing nobody has looked at the docx yet...i think.
i had chapter 71 in there for a few days.
Ooooo. Interesting plot twist...thing. I wonder how it will turn out?
[/baiting]
Quote from: Dudeman on July 13, 2013, 03:55:20 PMOoooo. Interesting plot twist...thing. I wonder how it will turn out?
[/baiting]
what plot twist thing are you speaking of?
CHAPTER 71 GET!
Hey, guys. I hope you all are enjoying chapter 71. I have an announcement to go with this chapter.
I've finished correcting what I believe to be all the mistakes in the first 70 chapters. All of the corrections are in the DOCX file. I've also fixed some plot holes. I've tried editing these chapters in with the corrections, but it doesn't keep the italics, fonts, etc. I am going to make another version of the DOCX with all the code in it. When it is finished, I will begin editing the chapters one by one until the whole story is completely remastered.
That is all.
"Chandelure is unable to battle! Chandelure wins!" ?
Other than that, great job! :)
Quote from: K-NiGhT on July 13, 2013, 05:37:11 PM"Follow up with Swift!" Jordan ordered, starting to get excited. Cinccino's entire tail began to glow gold and it waved it, firing multiple gold-colored stars from its tail at Purugly. Purugly still wasn't completely recovered from using the Giga Impact, so it couldn't do anything against the barrage of stars hitting it.
yeah because swift would fail in a normal circumstance
Quote from: blueflower999 on July 13, 2013, 06:00:51 PM"Chandelure is unable to battle! Chandelure wins!" ?
Other than that, great job! :)
gah. i'm too tired for this crap.
Quote from: Yugi on July 13, 2013, 06:05:31 PMyeah because swift would fail in a normal circumstance
what does that have to do with anything
you left a gaping plot hole C-Daytime
even worse than batman begins
ok so tell me so i can fix it
Quote from: BulbapediaSwift inflicts damage and is unaffected by modifications to the accuracy stat and evasion stat. It can hit a Pokémon during the semi-invulnerable turn of moves such as Dig and Fly.
how is that even a plot hole
this is anime style battling. Purugly could've used some sort of move to counter.
WELCOME TO THE ALL NEW TGNSMPA, NOW WITH 33 PERCENT BIGGER CHAPTER TITLES!
So the editing is all done, to the best of my knowledge. Now that it's done, I want to make sure that it's done right. I've decided to create a proofreading team. I'm going to designate one person to find any major plot holes that I could feasibly fix at this point. I will also designate one more person to find anything aesthetically wrong with the story. (i.e: something looks different than the rest, there's a broken piece of code in here that distracts from the story, you missed a spelling error, etc.) If I select you, be looking for a pm from me.
That is all. Enjoy the corrections.
well that revival didn't last long...
expect another chapter sometime in the next few days?
Quote from: K-NiGhT on April 15, 2012, 10:29:49 PMHe wore a red suit with a red hat, and he was flipping a coin in his hand.
(http://www.pokemonxy.com/_ui/img/_en/art/TeamFlare-Pokemon-X-and_Y.jpg)
:P
spoiler: atticus is secretly in team flare
and suddenly, k-night's story became the most FABULOUS story ever
fabulous+frivolous=A++
all jokes aside though, school has started up again :/ Thankfully, though, I have a pretty easy year ahead of me. I will continue to write and maybe we'll have this done by the two year anniversary :0
Again, I'm sorry that revival didn't last long. I've been adding too much to do on NSM as of late, with this, my youtube channel, and even starting up arranging again. I'm gonna do some serious time management this year to get you guys as much quality content as possible on all of these mediums.
I don't know why I haven't read this story before... Maybe because I didn't spend much time in this section of the forums... But this is incredible. ... Except for the part where I'm not in it of course. :P But I don't blame you because throwing "JDMEK5" in there looks really stupid.
So I'm going to give you my name so you can fulfill your dreams of putting me in the story. :P
Ready?
JDMEK5's Name
Jordan. :o
Oh god not another one
Not only do we already have 2 Jordan's already, but we're almost done with the story :(
Quote from: shadowkirby on September 03, 2013, 11:29:42 AMnot another one
XD
Quote from: K-NiGhT on September 03, 2013, 02:10:46 PMNot only do we already have 2 Jordan's already, but we're almost done with the story :(
2 Jordans already?! Wow. :P That's fine. Wait, so that's Slow and who else?
etf. she shows up a little bit in some of the latest chapters, but has a big part after the first round.
Just a note K-Night, I'm probably going to quit doing the Lion, since the writing was really bad and that it turned Sabin into a Mary Sue, so feel free to treat it as non-canon.
Aw :( i was actually interested in it.
it was also gonna help me and Kelsey w/series 3
I'm taking art commissions!
I don't have access to a computer at this very second (I will tonight), but for a sketch with a Pokémon of your choice, $1. Other $1 options include a basic overworld sprite, and a trainer battle sprite. For $2, you can get all three, and for $5, you get variations on each one. $10 will bet you all of the above, plus animations!
To expand on shadowkirby's post, we are currently trying to make that ROM a reality. To do that, though, we need your guys's help. Shadowkirby wants $1 for each character's sprite. Not including characters that aren't trainers, we have 40 sprites to do minimum. Unfortunately, I don't have the money to pay for everybody's sprite. I've got senior pictures, prom, a choir trip, and college to think about.
That's where y'all come in. If everyone could donate $1 so their sprite could appear in the game, that would help out tremendously. If that is also a problem for you, I'm sure I can work something out.
(PS: we're also gonna need a team of people who can help with development. anyone who can help in any way is greatly appreciated)
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also chapter 72 get
uhhhh
Couldn't we just make our own sprites?
but then all the styles would be like different and stuff
We could have a basic guideline.
Oh right. I actually have a concept artist working on all the character designs. (S/O to Taylor)
If you have the skills i suppose you could.
So.
Pokemon X and Y come out next week Saturday.
I feel like celebrating. So I've been preparing something special for you guys. Expect it next week Sunday.
*Writes on calendar* Pressure's on K-Night! Better not let me down or I'll have to sue my friend!... Again..
This week, prepare for Pokemon X and Y with a weeklong marathon of TGNSMPA! We'll (hopefully) be hitting you with one chapter a night up until Saturday's release! It all kicks off tonight with Chapter 73!
:ooooo ilu
CHAPTER 73 GET!
(my little way of saying congrats to FSM ;))
worst chapter eva
I will admit it's not my best work.
Since my math was off a little bit, we're gonna have a double feature tonight. These chapters are special because they were written by the amazing Kman96!
Quote from: K-NiGhT on October 08, 2013, 01:06:00 PMSince my math was off a little bit, we're gonna have a double feature tonight. These chapters are special because they were written by the amazing Kman96!
Just so everyone knows, I began Chapter 75 and finished it on Christmas Eve. It was K-NiGhT's Christmas present xD
Also I'm not done with 74 yet, but that shoul be soon. I spent like 2 hrs on it three weeks ago and I've got quite a bit left. I'll git 'er done.
Sorry to keep you waiting!
CHAPTER 74 GET!
HUGE MEGA GINORMOUS SHOUTOUT TO KMAN96 FOR WORKING SO HARD TO HELP ME MEET THIS DEADLINE ILU MAN
also chapter 75 get
Quote from: K-NiGhT on October 08, 2013, 08:22:04 PMSorry to keep you waiting!
CHAPTER 74 GET!
HUGE MEGA GINORMOUS SHOUTOUT TO KMAN96 FOR WORKING SO HARD TO HELP ME MEET THIS DEADLINE ILU MAN
Quote from: K-NiGhT on October 08, 2013, 08:45:44 PMalso chapter 75 get
HEY I DID BOTH OF THESE YIPPEE KIYAY
Bastiodon is a Rock and Steel type, not a Ground and Steel type.
DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUN
Quote from: blueflower999 on October 09, 2013, 03:42:15 AMBastiodon is a Rock and Steel type, not a Ground and Steel type.
Whoops. I was cranking this out real fast, didn't crack back for errors like that. I guesstimated. Sorry!
A WILD COLLEGE ENGLISH ESSAY APPEARED!
CAN'T ESCAPE
Quote from: K-NiGhT on October 09, 2013, 04:49:08 PMA WILD COLLEGE ENGLISH ESSAY APPEARED!
CAN'T ESCAPE
IS MY DETERMINATION INCOMPLETE?!
oh noez...
Yeah, but I have a free night tonight so I'll see if I can't get two chapters done. I kinda wanted to be done with the first round after this week's marathon, and I want to stick to that goal.
Finding a pokemon on the list is hard on a 3DS :(
oops life Pokemon XY happened.
i'll see if i can get 76 done sometime soon.
so many words
so little action
shhhhhhhh
So, since I'm doing NaNoWriMo, this story is taking a backseat. I'll bring it back up after November 30th. Until then, go check out Overwatch! It's gettin awsm and stuff.
Hey so since NaNoWriMo is over and all I have to do now is rewrite two chapters of Overwatch, I'm gonna bring this back. I have the last few chapters basically done, so all I have to do is finish the rest of the tournament. Can I do 20 chapters by the 2-year anniversary? Stay tuned and find out! :D
so i finally finished Chapter 76. Man that took a while. But! The first round is almost over, which means the next few chapters are absolutely going to fly by! GET HYPED.
4000 posts epic announcement bonanza extravaganza holy sh*t this is bananas guys
Ok, so I read through this a few hours ago, and I honestly miss this project. I also felt bad that it never got finished, but the monotony of it made me lose interest. Which gave me an idea.
Why not rebuild it from the ground up?
TGNSMPA: ReDux COMING SOON TO AN NSM STORY TELLING BOARD NEAR YOU
AAAAAAAAAAA ALL THE HYPE
Excited to see what will come out of this.
can I be a different character this time
Reboot reboot!!
omg hype
kdgbsmahbsms wHAT IS THIS I HAVE NO IDEA
we're told the secret pokemon adventures of various NSMers
Quote from: zoroark1264 on October 05, 2014, 06:33:04 AMkdgbsmahbsms wHAT IS THIS I HAVE NO IDEA
Then read it, ya numbskull. It's pretty GREAT!
It was originally just all K-NiGhT's mind baby, but he brought me on near the end, so there's quite a few chapters/battles near the end that I penned. ;)
(EDIT: The ones I've written are Chapters:
30
31
70
74
75
...oh. I thought I had written a couple more, but perhaps I worked ahead and they just weren't published...Also, you can really tell the difference between K-NiGhT's writing and mine; I tend to stick to using paragraphs, while K-NiGhT has almost each piece of dialogue as it's own paragraph. Nothing wrong with that, just an observation.)
This was so much fun, man, but like I said when we texted earlier, I don't know how much good would come of it to just rip it all up and start anew. Could we make it fucking awesome? Hell yes. Do I want to put so much effort into it as I had during high school when I had so much more time to procrastinate and write about Pokémon? no....but I know I'd love the shit out of it!
Just...let me know if you need help. I'm in a tough spot right now, but once I get on top, I know I'll be ready for anything you've got for me.
Kman's last paragraph moved me so much omfg the friendship is so real tbh
This thing went on for nearly two years and I never read it. Considering I've never played Pokemon, is this thing any good? Did I get a cameo at some point? (The answer better be yes otherwise I will burn your house down.)
well if you dont pokemon then you probbly wont get it
Quote from: Olimar12345 on October 06, 2014, 09:16:32 AMwell if you dont pokemon then you probbly wont get it
What's a pokeman? How do I get one? What's it for? Can I eat it?
There's always a chance :P especially now with this reboot. You probably wouldn't be a trainer but you could still be in the story :3 I'd like to include as many people as possible.
Quote from: K-NiGhT on October 06, 2014, 12:17:36 PMThere's always a chance :P especially now with this reboot. You probably wouldn't be a trainer but you could still be in the story :3 I'd like to include as many people as possible.
oooh
can I be that annoying guy who keeps you from leaving the town until you beat brock
will there be a zoroark
I mean I've never played any of the Pokemon games, but I'm currently exploring the Kanto Region cataloguing some of the local music as part of my recent "Digimusicology" focus I've adopted. It's like studying folk music but video games.
Gotta write that thesis on something.
Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on October 06, 2014, 01:16:32 PMoooh
can I be that annoying guy who keeps you from leaving the town until you beat brock
I call being Navi!
Hey! Listen!
Quote from: FireArrow on October 08, 2014, 09:11:49 PMHey! Listen!
Off topic but my clash of clans name is, in fact, Hey Listen.
GIVE KMAN AND I THE SAME ROLES, K, MAN?
heh
kman
I'm so witty
Also I want to help with the plot.
Quote from: shadowkirby on October 31, 2014, 09:42:13 AMGIVE KMAN AND I THE SAME ROLES, K, MAN?
heh
kman
I'm so witty
Also I want to help with the plot.
GOGOGO
Quote from: shadowkirby on October 31, 2014, 09:42:13 AMGIVE KMAN AND I THE SAME ROLES, K, MAN?
heh
kman
I'm so witty
Also I want to help with the plot.
so much...backstory...
so much...character development...
On another note, if you DO end up rebooting the series, be sure to STICK WITH THE PLAN. You know what I'm talking about. We've discussed this. Even though I haven't written my Alyos story...and while I would say "yet," I really don't know how likely it is that I'll ever get around to it. I suppose I'm just too in love with the idea in my head to really put it to paper.
unless this goes completely against what you've planned already, the "reboot" could be like BW2, 2 years later
you know what
screw the reboot, we're doing it live! expect a new chapter sometime within the next couple of hours.
edit: also new poll
CRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAP
ALL OF MY YEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
I'm too lazy to read all the previous pages so idk what this is. :c
you can go to the front post to gather information and read the story if ya want. I haven't posted a chapter of this in over a year so i'm not expecting many people to get to hyped over this but hopfully you guys will still enjoy like old times
Quote[11:56:14 PM] Marty Balmer: ugh i may have made a grave mistake promising a chapter tonight lol
[11:56:32 PM] Marty Balmer: good thing i slept until like noon today
[11:56:35 PM] Kefka: gg
[11:56:59 PM] Marty Balmer: i could've sworn i had a handwritten copy of that chapter laying around somewhere
[11:58:05 PM] Marty Balmer: screw it i'll just make some shit up that always works
DON'T WORRY GUYS I'M SURE IT'LL BE GREAT
Making shit up as I go is all I ever do.
There once was a man named K-NiGhT
Who wrote a story about Pokémon
and that story went neglected for like almost a year because he got stuck on a chapter for way too long
BUT THAT SILENCE WILL GO ON NO LONGER BECAUSE I JUST POSTED A REALLY SHORT CHAPTER TO GET PAST THE BLOCK I HAD
seriously tho this chapter is absolutely miniscule because I had no idea how to lengthen it with the direction I was going in. The next chapter has a lot of explaining and plot and stuff in it so be expecting that like probably next year or something idk
edit: so guys honest opinion this chapter totally lived up to all the hype right i mean it's been a whole year since the last one i feel this is a worthy follow-up
is this a story you are writing?
Yes yugi this is a story I am righting
Wow, I haven't read this in forever.. and I didn't realize I played a bigger role in the later chapters! THANKS!
Glad to see you got around to finishing this, hahaha ::)
GUYS
IT'S HIM
HE LEFT SHORTLY AFTER I JOINED FOR SOME REASON
IT'S HIIIIIIM
WHY IS EVERYONE COMING BACK ALL OF A SUDDEN
Quote from: the_last_sheikah on January 22, 2015, 12:22:13 AMGlad to see you got around to finishing this, hahaha ::)
well after you left i was worried no one would remember who your character was :O (not that i'm passing blame or anything i've been super busy/lazy with it too xD)
Ah but a character re-introduction spurs people to reread the story! ;)
Bro I actually remember having the blaziken card in your profile
Well, a certain forum member re-introduction is spurring me to write a little bit :O maybe we'll get more than one chapter this year lol.
Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on January 22, 2015, 12:49:07 AMBro I actually remember having the blaziken card in your profile
Best starter, hands down.
Quote from: K-NiGhT on January 22, 2015, 12:50:12 AMWell, a certain forum member re-introduction is spurring me to write a little bit :O maybe we'll get more than one chapter this year lol.
Oh oh oh! Is it Jub3r7? I bet it's him! ;)
Joking aside, yeah not much progression since I left, haha.
yeah i got a little bored of it tbh, especially once gen 6 came out and added mega evolution :P
Ah the ultimate monkey wrench. Could be interesting to work that in somehow.
I've been thinking about it periodically :P
woah omagawd i made new chaptah fo realz go see k
what an ending
I like how it's just
"Silly me, I slept too long! Oh well!"
I had a laugh
Glad you liked it I worked very hard on it.
I know it's just an April Fool's joke, but you should archive the chapter on this thread if and when you have intentions of deleting it in lieu of, oh I don't know...a real ending...perhaps???!!! ?! ?! ! ?! ???!
water yoo talking about that's the real ending
I slept through chapters 78-419
Aren't I in your story? ;)
Quote from: mariolegofan on April 02, 2015, 06:46:52 AMAren't I in your story? ;)
you weren't really around while it was relevant, so no.
12/10 would read again
Quote from: K-NiGhT on April 02, 2015, 07:45:07 AMyou weren't really around while it was relevant, so no.
REEEEEEEEEEEBOOT