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List of accepted arrangements (Updated constantly):
[NDS] Final Fantasy III - "Town of Amur" - Thomas Wilson
[GBA] Golden Sun: The Lost Age - "Alhafra" - Thomas Wilson
[NDS] Pokemon Diamond/Pearl/Platinum - "Spotted! Artist" - Shadoninja
[GBA/NDS] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Blue/Red Rescue Team - "Friend Area ~ Swamp" - Bespinben
[GBA/NDS] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Blue/Red Rescue Team - "Great Canyon (Two Pianos)" - Bespinben
[GBA/NDS] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Blue/Red Rescue Team - "Sky Tower (Two Pianos)" - Bespinben
[NDS] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon 2: Explorers of Time/Darkness/Sky - "Ending Theme" - Bespinben
[NDS] Pokemon Mystery Dungeon 2: Explorers of Time/Darkness/Sky - "Time Gear Remix" - Dusk
[GB] Pokemon Red/Blue/Yellow - "Pokemon Tower" - Tangy
[GBA] Pokémon Ruby/Sapphire/Emerald - "Trainer's School" - Warioman98
[3DS] Pushmo - "Menu" - Shadoninja
[N64] The Legend of Zelda: Majora's Mask - "New Wave Bossa Nova" - Tangy
[NDS] Theresia - "Opening Song" - Olimar12345
[NDS] Wario: Master of Disguise - "VS Head Honcho Carpaccio" - Warioman98
[NDS] Wario: Master of Disguise - "VS Head Honcho Carpaccio (Duet)" - Warioman98
Replacements:
[N64] Banjo Tooie - "Targitzan, Despotic Dizzy Totem God (Duet)" - Bloop
[GBA/NDS] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Blue/Red Rescue Team - "Great Canyon" - Bespinben
[GBA/NDS] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Blue/Red Rescue Team - "Sky Tower" - Bespinben
[3DS] Pushmo - "Menu"
Status: Accepted
Deku: Ok
[NDS] Pokemon Diamond/Pearl/Platinum - "Spotted! Artist"
Status: Accepted
Deku: Ok
[WII] The Legend of Zelda: Skyward Sword - "The Mogmas"
Deku: In bar 8, the E# would be better as an F and the D# would be better as an Eb. The chords from the end of bar 10 to bar 12 (not including the last one, that's fine), would probably be better spelled as flat 9 chords using the note in the bass as the root (hopefully that made sense).
Shado: uhhhh? I have no idea what a flat 9 chord is or how it's built.
Deku: Oh. It's like a dominant 7, with a flattened 9th added. Eg C7 b9 would be C E G Bb Db.
Would it be easier if I just changed them and put the link here?
Shado: Adjusted. Is that what you mean?
Deku: This - http://www.mediafire.com/?u791i4dy8oyes15 (http://www.mediafire.com/?u791i4dy8oyes15)
S: brink Loken.
[WII] Mario Kart Wii - "Toad's Factory" (Replacement)
Deku: At bar 44 where you've got the full chords in the RH, it seems a little odd to have the odd 3 note chord thrown in. Just checking that you're sure of those, that's all ;)
Shado: I added some that I missed. I can't add the Bb to the beat 4 chord at 49 and 60, else it covers up the top C. Everything else, I can't hear any other notes.
ZIP (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/36661985/WIP/Submission/New/Submission%20for%20Next%20Update%20%28Shadoninja%29.zip)
Deku: Finale 2012? *grumble* I suppose I better download it then.... I'll get back to these when I do
Ah! Finally! ;D
Well, let's see...
[NDS] Wario: Master of Disguise - "VS Head Honcho Carpaccio" ZIP (http://db.tt/puhypu0r) ~ (Duet) ZIP (http://db.tt/WjEEpNqS) (2 arrangements, duet and solo)
Status: Accepted
Deku: All the Ab's (in both) should be G#'s, it's in A minor.
In the solo one, maybe simplify (or add variation) to the bass. It's a big ask for someone to do that all the way through a song without their left hand giving up the ghost.
In the two pianos one, change the parts around once in a while so both players have a decent share of the melody. And swap the bass parts around too. (obviously the changes should make sense with sections and so on)
Wario: lol Left hand simplified. Also corrected the duet, which now sounds a lot better! Thanks for the idea.
Of course it's in A minor! What was I thinking! :facepalm: Please don't tell that to my music teacher. :P
[NDS] Wario: Master of Disguise - "Alergia Gardens (Episode 10: The Final Face-Off!!)" (Duet) ZIP (http://db.tt/bTHJnsPv)
Deku: Same thing as the other one in regards to part equality. A possible place to swap over would be the bar after the second time bar.
Wario: Fixed. Swapped the second part.
Olimar: The rhythm groupings in piano I, RH, first layer are incorrect in measures 20, 22, and 26. Also in measure 46, the piano II's RH, layer one has two eighth notes that should be beamed together, but aren't. And is there a reason for the pick up rest?
Wario: 1. Just wanted to say that I didn't forget this, instead I'm waiting to have enough free time (this weekend tbh) to correct it. And yes, actually, there is a reason for the pick up, my friend: At the beginning of the song you can hear some drums playing just when the song starts, right? Well, I wanted to make clear that the song doesn't start right at measure 2, but there are also those drums before. I also wanted to include them in a hidden staff, but I didn't do it because I didn't (and don't) know how to, so in the end I left it like that. :P
Anyways, good eye. 8)
2. Don't mean to discredit you, but... are you sure? I checked those measures again and I can't see anything wrong. Could you please be more precise?
3. Wow, I don't know why finale separated those eights. :o
I'll try to fix it, even if I don't really know how to lol. Again, good eye. 8)
Olimar:
-All piano RH first layer:
-Measure 20 should be quarter-eighth-eighth tied to a quarter-two eighths.
-Measure 22 should be quarter-eighth-eighth tied to a dotted quarter-eighth.
-Measure 26 should be quarter-eighth-eighth tied to an eighth-eighth-eighth-eighth.
Wario: Aye, aye, Captain Olimar! Gotta fix that soon!
[GBA] Pokémon Ruby, Sapphire & Emerald - "Trainer's School" ZIP (http://db.tt/JunwxfFF)
Status: Accepted
Deku: Hello, it's everyone's best friend, enharmonic spellings! hehe :P
Bb in bar 5 is an A#
Ab in bar 5 is a G#
Same two things in bar 9
Ab in bar 11 is a G#
Gb in bar 12 is an F#
Ab in bar 13 is a G#
Ab in bar 15 is a G#
Gb in bar 16 is an F#
Ab in bar 17 is a G#
Ab in bar 18 is a G#
Also, have you considered having the LH in normal bass clef and then using the cross staff tool for the really high ones? Probably easier to read
Wario: Ohai, enharmonic spellings, it's always a pleasure! :P
All accidentals corrected. I thought about crossing staffs, but I didn't know how to do it so I left it like that. Either way, now I've looked up how to do it and it's fixed.
Wario: Edit. Links reuploaded. All .zips now.
[N64] Banjo Tooie - "Targitzan, Despotic Dizzy Totem God (Duet)" (Replacement) - Mus (http://www.mediafire.com/?mb4dc2r7a6vprkw) Midi (http://www.mediafire.com/?vzlgb4bn559bcbz) Pdf (http://www.mediafire.com/?2zxtyhca9vz2g3d)
Status: Accepted.
Deku: All good. Except I'm not sure if I like those key changes half way through. I probably should have said something first time around. I'll think about it.
Bloop: The sheet would have a gigantic natural attack, what would make reading pretty hard (at least I think so).
Deku: Ok
[N64] The Legend of Zelda: Majora's Mask - "Final Hours" - Mus (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/100796699/Final%20Hours.mus) Mid (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/100796699/Final%20Hours.pdf) Pdf (http://www.mediafire.com/?q94tq9u01iexv9l)
Deku: I'm not really sure what to say. I just don't think it works really well for piano in it's current shape.
Bloop: It feels fine to me, actually. I don't know what to change about it..
Olimar: -All of the crescendos and diminuendos are redundant-you can't change the volume of a note on the piano once stricken.
-The layer work is a bit sloppy-things don't quite line up/sometimes they collide...
Bloop: Alright, fixed. The crescendos and diminuendos were there because the song slowly gets louder, but it wasn't something important.
I think that's it for now.
[N64] Banjo-Kazooie - "Bottles' Picture Game" [MUS] (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?h7thhgot0mo8vpc) [MID] (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?p35lzau5mv7slt3) [PDF] (http://www.mediafire.com/?rsio4opf1aoaj5j)
Deku: The bass notes and chords aren't all right
LonelyHaven: I only fixed the measure 5 (and similar) bass line (as that was the only error I heard so far).
Added tempo marking and formatting.
Deku: The second 2 chords in bar 5 are C/Bb not D/Bb. A couple of enharmonic spelling things in the Gb Major section but I'll fix em when I get around to getting Finale 2012.
Any chance you could do something about the overlapping parts in bar 21 (and where it comes back)? Same thing with the end of bar 31.
PDF (http://www.mediafire.com/?ol1fo4agkmebdfd) MUS (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?76h7tovenjl7v1a) MID (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?fb8l9hbzqbe98s2)
LonelyHaven: Ah yeah, I missed that. Thanks. So are there any more bass line/chord errors? I can try to give another listen when I have time.
The only solution for the overlapping was that I put everything in the right hand an octave higher...not sure what else I could do except omit some notes or only bring the "overlapping" notes up an octave. Whichever one is fine/better, I'll work on fixing that and post that.
For enharmonic spellings, I believe that for measure 31, in the bass line, the enharmonic spelling for Eb/B♮ should be Eb/Cb, and Db/Bb should be Db/Cbb? (that's all I'm sure about, haven't looked at the other enharmonic spellings).
Olimar:
-Lots if weird beaming going on in this piece-though beaming the 16th notes in beat one with the 8th notes of beat two isn't incorrect, I feel that it would look nicer if they weren't beamed together.
-What's with the repeated accidentals? They last the whole measure, yet most of them are rewritten for every note... that needs to be fixed.
-Measure numbers are missing.
-When the melody goes into thirds at measure 33, the chords need to stay in thirds. (i.g. measure 34-those B naturals need to be Cb's)
LonelyHaven:
Mostly everything should be fixed. I was able to number everything in Musescore, but not when I imported it to finale notepad. I'd appreciate some help with that. Also, let me know if anything else still needs fixing.
PDF (http://www.mediafire.com/?t7w8op2taxnilc4) MUS (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?3upp232g4q3qq20) MID (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?u7eozntjdjpbqp9)
[GCN] The Legend of Zelda: Wind Waker – "Phantom Ganon" – spitllama (replacement) Zip (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/59158604/Phantom%20Ganon.zip)
Deku: Oh boy, this one's complicated. I'll resist the urge to talk about rhythm groupings and dotted rests.....
The glissandos would be better written as grace notes, seeing as that's kinda what they are anyway.
Some sort of articulated difference in the bass line would be good seeing as the Db's Are clearly longer than the C's (using the notes from the start, obviously it carries through the various changes).
Bar 8 (and its reincarnations) would make more sense if the held chord notes were written as whole notes on the second layer.
Bar 48 (and its reincarnations) (aside from the weirdo rhythm grouping in the RH) do you mean to have the 3rd note having different lengths in both hands?
Bar 46-52 needs some time signature changes. Same as when the figure comes back later.
I might have more but it'll probably be easier after you fix those things (esp the time sig)
spit: *Wipes sweat off forehead*. Wow, things sure get messy when it involves time signature changes. Everything's been fixed now. I respectfully disagree with your suggestion to change the glissandos to grace notes, but I changed them anyhow. Let me know if you still want them like that.
Deku: "I respectfully disagree with your suggestion to change the glissandos to grace notes."
Might I ask why?
spit: I don't hear it in the original. It sounds like a run that occurs on the 4.5th beat of the measure (a lot like "Moldararch/Koloktos Battle" in LoZ: SS), and not as a stepping appoggiatura. Plus the playback sounds pretty bad with the grace note.
Deku: Woah, I meant to write down how it sounds, like this (just bar 8 ) (http://www.mediafire.com/?mjzz9tu5a265fvf). Writing it as a glissando is pretty ambiguous. You want to aim to notate as much as possible in a relatively precise way. Good job on the key changes. I hate the way Finale craps out when you throw in a key change :P
I think the rest is alright, just rhythm groupings which I'll fix up sometime.
spit: Oh hey! You can work with more than one grace note at a time! Who knew... thanks for that, and sorry for the confusion. Everything's been fixed. When you alter the rhythm groupings, can you tell me what you change? I'm trying to learn more about that cause I seem to struggle with it a lot.
Olimar:
-The composer line needs to be split into two lines-its too long as one.
-The only dynamic used is forte. I'm not too familiar with the original, but is it supposed to start at forte, crescendo/decrescendo, and then drop back down to forte?
spit:
- Fixed
- Added accents on the first notes of measures 49, 51, etc. to make it clearer that the forte comes in on the second half of the first beat
* Also changed the triplet eighth notes on measures 9 and the like to four 32nd notes
[GBA] Metroid Fusion – "Crisis Mission" – spitllama Zip (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/59158604/Crisis%20Mission.zip)
Deku: The sextuplet/triplet semiquavers are unplayable. Also, occasionally the spelling of some chromatic voice leading is a little weird but I'll worry about that later.
spit: Replaced sextuplets with quarter-note tremolos
Deku: Quarter note tremolos have 8 notes per beat..... :P Also, the triplet 16ths are still there
spit: D'oh! Replaced the tremolos with another eighth note triplet, and replaced triplet 16ths with two 16th notes
Olimar:
-Same thing with the composer's text.
-Measures 17, 21, 23, and 51 have rhythm grouping errors.
-It feels like there are voices left out or something...I don't remember this song being so...boring...
spit:
-Fixed
-Fixed
-Gee thanks :(. Ummm I added a voice on measure 23 but I've been through this song 6 times listening and can't hear any more. What you're probably hearing is something very similar to what's in The Distortion World from Pokemon- that continuous humming sound that makes the song sound fuller, but can't be imitated on the piano. Just imo.
[WII] Pokémon Battle Revolution – "Sunset Colosseum" – spitllama Zip (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/59158604/Sunset%20Colosseum.zip)
Deku: Rhythm groupings..........
spit: Fixed what should be everything
Olimar:
-I like seeing eighth rests instead of quarter rests in the opening. The way measure 3 looks is how 1-8 should look.
-Rhythm grouping errors in measures 9-13, 15-16, 23-34 and 37-38.
-The marcato accents on the whole notes at measures 33 and 35 are redundant and should be removed OR replaced with accents.
-Staccato tied note in 27 makes little sense. Should be removed.
spit:
All fixed
[WII] Super Smash Bros. Brawl – "Boss Theme Medley" – spitllama Zip (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/59158604/Boss%20Theme%20Medley.zip)
spit: Went ahead and fixed some rhythm issues. The right-hand rhythms that start on 41 and 54 are the same, but I've grouped them differently. If you can tell me which is more appropriate, I'll fix the other measures.
spit: Fixed more rhythm problems. I made 41 and 54 the same rhythm.
[Wii] Skyward Sword - "Pumpkin Pastime" PDF (http://www.mediafire.com/view/?gopk4tcgiin05bo) MUS (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?j24ws3ltpel53yt) MID (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?gb4am48tr9qkbtv)
Deku: My internet's being really crappy at the moment so I can't listen to the entire original, but from what I heard, it sounds like it would make more sense in 3/4 as opposed to 6/8. Also, can you add in the grace notes?
Olimar:
Alright, where to begin...
-No measure numbers
-Measure 2 LH is incorrect. The 4th eighth note should be a "B", and it should be tied to the previous note.
-Lots of absent grace notes.
-Incorrect articulation for the melody. At measure 3 everything should be staccato except for the "E", which should be slured to the "D". Then in mesure 4 the first note should be staccato, and the absent grace note should be slured to the "G". This should be reapplied to all measures alike. Also at measure 10, the slur should start on the "G" and go to the 2nd "F".
-Measures 11-18 are missing the bass notes on 1 and 4. They're quite important...
-Measure 4 has note collision on beat 6.
-A lot of the LH sounds iffy...
-I'd slur the quarter note to the eighth note in measures 11-18.
-Repeat bar missing.
[Wii] Skyward Sword - "Tubert's Theme" PDF (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?rq4uh81nqdpbxjd) MUS (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?j3v18vx8cag19it) MID (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?0pgaav4935tilaq)
Deku: This would sound really sweet with the intro as well (going from this (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P87l7bxqZRI) video). Also, some of the rhythm groupings could be fixed up. Always aim to 'show' beat 3 (using ties) as it's the second most important beat in 4/4 aside from beat 1. And replace dotted rests with 4th + 8th rests.
Olimar:
-Title not bolded.
-No measure numbers.
-Copyright and url are also on the second page. Remove.
-No intro.
-Measure 2 and every one like it is rhythmically incorrect.
-All slurs are incorrect. There are no correct articulations in this piece. :1
-The chords in the LH should be rolled,
-Other incorrect rhythm groupings in measures 13, 19, 20, 24, and 25.
-Measure 26 is incomplete...
[Wii] Skyward Sword - "Bamboo Island" PDF (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?ooj74okl18dchnt) MUS (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?53pypkqqh6co417) MID (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?p67nb8ewpm4764l)
Deku: Any chance you could fill out the chords at the start a little more, mainly with upper voices? Same rhythm grouping issue in the right hand as well.
Olimar:
This arrangement really doesn't capture the piece's beauty...
-Title not bolded
-No measure numbers
-Didn't analyze the chords, but they just don't sound right at all. Perhaps its the spelling of the chord? Or the register. ..Or wrong notes. It just sounds awful.
-Every measure like measure 3 is rhythmically incorrect.
-This piece might be better with pedal markings.
[Wii] Skyward Sword - "Island in the Sky" PDF (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?xds8rsd1ddawr3r) MUS (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?eq9rwmr51b84ri2) MID (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?y8fa7c7v6ys7598)
Deku:
Second note in the 2nd bar is a B, not an E. And wherever that figure repeats (bar 4, 6, 8, 10).
Last note in bars 9 & 11 is an A.
Notes in bar 12 are E B E A G#, then down to F#)
Notes in bar 13 are G(natural) D A B.
Bar 14 - first two notes are A & E.
Bar 15 - same as bar 13, although there is a pickup quaver F# at the end of bar 14.
Bar 16 - same as bar 14. Oh, there's a quaver pickup before this bar too (a low G natural).
The rolled chord in the 3rd to last bar (from the bottom up) is A E C#.
Last 2 bars - the second note in each is a 5th above the first note, not an octave.
Olimar:
-Title not bolded
-No measure numbers.
-The eighth note in measure 6 needs to be two sixteenth notes, B and C#.
Thanks so much for the call out, Cobraroll! I really appreciate it!! ;D
spitllama managed to convince me to head over to submission, so I proceeded to fix up my page to make it fit in more updates and here are four songs for submission. They appear in up to three games but are the same exact songs.
Also, I'm sorry if I don't follow the exact submission guidelines regarding this post. I'm a little tired of making really tiny edits everywhere after just fixing up my thread.
PlayStation 2
Kingdom Hearts
"Dearly Beloved" - NasiDe [MUS (http://www.mediafire.com/?7q07zzg1j6tyi4d) | MIDI (http://www.mediafire.com/?zz849rmandzvzmv) | PDF (http://www.mediafire.com/view/?ry7hjan6jex40g1)]
Deku: Using Pedal markings in this would go a long way to cleaning it up and preventing it from becoming a mess of ties. Maybe add some of the high twinkly bits. Some of the bass notes sound like they're written an octave too high. The little lick which you've written as triplet semiquavers would be much tidier if written using a mordent (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mordent).
"Dive Into the Heart -Destati-" - NasiDe [MUS (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?lvj98ihkyczpgoh) | MIDI (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?9n84dxjramsvx3c) | PDF (http://www.mediafire.com/view/?od3cr0tv72dztag)]
"Destiny Islands" - NasiDe [MUS (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?y1besuseia8i858) | MIDI (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?5p5wwywn7nein9r) | PDF (http://www.mediafire.com/view/?4vi418vfn8vg3km)]
"Bustin' Up on the Beach" - NasiDe [MUS (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?7acaqv4ih6p9f99) | MIDI (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?d72u6zasq2h8dwp) | PDF (http://www.mediafire.com/view/?07zwthucqzn8scu)]
Deku: Just in general, use more dynamics and articulations. It's the stuff that adds expression into music and really brings it to life!
Olimar: Same things for all the sheets:
-No measure numbers.
-The text boxes are too high up on the sheet.
-Layer work is poor.
-Copyright info is not centered/too big.
-Incorrect rhythm grouping.
Kingdom Hearts: Final Mix
"Dearly Beloved" - NasiDe [MUS (http://www.mediafire.com/?7q07zzg1j6tyi4d) | MIDI (http://www.mediafire.com/?zz849rmandzvzmv) | PDF (http://www.mediafire.com/view/?ry7hjan6jex40g1)]
"Dive Into the Heart -Destati-" - NasiDe [MUS (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?lvj98ihkyczpgoh) | MIDI (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?9n84dxjramsvx3c) | PDF (http://www.mediafire.com/view/?od3cr0tv72dztag)]
"Destiny Islands" - NasiDe [MUS (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?y1besuseia8i858) | MIDI (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?5p5wwywn7nein9r) | PDF (http://www.mediafire.com/view/?4vi418vfn8vg3km)]
"Bustin' Up on the Beach" - NasiDe [MUS (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?7acaqv4ih6p9f99) | MIDI (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?d72u6zasq2h8dwp) | PDF (http://www.mediafire.com/view/?07zwthucqzn8scu)]
Nintendo DS
Kingdom Hearts: Re:Coded
"Destiny Islands" - NasiDe [MUS (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?y1besuseia8i858) | MIDI (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?5p5wwywn7nein9r) | PDF (http://www.mediafire.com/view/?4vi418vfn8vg3km)]
[GCN] Live and Learn (Sonic Adventure 2) [MUS] (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/100322825/NinSheetMusic/Sheet%20Music/Live%20and%20Learn.mus)[MIDI] (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/54269865/NinSheetMusic/Sheet%20Music/Live%20and%20Learn.mid)
Deku: The dynamics seem a bit extreme, tone them back a little. ffff is pretty much "belt the keys as loud as humanly possible" which is certainly not what a performer is going to do when playing this.
Rhythms could do with a little improving. Mostly in places with off-beats (eg the first note in bar 14 starts an 8th note earlier, ie last 8th of bar 13).
Rhythm groupings too. Always aim to highlight beat 3 (ie put a note on it, even if it involves using ties).
K-NiGhT: I understand. I'm going to have to fix links as well because I got a new dropbox. I'll have this done as soon as possible.
Olimar: I thought this looked familiar...
Quote from: Olimar12345 on April 09, 2012, 03:15:02 PMThings to point out:
-Subtitle and arranger need to be Italicized
-Your dynamic choices...are odd...I don't think this song originally uses fortissississimo.
-RH measures that look like 13, 30, 44, 45, 46, 66, 107, 119, 122 are written incorrectly.
K-NiGhT: Lol, I know. I just haven't had time to fix it. Since I do have time, I'll fix it. How do I italicize the subtitle and arranger?
K-NiGhT: Okay, I turned the dynamics down a notch. Is this better?
Deliver Hope (Halo: Reach)
[MUS][MIDI]Deku: I'd suggest experimenting with dynamics, layers and filling out chords in this one. Instead of tieing notes under moving ones, put them in the second layer (eg the B in the opening line).
Not really sure what else I can say, it's just a bit empty. If you've got any specific questions, ask away.
K-NiGhT: I haven't looked at this particular arrangement since I did it. This was my first arrangement, and it wasn't very good anyway, so I think I'll just focus on my other one.
[iOS] Angry Birds Theme (Angry Birds)[MUS] (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/100322825/NinSheetMusic/Sheet%20Music/Angry%20Birds%20Theme.mus)[MIDI] (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/100322825/NinSheetMusic/Sheet%20Music/Angry%20Birds%20Theme.mid)
K-NiGhT: I added this because I only had two, plus I decided to not submit Deliver Hope. I hope that's okay...
[GBA/DS] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Blue/Red Rescue Team - "Great Canyon" - Bespinben (Replacement) Zip (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%20Great%20Canyon%20%28solo%29.zip)
Status: Accepted.
Deku: Ok.
[GBA/DS] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Blue/Red Rescue Team - "Great Canyon (Two Pianos)" - Bespinben Zip (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%20Great%20Canyon.zip)
Status: Accepted.
Olimar: In measure 22, piano 2's LH has an 8th note then two 16th notes. They need to be beamed together to be consistant with the rest of the piece.
Bespinben: Good eye! Thanks for catching that. I'm not sure how that happened in the first place though, I guess Finale just decided to derp on me :P (or maybe I accidentally hit "/"). Fixed.
Deku: Ok
[GBA/DS] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Blue/Red Rescue Team - "Sky Tower" - Bespinben (Replacement) Zip (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%20Sky%20Tower%20%28solo%29.zip)
Status: Accepted.
Olimar: Perfect. However, I'd suggest a double bar line at the coda.
Bespinben: Are you referring to AT the coda? or at the end of the 2 measures thereof? If the latter, then there already is one, so as to signify the oncoming shift of mood. In the case of the former, adding a double barline there wouldn't quite fit the purpose of a double barline, though it would help in distinguishing the coda. I think I'll keep it the way it is for now, unless Deku thinks otherwise also.
Olimar: There should be a double bar line at measure 39. It's a visual thing-it helps the reader find the coda.
Bespinben: Done.
[GBA/DS] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Blue/Red Rescue Team - "Sky Tower (Two Pianos)" - Bespinben Zip (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%20Sky%20Tower.zip)
Status: Accepted.
Olimar: See "Sky Tower".
Bespinben: Done.
[GBA/DS] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Blue/Red Rescue Team - "Friend Area ~ Swamp" - Bespinben Zip (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%20Friend%20Area%20-%20Swamp.zip)
Status: Accepted.
Deku: Ok.
Bespinben: Cool. You liek Picardy thirds :3?
[DS] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon 2: Explorers of Time/Darkness/Sky - "Ending Theme" - Bespinben Zip (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%202%20-%20Ending%20Theme.zip)
Status: Accepted.
Olimar:
-It would look nicer if the 1st and 2nd endings matched height.
-Sometimes the "RH" and "LH" signs get cought in the barlines.
-I'm not familiar with the original, but there are a LOT of accidentals at the end that scare me...
Deku: Maybe bar 84 can go to 6/4 and then get rid of the 3/2 at the end? As for accidentals, I don't know...
Bespinben: 1st & 2nd endings fixed, as well as R.H. and L.H. signs.
As for the ending, allow me to tell you a little about the original song. In the PMD2 Credits, the song loops infinitely between measure 17-70. There is no ending. Additionally, alot of the accompanimient texture is my own interpretation of the original song's percussion, as it is very dependant on snare and timpani for rhythmic support. At measure 71, I try to start gearing towards an ending, hence the "quasi-cadenza". Once you get to measure 84, past that is all an original ending of my own creation.
That said, I have reasons for keeping m. 84+ in 12/8 until the sudden shift to 3/2 in the last 2 measures. The left hand, though not expressly written, is already suggesting the 3/2 with the 6 quarter note chords (1-&, 2-&, 3-&), while the right hand continues to play in 12/8, resulting in an interesting polymeter feel. At the last 2 measures, both hands join together in rhythmic unison in 3/2, giving a sense of finality. As for the accidentals, I just spelled them as how I thought they would be most easily readable.
Olimar: Okay, I see now. Well, I'm not really a fan of original endings, but obviously you did your homework. It is a beautiful peace, and if Deku doesn't mind it then neither do I.
Deku: Ok
Bespinben: Awesome! From the looks of it, it seems like we've just about wrapped up everything in my submissions post, hopefully. *woot*
Maybe the last 4 submissions.
[DS] Final Fantasy III - "Town of Amur" - Thomas Wilson MUS (http://www.mediafire.com/?2qjbuvb85q4v7tj) Midi (http://www.mediafire.com/?lhr4d2421g8fw5y)
Status: Accepted.
Deku: Ok.
[GBA] Golden Sun: The Lost Age - "Alhafra" - Thomas Wilson MUS (http://www.mediafire.com/?yfi4932ux46l6pw) Midi (http://www.mediafire.com/?16fizznn4p1603j)
Status: Accepted.
Deku: Ok.
[GB] Pokemon Red/Blue/Yellow - "Bicycle Theme" - Thomas Wilson MUS (http://www.mediafire.com/?dya13bg4x4crd71) Midi (http://www.mediafire.com/?pbp7c27k3vtl2q7)
Deku: Some of the eighth rests in layer one of the RH are colliding with notes.
[PSP] Final Fantasy VII: Crisis Core - "First Mission" - Thomas Wilson MUS (http://www.mediafire.com/?jdb1wgs7dwd336b) Midi (http://www.mediafire.com/?bwzjyzc1azlu5nz)
Deku: needs some dynamics.
New
[Wii] Channel Themes - Mii Channel
Deku: Minim rests in bars 7 & 17.
Chord in bar 15 from bottom up is B/F#/A/C#.
First chord in bar 23 LH has a C#, not a D#.
Olimar:fixd'
[NDS] Theresia - Opening Song
Status: Accepted.
Deku: OK
[XBLA/PSN] Skullgirls - The Legend of the Skull Heart
Deku: Bar 4 & 12, make it an E, not Fb.
Olimar:fixd'
Replacement
[NDS] LOZPH - Linebeck's Theme
Deku: F#s not Gbs in bars 3 & 7.
Olimar: Wow, idk HOW I missed this one! fixd'
All fixed .ZIP (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/59554832/Olimar12345.zip)
[GBC] Pokemon Gold/Silver - The End
This is the music that plays and loops after the staff roll finishes.
http://www.mediafire.com/?kbz0cyyxw9uj18i (http://www.mediafire.com/?kbz0cyyxw9uj18i)
Olimar:
-"Transcription" needs to be changed to "Arrangement"
-Bpm is broken.
-Url is too big.
-No measure numbers.
-Rhythm grouping errors in measures 3-7, and 9.
[NDS] Mario and Luigi: Bowser's Inside Story - Boss Battle(two pianos) MUS (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/62915593/music/MUS/bowser%27s%20inside%20story%20boss%20battle%20theme.MUS) MID (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/62915593/music/MID/bowser%27s%20inside%20story%20boss%20battle%20theme.mid) PDF (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/62915593/music/bowser%27s%20inside%20story%20boss%20battle%20theme.pdf)
[NDS] Mario and Luigi: Partners in Time - Peach's Castle (two pianos) MUS (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/62915593/music/MUS/partners%20in%20time%20peach%27s%20castle.MUS) MID (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/62915593/music/MID/partners%20in%20time%20peach%27s%20castle.mid) PDF (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/62915593/music/partners%20in%20time%20peach%27s%20castle.pdf)
[Wii] New Super Mario Bros. Wii - Credits (two pianos) MUS (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/62915593/music/MUS/nsmbw%20credits.mus) MID (http://www.mediafire.com/?h05itk36n2iu4fk) PDF (http://www.mediafire.com/?55kqjdyp45kuozq)
[Wii] Super Smash Bros. Brawl - PictoChat (two pianos) MUS (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/62915593/music/MUS/SSBB%20Pictochat.MUS) MID (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/62915593/music/MID/SSBB%20Pictochat.mid) PDF (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/62915593/music/SSBB%20Pictochat.pdf)
Deku: Can you do solo piano arrangements of these? We're aiming to have solo arrangements of all the duets on the site and I don't really want to add more work to that project.
A number of these don't really need to be for 2 pianos (aside from not many people playing them compared to solo arrangements). A little part combining should turn them into quite nice solos.
Greg: I'm working on turning all of my duets into solos at the moment, depending on how soon the update is I may not have time to get to these before the update since school just started and I'll be away for a week! I will have solos of all of these done at some point though.
Wow, it's been a while since I posted on NSM let alone an update lol.
[N64] Banjo-Kazooie - Click Clock Wood (Autumn) Midi (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/57307902/Click%20Clock%20Wood%20Aumtumn.mid) Mus (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/57307902/Click%20Clock%20Wood%20Aumtumn.mus) Pdf (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/57307902/Click%20Clock%20Wood%20Aumtumn.pdf)
[XBOX360] Banjo-Kazooie: Nuts & Bolts - Beating Banjoland Midi (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/57307902/Beating%20Banjo-Land.mid) Mus (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/57307902/Beating%20Banjo-Land.mus) Pdf (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/57307902/Beating%20Banjo-Land.pdf)
[XBOX360] Banjo-Kazooie: Nuts & Bolts - Inside The LogBox Mid (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/57307902/LogBox%20720.mid) Mus (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/57307902/LogBox%20720.mus) Pdf (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/57307902/LogBox%20720.pdf)
[XBOX360] Banjo-Kazooie: Nuts & Bolts - Nutty Acres Action Midi (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/57307902/Click%20Clock%20Wood%20Aumtumn.pdf) Mus (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/57307902/Nutty%20Acres%20CHALLENGE.mus) Pdf (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/57307902/Nutty%20Acres%20CHALLENGE.pdf)
Quote from: Shadoninja on July 20, 2012, 03:54:03 PMOfficial.
K. Fixed.
Olimar: Formatting's off, wrong notes/rhythms, rhythm grouping errors...
Clanker: I think I've fixed it
Deku: All of them or just 1?
Clanker: All of them I hope.
Clanker: Revised them again.
Jompa's stuff:
[NDS] Pokémon Black & White - Relic Song MUS (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/75726060/Relic%20Song/Relic%20Song%20-%20BW%20-%20fixed.mus) MIDI (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/75726060/Relic%20Song/Relic%20Song%20-%20BW%20-%20fixed.mid) PDF (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/75726060/Relic%20Song/Relic%20Song%20-%20BW%20-%20fixed.pdf)
Olimar:
-Remove the extra voices.
-Remove the broken .PNG.
-Title and composer need to be bolded.
-"Calming!" Doesn't make sense. Remove the "!" and it'll be fine.
-Copyright and url need to be size 10.
-The crescendo in measure 13 is redundant. Remove it or have it start earlier.
-Remove the breath marks, they're not in the original.
-The grace notes in measures 17, 21, 25, and 28 seem to all be mordents. Change them.
-Hide measure 17's measure number.
-Copyright owner is not "Pokemon".
-Copyright needs to look like this: Copyright owner[space]©[space]year
Jompa:
-Fixed
Olimar:
-Title needs quotation marks.
-"Piano" needs to be to the left of the first system.
-Copyright and url are too low on the sheet. Move them higher so they'll print.
-The title's a bit on the high side-try to line up the subtitle with the composer name.
Jompa:
-Fixed
No longer a submission!
[GB] Pokémon Gold, Silver & Crystal - Battle! Trainer (Johto) MUS (//http://) MIDI (//http://) PDF (//http://)
Olimar:
-Title and composer need to be bolded.
-Copyright and url need to be size 10.
-Wrong notes and sloppy layer work.
-Copyright owner is not "Pokemon".
Jompa:
-Not gonna bother with this one
[NDS] Pokémon Diamond, Pearl & Platinum - Battle! Rival MUS (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/75726060/Rival%20Battle%20DPP%20submission/Rival%20Battle%20DPP%20Piano.mus) MIDI (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/75726060/Rival%20Battle%20DPP%20submission/Rival%20Battle%20DPP%20Piano.mid) PDF (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/75726060/Rival%20Battle%20DPP%20submission/Rival%20Battle%20DPP%20Piano.pdf)
Olimar:
-Title and composer need to be bolded.
-Copyright and url need to be size 10.
-Remove "repeat forever".
-Copyright owner is not "Pokemon".
-Wrong notes and sloppy layer work.
Jompa:
-Fixed
Olimar:
-"Piano" needs to be to the left of the first system.
-The title's a bit on the high side-try to line up the subtitle with the composer name.
-Put a double bar at measures 7 and 45.
-Bring up the copyright and url a little more.
Jompa:
-Fixed
[NDS] Pokémon Black & White - Driftveil City MUS (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/75726060/Driftveil%20City%20submission/Driftveil%20City%20Pno%20Arrangement.mus) MIDI (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/75726060/Driftveil%20City%20submission/Driftveil%20City%20Pno%20Arrangement.mid) PDF (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/75726060/Driftveil%20City%20submission/Driftveil%20City%20Pno%20Arrangement.pdf)
Olimar:
-Title and composer need to be bolded.
-Copyright and url need to be size 10.
-Subtitle needs to be size 12.
-Remove all other instruments. This is a solo.
-I don't think the chord symbols look good. I recommend taking them out completely. (that's no D+ chord...)
-Copyright owner is not "Pokemon".
-Copyright needs to look like this: Copyright owner[space]©[space]year
Deku: General comment. What's with the other instruments in the playback? We're a piano site...
Jompa:
-Fixed
-No reason, Deku
-Olimar, that is a D+ chord!
Olimar:
-Subtitle needs to be size 12.
-The title's a bit on the high side-try to line up the subtitle with the composer name.
-Bring up the copyright and url a little more.
-No, that isn't a D+ chord at all. The line is a simple, i - iv - V progression. Dominant in Eb- is Bb. In this case, the V chord has a raised 5th, making it a Bb+. Now, why in the world you've chosen to ignore all of your flats and rewrite them as sharps in a D+ chord, I don't know...
Jompa:
-Fixed
-and whatever
DEKU. You are my best friend.
[GCN, WII] The Legend of Zelda: Twilight Princess - Meet Zant [MUS] (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/84164941/NinSheetMusic%20MUS/Meet%20Zant.mus) [MIDI] (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/84164941/NinSheetMusic%20MIDI/Meet%20Zant.mid) [PDF] (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/84164941/NinSheetMusic%20PDF/Meet%20Zant.pdf)
[NDS] The Legend of Zelda: Spirit Tracks - Byrne [MUS] (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/84164941/NinSheetMusic%20MUS/Byrne.mus) [MIDI] (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/84164941/NinSheetMusic%20MIDI/Byrne.mid) [PDF] (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/84164941/NinSheetMusic%20PDF/Byrne.pdf)
[WII] The Legend of Zelda: Skyward Sword - Isle of Songs [MUS] (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/84164941/NinSheetMusic%20MUS/Isle%20of%20Songs.mus) [MIDI] (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/84164941/NinSheetMusic%20MIDI/Isle%20of%20Songs.mid) [PDF] (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/84164941/NinSheetMusic%20PDF/Isle%20of%20Songs.pdf)
Thanks for letting this through!
Quote from: DekuTrombonist on June 10, 2012, 05:46:34 PMAlright.
Thanks
*[DS] Pokemon Mystery Dungeon 2: Explorers of T/D/S - "Time Gear Remix" [MUS] (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%202%20-%20Time%20Gear%20%28Remix%29.mus) [MIDI] (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%202%20-%20Time%20Gear%20%28Remix%29.mid) [PDF] (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%202%20-%20Time%20Gear%20%28Remix%29.pdf)
Status: Accepted.
Deku: Ok
[DS] Pokemon Mystery Dungeon 2: Explorers of T/D/S - "The Gatekeepers" / "Whose Footprint? Whose Footprint? (Sentry Duty)" [MUS] (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%202%20-%20Sentry%20Duty.mus) [MIDI] (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%202%20-%20Sentry%20Duty.mid) [PDF] (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%202%20-%20Sentry%20Duty.pdf)
Olimar:-Sheet needs to be portrait.
-Pick a title-I've seen this song just called "The Gatekeepers".
Deku: The C#s in bar 23 should be C naturals.
*[DS] Pokemon Mystery Dungeon 2: Explorers of T/D/S - "Epilogue Theme" / "Resurrection" [MUS] (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%202%20-%20Epilogue%20Theme.mus) [MIDI] (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%202%20-%20Epilogue%20Theme.mid) [PDF] (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%202%20-%20Epilogue%20Theme.pdf)
Olimar:-Make the second "poco rit." visible.
-Same thing with the titles. "Epilogue Theme" will do.
*[DS] Pokemon Mystery Dungeon 2: Explorers of T/D/S - "Steam Cave" [MUS] (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%202%20-%20Steam%20Cave.mus) [MIDI] (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%202%20-%20Steam%20Cave.mid) [PDF] (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%202%20-%20Steam%20Cave.pdf)
Olimar:-In measure 5, the RH's first note eighth note needs to be changed to 2 sixteenth notes, "B" and "G". It spells out the E minor triad.
*Edited by Bespinben
YAY thank you! :)
[GB] Pokemon R/B/Y - "Pokemon Tower" [.MUS] (http://www.box.com/s/f2veymxzis89qrvp6sep) ~ [.MIDI] (http://www.box.com/s/xdg4ruy9zufxat6hv9r4) ~ [.PDF] (https://www.box.com/s/37470df3eb51569b1f9c)
Status: Accepted.
Olimar:
-The E in measure 4's RH collides with the LH. Remove the one in the LH.
Deku: First bar would look tidier with no ties and pedal markings instead.
Tangy: Whoops, I'd already fixed measure 4 but didn't update the .MUS file... sorry! I updated that and changed the first bar.
Deku: Ok
[N64] The Legend of Zelda: Majora's Mask - "New Wave Bossa Nova" [.MUS] (http://www.box.com/s/kjvz1nxxey53k13l0skm) ~[.MIDI] (http://www.box.com/s/maszhmg87eyk2hs6kt5s) ~ [.PDF] (https://www.box.com/s/03fdf1c2132f8a3482a6)
Status: Accepted.
Deku: Ok
Thanks Deku! :D
[Wii] Wario Land: The Shake Dimension - "Glittertown" - Joel Hands-Otte [ZIP] (http://marioandluigi.wikidot.com/local--files/forum:thread/Glittertown.zip)
Olimar:
-I don't like how you've written the right hand in this piece. With all of the Ottava bassa's, you've made it look like the high parts are low, and the low parts are high. Plus you've made simple intervals harder to sight read. (like in measure 23, you've made that major second look like a minor seventh.) I would suggest you write out the majority of the melody in bass clef, and use clef changes/8va's to move higher. This will help the reader see the direction of the lines.
-At the guitar solo(57-74), not only would it make more sense, but it would be easier to read the RH if you separated the chords from the melody, steming them in different directions.
Fingerz: Fixed!
- I decided to keep most of the melody in the right-hand, just without all the 8vb's. I did that originally to make it easier to read, but I guess it was more annoying that anything else!
- I fixed all your other commands too. :P
Olimar:
-Change the dotted quarter rest in measure 9 into an 8th rest and a quarter rest. Apply this to every other dotted quarter rest in this piece.
-Change the half rest in measures 10, 42, and 76 into two quarter rests.
-The tie in measure 60 is colliding with the flat sign. You need to flip the tie upside down to fix this, but I think thats something you can only do in the full version. If you don't have it, perhaps you could ask Deku nicely if he'd do it for you :J
Fingerz: Just a couple of inquiries:
- Why on earth would I need to change the minim rests to two crotchet rests? I understand why the dotted crotchet rest should be changed, but not them... It just seems like we're wasting more space with rests when we're trying to make it neater and easier for people to look at. :\
- I have the full version of Finale 2011, but they don't make it easy to figure out how to do stuff. So... how do you flip the tie upside down? XD
[Wii] New Super Mario Bros. Wii - "Multiplayer Miss" - Joel Hands-Otte [ZIP] (http://marioandluigi.wikidot.com/local--files/forum:thread/MultiplayerMiss.zip)
Ok.
Fingerz: Deku, did you write that? :P
Deku: Oh...yup
[Wii] Epic Mickey - "Oswald's Theme" - Joel Hands-Otte [ZIP] (http://marioandluigi.wikidot.com/local--files/forum:thread/OswaldsTheme2.zip)
Olimar:
-In the dixieland section (21)It seems really dry...Give that LH some chords on the up-beats at 23.
-31 needs to be quieter-at least piano, maybe even pianissimo. Then I'd bring it back up to mp when the melody comes in.
-Measure 42 needs to be completely silent until the LH comes in. That 7 chord doesn't exist in the original.
-In measures 55-58, I would separate the rolled chords from the melody in the RH and stem them apart. The quarter note rolled chord in that eighth note's spot just looks incorrect.
-Also get rid of all the note collision in the rolled chords on the last page.
-The "F" and "G" 16th notes in the RH of measure 56 are part of the rolled chord. Move them to the dotted 8th note in the LH.
-The rhythm in the LH from 55-58 is a all wrong. Each measure should just be two half notes, just like in the original(the only difference is that in the original they crescendo and diminuendo, two things a piano can't do on held notes)'
-It really would help if you put in courtesy accidentals in measures like 2 and 52.
-That glissando at 36 doesn't really work. Here are my suggestions:
1)make the "B" a quarter note, move it up an octave, and have it gliss up to "G" on beat 1 of measure 37 -OR-
2)make a rolled chord on beat 4 of measure 36, with these notes(from lowest to highest) B-D-F-G, and up an octave.
Fingerz: All fixed, as requested, master!
- I decided to give the bass at the dixieland part octaves to make it more interesting instead of chords, since the notation would look really bad and the jumps would be shocking!
- AAAAND everything else is fixed too! :D
Olimar:
-Change the clef to bass clef from 21-28. Try to avoid using that clef. A pianist is expected to be able to read down to the "G" below the stave, so there's no need for it.
-Your new left hand part isn't any better. The down beats should be going up a fifth, not down a fourth. (ex. mm23 the "C" goes down to "G", when it should go up to "G".
-I have to disagree with you about those up-beat chords-They'd really bring the piece alive, and at that tempo it's no harder than a rag by Joplin. The octaves just don't sound good.
-Move the MP in measure 32 to measure 35, where the melody returns.
-RH figures that have that "8th note-16th rest-16th note" rhythm like measure 23 and 32 should have the notes beamed together. Looks nicer and easier to read.
-Measure 36 is still a problem. Either
1)make the "B" a quarter note, move it up an octave, and have it gliss up to "G" on beat 1 of measure 37 -OR-
2)make a rolled chord on beat 4 of measure 36, with these notes(from lowest to highest) B-D-F-G, and up an octave.
-Measure 55-layer one's notes should all be stemmed in the same direction (up).
[Wii] Mario Kart Wii - "Start Your Engines (Race)" - Joel Hands-Otte [ZIP] (http://marioandluigi.wikidot.com/local--files/forum:thread/StartYourEnginesRace.zip)
Deku: I gotta think about this
Fingerz: What's wrong? Is it too short? It's longer than your 1-Up arrangement. :P
Deku: Change the flat notes to sharp notes to preserve the shape
Fingerz: Done! Hope that's better! :)
Please let this through. I've been waiting forever!
[NGC] Mario Party 7 - Pyramid Park -------------[MUS] (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/93589150/Mario%20Party%207%20-%20Pyramid%20Park.mus) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/93589150/Mario%20Party%207%20-%20Pyramid%20Park.mid) [PDF] (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/93589150/Mario%20Party%207%20-%20Pyramid%20Park.pdf) (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qtqUUuZy-Wg)[YouTube][/url]
[NGC] Kirby Air Ride - Grass --------------------[MUS] (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/93589150/Kirby%20Air%20Ride%20-%20Grass.mus) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/93589150/Kirby%20Air%20Ride%20-%20Grass.mid) [PDF] (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/93589150/Kirby%20Air%20Ride%20-%20Grass.pdf) (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FlOkXTYHiWc)[YouTube][/url]
[NGC] Kirby Air Ride - Sky Sands (Replacement) -[MUS] (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/93589150/Kirby%20Air%20Ride%20-%20Sky%20Sands.mus) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/93589150/Kirby%20Air%20Ride%20-%20Sky%20Sands.mid) [PDF] (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/93589150/Kirby%20Air%20Ride%20-%20Sky%20Sands.pdf) (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lhZIPj9ZaDw)[YouTube][/url]
[N64] Pokémon Snap - Camera Check -----------[MUS] (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/93589150/Pok%C3%A9mon%20Snap%20-%20Camera%20Check.mus) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/93589150/Pok%C3%A9mon%20Snap%20-%20Camera%20Check.mid) [PDF] (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/93589150/Pok%C3%A9mon%20Snap%20-%20Camera%20Check.pdf) (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1qfyNW13fMY)[YouTube][/url]
Submissions are closed.
I probably won't start looking through them properly until Monday week, when my holidays start and exams are over.
One thing I noticed (I know submissions are closed) is that on one of my previous uploads "In the Hall of the Zombie King" from Banjo-Tooie, is that the first two left hand chords on the sheet are G,C,D sharp, then F,G sharp,F. I just found out that the second chord is actually G sharp,C,F. Also, the 9th measure left hand part is supposed to be the same as the 5th measure, but on the sheet it isn't. I was wondering if you could possibly fix these (minor) problems in the update?
I think that would count as a replacement. :-\
Those sound like two small changes, there's no way that's a full replacement.
If it was, site will fail to get better faster.
Right. Ok then.
Quote from: Jompa on June 11, 2012, 05:23:19 AMJompa's stuff:
*Concerning Relic Song; I'm not 100% sure if that's the official name, though I am somewhat sure. It's either Relic Song or Meloetta's Song, but I think it's safe to go with Relic Song.
Ok, the official "Forgotten Black and White Tracks" album lists this song as "Ancient Times", not Relic Song, nor Meloetta's Song. So it's not safe at all to go with a title if you don't even know if it's the correct one.
Here you have the proof: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yYEbCwuR2Mo
Do you have more proof than a youtube link? I can easliy upload a song and title it whatever I want. Not saying you're wrong, just that youtube is not a credible source to use in arguments.
Quote from: Olimar12345 on June 18, 2012, 01:15:37 PMDo you have more proof than a youtube link? I can easliy upload a song and title it whatever I want. Not saying you're wrong, just that youtube is not a credible source to use in arguments.
My bad, I've just read the full OSTProject article. http://www.ostproject.co.cc/about/staff/419-bw
I've downloaded the "Forgotten Tracks" from there. I really thought it was an official album. lol
Anyways, the tracklist is:
01 United Nations
02 Battle! World Champion
03 N's Reshiram
04 N's Zekrom
05 Game Freak Logo
06 Caught a Pokémon!
07 Obtained Berry
08 Ancient Times
09 Zekrom Awakened
09 Reshiram Awakened
The titles make sense, nevertheless. :-\
Meh, I think all are correct, since there is no official name yet.
There is no official name for it yet, and if we're naming the songs after what YouTube videos call them, then there are more videos calling it Relic Song than Ancient Times.
By the way, I already fixed my sheet, and I can upload it if that's ok (even though I know submissions are closed).
Never mind. I found another chord problem. I'll just wait 'til the next update to put it as a replacement.
I am actually going through these now, so remember to check back once in a while ;)
Quote from: DekuTrombonist on June 27, 2012, 04:41:01 PMI am actually going through these now, so remember to check back once in a while ;)
Huzzah!!!
Deku, everything is fixed now. Please take a look. :)
EDIT: Thanks!
[GBA]Pokémon Ruby & Sapphire - "Battle! Gym Leader" [MUS] (http://www.mediafire.com/?rdhrhtqsd1i4rb1)[MIDI] (http://www.mediafire.com/?681nsqi9ihdheft)[PDF] (http://www.mediafire.com/?j3ngerqnzij0xah)
[GBA]Pokémon Ruby & Sapphire - "Littleroot Town" [MUS] (http://www.mediafire.com/?sh90t7cv48adszy)[MIDI] (http://www.mediafire.com/?92ndwvb0api1vsn)[PDF] (http://www.mediafire.com/?301z7o04l6m0xy3)
[NDS]Professor Layton and the Curious Village - "Professor Layton's Theme" (Replacement) [MUS] (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?4ad8qnabaqoavwj)[MIDI] (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?8n89t86xp2y894d)[PDF] (http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?nf5xqw31azj6rjd)
[NDS]Professor Layton and the Last Specter - "Calm Afternoon" [MUS] (http://www.mediafire.com/?iakrpa1wgwxeu1c)[MIDI] (http://www.mediafire.com/?xby32yb0wh4xj7s)[PDF] (http://www.mediafire.com/?zxfe7akvneqc5uj)
Fuck, submissions are closed. Oh well....
Wish I had made my post sooner...this is taking foreeevvveeerrrr....
It's only been a month haha.
NSM is like the airport. Expect delays. Anything else is a pleasant surprise.
And once you're up in the air, your sheets will soar forever...
Bahahaha that's awesome
Quote from: pumpy_heart on July 13, 2012, 07:04:39 AMNSM is like the airport. Expect delays. Anything else is a pleasant surprise.
And once you're up in the air, your sheets will soar forever...
You should post that on our Facebook page. :D
Quote from: Clanker37 on June 10, 2012, 07:49:32 AMConcerning the Nuts & Bolts titles. Should they be named after what the Offical Soundtrack calls them or general name for them given by fans? Currently we use the fan names
Official.
Bump
I'm the one always talking about being patient....
I must confess even I'm getting a bit edgy.. :-\
*sigh*
Bump.
Skyward Sword - Ballad of the Goddess
Quote from: DanJRio on August 02, 2012, 03:08:31 PMSkyward Sword - Ballad of the Goddess
What about it?
Haha sorry, I didn't mean to post that yet, I can't figure out how to attach the files for my submission, I arranged it and all, I just don't know how to post them.
Quote from: DekuTrombonist on June 14, 2012, 12:42:06 AMSubmissions are closed.
Also, we have like, four arrangments of that song.
Quote from: DanJRio on August 02, 2012, 03:21:45 PMHaha sorry, I didn't mean to post that yet, I can't figure out how to attach the files for my submission, I arranged it and all, I just don't know how to post them.
Best thing to do for now would be to make your own thread for all your arrangements. I can help you figure how to make links to your files and whatnot.
Quote from: K-NiGhT on August 02, 2012, 03:40:20 PMAlso, we have like, four arrangments of that song.
He's right. If you want to submit it in the future, make sure yours is better than the one currently on-site, and make it a replacement.
Quote from: DanJRio on August 02, 2012, 03:08:31 PMSkyward Sword - Ballad of the Goddess
*Takes a shot*
^mmd
Thanks! That would be much appreciated :D
Damn, it's too late for me to learn arranging for piano. :'(
So jealous to you people.
Quote from: FSM-Reapr on August 03, 2012, 10:35:23 AMDamn, it's too late for me to learn arranging for piano. :'(
So jealous to you people.
It's never too late!
I don't have time! DX I should make an example of my day. Here's a basic day:
6am: wake up and basic morning stuff
7am-3pm: Sibelius Academy
3:30pm-6pm: Piano lessons, given by me(kinda my work)
6:30pm: back home
6:30-9pm: FSM/planning next day's piano lessons/schoolwork/girlfriend
9pm: go sleep
Sooooo...how're things, Deku? ;)
Would anyone mind if I went through the subs tomorrow? With my OCD for formatting I could help get things going again. :/
Go for it.
Bump, well, kinda.
Oh wow I forgot about this. I decided to practice my horn instead that day, lol.
I suggest splitting this submission group into two sets. This is one of the largest threads in a while. That would make the thread look less intimidating to our uploaders, it would mean having an earlier update, and it really wouldn't affect people in the second set since they still have their spots-- it's just a matter of making a site news post before examining their posts. No additional submissions would be accepted onto the second set.
We really need this update to HAPPEN ALREADY. Two months+ is NOT an acceptable time to wait for an update as they're "supposed" to happen weekly.
Someone get on the ball already.
The previous update took nearly 4 months (February 15th - June 9th). Also, it is worth noting that, according to user profiles, DekuTrombonist hasn't been on NSM since July 16th.
I support the motion suggested by spitllama.
I say we get more updaters to help them. Don't get me wrong, Deku and Winter are awesome. But I think any pair would feel a little swamped having to go through this many submissions.
I think they just don't care, are lazy, or have things that they prioritize as more important. I can't think of another reason it would be delayed more than a month tops.
Seriously, I hate to sound harsh, but I don't care how long the last one took. Four months is even more ridiculous than two months. Making Winter and DekuTrumbonist mods was supposed to help for more than, like, six months apiece.
Ordinarily I would disagree with blueflower's statement. More mods usually doesn't fix a problem.
However, let's look at our current list of potential updaters (i.e. not TWG/chatroom mods, etc.)-
Nintendude73
KefkaticFanatic
DekuTrombonist
winterkid09
Nakah
Concerto
HugoMeister ...?
JaMaHa ...?
The issue isn't that they don't care or that they're lazy, it's that they aren't here anymore! The majority of updaters just aren't active members of the community. It's hardly fair that DekuTrombonist and Winter get the beef of our complaints simply because they're the only ones trying :P The problem we face now is that we have an abundance of interested and eager arrangers (which is fantastic!) and a not-quite-large-enough support group behind them.
However, I should also note that I had a brief convo with JaMaHa a while back. He agreed that updates which take months to complete are concerning. However, the site is still doing its job-- providing free VGM sheet music for visitors.
Yes, it is doing it's job... but without an updated music library, people will only come so many times.
I have a suggestion--why not make it one submission per arranger per update? This would make it way simpler to update on a weekly basis, no? It won't get the job done as fast, but at least it will be a steady flow of new sheet music.
Quote from: SlowPokemon on August 13, 2012, 05:51:39 PMYes, it is doing it's job... but without an updated music library, people will only come so many times.
I have a suggestion--why not make it one submission per arranger per update? This would make it way simpler to update on a weekly basis, no? It won't get the job done as fast, but at least it will be a steady flow of new sheet music.
That would work, but it still doesn't solve the fact that our mods aren't doing their job.
Quote from: SlowPokemon on August 13, 2012, 05:51:39 PMI have a suggestion--why not make it one submission per arranger per update? This would make it way simpler to update on a weekly basis, no? It won't get the job done as fast, but at least it will be a steady flow of new sheet music.
This is a brilliant idea. The updaters don't get swamped, and the arrangers can pour their best efforts into a single song of their choice each week. I seriously think we should implement this.
I would love to do updates. Just sayin'.
PM JaMaHa about the situation and let him know you're interested in becoming an updater. It's worth a shot.
Quote from: SlowPokemon on August 13, 2012, 06:06:42 PMPM JaMaHa about the situation and let him know you're interested in becoming an updater. It's worth a shot.
I've already tried that.
We'd make a pretty coll updating team, shadowkirby. ;)
I think Olimar would be a great potential updater. His sheets are consistently top-notch: they reflect the original well (good transcription), are visually and aesthetically pleasing (well-formatted), and show an understanding of pianistic techniques and limitations (playable). These are qualities I strive for in my own arrangements, and I believe additional potential updaters should likewise exemplify such qualities in their arranging.
I can't speak so much for shadowkirby because, looking his arrangement thread, he has only done 3 arrangements to date. As such, I can't make a valid assessment of his arranging qualities. I did, though, find his arrangement of Wigglytuff's Guild from Pokemon Mystery Dungeon 2 severely lacking, as compared to the original.
Quote from: blueflower999 on August 13, 2012, 05:52:49 PMit still doesn't solve the fact that our mods aren't doing their job.
This. Which is why I wholeheartedly support the Olimar updater suggestion.
Quote from: Bespinben on August 13, 2012, 06:50:53 PMI can't speak so much for shadowkirby because, looking his arrangement thread, he has only done 3 arrangements to date. As such, I can't make a valid assessment of his arranging qualities. I did, though, find his arrangement of Wigglytuff's Guild from Pokemon Mystery Dungeon 2 severely lacking, as compared to the original.
I agree with this, not anything against shadowkirby, but Olimar has had a LOT of time to prove himself as a reliable arranger who knows a lot about music. I don't mean to impose on or insult shadowkirby, but that's the reason I think JaMaHa might respond favorably to Olimar.
I wan 2 be updater I am best arranger EVAR!!!
[/sarcasm]
but yeah, I definitely agree with the general idea.
I'm relatively new here, but I think if we used both Slow's idea for one arrangement per member per week, plus making senior arrangers like Olimar and others (Bespinben?) mods, a great deal of the problem would be solved.
I agree with Slow.
*backtracking* I think we should still split this submission set. It's way too large and we can't do 1 submission/arranger until next time.
Err, It might be my english, but I didn't understand anything of the whole "splitting" thing, Spitllama.?
Pretty much take what submissions we have now and put a line up the middle. Then there are two reasonable updates instead of one ominous and even later update.
If we do that, why don't we have two people working, one on each. Deku and Winter could do it, or Olimar.
or Shadowkirby
because I've arranged more than Winter
No.
Oh, I see. Then whoever's in charge, DO IT!
If you guys don't mind the opinion of a newb...
I don't think having one arrangement per submission will really work. All that'll do is give us smaller updates that still take forever.
I think the main problem is that the updaters aren't active, so promoting some people should take care of it. In my opinion.
Quote from: Eeko on August 14, 2012, 03:09:11 PMIf you guys don't mind the opinion of a newb...
I don't think having one arrangement per submission will really work. All that'll do is give us smaller updates that still take forever.
I think the main problem is that the updaters aren't active, so promoting some people should take care of it. In my opinion.
One arr per person would be a quarter of what we do now. This update is a month or so late, which is quadruple as much time as it should take. If this update takes any longer than this, then it'd be worth it as long as the one arr per person updates are on time. I really hope I made sense.
But I really do agree - the best thing to do would be promoting some people who'd actually do the job.
I support 1 per. The updaters can choose any of my current submissions if this gets implemented this round.
Quote from: Jompa on August 14, 2012, 03:21:11 PMOne arr per person would be a quarter of what we do now. This update is a month or so late, which is quadruple as much time as it should take. If this update takes any longer than this, then it'd be worth it as long as the one arr per person updates are on time. I really hope I made sense.
But I really do agree - the best thing to do would be promoting some people who'd actually do the job.
I get that, but If the updaters aren't here, it doesn't matter if it's one arrangement or four.
If that makes sense.
The main idea behind my suggestion wasn't to get interest in updating--new mods always update with a frenzy. Mine is to prevent them from getting bored, or looking at the massive amounts of sheets to upload and thinking "eh...takes too long." One sheet per person would make that aspect a lot more manageable.
Good news guys, I got a PM back from Jamaha about the Olimar-for-updater motion.
He says he's considering it, but he's still got a few busy weeks left of doing work and studies. Once that's done, then he'll see what he can do about the situation.
Bespinben and Olimar 4 updaters.
lol
Lol, we'll be the new winter and deku :P (No offense to winter and deku, of course)
Well if Bespinben's leaving...we should probably pick someone different to do it. Possible canditates I think would be good:
•pumpy_heart
•SlowPokemon(?)
•K-NiGhT
Is all I can think of right now. I just had like, 3 others pop into my head, but I forgot who they were :|
Uhhh.....shit....errrr....sorry. I'm back now.
Yeah, I think we could do with another updater. I can't really keep doing this by myself (as you can all see...)
I'll get this update done. Then I might give the 1 submission per person thing a shot. I should be able to make that happen weekly for a little while, at least until JaMaHa gets some free time. I'm running short on motivation right now.
Edit: Tomorrow, that is. I'm going to bed now.
Hi there. I'm Looking forward to your next post of the month :)
XD oh goodness
bump
After 2 days?
Bump.
How's it going Deku?
Winter is missing too, it seems...
*sigh* depressing
Woah, ease up a little....
I can't help it if my life decides to cave in around me.
I sympathesize with you Deku. It's why we want another updater to help you when stuff like that happens. That, of course, depends on if Jamaha feels that adding another updater is necessary.
Quote from: DekuTrombonist on August 24, 2012, 12:35:28 AMWoah, ease up a little....
I can't help it if my life decides to cave in around me.
Yeah, didn't mean to pressure you.
Got an audition today and I'll be out by 2:00pm. No other plans till Monday. Just sayin'.
Quote from: Olimar12345 on August 24, 2012, 09:28:01 AMGot an audition today and I'll be out by 2:00pm. No other plans till Monday. Just sayin'.
Do it.
Quote from: Bespinben on August 24, 2012, 01:00:02 AMI sympathesize with you Deku. It's why we want another updater to help you when stuff like that happens. That, of course, depends on if Jamaha feels that adding another updater is necessary.
It shouldn't even be a question of whether, it should be a question of who and how soon.
I want to take this opportunity to thank all of you who use dropbox. You guys are the best! :')
I've had this idea for a while and would like to hear some of y'all's thoughts about it:
What if updates were done by arranger?(kind of like the feature arranger thing we used to do) Say everyone prettied up a single arrangement, then posted it in the submission thread. Then, whomever had the best formatting(and least mistakes) would get like 10 of their sheets in an exclusive update. This way we can get more of the clean sheets off the forum and on the site, while others can correct residual issues. Any thoughts?
Quote from: Olimar12345 on September 04, 2012, 01:06:34 PMI've had this idea for a while and would like to hear some of y'all's thoughts about it:
What if updates were done by arranger?(kind of like the feature arranger thing we used to do) Say everyone prettied up a single arrangement, then posted it in the submission thread. Then, whomever had the best formatting(and least mistakes) would get like 10 of their sheets in an exclusive update. This way we can get more of the clean sheets off the forum and on the site, while others can correct residual issues. Any thoughts?
Sounds good; the only problem is that the arranger's other sheets might not be as clean and correctly formatted as the one they submitted.
Yeah, but he/she would at least be capable of cleaning them up to our standards.
I don't like that idea at all.
Me neither. That kind of removes the community aspect from updates.
All my stuff is fixed btw.
The idea sounds neat-ish, but prone to bias over what might be considered "the best one". If any new idea should be implented, I think it should be the "1 submission per arranger per update" we discussed earlier.
I'm just trying to find a way to separate the sheets good from bad. I'm already getting tired of giving deku the same list of corrections, give or take a few:
-Title missing quotation marks
-Title/composer not bolded
-arranger/subtitle not italicised
-no bpm
-copyright/url missing/not size 10/not centered
-no measure numbers
This is before I even look at the music...
Direct them to the "whatvshould my sheet look like" thread instead of explaining out everything.
@olimar- I can see how that can be a bother. Part of the problem I see is the arranger being extremely sluggish in fixing the errors in their sheets (ex: Ganondorf has yet to edit in a response to the errors in his sheets). Perhaps in future submissions updates, you could implement a system in which sheets that contain basic formatting errors are immediately disqualified (just a thought).
I think the problem is that when the submission thread opens, people hurry to post here before looking at the "what should my sheet look like" threadK-night...
What Bespinben said. There's really no excuse to not have that stuff done. It's listed right there in the first post. And you haven't even reached a lot of the new arrangers' stuff yet o_o That could be bad.
At the sluggish piece, perhaps you could implement time limits for both arrangers and updaters (ex/ one week for updaters to finish reviewing and making comments, then 24 hours after that week for arrangers to make all of their fixes)? Otherwise they're just pushed to the next update (I know a similar thing has happened with Bloop and Slow when they didn't come back to their posts for a while).
EDIT: Regardless Olimar, they've had months to make the changes that meet criterion after creating their initial posts :P
Well, I've heard a lot of good ideas. Bespinben, I like you're idea of imediate disqualification. Spit, your previous post is so full of win and I completely agree. As Kefka put it:
Quote from: KefkaticFanatic on August 29, 2012, 11:49:29 PMNobody has any excuse for not properly formatting a sheet. It's not even close to hard.
As for where I am in the update, I'm just now finishing up looking over Jompa's stuff. I don't think Deku has posted all of my comments yet, though.
Yeahhhh that's exactly right. How about this.
If a sheet is formatted incorrectly, or is an inadequate arrangement, you notify the arranger, and if the piece isn't fixed before the update takes place, just don't post the sheet.
Quote from: SlowPokemon on September 04, 2012, 03:46:23 PMIf a sheet is formatted incorrectly, or is an inadequate arrangement, you notify the arranger, and if the piece isn't fixed before the update takes place, just don't post the sheet.
I think that would work... PM the submitter and give them a deadline to fix and resubmit their sheet(s).
Quote from: SlowPokemon on September 04, 2012, 03:46:23 PMYeahhhh that's exactly right. How about this.
If a sheet is formatted incorrectly, or is an inadequate arrangement, you notify the arranger, and if the piece isn't fixed before the update takes place, just don't post the sheet.
Correct me if I'm wrong, but I think the basis behind Olimar's suggestion was to reduce the number of crappy sheets we have to look through in the first place.
I don't like the idea of one person being deemed the sole arranger for that update. Not at all.
Well I feel bad for people like Bespinben and Pumpy who always have top-notch sheets. Why should they have to wait on all of the newbs or returning members that still don't get it/aren't at that level yet?
Not really related to the discussion, but I was wondering if, along with the submissions, the LoZ: Link's Awakening replacements Shado, Olimar, Pumpy, and I did for FtS project could be uploaded to the main site during the update?
Well...how about this.
It's the updaters' jobs to quality check. That's unavoidable.
However. If an arrangement is inadequate, simply mark "rejected," in which case they can alter it and submit it for quality check for the NEXT update to avoid continued hassle. As well, instead of "Submissions for next update" we have "submissions for [specific date]." BY THAT SPECIFIC DATE, whatever sheets have been approved (regardless of whether you've gotten through all of them) will be posted.
Define "inadequate." Everyone gets some sort of suggestion on their sheets. Otherwise I love the idea of the deadline thing. Honestly viewers don't care how big the update is, just that we're more consistent.
Done fixing my stuff.
Olimar y u skip mine? D:
Quote from: TheZeldaPianist275 on June 11, 2012, 06:21:40 AMFeel free to do whatever you want to the .MUS, it really gets messed up when I import from MuseScore to Notepad....
This scared me off...
I saw you guys edited Dusk's posts. Since I'm the one who wrote the MUS files for him, I will edit his arrangements as needed for submission:
Quote from: Dusk on June 11, 2012, 06:40:30 AM[DS] Pokemon Mystery Dungeon 2: Explorers of T/D/S - "The Gatekeepers" / "Whose Footprint? Whose Footprint? (Sentry Duty)"
Olimar:
-Sheet needs to be portrait.
-Pick a title-I've seen this song just called "The Gatekeepers".
Deku: The C#s in bar 23 should be C naturals.
Thanks for catching that transcription error. Fixed.
Also, I fixed the page layout issue. I think Dusk had it set to landscape so as to accomodate all the alternate titles for this song, but thanks to PMD2's expansion "Explorers of Sky" (which has a soundtest), there are now official titles. As such, I simply called it "The Gatekeepers" as the soundtest calls it, allowing me the room to readjust for portrait style.
Here are the edited files: [ZIP] (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%202%20-%20Sentry%20Duty.zip)
Quote from: Dusk on June 11, 2012, 06:40:30 AM*[DS] Pokemon Mystery Dungeon 2: Explorers of T/D/S - "Epilogue Theme" / "Resurrection"
Olimar:
-Make the second "poco rit." visible.
-Same thing with the titles. "Epilogue Theme" will do.
Made the suggested changes.
Here are the edited files: [ZIP] (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%202%20-%20Epilogue%20Theme.zip)
Quote from: Dusk on June 11, 2012, 06:40:30 AM*[DS] Pokemon Mystery Dungeon 2: Explorers of T/D/S - "Steam Cave"
Olimar:
-In measure 5, the RH's first note eighth note needs to be changed to 2 sixteenth notes, "B" and "G". It spells out the E minor triad.
Nope. That's not what the melody does in the original.
Quote from: Bespinben on September 08, 2012, 08:21:46 PMNope. That's not what the melody does in the original.
you know what: Now that I listen to it, I think I'm hearing that second-layer part. That part starts on beat 1 in the original, doesn't it? :P
The 2nd layer in measure 5 does indeed start at the beginning of the measure, but I omitted the first strike to reduce notational clutter and allow for ease of voicing. It's so soft at the beginning of the crescendo of the 2nd voice anyway that my omission feels natural.
I also applaud you for looking up the original song. It bugs me just a little when someone reviewing an arrangement says "I'm not familiar with the original, but..."
done fixing my stuff.
Quote from: Jompa on September 09, 2012, 01:36:24 AMdone fixing my stuff.
All your copyrights are way too high now lol XD
Quote from: Bespinben on September 09, 2012, 01:52:58 AMAll your copyrights are way too high now lol XD
I don't care unless Olimar tells me to change anything
Quote from: Olimar12345 on September 08, 2012, 07:48:54 PMThis scared me off...
LOL! It's just a couple minor formatting issues, nothing too bad. I'm sure someone with a better knowledge of Finale will be able to easily tell me how to fix it.
Quote from: TheZeldaPianist275 on September 09, 2012, 11:36:25 AMLOL! It's just a couple minor formatting issues, nothing too bad. I'm sure someone with a better knowledge of Finale will be able to easily tell me how to fix it.
They are not minor and can be fixed in any version of finale.
Every sheet on the site ideally should look pretty much identical. It makes it more obvious that they came from the same source.
Again, I'll quote Kefka:
Quote from: KefkaticFanatic on August 29, 2012, 11:49:29 PMNobody has any excuse for not properly formatting a sheet. It's not even close to hard.
@Jompa:
[NDS] Pokémon Black & White - Driftveil City
-Subtitle needs to be size 12
It is! It's allways been!
Quote from: Jompa on September 09, 2012, 12:56:41 PMIt is! It's allways been!
I just opened it and it's not-go take a look. They should be the same size as the arranger/composer.
Quote from: MoldyPond on September 09, 2012, 12:58:58 PMThen why are you even here?
don't put words in my mouth, you took that straight out of context - I meant, since olimar told me to move the copyrights up, i did, I'm not moving them down because bespin told me to
Quote from: Olimar12345 on September 09, 2012, 01:01:40 PMI just opened it and it's not-go take a look. They should be the same size as the arranger/composer.
on my computer they're both 12 ? uh, idk why :P
Quote from: Jompa on September 09, 2012, 01:01:54 PMdon't put words in my mouth, you took that straight out of context - I meant, since olimar told me to move the copyrights up, i did, I'm not moving them down because bespin told me to
Bespinben is a senior member who has always provided quality sheets. If he says something's wrong, take his advice. Now, in "rival battle", it does seem a bit high.
Quote from: Jompa on September 09, 2012, 01:03:55 PMon my computer they're both 12 ? uh, idk why :P
Is that the one you uploaded?
Quote from: Olimar12345 on September 09, 2012, 01:06:27 PMIs that the one you uploaded?
yes, I open my sheets through this site.
Quote from: Olimar12345 on September 09, 2012, 01:04:57 PMBespinben is a senior member who has always provided quality sheets. If he says something's wrong, take his advice. Now, in "rival battle", it does seem a bit high.
You're the one in charge right now - I'm not going against what you've said, when someone else says the exact opposite, that was the point - but if you think I should change it again in rival battle, then ok.
Well, we just had a little goldilocks moment there :P (it's too low! now in't too high! now it's juuuuust right!)
As for the subtitle issue:
(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg839.imageshack.us%2Fimg839%2F9125%2Fsdfghnj.png&hash=a03b1d48071f0a9c4d632e2bc38ed45367e706dc) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/839/sdfghnj.png/)
Quote from: Olimar12345 on September 09, 2012, 01:22:57 PMWell, we just had a little goldilocks moment there :P (it's too low! now in't too high! now it's juuuuust right!)
As for the subtitle issue:
(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg839.imageshack.us%2Fimg839%2F9125%2Fsdfghnj.png&hash=a03b1d48071f0a9c4d632e2bc38ed45367e706dc) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/839/sdfghnj.png/)
know what - I'll deal with this tomorrow. Good night fellas.
Quote from: Olimar12345 on September 09, 2012, 01:22:57 PMWell, we just had a little goldilocks moment there :P (it's too low! now in't too high! now it's juuuuust right!)
Is relevant:
Omg the face
Quote from: Olimar12345 on September 09, 2012, 01:22:57 PMAs for the subtitle issue:
(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg839.imageshack.us%2Fimg839%2F9125%2Fsdfghnj.png&hash=a03b1d48071f0a9c4d632e2bc38ed45367e706dc) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/839/sdfghnj.png/)
I would also recommend putting the subtitle in the same text box as the title and the arranger in the same text box as the composer.
Bump!
Three more arrangers to check! You guys can do it!!!
Oh, I've just realized, are Pumpy's sheets gonna be submitted even if he left? Or someone could take care of correcting his sheets if neccessary, I dunno.
Quick! Someone check mine! I HAVE SPARE TIME (for once XD)!!
I'll see if I can finish them tomorrow.
[GBA/NDS] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Blue/Red Rescue Team - "Sky Tower" - Bespinben
~That should be under replacements.
...and Deku, I'm responsible for Dusk's submissions, so refer to page 10 for the edits I made on them.
...for the record, I've pm'd deku about everyone except JDMEK...and been checking this topic at least 17 times a day....where are you, deku?
I've arranged a piece from Minecraft entitled Subwoofer Lullaby. http://www.mediafire.com/?39j8dy64gpypkm4
"arranged by IanChap"
The download is just a .MUS file. Tell me if I need to add any other downloads.
Olimar: I'll add your feedback when I get on a computer, editing posts is too awkward on a phone :P
Would it be possible for me to send in the MUS for Lockes theme?
Quote from: SocialFox on September 24, 2012, 01:31:10 AMWould it be possible for me to send in the MUS for Lockes theme?
No.
Quote from: SocialFox on September 24, 2012, 01:31:10 AMWould it be possible for me to send in the MUS for Lockes theme?
Yeah, Deku already has a lot on his plate even without people sending in submissions after they're closed. Sorry.
Errr... bump. How close are we?
I actually pm'd deku earlier today with more comments to post. We're pretty much there with the exception of you musescore users. :-\ All of yall's .MUS files are awful.
Can they open their own musecores in Notepad and edit there? That way you and Deku don't have to do it?
WHY YES. YES THEY CAN, HINTITY HINT HINT.
Okay, seriously, you should not be fixing ANYONE'S submissions.
That is THEIR fucking responsibility, NOT yours, and it's just stupid if updates are held up simply because the moderators have to fix their submissions.
IF THEY DON'T FIX THEIR OWN SUBMISSIONS, DON'T INCLUDE THEM IN THIS UPDATE.
I seriously think that is the best course of action. No second chances, even. Tell them what needs to be fixed, and to submit it for the next update. If updates become weekly, this will not be a big deal or a long wait for them!!! If we do the idea of fewer submission per user per update, and don't accept inadequate files without waiting for somebody to fix them, we could have weekly updates and some sheets that were made after May could actually get on the site.
/rant
I agree with Slow on this one... I mean, eventually I'd like to submit something to the site. But it's like doing an assignment for school - it's YOUR work, so shouldn't you make sure its perfect?
I mean this way, as Slow said, it'd be easier and quicker to update. Which would be nice.
/throws in two cents and scurries away
/backs up nebbles and slow
Well then, let this be a warning to you musescore users. I'm not saying that you have to convert to finale, but you will be responsible for providing .MUS files up to par with the rest of us.
Quote from: Olimar12345 on October 04, 2012, 08:25:28 AMWell then, let this be a warning to you musescore users. I'm not saying that you have to convert to finale, but you will be responsible for providing .MUS files up to par with the rest of us.
Agreed. I do need some help with NotePad though. I'll look around for instructions online.
EDIT: Fixed some of the obvious problems.
I haven't had time to fix my submissiobs, so you can take them off this update. I'll fix them before I submit again.
The term 'update' seems more and more legendary each day... :P
If I coud do it, we'd be on like our 3rd from this one.
This is why I wonder why Kefka is a mod, yet does nothing, and JMH refuses to demote him; yet Olimar is more than capable as an updater, and doesn't get the power to do so.
Winter and DekuTrombonist alone are pretty much useless to us at this point (not themselves; as far as being updaters go). There is not a single active updater.
Quote from: SlowPokemon on October 11, 2012, 07:12:37 PMWinter and DekuTrombonist alone are pretty much useless to us at this point (not themselves; as far as being updaters go). There is not a single active updater.
I wouldn't say that. In fact, Deku's last edit was only 24 days ago.
Please read. This is very important. This does not concern the current update.
I will be gone 2 years, from October 24th, 2012 to October 24th, 2014. During that time, I would like someone post the arrangements I have listed below on my behalf when a submissions update rolls around. Please submit my arrangements in the order given below, from the top of the list to the bottom. Upon submission, I give permission to the submissions quality-assurance team (Deku and Olimar currently) to modify my arrangements in order to correct music theory errors and other aesthetic issues. I do not permit any changes to the transcription itself.
[DS] Pokémon Black/White - "Dragonspiral Tower" - Bespinben Zip (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/BW%20-%20Dragonspiral%20Tower.zip)
[DS] Pokémon Diamond/Pearl/Platinum - "Mt. Coronet" - Bespinben Zip (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/DPPt%20-%20Mt.%20Coronet.zip)
[GBA] Pokémon Ruby/Sapphire/Emerald - "Title: Main Theme" - Bespinben Zip (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/Emerald%20Title%20Theme.zip)
- *Note - Layout MUST be Landscape, so as to preserve the 4-bar hypermeter. Do not modify sheet to change to portrait, it WON'T work.
*Note 2 - For those concerned about playability: Quote from: Dusk on September 20, 2012, 08:24:37 AMI practice for some weeks your arrangement of "Title: Main Theme" from Pokémon Ruby/Sapphire/Emerald.
It's playable... ...in half-quick tempo and with the omitting of some notes/chords :D.
One day, I'll can play this song. :)
[GB] Pokémon Gold/Silver/Crystal - "Johto Wild Pokémon Battle" - Bespinben Zip (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/GSC%20-%20Johto%20Wild%20Pok%C3%A9mon%20Battle.zip)
[N64] Star Fox 64 - "Start Demo 1 (Starfox Main Theme)" - Bespinben Zip (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/Starfox%2064%20-%20Start%20Demo%201%20%28Starfox%20Main%20Theme%29.zip)
[DS] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon 2: Explorers of Time/Darkness/Sky - "Battle Against Dusknoir" - Bespinben Zip (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%202%20-%20Battle%20Against%20Dusknoir.zip)
[DS] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon 2: Explorers of Time/Darkness/Sky - "On the Beach at Dusk" - Bespinben Zip (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%202%20-%20Bubbles%20Shining%20Over%20the%20Sea.zip)
[DS] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon 2: Explorers of Time/Darkness/Sky - "Goodnight" - Bespinben Zip (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%202%20-%20Goodnight.zip)
[DS] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon 2: Explorers of Time/Darkness/Sky - "Guildmaster Wigglytuff" - Bespinben Zip (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%202%20-%20Guildmaster%20Wigglytuff.zip)
[DS] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon 2: Explorers of Time/Darkness/Sky - "Dialga's Fight to the Finish!" - Bespinben Zip (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%202%20-%20Primal%20Dialga%20%28Solo%29.zip)
[DS] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon 2: Explorers of Time/Darkness/Sky - "Temporal Tower" - Bespinben (Replacement) Zip (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%202%20-%20Temporal%20Tower.zip)
[DS] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon 2: Explorers of Time/Darkness/Sky - "Time Gear" - Bespinben Zip (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%202%20-%20Time%20Gear%20Theme%20%28Fogbound%20Lake%29.zip)
[DS] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon 2: Explorers of Time/Darkness/Sky - "Top Menu Theme" - Bespinben Zip (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%202%20-%20Top%20Menu%20Theme.zip)
[DS/GBA] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Blue/Red Rescue Team - "Awakening" - Bespinben Zip (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%20Awakening.zip)
[DS/GBA] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Blue/Red Rescue Team - "Boss Battle" - Bespinben Zip (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%20Boss%20Battle.zip)
[DS/GBA] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Blue/Red Rescue Team - "Escape Through the Snow / Snow Refugees" - Bespinben (Replacement) Zip (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%20Escape%20Through%20the%20Snow%20-%20Snow%20Refugees.zip)
[DS/GBA] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Blue/Red Rescue Team - "Fanfares Collection" - Bespinben Zip (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%20Fanfares%20Collection.zip)
[DS/GBA] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Blue/Red Rescue Team - "File Select / Whiscash Pond" - Bespinben Zip (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%20File%20Select%20%28Whiscash%20Pond%29.zip)
[DS/GBA] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Blue/Red Rescue Team - "Lapis Cave" - Bespinben Zip (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%20Lapis%20Cave.zip)
[DS/GBA] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Blue/Red Rescue Team - "Mt. Blaze Peak" - Bespinben Zip (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%20Mt%20Blaze%20Peak.zip)
[DS/GBA] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Blue/Red Rescue Team - "The Other Side" - Bespinben Zip (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%20The%20Other%20Side.zip)
[DS/GBA] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Blue/Red Rescue Team - "There's Trouble!" - Bespinben Zip (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%20There%27s%20Trouble%21.zip)
[DS/GBA] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Blue/Red Rescue Team - "Tiny Woods" - Bespinben (Replacement) Zip (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%20Tiny%20Woods.zip)
[DS] Pokémon Ranger - "Ending Story" - Bespinben Zip (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/Ranger%20-%20Ending%20Story.zip)
[DS] Pokémon Ranger - "Ranger Base" - Bespinben Zip (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/Ranger%20-%20Ranger%20Base.zip)
[DS] Pokémon Ranger - "Title Screen" - Bespinben Zip (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/Ranger%20-%20Title%20Screen.zip)
Woah... Two years... I wonder if I'll still be here by then...
................
If you have access to a computer thoughout those two years you could still submit stuff..
But I'll assume you don't so I'm volunteering to help with this. Trouble is, sometimes I'll miss a few submission periods...
But I'll do what I can.
So long bud! ;)
Why are you posting so many arrangements here? Two years-what is that, like 2 updates? :J
Quote from: Olimar12345 on October 12, 2012, 07:52:30 AMWhy are you posting so many arrangements here? Two years-what is that, like 2 updates? :J
Are you nuts?! 1 update and only if we're lucky! lol
btw, olimar, could you please check my submissions post again? I've been waiting forever for your feedback. :)
Roger that. Just pm'd deku.
Good, thanks.
Would someone please make Olimar an updater? I can't take this anymore. The last post on site news was July 4th, and if i'm seeing the trend correctly, this update won't be done till Thanksgiving simply because it's a holiday.
My post has been fixed since early September, in case anyone finds a sudden eagerness to continue :l
Agree. This is getting absurd. Deku, we completely understand if you're overbooked. That's why we need more updaters. I'd really appreciate it if Jamaha could promote Olimar.
We've had this discussion before....
This makes me wish I knew how to help in some way D:
Quote from: Nebbles on October 14, 2012, 02:58:45 PMThis makes me wish I knew how to help in some way D:
I was thinking that. I don't have enough theory knowledge even to help out a little. :/
Also, don't we have a couple other global mods? Nintendude vanished, but what about Concerto or Kefka? What are they doing?
WE MUST REVOLT
ALL OF US
But srsly.
Maybe there could be some sort of honour system in place, where an account on the forum is linked to an account on the main site. Once a member has had 10 sheets approved by other members, they gain access to updating the site?
I don't know, just something to think about.
HAHAHAHA ^^^
No.
I was actually thinking about this whole thing earlier today. We have so many inactive updaters, like ZeldaPianist brought up:
Nintendude73
DekuTrombonist
winterkid09
Nakah
Concerto
HugoMeister
Kefka and JaMaHa don't count because Kefka is our active moderator, and JaMaHa (while extremely inactive) is pretty much our deity and understands the site better than anyone else ever will.
For the others, though, it raises the question: Why are they still mods?
If they are inactive and can no longer devote time to the site, that's fine, but they shouldn't have a position on the site which says otherwise. I remember seeing a thread a couple years ago which suggested adding more mods. The idea was shot down because adding more doesn't typically fix a problem.
So here's my solution: take away mod status from these users and give them to others who are available and capable. Either we'll be surprised by how fast some people come running back to save their position, or they won't care and nothing's lost. For the community, though, the result is the same-- more progress as a site. I would rather have 2 active updaters than 6 who we never see.
I really don't want NSM to lose its title of most VG sheets to Ichigos, VGM music, etc. This is a fixable issue. Let's fix it.
Ichigos is Horrible.
If I knew a thing about updating I would absolutely help
but alas I don't
darn
Quote from: Nebbles on October 14, 2012, 05:54:04 PMIf I knew a thing about updating I would absolutely help
but alas I don't
darn
Same here. I could probably easily learn how to update, but checking sheets for errors is a whole other thing
Yeah, same. :C I wish I could do all that stuff.
I concur with Spit's suggestion. Obviously Olimar would be a prime candidate for an updater. I could think of a few more people, but I would rather spare myself sounding like an idiot and suggestion someone who would never want to fill a position like this, so who else do you guys think could fill the role?
Quote from: blueflower999 on October 14, 2012, 06:27:44 PMI concur with Spit's suggestion. Obviously Olimar would be a prime candidate for an updater. I could think of a few more people, but I would rather spare myself sounding like an idiot and suggestion someone who would never want to fill a position like this, so who else do you guys think could fill the role?
Look back @ pgs 6 & 7. XD
Quote from: TheZeldaPianist275 on October 14, 2012, 07:00:42 PMLook back @ pgs 6 & 7. XD
Both Bespinben and Pumpyheart are leaving/gone from NSM, and... Slow? Would you want to do it?
I think slow and I would make a great team :J
I agree with that. But I also know we can't have too many updaters. :/
Maybe updates every 2 weeks? Would that work?
Quote from: SlowPokemon on October 15, 2012, 08:39:17 AMI agree with that. But I also know we can't have too many updaters. :/
Too many? If you & Olimar became updaters, we'd have, what, three? Four if Winter helps out.
Would you be interested in becoming a mod Slow, and do you think you have enough theory knowledge to do the job well?
Also, I don't wanna completely shut out Shadowkirby since he expressed interest. Shadowkirby, do you have enough knowledge to critique people's sheets?
While I'm at it, Shado and Dahans strike me as good candidates too. Would you guys feel comfortable in that position?
I'd nominate Shado and Olimar. Dahans isn't around quite enough. Of course, Shado is already swamped with being Request janitor so...
Quote from: spitllama on October 14, 2012, 04:37:45 PMFor the others, though, it raises the question: Why are they still mods?
Hugo's a chatroom moderat- wait he doesn't go to the new server anymore...
...good question.
Quote from: Bespinben on October 15, 2012, 02:02:14 PMI'd nominate Shado and Olimar. Dahans isn't around quite enough. Of course, Shado is already swamped with being Request janitor so...
Shado doesn't want to be a mod, unfortunately. I've asked him before.
Quote from: TheZeldaPianist275 on October 15, 2012, 01:59:57 PMWould you be interested in becoming a mod Slow, and do you think you have enough theory knowledge to do the job well?
Also, I don't wanna completely shut out Shadowkirby since he expressed interest. Shadowkirby, do you have enough knowledge to critique people's sheets?
Yes, I'd be very interested, but I'm not sure I could handle the power and I'd be better at critiquing than actually updating.
And believe me, I don't want to sound rude in the slightest, but I just don't think Shadowkirby is experienced enough. That's my personal opinion, and I swear it's not to be spiteful or mean.
I'm actually proficient at piano. I could check for playability of a sheet, just not accurateness. And I have free time. Lots of it. Others could critique the sheets, while all I would do would be uploading them. I talked to Winter back when he was an active member, and he said that updating was a very time consuming process.
Though I do not know how to upload sheets onto the site, I have enough free time and am willing to learn how. On the other hand, not to sound like a pompous jerk, I do have a good understanding of music theory and how the piano works. With this said, I would be very capable and willing to do future updates to the site. However, in my opinion, this process is a two-man job. Even if its just one person checking over the other's work, the two people would help insure that only quality sheets are getting submitted.
So: Shadoninja, Slow, Shadowkirby. Anyone else?
K-NiGhT.
I may have no free time, not enough experience, or advanced music theory, but I'm awesome so it's okay.
I would but K-NiGhT jumped first.
My sheets at the beginning were horrifying, but I know how it's done now.
I suppose even if I were to become a mod (which would be absolutely epic), I should probably have the full version of Finale.
My credentials:
Some free time.
No experience at updating sites, but, like Olimar, I'm willing to learn.
97% in my Advanced Rudiments exam.
*Don't currently have Finale 2012.
I know Im new and VERY unexperienced, bt I'd be glad to help with the regular updating of the site if no one else volunteers. I cant really help with the sheet correcting, but whatever song that need to be added I could do.
Yeah, if possible, I could learn how to update! I have free time!
Again, unless shadoninja changed his mind suddenly, I'm fairly sure you could take him off the list :/ he seemed pretty sure.
Oh god everyone's nominating themselves.
I see a problem with this trend.
Quote from: Bubbles7689 on October 15, 2012, 08:42:48 PMI know Im new and VERY unexperienced, bt I'd be glad to help with the regular updating of the site if no one else volunteers. I cant really help with the sheet correcting, but whatever song that need to be added I could do.
Quote from: Nebbles on October 15, 2012, 08:44:37 PMYeah, if possible, I could learn how to update! I have free time!
So you guys are saying let Olimar or Slow check the sheets, then their work is done. Nebbles and Bubbles (lol) take over updating.
That might work. If we do that, I'll throw in my name for uploading sheets, but not critiquing them. As long as Deku shows us the ropes, we should be fine.
Quote from: spitllama on October 16, 2012, 05:16:38 AMOh god everyone's nominating themselves.
I see a problem with this trend.
XD we're just throwing out potential helpers. Nebbles, Bubbles, JDMEK5 & I could form an "update team."
Actually, the more I think about it, the more I like it. Division of labor.
Quote from: K-NiGhT on October 15, 2012, 08:03:24 PMI may have no free time, not enough experience, or advanced music theory, but I'm awesome so it's okay.
No, because you have no free time, not enough experience, or advanced music theory.
Quote from: Bubbles7689 on October 15, 2012, 08:42:48 PMI know Im new and VERY unexperienced, bt I'd be glad to help with the regular updating of the site if no one else volunteers. I cant really help with the sheet correcting, but whatever song that need to be added I could do.
Unfortunately we need ppl who can check sheets.
Quote from: Nebbles on October 15, 2012, 08:44:37 PMYeah, if possible, I could learn how to update! I have free time!
Sorry, but again, I'm not sure that you have the theory knowlage for this position.
I think that JDMEK might be a good potential candidate though.
Well, I have taken advanced theory through my private violin lessons over the past 11 years, but my problem would be finding time.
Getting finale has been high on my priority list for some time now.
And Driver's Ed is winding down, which has been a huge pain in my schedule for the past few weeks.
K-Night if I can't trust you to arrange how can I trust you to update :(
Precisely. You don't need to be involved in EVERYTHING you know. -_o
Quote from: Olimar12345 on October 16, 2012, 07:03:45 AMI think that JDMEK might be a good potential candidate though.
I agree.
Quote from: spitllama on October 16, 2012, 11:22:23 AMK-Night if I can't trust you to arrange how can I trust you to update :(
This be true.
Quote from: Olimar12345 on October 16, 2012, 07:03:45 AMUnfortunately we need ppl who can check sheets.
I agree, but wouldn't it save those people who
can check for errors a bunch of work if the
noobs lesser experienced members are able to upload the sheets to the site? That way the senior members can check the sheets, turn them over to the junior members for updation, and their work is done.
I have very little interest in looking over other people's work.
SOOOOO...
Deku hasn't been online for nearly two weeks.
HOUSTON WE HAVE A PROBLEM
My computer crashed :c I'll be out for a while.
Quote from: Olimar12345 on October 18, 2012, 09:09:50 PMMy computer crashed :c I'll be out for a while.
Haven't you already sent Deku comments on everybody's?
Yes I have.
So only thing left is for Deku to post them, and then everybody fix them....
DEKU! PLEASE! WE'RE ON YOUR SCHEDULE! PLZ, FOR THE LOVE OF ARPEGGIOS, POST OLIMAR'S COMMENTS!
Most of them are up, we're really just waiting on people to check their posts/make the corrections and deku to accept the ones that are ready.
'Cept for mine & JD's. Arrg, I check this topic so many times a day....
Bump.
Sigh.. Olimar, can you just post your comments right now? In your own post?
All of my comments are already posted.
Quote from: Olimar12345 on October 03, 2012, 05:00:10 PMWe're pretty much there with the exception of you musescore users. :-\ All of yall's .MUS files are awful.
Quote from: Olimar12345 on October 04, 2012, 08:25:28 AMWell then, let this be a warning to you musescore users. I'm not saying that you have to convert to finale, but you will be responsible for providing .MUS files up to par with the rest of us.
Both of you must read this (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=481.0) to a T.
Is there something wrong with mine Olimar?
Quote from: Olimar12345 on October 25, 2012, 07:52:03 AMBoth of you must read this (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=481.0) to a T.
I adjusted mine as much as I could with NotePad. See for yourself; I played around with the file.
NSM Staff, I am dissapoint.
I don't really want to read 17 pages to see what's holding up the update...so if someone can just tell me what's wrong, I'll try to update.
What's wrong is that the updaters have all dissappeared.
Pretty much. Olimar is trying to help through Deku, but Deku is never online to post his comments. And he could PM them to you, Concerto, but
Quote from: Olimar12345 on October 18, 2012, 09:09:50 PMMy computer crashed :c I'll be out for a while.
Just found out that I'll be getting it back tonight!
Edit: I'll try to go through all of what's left tomorrow. Hopefully we can get this update over with.
Yeah well just pm me whatever you need to then we'll get it up.
Concerto. Please. Seriously, NSM is riding on your shoulders right now. If we get this done, maybe JaMaHa can add a few more updaters. IT'S IN YOUR HANDS
#overdramatization
Quote from: TheZeldaPianist275 on October 29, 2012, 07:36:59 PMConcerto. Please. Seriously, NSM is riding on your shoulders right now. If we get this done, maybe JaMaHa can add a few more updaters. IT'S IN YOUR HANDS
#overdramatization
Not really. This topic deserves some dramatic persuasion
Quote from: Bubbles7689 on October 29, 2012, 07:38:30 PMNot really. This topic deserves some dramatic persuasion
Thanks Bubbles :)
Okay, this has gone on long enough-I'm going through everything one more time. Its either accepted or rejected. If Deku or concerto wants to go double check them, thats fine, but I'm not going to keep checking when most of you still haven't made the changes.
Here's Page 2 of the subs:
Jompa
-[NDS] Pokémon Black & White - Relic Song
Accepted
-[NDS] Pokémon Diamond, Pearl & Platinum - Battle! Rival
Accepted
-[NDS] Pokémon Black & White - Driftveil City
Measure 10 can't look like that. It should all be in the same layer.
TheZeldaPianist275
[GCN, WII] The Legend of Zelda: Twilight Princess -
MUS file looks terrible-Does not meet standards
[NDS] The Legend of Zelda: Spirit Tracks - Byrne
MUS file looks terrible-Does not meet standards
[WII] The Legend of Zelda: Skyward Sword - Isle of Songs
MUS file looks terrible-Does not meet standards
Dusk
-[DS] Pokemon Mystery Dungeon 2: Explorers of T/D/S - "The Gatekeepers" / "Whose Footprint? Whose Footprint?
Name still needs to be changed on page two.
-[DS] Pokemon Mystery Dungeon 2: Explorers of T/D/S - "Epilogue Theme"
Accepted
-[DS] Pokemon Mystery Dungeon 2: Explorers of T/D/S - "Steam Cave"
Accepted
fingerz
-[Wii] Wario Land: The Shake Dimension - "Glittertown"
Previous changes were not made.
[Wii] New Super Mario Bros. Wii - "Multiplayer Miss"
Accepted
-[Wii] Epic Mickey - "Oswald's Theme"
Previous changes were not made.
-[Wii] Mario Kart Wii - "Start Your Engines (Race)"
Accepted
JDMEK5
-[NGC] Mario Party 7 - Pyramid Park
Title and composers name aren't bold. "Pno." shouldn't be there.
-[NGC] Kirby Air Ride - Grass
Composers name isn't bold. "Pno." shouldn't be there.
-[NGC] Kirby Air Ride - Sky Sands (Replacement)
Title and composers name aren't bold. "Pno." shouldn't be there.
-[N64] Pokémon Snap - Camera Check
Title and composers name aren't bold. "Pno." shouldn't be there. A lot is missing from the original. There are incomplete measures.
I'll put page one up tomorrow.
Quote from: Olimar12345 on October 30, 2012, 06:06:54 PMTheZeldaPianist275
[GCN, WII] The Legend of Zelda: Twilight Princess -
MUS file looks terrible-Does not meet standards
[NDS] The Legend of Zelda: Spirit Tracks - Byrne
MUS file looks terrible-Does not meet standards
[WII] The Legend of Zelda: Skyward Sword - Isle of Songs
MUS file looks terrible-Does not meet standards
*sigh*
Is there anything specifically in it I can fix w/o making the full switch to 2012?
Um...I don't really know how to react to that...
Do you ever see real music written like this:
(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg840.imageshack.us%2Fimg840%2F9876%2Fasdfghjklp.png&hash=e893288c1131a1aed68ceff2d2964ac811ee42dc) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/840/asdfghjklp.png/)
The version doesn't matter for things like this...
Driftveil's fixed 8)
Quote from: Olimar12345 on October 30, 2012, 06:06:54 PMJDMEK5
-[NGC] Mario Party 7 - Pyramid Park
Title and composers name aren't bold. "Pno." shouldn't be there.
-[NGC] Kirby Air Ride - Grass
Composers name isn't bold. "Pno." shouldn't be there.
-[NGC] Kirby Air Ride - Sky Sands (Replacement)
Title and composers name aren't bold. "Pno." shouldn't be there.
-[N64] Pokémon Snap - Camera Check
Title and composers name aren't bold. "Pno." shouldn't be there. A lot is missing from the original. There are incomplete measures.
1) I don't remember the title and composer's name having to be bolded. But so-be-it.
2) I use notepad, and it always puts that "Pno." there. I can't get rid of it. Sorry.
I'll have them fixed before the sun sets.
EDIT: Links have been updated.
[NGC] Mario Party 7 - Pyramid Park - [MUS] (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/93589150/Mario%20Party%207%20-%20Pyramid%20Park.mus) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/93589150/Mario%20Party%207%20-%20Pyramid%20Park.mid) [PDF] (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/93589150/Mario%20Party%207%20-%20Pyramid%20Park.pdf) (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qtqUUuZy-Wg)[YouTube][/url]
Sorry about that last page. It's beyond my abilities with notepad. Same story for the "Pno." thing.
Title and composers' names have been bolded.
[NGC] Kirby Air Ride - Grass --------------------[MUS] (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/93589150/Kirby%20Air%20Ride%20-%20Grass.mus) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/93589150/Kirby%20Air%20Ride%20-%20Grass.mid) [PDF] (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/93589150/Kirby%20Air%20Ride%20-%20Grass.pdf) (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FlOkXTYHiWc)[YouTube][/url]
Again, sorry about the last page and "Pno.". Can't do anything about them.
Composers' names have been bolded.
[NGC] Kirby Air Ride - Sky Sands (Replacement) -[MUS] (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/93589150/Kirby%20Air%20Ride%20-%20Sky%20Sands.mus) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/93589150/Kirby%20Air%20Ride%20-%20Sky%20Sands.mid) [PDF] (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/93589150/Kirby%20Air%20Ride%20-%20Sky%20Sands.pdf) (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lhZIPj9ZaDw)[YouTube][/url]
Yet again, the last page is really ugly. I repeat my apologies for that and the "Pno." issue. As I said earlier, I can't do anything about it.
Title and composers' names have been bolded.
[N64] Pokémon Snap - Camera Check -
[MUS] [MIDI] [PDF] [YouTube][/color][/s]
Quote from: Olimar12345 on October 30, 2012, 06:06:54 PMA lot is missing from the original. There are incomplete measures.
I don't understand. I have the whole song there. Can you provide me with an example?
I've decided to leave this one anyways. I'll completely redo it at some point. I was hoping for the advice so I can fix it for next time.
Quote from: Olimar12345 on October 31, 2012, 08:01:27 AMUm...I don't really know how to react to that...
Do you ever see real music written like this:
(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg840.imageshack.us%2Fimg840%2F9876%2Fasdfghjklp.png&hash=e893288c1131a1aed68ceff2d2964ac811ee42dc) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/840/asdfghjklp.png/)
The version doesn't matter for things like this...
What? The huge measure? I can't fix that in NotePad.
How'd that even happen? 0_o
Quote from: Bubbles7689 on October 31, 2012, 02:15:26 PMHow'd that even happen? 0_o
That happens when you export MuseScore files into NotePad and makes finale files out of them..
Quote from: TheZeldaPianist275 on October 31, 2012, 01:59:16 PMWhat? The huge measure? I can't fix that in NotePad.
Ever try clicking on the measure with ANY tool?
I was going off what Shado and JD said. (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4890.0) And I'm sorry for my lack of Finale knowledge, but when I click on it, nothing happens.
What? Then try selecting the whole note and clicking the measure. That should do it for sure.
Quote from: Olimar12345 on October 31, 2012, 07:58:37 PMWhat? Then try selecting the whole note and clicking the measure. That should do it for sure.
Yes
Quote from: Olimar12345 on October 30, 2012, 06:06:54 PMDusk
-[DS] Pokemon Mystery Dungeon 2: Explorers of T/D/S - "The Gatekeepers" / "Whose Footprint? Whose Footprint?
Name still needs to be changed on page two.
-[DS] Pokemon Mystery Dungeon 2: Explorers of T/D/S - "Epilogue Theme"
Accepted
-[DS] Pokemon Mystery Dungeon 2: Explorers of T/D/S - "Steam Cave"
Accepted
[MUS] (https://dl.dropbox.com/s/qe7ldo9owx7oltw/PMD%202%20-%20Sentry%20Duty.mus?dl=1) [MIDI] (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/35209091/PMD%202%20-%20Sentry%20Duty.mid) [PDF] (https://dl.dropbox.com/s/n0uuf6wl503kndh/PMD%202%20-%20Sentry%20Duty.pdf)
I don't know, why the side edges are so big. Does somebody knows how to remove them?
I'll fix formatting errors, just give me a day.
Quote from: Shadoninja on November 01, 2012, 08:45:21 PMI'll fix formatting errors, just give me a day.
Oh would you Shado? That's awesome! :D Somebody give this guy a cookie!
Seriously, THANK YOU. You have been so helpful to like, everyone.
Here you go Shado
(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fmedia.tumblr.com%2Ftumblr_m9uy4bfaUS1r5suzc.jpg&hash=6eaaafc5a420fdd2d541e80c61eb242fe0437c58)
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/36661985/TheZeldaPianist275.zip
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/36661985/JDMEK5.zip
Kirby Air Ride - Grass
Don't you think it would be better written in 2/4?
Actually it probably would. I didn't think of that. This is one of my earliest arrangements; you know, before I really knew what I was doing...
If I get the time, I'll rewrite it.
Quote from: Shadoninja on November 04, 2012, 08:43:37 PMhttps://dl.dropbox.com/u/36661985/TheZeldaPianist275.zip
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/36661985/JDMEK5.zip
Kirby Air Ride - Grass
Don't you think it would be better written in 2/4?
Oh my gosh Shado. You are so amazing. This really means a lot to me. Thank you SO MUCH.
Yay! This may actually happen in the somewhat near future! Thanks a lot, Shado and Concerto!
Quote from: JDMEK5 on November 05, 2012, 10:36:06 AMActually it probably would. I didn't think of that. This is one of my earliest arrangements; you know, before I really knew what I was doing...
If I get the time, I'll rewrite it.
No need.
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/36661985/Kirby%20Air%20Ride%20-%20Grass.zip
Thanks a lot Shado! You're the best!
wow, 19 pages on an update....
How close are we, Olimar? And Concerto too, I guess, since we've seen neither hide nor hair of Deku for over a month?
I'm sorry guys, I've been really busy lately with school,(I've been writing this piece for alto sax and piano that will premier tomorrow!) but I haven't forgotten about this. I really want to get this update over so we can start the next one, so I'm making it my personal goal to get it done by this weekend.
Quote from: Olimar12345 on November 08, 2012, 10:49:25 AMI'm sorry guys, I've been really busy lately with school,(I've been writing this piece for alto sax and piano that will premier tomorrow!) but I haven't forgotten about this. I really want to get this update over so we can start the next one, so I'm making it my personal goal to get it done by this weekend.
Dude. Don't apologize. You're awesome. You're the savior of this update.
Quote from: Olimar12345 on November 08, 2012, 10:49:25 AMI'm sorry guys, I've been really busy lately with school,(I've been writing this piece for alto sax and piano that will premier tomorrow!) but I haven't forgotten about this. I really want to get this update over so we can start the next one, so I'm making it my personal goal to get it done by this weekend.
Does done mean ready for posting on the site? I assume Concerto will take care of that.
But probably shadowkirby.
Vote Shadowkirby for mod, 2012. And remember kids, a vote for Shadowkirby is a vote for a better future with more updates and more tinychat parties!
And Olimar
A vote for Olimar is a vote for more ponies!
A vote for Fox is a vote for more people with no hearts!
Quote from: blueflower999 on November 08, 2012, 04:16:55 PMA vote for Olimar is a vote for more ponies!
Must....refrain from...posting...
LOL NOPE.(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg692.imageshack.us%2Fimg692%2F4729%2Ftumblrly9hy3yisb1r0z1wa.gif&hash=e468a1b73ed01f1bb46ed8ec7b018cdd152055af) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/692/tumblrly9hy3yisb1r0z1wa.gif/)
(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg706.imageshack.us%2Fimg706%2F4500%2Fanimatedderpyhooves.gif&hash=42fc835bc4b1c71e4f396cfdea0934c21a7970cc) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/706/animatedderpyhooves.gif/)
(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg267.imageshack.us%2Fimg267%2F8153%2Fderpyhoovesweloveyouifo.gif&hash=bc0d401fccb16d76bb778a7587369b6f8efbf21f) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/267/derpyhoovesweloveyouifo.gif/)