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Title: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Big Christmas Update :D)
Post by: FireArrow on June 27, 2012, 05:34:01 PM
Bold arrangements are new. Merry Day After Christmas! :))

[Fanicom] Mother

-Bein' Friends: [PDF] (https://dl.dropbox.com/s/tzas42gt0v0itbu/Bein%20Friends.pdf?dl=1) [MUS] (https://dl.dropbox.com/s/2c4zubiavdzxf2b/Bein%20Friends.mus?dl=1) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropbox.com/s/do5ndoyys15fcw2/Bein%20Friends.mid?dl=1) (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-TF8waW3nXo)[YouTube][/url]


[NES] Dragon Warrior

-Castle Theme: [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/21w8w74spwsal11/Castle%20Theme.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/55sduj1bh6o2mvp/Castle%20Theme.mus?dl=1&token_hash=AAF85FmGTZVR_7dLSF-FYWhdp9bkiTcHvV3zf1XF0CfLRw) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/auffkyevgwo3ebv/Castle%20Theme.mid?dl=1&token_hash=AAF69aQIOkw7PCTwgbIWudsoINEfyTN0hjvO_gbyE02zXg)  (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fWIXb677sYk)[YouTube][/url]


[NES] Final Fantasy

-Dead Music: [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/pvpc5pr0izkxwxe/Death%20Music.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/npp47aoo2b5kr9t/Death%20Music.mus?token_hash=AAEWNPBj98WmD10Bmm1VPN5CSeqROmArNvQPlo-puBEM3g&dl=1) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/6q1iooezsxyg028/Death%20Music.mid?token_hash=AAGm53CicKyHuDnvrgnVtS9zuVdVGx3IenZxdqasrFg43w&dl=1)  (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HuO52KHVDeI)[YouTube][/url]

-[Replacement] Ship: [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/8plcodhmn3zr5xf/Ship%20Replacement.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/yee4tl2i1dxqt84/Ship%20Replacement.mus?token_hash=AAEB-hPVQmb56uFIVnFqq59q54xvc7ieEXrPIZrFdnXHzA&dl=1) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/1sa0lokdkyc4jmg/Ship%20Replacement.mid?token_hash=AAHugtM_aI-ox8rHekXxMi2m2Ob1aqz8yBsf6AgELpddTQ&dl=1)  (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b1H7xVMd2cY)[YouTube][/url]


[NES] Wizards and Warriors

-Title Theme: [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/py1gehb3jjo7des/Wizards%20and%20Warriors%20-%20Title%20Screen.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/v4jovvaulk47tol/Wizards%20and%20Warriors%20-%20Title%20Screen.mus?dl=1&token_hash=AAHy-gXkWyD-hU4aEEICSWBPPEHdBbHXxBGzYl7FR4Ze0w) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/nuwgro6679621mj/Wizards%20and%20Warriors%20-%20Title%20Screen.mid?dl=1&token_hash=AAE50yTXln-h5WgPD1Bdug5qTCCXYFrpFDXEcm5Li5zsKw)  (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OGWiNiLAy94)[YouTube][/url]


[SNES] Romancing Saga

-Battle 1: [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/8solq27k5703g5l/Romancing%20Saga%20-%20Battle%201.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/umxtbi55n5aqkih/Romancing%20Saga%20-%20Battle%201.mus?dl=1&token_hash=AAEQ35aDIgr4n0JkxcLtRhsIPu6BdPzlxMKl4334Ll2vEQ) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/3lecjje5g244fyf/Romancing%20Saga%20-%20Battle%201.mid?dl=1&token_hash=AAEoyXltL2vURK30XlSmR8zSrs6BCzHTKtb1w2icKqI30Q)  (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bOVdvsbMjIg)[YouTube][/url]


[SNES] Super Mario RPG

-Valentina (Margarie Margarita): [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/gkrd9qovf743hoy/Valentina.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/4na8so413qpmx61/Valentina.mus?token_hash=AAG3vYvWhVdh4_3ZGLXW9_Ygvg2RfPqO1nS56wVMCtHu0Q&dl=1) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/wzuvqesufs4qyj8/Valentina.mid?token_hash=AAEnz7AhsA064JrU99OBliW24bWb9dDGaY6fEz3GjMQajA&dl=1)  (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R_e-6t34Cwc)[YouTube][/url]


[GB] Final Fantasy Adventure

-Battle 2: [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/qv1gwmfvl507dlt/FireArrow%20-%20Final%20Fantasy%20Adventure%20-%20Battle%202.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/46soe9rkzis5hgz/FireArrow%20-%20Final%20Fantasy%20Adventure%20-%20Battle%202.mus?token_hash=AAFR_f7nWeD5t302B6mJx6i_qJCDL_O76XLsILA3X3-5qQ&dl=1) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/w284vv4wc2xt27z/FireArrow%20-%20Final%20Fantasy%20Adventure%20-%20Battle%202.mid?token_hash=AAG0oDm7LSmh3eLbwWYN08ZP81bprPa_DQBrOmgHqMJXsA&dl=1)  (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mjg751mFozI)[YouTube][/url]

-Endless Battlefield: [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/1ygbufbl6bucaat/FireArrow%20-%20Endless%20Battlefield%20-%20Final%20Fantasy%20Adventure.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/h0nzjapblvkz5j7/FireArrow%20-%20Endless%20Battlefield%20-%20Final%20Fantasy%20Adventure.mus?token_hash=AAE8Z1K2ko3s9_9LIX2Jdt7U5GH-S95AQyGcDCtt9eFVUg&dl=1) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/4sg4yevn4861gps/FireArrow%20-%20Endless%20Battlefield%20-%20Final%20Fantasy%20Adventure.mid?token_hash=AAGQpamMJ2Ab6_QZrEF2SpQWdKNQ1KmyWwfpyPKFjlh54A&dl=1)  (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jz-sVQlCoDI)[YouTube][/url]

-Final Battle (Not playable): [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/lrnsvjjxrl8pr8z/Final%20Battle.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/a69233ly695i69j/Final%20Battle.mus?dl=1&token_hash=AAHPRIsLKJ6PUT5KapCtODjsIgKhY3SFLzFMztMfgResig) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/2391e8jjhjkgdcn/Final%20Battle.mid?dl=1&token_hash=AAHLnfweeMLQHxSg9oInBL8yq_zhLZKGX2XyRUn-UKodsg)  (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=__5WHhIYuwI)[YouTube][/url]

-Jema's Realization: [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/7qefx6iz1vbt94f/Jema%27s%20Realization.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/k349q5f5n0t3env/Jema%27s%20Realization.mus?token_hash=AAHRD17lvR4u_uUxagOaIlqxZ0lOKvHXVT3qjrvH1Em-7Q&dl=1) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/gmxh8b1l3w6r8ky/Jema%27s%20Realization.mid?token_hash=AAGEq3DT9vNH4G9rCmEBhY9JdP5qLSClYFsCp7RW4hKLmw&dl=1)  (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Kitc13F_70E)[YouTube][/url]

-Mana Palace: [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/vwzhrdselosxnw9/Mana%20Palace.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/uqea6x7qg78g5hg/Mana%20Palace.mus?token_hash=AAFAy0VWx39h3LW3LAwzS10IPVEPENUsAvEY3S0aShGpzw&dl=1) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/rvum4yjkzmgl0ih/Mana%20Palace.mid?token_hash=AAH3k3edztgbw5fJXZ9d0zScrJaefb40a4UzGtXIi0iqNg&dl=1)  (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XdPaM1dwfHI)[YouTube][/url]

-Mana's Mission: [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/8igqxpxzrvhzoex/ManasMission.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/r8m5e66rrv2ftov/ManasMission.mus?token_hash=AAEQA_WPgEqi53dWriUZZ08VeoJAdb2dRcPcUXe5PnVEXA&dl=1) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/pornkw5hchqbkbu/ManasMission.mid?token_hash=AAHYtqK8dWNh0i0YiwkNlgPmvtRsO33Xrz9zT4wcdg7taQ&dl=1)  (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H2Zs31mBJXs)[YouTube][/url]

-Royal Palace Theme: [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/1zpk9m9lfcw1aru/Royal%20Palace.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/j61o2hy5dz4ms9p/Royal%20Palace.mus?token_hash=AAE5Jt4vl1e2G118e_peAQ-kdrWYkpgKcAl1czRKTvkqyA&dl=1) [MIDI]  (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/jvdrwjdwwt13xx6/Royal%20Palace.mid?token_hash=AAFYXsiua5wExbRwTKIA2SOzlmwk8pmURcrAQJkLfR_dXA&dl=1) (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WSGOEoMW-_0)[YouTube][/url]


[GB] Final Fantasy Legend II

-Lethal Strike [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/xesma9odqtcu0h8/Lethal%20Strike.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/307l46uivx7fv0z/Lethal%20Strike.mus?token_hash=AAHm7v5fGgDRFPG38jNGQe0lcvCIljOSnkSnGG01cg99IA&dl=1) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/anv4w5c4u6ym6ho/Lethal%20Strike.mid?token_hash=AAFJq4bczzzCDB51rtOts9t1dHtn3cNYgUTHKxLK4p1h3g&dl=1)  (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4gQrTrK5c78)[YouTube][/url]

-Peaceful Land [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/o8hyv0p7c7dyy1j/Peaceful%20Land.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/9assuiu1xc3pb5l/Peaceful%20Land.mus?token_hash=AAFIdkhfYWV40mw_IkcNcUlmcGWk4rsqOsGKdMOHjaZ7GQ&dl=1) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/1aivyv0eibiubx0/Peaceful%20Land.mid?token_hash=AAGaKjZyStUAK4teuhP9m7RqFyoGjOJaebzc9RDmEZ5ZVQ&dl=1)  (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NtAPusCryRc)[YouTube][/url]


[GB] Final Fantasy Legend III

-Theme of Another Dimension: [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/s9duok32mhvinss/Talon%27s%20Theme.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/ka284ij188g8vas/Talon%27s%20Theme.mus?dl=1&token_hash=AAH4-_VsU_-sTetZWgB9MhC-ucfwc8Ds3X4CBrM8gTzMEg) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/0pexenxkxmtdlwa/Talon%27s%20Theme.mid?dl=1&token_hash=AAGZl-vY6oY9sV6tbz4diOCx2g7DQS52K_3iw2CG_zsMxg)  (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Uh1AH4nYOxw)[YouTube][/url]


[GCN] Pokémon Colosseum

Phenac City: [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/mgely8bnx9z4ui9/Phenac%20City.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/jzxyvqdq1km5ekk/Phenac%20City.mus?token_hash=AAGndXgUt6oaRc6DWPp_gHoOL0SqudxY7xPPwgmCymGc-Q&dl=1) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/canr4acctu7hcd0/Phenac%20City.mid?token_hash=AAG1opvH57gHUGuWRLIpj8PTv_qCpeoCep7OeqONS1dGQw&dl=1)  (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RLM6nZ0USzs)[YouTube][/url]


[PS2] Star Ocean: Till the End of Time

-Rust Color: [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/kkak5m29l0t9msj/FireArrow%20-%20SO3%20-%20Rust%20Color.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/4ge4yixo3u56oxo/FireArrow%20-%20SO3%20-%20Rust%20Color.mus?token_hash=AAHjvmFo37l3E8BDLyHTu9S3tgEJL-vdi3WIICo7XnIc9g&dl=1) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/cly3h25qg9ze37z/FireArrow%20-%20SO3%20-%20Rust%20Color.mid?token_hash=AAGmVHWXamu6nC_WTFQFR8yx_d-mq9WN1OcVVrw2vtIDVA&dl=1)  (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TSlDUPl7DoA)[YouTube][/url]


[NDS] Kirby: Squeak Squad

-Final Battle: [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/7ha0gyuep7nc2h6/Kirby%20Final%20Battle.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/mp6ozcjqlwovemu/Kirby%20Final%20Battle.mus?dl=1&token_hash=AAE--vB_AsyEizcxcAjv3rBDI2ol4uz0Iqkcsov2c9NNcQ) [MIDI] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/ifaycofxiyoy0gd/Kirby%20Final%20Battle.mid)  (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mZwzkjtB12k)[YouTube][/url]


[WII] Mario Kart Wii

-Thwomp Desert: [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/2hcvhdrndtvpb1u/Thwomp%20Desert.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/g4qkt3tv1rorld8/Thwomp%20Desert.mus?token_hash=AAEMI5eLQgw0_h0U4TqeFxz1e9svp--nAgnDSkUZNb7sbQ&dl=1) [MIDI]  (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/nwmvpr2hhgpcban/Thwomp%20Desert.mid?token_hash=AAGycnLLU0JxK1qnawEWxe0oIImK8NMELUsOTWrHrNZ2gw&dl=1)  (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tNu114wdRDM)[YouTube][/url]


[WII] Wario Ware: Smooth Moves

-Tower Tennis Terror [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/znvrs5qlcaq9sre/FireArrow%20-%20WarioWare%20-%20Tower%20Tennis%20Terror.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/a48d3kj52gh1hwr/FireArrow%20-%20WarioWare%20-%20Tower%20Tennis%20Terror.mus?token_hash=AAHGqKk4Xtnokl6H2iCrY4d1w3lznDgJg6sxZBGzalHsQQ&dl=1) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/u5g3gcaehkp09ze/FireArrow%20-%20WarioWare%20-%20Tower%20Tennis%20Terror.mid?token_hash=AAEFGfF5CZ02Sm4bZDYiQSjSyLRdKsRBaWXdOlFrV1vraw&dl=1)  (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BpAnVHZDR3w)[YouTube][/url]


[3DS] Pokemon X/Y

-Defenders of Kalos: [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/bfnb7masru6ki93/Heroes%20of%20Kalos.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/1kq1737w06zyvf2/Heroes%20of%20Kalos.mus?dl=1&token_hash=AAH953Fmk0H62MxyVwVWwXssRp00_KvexboZz-u9eKVGnQ) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/avqmvtidrm7w0r4/Heroes%20of%20Kalos.mid?dl=1&token_hash=AAEdwHVAAvV7G_Qy_g6SG9ndCk6ITBGTFmK7ZwQ8Cvfusw)  (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kdlTTHNQKhg)[YouTube][/url]


[Multi] Skullgirls

-Fugue in 3 Goddesses: [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/q8haouzlyxxh9pt/FugueinThreeGoddesses.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/nazkgoj30ew9fb6/FugueinThreeGoddesses.mus?dl=1&token_hash=AAEiURK_fAMFGF7zrNni78QUqLfOVWalowXP_UwXhKnDag) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/aoxqo4q6bu6w1hh/FugueinThreeGoddesses.mid?dl=1&token_hash=AAEK9bcLORtgdf09pjkZuIpUfMkj_Zs6o9e_JH_W_nLUVQ)  (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3WAXunakguc)[YouTube][/url]



Echo's and FireArrow's Final Fantasy Adventure Arrangement Project:

Spoiler
Rising Sun
Fighting Arena
Requiem
Endless Battlefield
Village
Town Music
Dwarves' Theme
Glance Dukedom
Dungeon 1
Battle 1
Royal Palace Theme
Mana's Mission
Jema's Realization
In Search of the Holy Sword
Chocobo Birth
Chocobo Theme
Dungeon 2
Mogile
Dungeon 3
Battle 2
In Sorrow
Let Thoughts Ride on Knowledge
Mana Palace
Julius' Ambition
Final Battle
Legend Forever
Status Ailment
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Just dropping this here: (In Progress/Songs I don't want to forget about.)(Probably not gonna arrange all these.)  :P

Spoiler
Pokemon Colosseum:
Cipher Peon Battle

Star Ocean:
The Divine Spirit of Language
Requiem for a Saint
The Cutting Edge of Notion

Mario Kart Wii:
Thwomp Desert

Super Paper Mario:
Castle Bleck
King Croacus Battle (OMG - 0:38-1:06)
In the Darkness
Champion of Destruction

Luigi's Mansion: Dark Moon:
Dual Scream
Sticky Situation

The Binding of Isaac:
Boss Theme

Kingdom Hearts:
Waltz of the Damned

Touhou:
Parsee

Final Fantasy Legend:
Main Theme
Battle
Hurry Up!
Requiem
Knights of the Demon World Tower
Furious Battle

Final Fantasy Legend II:
Searching for the Seceret Treasure
Wandering Soul
At the end of  the decisive battle
Never Give up
Wipe Your Tears Away
Burning Blood
Save the World
Ending theme 1

Final Fantasy Legend III:
Setting off into the Future
Holy Ruins
Theme of another dimension
Laguna's Palace
Divine Battle
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Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Bein' Friends)
Post by: spitllama on June 27, 2012, 05:49:05 PM
Never heard the song before so I can't speak to accuracy, but I definitely enjoyed it. Nice job! Also A+ formatting.
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Bein' Friends)
Post by: Bespinben on June 27, 2012, 06:13:34 PM
Quote from: spitllama on June 27, 2012, 05:49:05 PMNever heard the song before so I can't speak to accuracy, but I definitely enjoyed it. Nice job! Also A+ formatting.

Really? Even I haven't played Mother and I could recognize this tune from Super Smash Bros (the Onett stage).
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Bein' Friends)
Post by: Taser9090 on June 27, 2012, 06:41:49 PM
I. LOVE. YOU. SO. MUCH. This is great!

I was hoping someone would do the NES version! (Your post says SNES)
Some of the last 3 eighth notes on some measures, for example, 6 and 8, aren't part of the melody. It would have more effect if it was quieter than the melody.
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Bein' Friends)
Post by: blueflower999 on June 27, 2012, 06:42:43 PM
Mother is for the Famicom, not the SNES. EarthBound is on the SNES, and Bein' Friends is not present in that game.
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Bein' Friends)
Post by: Zunawe on June 27, 2012, 07:03:20 PM
I used to get this song stuck in my head all the time after playing Melee/Brawl. Great job.

Also, Dropbox can work a little better. Go to the file on your computer, right-click it, go to Dropbox, and then "Copy public link". If you use that, then the file automatically downloads without going to a new page.
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Bein' Friends)
Post by: FireArrow on June 28, 2012, 09:36:40 PM
@spitllama

Thanks, but shadoninja gets the credit for the formatting (I got the sheet from him.)

@Taser9090

I'll see what I can do. My version of finale can't specifically make one voice quieter, but I'll see how it sounds.

EDIT:

It sounds horrible... so I can't really do anything else to fix it. Putting it in the left hand would require a clef change, something I can't do.  :(


@blueflower999

Thanks, now I need to find the abbreviation for that...

@Zunawe

I'll try it!

EDIT:

Err, I don't see anything that says "copy public link."
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Wario Ware: Smooth Moves - Tower Tennis Terror)
Post by: FireArrow on May 24, 2013, 12:48:29 PM
Update:

[WII] Wario Ware: Smooth Moves - Tower Tennis Terror [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/znvrs5qlcaq9sre/FireArrow%20-%20WarioWare%20-%20Tower%20Tennis%20Terror.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/a48d3kj52gh1hwr/FireArrow%20-%20WarioWare%20-%20Tower%20Tennis%20Terror.mus?token_hash=AAHGqKk4Xtnokl6H2iCrY4d1w3lznDgJg6sxZBGzalHsQQ&dl=1) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/u5g3gcaehkp09ze/FireArrow%20-%20WarioWare%20-%20Tower%20Tennis%20Terror.mid?token_hash=AAEFGfF5CZ02Sm4bZDYiQSjSyLRdKsRBaWXdOlFrV1vraw&dl=1)
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Wario Ware: Smooth Moves - Tower Tennis Terror)
Post by: DonValentino on May 24, 2013, 01:37:12 PM
Quote from: FireArrow on May 24, 2013, 12:48:29 PMUpdate:

[WII] Wario Ware: Smooth Moves - Tower Tennis Terror [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/znvrs5qlcaq9sre/FireArrow%20-%20WarioWare%20-%20Tower%20Tennis%20Terror.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/a48d3kj52gh1hwr/FireArrow%20-%20WarioWare%20-%20Tower%20Tennis%20Terror.mus?token_hash=AAHGqKk4Xtnokl6H2iCrY4d1w3lznDgJg6sxZBGzalHsQQ&dl=1) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/u5g3gcaehkp09ze/FireArrow%20-%20WarioWare%20-%20Tower%20Tennis%20Terror.mid?token_hash=AAEFGfF5CZ02Sm4bZDYiQSjSyLRdKsRBaWXdOlFrV1vraw&dl=1)

Corrected on the other topic. ;)

http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=5602.msg213271#msg213271
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Wario Ware: Smooth Moves - Tower Tennis Terror)
Post by: FireArrow on May 24, 2013, 02:04:26 PM
Just saw it, and thanks a ton, I really appreciate it!
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Wario Ware: Smooth Moves - Tower Tennis Terror)
Post by: DonValentino on May 24, 2013, 02:44:18 PM
You're welcome! Looking forward for more arrangements. :)
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Wario Ware: Smooth Moves - Tower Tennis Terror)
Post by: Jompa on May 24, 2013, 03:12:43 PM
Am I allowed to critique?:)
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Wario Ware: Smooth Moves - Tower Tennis Terror)
Post by: FireArrow on May 24, 2013, 03:19:06 PM
Of course!

Edit: Added "Edited by Don Valentino" to Tower Tennis Terror. Now I need to get Olimar's permission to do the same with Battle 2.
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Wario Ware: Smooth Moves - Tower Tennis Terror)
Post by: Jompa on May 24, 2013, 03:37:47 PM
I'm not gonna critique very thoroughly, mainly because I don't even know the song - I just went a bit detailed into certain areas, like the start and the ending, and the key signature changes:

Ok, well - about those first measures:
Regardless of how; you somehow have to make it so that those chords will be played more dramatically.
If you wanna make it super-dramatic (and this is one of the Jompa-methods), you could instead of a G#dim do a E7b9(b13). The chord in that measure is actually an E7b9(b13), because that is more or less an universal law of songs in minor, however - the chord that is played in the song is very reduced. Only the G# B and the D are played. Now, it is up to you - and for the sake of accuracy you probably shouldn't write the full chord (E G# B D F C), but I would probably do it, just for the fun of it:P
Quote from: DonValentino on May 24, 2013, 01:32:56 PMAlso, removed the uppermost note of the chords of the left hand. I don't really know where you took that from.
I can see Don wouldn't like this.

Yeah, so that method above, you probably shouldn't go for. But something that you almost have to do, is to assign articulations!! Those chords have to be more dramatic! They sound kinda boring now. If you do this, the start will be awesome!!


Good job on the key signatures!

And now over to wrong notes:

I don't really know the song, so I don't have much to say about the middle part, but at the end I reacted to some stuff:
At measure 40 - the chord in that measure is Bbmaj9, not Gm. This is dominant tritone substitution, extremely normal in songs in minor. (It does this in the last measure too, but then it is reduced to only a Bb being played over A in the bass)
At measure 41 - the chord is Am - even the note in the bass is A.
An in measure 42 - the note in the bass is a G#, not E. The chord you have places, E7b9(b13), is right, but it's just the bass note.

Quote from: FireArrow on May 24, 2013, 02:00:11 PMWoah, thanks! I'm gonna try to avoid songs with annoying diminished and seventh chords for awhile...
And that's not the right attitude! Arranging is most fun when you challenge yourself - that's how to improve as well! :)
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Wario Ware: Smooth Moves - Tower Tennis Terror)
Post by: FireArrow on May 24, 2013, 08:16:24 PM

Theory terms + chords I don't know = confused FireArrow.

Updated the links with your suggestions, is this what you meant? The chords in the begging still are a bit boring with the accents, aren't they supposed to be up an octave as well? I'm not sure.

Thanks! The ending sounds really good now!



Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Wario Ware: Smooth Moves - Tower Tennis Terror)
Post by: Jompa on May 25, 2013, 02:00:25 AM
Cool!
What if you did the chords in the beginning like this? (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/75726060/What%20if%20you%20did%20them%20like%20this%3F.pdf)
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Wario Ware: Smooth Moves - Tower Tennis Terror)
Post by: FireArrow on May 25, 2013, 05:42:56 PM
Quote from: Jompa on May 25, 2013, 02:00:25 AMCool!
What if you did the chords in the beginning like this? (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/75726060/What%20if%20you%20did%20them%20like%20this%3F.pdf)

That's brilliant! You're a genius Jompa!

Changed Tower Tennis Terror and added a new arrangement.

EDIT: I should probably say I just went over this in tiny chat with olimar, the first draft wasn't as good (the new arrangement I mean.)

Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Star Ocean: Till the End of Time - Rust Color)
Post by: FireArrow on May 28, 2013, 02:28:20 PM
Double Post :3

Another new arrangement and me, also, Echo and I started our own arrangement project.
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Final Fantasy Legend II)
Post by: FireArrow on June 13, 2013, 01:48:34 PM
Triple post... someone say something so I don't quadruple post next time.  ;)

-Lethal Strike: [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/xesma9odqtcu0h8/Lethal%20Strike.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/307l46uivx7fv0z/Lethal%20Strike.mus?token_hash=AAHm7v5fGgDRFPG38jNGQe0lcvCIljOSnkSnGG01cg99IA&dl=1) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/anv4w5c4u6ym6ho/Lethal%20Strike.mid?token_hash=AAFJq4bczzzCDB51rtOts9t1dHtn3cNYgUTHKxLK4p1h3g&dl=1)

I don't like the way this one turned out, some voices are wrong, some I couldn't figure out, some I had to leave out. It's a lopsided mess.


-Peaceful Land: [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/o8hyv0p7c7dyy1j/Peaceful%20Land.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/9assuiu1xc3pb5l/Peaceful%20Land.mus?token_hash=AAFIdkhfYWV40mw_IkcNcUlmcGWk4rsqOsGKdMOHjaZ7GQ&dl=1) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/1aivyv0eibiubx0/Peaceful%20Land.mid?token_hash=AAGaKjZyStUAK4teuhP9m7RqFyoGjOJaebzc9RDmEZ5ZVQ&dl=1)

Here's something on the opposite side of the spectrum. Oh, and "Pallet Town's got NOTHING on this."
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Main Series Final Fantasy)
Post by: FireArrow on June 29, 2013, 02:49:12 PM
I should of listened to you sooner Yugi, main series final fantasy does have good music.

Dead Music: [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/pvpc5pr0izkxwxe/Death%20Music.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/npp47aoo2b5kr9t/Death%20Music.mus?token_hash=AAEWNPBj98WmD10Bmm1VPN5CSeqROmArNvQPlo-puBEM3g&dl=1) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/6q1iooezsxyg028/Death%20Music.mid?token_hash=AAGm53CicKyHuDnvrgnVtS9zuVdVGx3IenZxdqasrFg43w&dl=1)

The second voice was impossible to hear in this one...


[Replacement] Ship: [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/8plcodhmn3zr5xf/Ship%20Replacement.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/yee4tl2i1dxqt84/Ship%20Replacement.mus?token_hash=AAEB-hPVQmb56uFIVnFqq59q54xvc7ieEXrPIZrFdnXHzA&dl=1) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/1sa0lokdkyc4jmg/Ship%20Replacement.mid?token_hash=AAHugtM_aI-ox8rHekXxMi2m2Ob1aqz8yBsf6AgELpddTQ&dl=1)
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Moar Final Fantasy Adventure)
Post by: FireArrow on July 01, 2013, 01:39:07 PM
I feel like I'm breaking a rule by posting this many times in a row.  :P
Anyways, more final fantasy adventure:

Mana's Mission:[PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/8igqxpxzrvhzoex/ManasMission.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/r8m5e66rrv2ftov/ManasMission.mus?token_hash=AAEQA_WPgEqi53dWriUZZ08VeoJAdb2dRcPcUXe5PnVEXA&dl=1) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/pornkw5hchqbkbu/ManasMission.mid?token_hash=AAHYtqK8dWNh0i0YiwkNlgPmvtRsO33Xrz9zT4wcdg7taQ&dl=1)

^This ones actually been done for quite awhile, it's even onsite. I was just too lazy to post it here.

Royal Palace Theme: [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/1zpk9m9lfcw1aru/Royal%20Palace.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/j61o2hy5dz4ms9p/Royal%20Palace.mus?token_hash=AAE5Jt4vl1e2G118e_peAQ-kdrWYkpgKcAl1czRKTvkqyA&dl=1) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/jvdrwjdwwt13xx6/Royal%20Palace.mid?token_hash=AAFYXsiua5wExbRwTKIA2SOzlmwk8pmURcrAQJkLfR_dXA&dl=1)
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Even Mooaar Final Fantasy Adventure)
Post by: FireArrow on July 04, 2013, 10:50:47 PM
Yay another update.

-Mana Palace: [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/vwzhrdselosxnw9/Mana%20Palace.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/uqea6x7qg78g5hg/Mana%20Palace.mus?token_hash=AAFAy0VWx39h3LW3LAwzS10IPVEPENUsAvEY3S0aShGpzw&dl=1) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/rvum4yjkzmgl0ih/Mana%20Palace.mid?token_hash=AAH3k3edztgbw5fJXZ9d0zScrJaefb40a4UzGtXIi0iqNg&dl=1)

The key signature of this song really confuses me, but I guess F minor makes the most sense?
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Pokémon Colosseum: Phenac City)
Post by: FireArrow on July 21, 2013, 10:35:45 PM
Yay, now I get to bump your arrangement project bubbles!

Phenac City: [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/mgely8bnx9z4ui9/Phenac%20City.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/jzxyvqdq1km5ekk/Phenac%20City.mus?token_hash=AAGndXgUt6oaRc6DWPp_gHoOL0SqudxY7xPPwgmCymGc-Q&dl=1) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/canr4acctu7hcd0/Phenac%20City.mid?token_hash=AAG1opvH57gHUGuWRLIpj8PTv_qCpeoCep7OeqONS1dGQw&dl=1)

I also fixed up Dimentio's arrangement of Cackletta's Theme (The notes were correct, the notation and readability was way off.) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/zmt8xcc89exsid2/CacklettasTheme.mus?token_hash=AAEz5sFa_GVFUybRo3p6nqvV7D63KOyVoCLggUiH-PfUWg&dl=1)
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Pokémon Colosseum: Phenac City)
Post by: Bubbles on July 22, 2013, 12:00:35 AM
Yay! :D I can't listen to it now..and actually I'm not sure when I can, but this got me really excited
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Pokémon Colosseum: Phenac City)
Post by: FireArrow on July 22, 2013, 12:02:37 AM
 :)

Actually, I forgot to go bump the arrangement project, I'll get on that now.
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Mario Kart Wii: Thwomp Desert)
Post by: FireArrow on July 24, 2013, 10:20:18 PM
If it's not 8 bit, it's hard...

Thwomp Desert: [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/2hcvhdrndtvpb1u/Thwomp%20Desert.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/g4qkt3tv1rorld8/Thwomp%20Desert.mus?token_hash=AAEMI5eLQgw0_h0U4TqeFxz1e9svp--nAgnDSkUZNb7sbQ&dl=1) [MIDI]  (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/nwmvpr2hhgpcban/Thwomp%20Desert.mid?token_hash=AAGycnLLU0JxK1qnawEWxe0oIImK8NMELUsOTWrHrNZ2gw&dl=1)  (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tNu114wdRDM)[YouTube][/url]

I'll be copying spit adding youtube links to the original for easier feedback.
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Mario Kart Wii: Thwomp Desert)
Post by: spitllama on July 24, 2013, 10:46:27 PM
Sounds great. You really did the song justice.

Bit concerned about measures like 5 and 20 though. Speed of 100 bpm on the dotted quarter note with octaves / repetitions on the same note? D:
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Mario Kart Wii: Thwomp Desert)
Post by: FireArrow on July 24, 2013, 11:02:11 PM
Quote from: spitllama on July 24, 2013, 10:46:27 PMSounds great. You really did the song justice.

Bit concerned about measures like 5 and 20 though. Speed of 100 bpm on the dotted quarter note with octaves / repetitions on the same note? D:


Thanks!

If it counts for anything, I can play that part choppily (is that a word?)
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Mario Kart Wii: Thwomp Desert)
Post by: Jompa on July 25, 2013, 02:21:03 AM
This is very good. The only thing I can complain about is the difficulty level (like spit said with the octaves).
And also about those sixteens at measure 16 trough 19 - couldn't you just write eights, and assign staccato to them?
And the Db in measure 17 and 19 - wouldn't you want to have those as C#?
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Mario Kart Wii: Thwomp Desert)
Post by: TheZeldaPianist275 on July 25, 2013, 10:27:01 AM
Fire, I'm impressed.  I was going to do this song eventually, and I remember it scaring me because of how hard it was.  I think you really did it justice.

And Jompa's right about the Db's, good job changing that.  Too bad about the difficulty level :/
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Mario Kart Wii: Thwomp Desert)
Post by: DonValentino on July 25, 2013, 11:42:23 AM
Nice work, Fire. Other than the things Jompa pointed up, it's very very nice.
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Mario Kart Wii: Thwomp Desert)
Post by: FireArrow on July 25, 2013, 12:00:08 PM
Woah, thanks guys! It actually took me quite some time to work out the main theme, but once I finished  that it it was pretty straight forward from there. However, I'm very unsure about some of the songs because of how dry they feel.

Quote from: Jompa on July 25, 2013, 02:21:03 AMThis is very good. The only thing I can complain about is the difficulty level (like spit said with the octaves).
And also about those sixteens at measure 16 trough 19 - couldn't you just write eights, and assign staccato to them?
And the Db in measure 17 and 19 - wouldn't you want to have those as C#?

1.I'll remove the octaves, it just doesn't sound right without them.
2. Something I learned from the live feed back thread is that staccatos mean "seperate it from the next note" not "shorten it." So I'd be able to do that for the first 5, but not the last one as no note follows it. I guess I could notate it that way, but I feel it would be easier to read if they were uniform. Now that I think about it, I need to remove the staccatos from the end of the into.
3. It's a broken G diminished chord, but it is a bit confusing to go from C# to Db in one measure. Thoughts?
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Mario Kart Wii: Thwomp Desert)
Post by: TheZeldaPianist275 on July 25, 2013, 01:04:03 PM
...okay, I admit it.  This is too catchy.  Fire, I'm literally pressing replay over and over.
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Mario Kart Wii: Thwomp Desert)
Post by: FireArrow on July 25, 2013, 01:16:54 PM
Haha, thanks. I had the same problem while arranging this song, it's a pretty brilliant composition (most of Mario Kart Wii has great songs.)
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Mario Kart Wii: Thwomp Desert)
Post by: Jompa on July 25, 2013, 02:52:25 PM
Actually Fire, at measure#17 it modulates:
It was in A minor up until now, but at 17 it goes into Phrygian Dominant "mode" (coincidentally I am composing a piece in Phrygian Dominant right now). It is worth mentioning that this actually is major - so you'll have to change the key! The scale is A Bb C# D E F G A, so you'll have to use loose accidentals for the Bb F and G.
Which brings me back to the Db - there is no Db in A major - in this situation it is pretty obligatory to use C#. :)
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Mario Kart Wii: Thwomp Desert)
Post by: FireArrow on July 25, 2013, 03:02:30 PM
Oh, haha, I thought I was being smart by recognizing a chord.  :P

When you say change the key signature, do you just want me to notate it with accidentals or actually put a C# and Bb in the key signature?
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Mario Kart Wii: Thwomp Desert)
Post by: Jompa on July 25, 2013, 03:19:27 PM
Change it to A major with three sharps - that's all you really have to do (just make sure all the pitches stay the same).
After you've done that there will be loads of accidentals for all the Bb, F and G, but that is just how it is supposed to be:)
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Mario Kart Wii: Thwomp Desert)
Post by: FireArrow on July 25, 2013, 03:32:58 PM
Ok, I'll get on that now. Would you recommend doing the same in the intro and measures 7-11?
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Mario Kart Wii: Thwomp Desert)
Post by: Jompa on July 25, 2013, 04:00:32 PM
Not at measures 7-11, because the song never actually modulates here. Just loose accidentals - you were probably concerned about that C#, but that is only there because it leads to the next chord, Dminor.
At the intro it appears as though the song starts in A major, but then halfway through the first measure it modulates to A minor, which it stays in until measure 17. If you wish to include this key change on the sheet, you will have to change the time to 6/8, in order to have a modulation here.

I also noticed that the notation in measure 2 is a little messy.
:)
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Mario Kart Wii: Thwomp Desert)
Post by: FireArrow on July 25, 2013, 04:06:29 PM
Ugh, I forgot an 8th rest in the L.H.

Fixed.
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Mario Kart Wii: Thwomp Desert)
Post by: Jompa on July 25, 2013, 04:37:26 PM
Fire, I want this arrangement to be perfect when it's done, therefore I am writing all of this, and I hope you don't mind the extra work you'll have to do:

1. In the first measure - first layer in the right hand:
in 12/8 the beats are on the dotted quarters. I could explain this further, but my point about this is that you cannot put down a half rest here. You have to put a dotted quarter rest followed by an eight rest.

2 In the second measure - both hands:
I know you already changed away from this but the following is the "correct" (at least the simplest, not to mention best looking) way to notate this:
Both hands should follow this rhythm:
eight - sixteenth - sixteenth - eight - eight(rest) - eight - eight(rest) - eight - eight(rest) - eight(rest) - dotted quarter(rest)
If you want a note to be shorter, staccato it!

3. At measures#3 to #6 & #12 to #15 - in the left hand:
I see on top of every third or so eight that there are dots above them.
Are those assigned for the eights or the dotted quarters?
It says on Finale that you assigned them to the eights but... I don't really see the point of assigning them to the eights, if that's what you did.
And if you assigned them to the quarters, they shouldn't be above the eights - because then they look like they are assigned to the eights.
But of course, if you think it is necessary to have them there, then that's just good:)

4. At measures #10 and #11 - left hand:
I don't know about you, but I would do something about the ledger lines in the left hand. an ottava alta assignment, or a clef change or something.
Of course, it's up to you if you at all want to change it.

5. At measures #16 to #19 - right hand:
Do you remember what I said at point #1 above, on how the beats work in 12/8?
At these measures you can't have a half rest followed by a quarter rest to make up half a measure - it's agains the 12/8 beats.
You'll have to change that to a dotted half rest.

6. At measures #16 to #19 - right hand:
I already pointed this out, about the sixteenths each followed by a sixteenth rest. And I never understood why you would want to have it like that, instead of just eights (with staccatos). I think you should change it. It makes it much prettier.

7. In the last measure - both hands:
the rests after that last sixteenth are wrong.
First off, you should change the sixteenth to an eight (I don't know if you want a staccato or not). Then that eight should be followed by two eight rests.
If you do that, it will be correct :)

8. (This is a weird one) Measures #16 trough the end:
Equip a big note value.
then click on at least one of the notes in each of these measures - only click notes that are at lower note values that the one equipped.
The point of doing this is:
After you changed the time signature, the notation didn't quite "go along with it". Therefore it must be updated, and this can be done for each measure by changing (or just clicking - if you want them to stay the same) one of the notes in the measures.
If you do this, the last bit will basically "fit" better and look better.
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Mario Kart Wii: Thwomp Desert)
Post by: Sebastian on July 26, 2013, 12:18:37 PM
Good work on thwomp desert. I hope you fix all those things jompa recommends. I really like this song and I really want to see it perfect.
Great Job!!
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Mario Kart Wii: Thwomp Desert)
Post by: FireArrow on July 27, 2013, 09:30:14 AM
Woah, I'm so sorry I missed this! I really appreciate you putting all this effort into my arrangement, I should buy you a cookie or something (I'm not even kidding.) Anyways,  I did most of what you said, but there were somethings I didn't agree with. I also noticed an error regarding accuracy at the end of the song.

Quote from: Jompa on July 25, 2013, 04:37:26 PM2 In the second measure - both hands:
I know you already changed away from this but the following is the "correct" (at least the simplest, not to mention best looking) way to notate this:
Both hands should follow this rhythm:
eight - sixteenth - sixteenth - eight - eight(rest) - eight - eight(rest) - eight - eight(rest) - eight(rest) - dotted quarter(rest)
If you want a note to be shorter, staccato it!

You can't staccato a note if there isn't one after it.

Quote3. At measures#3 to #6 & #12 to #15 - in the left hand:
I see on top of every third or so eight that there are dots above them.
Are those assigned for the eights or the dotted quarters?
It says on Finale that you assigned them to the eights but... I don't really see the point of assigning them to the eights, if that's what you did.
And if you assigned them to the quarters, they shouldn't be above the eights - because then they look like they are assigned to the eights.
But of course, if you think it is necessary to have them there, then that's just good:)

They're assigned to the eighths. The eights that I marked are different from the rest, but whether it be a staccato or accent, I don't know.

Quote6. At measures #16 to #19 - right hand:
I already pointed this out, about the sixteenths each followed by a sixteenth rest. And I never understood why you would want to have it like that, instead of just eights (with staccatos). I think you should change it. It makes it much prettier.

I guess I could do that to every note but the last one in the phrase if you think that would look better.

Quote7. In the last measure - both hands:
the rests after that last sixteenth are wrong.
First off, you should change the sixteenth to an eight (I don't know if you want a staccato or not). Then that eight should be followed by two eight rests.
If you do that, it will be correct :)

I think the value of a sixteenth fits that note perfectly, and I can't staccato it for reasons already stated. I did move the sixteenth rest be next to the sixteenth note though.
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Mario Kart Wii: Thwomp Desert)
Post by: Jompa on July 27, 2013, 10:07:36 AM
Oh, You can definitely staccato a note even if there isn't a note following it!
Staccato means to shorten the duration of a note and that the space between it and the next note will be replaced by silence <-- this is the definition I believe you are defending. However, rests count as well! Basically you can staccato ANY note, because regardless of what follows you'll be replacing the space between it with silence - and it doesn't even really directly affect what follows.
You can staccato any note you want to be shorter in duration. Trust me, you definitely can!
Think about it; it would be silly if we couldn't.



If you accept that, then I have some more criticism:
Criticism
I'll just start over with what you have now:

In measure 1:
You fixed the rest-problem, but you should move that eight downwards, to make it look like it is grouped with the layer at the bottom.

I still think you should do this (trust me, you can staccato even if there isn't a note after it.)
Quote2 In the second measure - both hands:
I know you already changed away from this but the following is the "correct" (at least the simplest, not to mention best looking) way to notate this:
Both hands should follow this rhythm:
eight - sixteenth - sixteenth - eight - eight(rest) - eight - eight(rest) - eight - eight(rest) - eight(rest) - dotted quarter(rest)
If you want a note to be shorter, staccato it!

Which of course means you can do this too:
Quote6. At measures #16 to #19 - right hand:
I already pointed this out, about the sixteenths each followed by a sixteenth rest. And I never understood why you would want to have it like that, instead of just eights (with staccatos). I think you should change it. It makes it much prettier.

You never really fixed this:
QuoteAt measures #16 to #19 - right hand:
Do you remember what I said at point #1 above, on how the beats work in 12/8?
At these measures you can't have a half rest followed by a quarter rest to make up half a measure - it's agains the 12/8 beats.
You'll have to change that to a dotted half rest.

Last measure:
Yeah, if you want a sixteenth there then that's cool. But I don't really see the difference between that and a staccato'd eight.
I'd probably staccato it anyways, even as a sixteenth.

After you changed the arrangement, I noticed you did something weird:
From measures #20 through #23 there is this sixteenth note followed by a sixteenth rest in each measure.
But why not just have those as eights?
[close]
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Mario Kart Wii: Thwomp Desert)
Post by: FireArrow on July 27, 2013, 10:21:58 AM
At least according to Olimar, a staccato means to separate a note from the following note, not to shorten the length of a note. If you want to shorten the length of a note, just use a shorter note value. I've had lots of arrangements where he's changed a staccatoed eight into a sixteenth for that very reason.

Not to say you're wrong, you may be right, but if I ever want this to get on site, I'm gonna have to go by his rules.

I did fix the rest in measure 1 though.
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Mario Kart Wii: Thwomp Desert)
Post by: Jompa on July 27, 2013, 10:36:43 AM
I don't think even he would like this, though.
You are leaving measure#2 very hard to read, and #16-#19 are really weird looking with those sixteenth, not to mention that I am right about the staccato'ing. The Wikipedia definition refers to it as shortening the duration of a note, which on top of that is most logical, but whatever. Olimar's the boss...

Still:
QuoteAt measures #16 to #19 - right hand:
Do you remember what I said at point #1 above, on how the beats work in 12/8?
At these measures you can't have a half rest followed by a quarter rest to make up half a measure - it's agains the 12/8 beats.
You'll have to change that to a dotted half rest.

And:
QuoteAfter you changed the arrangement, I noticed you did something weird:
From measures #20 through #23 there is this sixteenth note followed by a sixteenth rest in each measure.
But why not just have those as eights?
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Mario Kart Wii: Thwomp Desert)
Post by: FireArrow on July 27, 2013, 12:16:43 PM
Ok, fixed.

Regarding the staccatos, I'll just see what Olimar says when I try to submit this.
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Mario Kart Wii: Thwomp Desert)
Post by: Yugi on July 28, 2013, 01:19:37 AM
Jompa: Making threads heaps longer since 2012.
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Mario Kart Wii: Thwomp Desert)
Post by: FireArrow on July 31, 2013, 01:05:22 PM
Quote from: Yugi on July 28, 2013, 01:19:37 AMJompa: Making threads heaps longer since 2012.

In a good way.  ;)

Update:

-Jema's Realization: [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/7qefx6iz1vbt94f/Jema%27s%20Realization.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/k349q5f5n0t3env/Jema%27s%20Realization.mus?token_hash=AAHRD17lvR4u_uUxagOaIlqxZ0lOKvHXVT3qjrvH1Em-7Q&dl=1) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/gmxh8b1l3w6r8ky/Jema%27s%20Realization.mid?token_hash=AAGEq3DT9vNH4G9rCmEBhY9JdP5qLSClYFsCp7RW4hKLmw&dl=1)  (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Kitc13F_70E)[YouTube][/url]

Special thanks to Echo for splitting the mp3 and helping me with the timing/looping.
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Final Fantasy Adventure: Jema's Realization)
Post by: FierceDeity on August 02, 2013, 01:51:51 PM
I agree with Jompa on the staccatos. When literally translated, staccato does mean "detached", so, separated, but it's come to be recognized as generally halving the value of a note. There's enough ambiguity, though, to the point where it can really be used as the composer prefers. That aside, great job with Thwomp Desert :D I'm not really familiar with the other pieces on here (except for Bein Friends, solely from super smash bros :P), but they all seem pretty good, so kudos!
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Final Fantasy Adventure: Jema's Realization)
Post by: FireArrow on August 02, 2013, 06:54:17 PM
I can't really debate this, because I'm not sure myself. Next time Olimar does live feedback, I'll ask him and tell you guys what he says.
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Final Fantasy Adventure: Jema's Realization)
Post by: Sebastian on September 25, 2013, 07:10:08 AM
If you can't decide what to do on your to do list, I recommend you do In the Darkness from Super Paper Mario. :) I have been wanting that one for a while :)
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Final Fantasy Adventure: Jema's Realization)
Post by: FireArrow on September 25, 2013, 03:30:40 PM
Yeah, I'm so sorry about that. It's above my skill level to arrange the non melodic parts of the song, but I'll see if I can finish the main part of the song (I got stumped when it modulated... >_>)
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Final Fantasy Adventure: Jema's Realization)
Post by: Sebastian on September 26, 2013, 06:38:13 AM
Oh... Ok  :D
You don't have to arrange it if you don't want to :)
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Final Fantasy Adventure: Jema's Realization)
Post by: FireArrow on October 20, 2013, 11:34:58 AM
Quote from: mariolegofan on September 26, 2013, 06:38:13 AMOh... Ok  :D
You don't have to arrange it if you don't want to :)

I have a lot of things on my to-do list, but I'll see what I can do. If all else fails, I'll give you what I do have.

And.... Update!

[SNES] Super Mario RPG: Valentina (Margarie Margarita) [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/gkrd9qovf743hoy/Valentina.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/4na8so413qpmx61/Valentina.mus?token_hash=AAG3vYvWhVdh4_3ZGLXW9_Ygvg2RfPqO1nS56wVMCtHu0Q&dl=1) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/wzuvqesufs4qyj8/Valentina.mid?token_hash=AAEnz7AhsA064JrU99OBliW24bWb9dDGaY6fEz3GjMQajA&dl=1)  (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R_e-6t34Cwc)[YouTube][/url]

I got really annoyed with the latter half of the song and started doing logical guesses rather than actually trying to figure it out (I even combined voices in some areas. >_>)

Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Super Mario RPG: Valentina (Margarie Margarita))
Post by: DonValentino on October 20, 2013, 12:29:25 PM
Not bad! Just some things:

1. The key signature is 2/4, yeah, but I'd say it's quarter=130 and eights instead of 16ths. That way looks way cleaner. :)
2. On measure 26 the Ebs are Ds sharp and the Gb is F sharp (already in the key signature, E minor).

And ignore the key changes I added in mine (in case you compare it), its fine the way you have it. :D

Nice job!
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Final Fantasy Adventure: Jema's Realization)
Post by: Sebastian on October 20, 2013, 01:05:55 PM
Quote from: FireArrow on October 20, 2013, 11:34:58 AMI have a lot of things on my to-do list, but I'll see what I can do. If all else fails, I'll give you what I do have.

And.... Update!

[SNES] Super Mario RPG: Valentina (Margarie Margarita) [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/gkrd9qovf743hoy/Valentina.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/4na8so413qpmx61/Valentina.mus?token_hash=AAG3vYvWhVdh4_3ZGLXW9_Ygvg2RfPqO1nS56wVMCtHu0Q&dl=1) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/wzuvqesufs4qyj8/Valentina.mid?token_hash=AAEnz7AhsA064JrU99OBliW24bWb9dDGaY6fEz3GjMQajA&dl=1)  (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R_e-6t34Cwc)[YouTube][/url]

I got really annoyed with the latter half of the song and started doing logical guesses rather than actually trying to figure it out (I even combined voices in some areas. >_>)
ok :)
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Super Mario RPG: Valentina (Margarie Margarita))
Post by: FireArrow on October 20, 2013, 04:04:59 PM
Quote from: DonValentino on October 20, 2013, 12:29:25 PMNot bad! Just some things:

1. The key signature is 2/4, yeah, but I'd say it's quarter=130 and eights instead of 16ths. That way looks way cleaner. :)
2. On measure 26 the Ebs are Ds sharp and the Gb is F sharp (already in the key signature, E minor).

And ignore the key changes I added in mine (in case you compare it), its fine the way you have it. :D

Nice job!

I wasn't even aware that you arranged this. Well, yours is more accurate and it doesn't feel right to just copy paste your second layer into mine. >_>

Anyways, as for the specific things you said, I disagree. This song is in the style of bach's contrapuntal stuff, which is almost always written with sixteenth notes at a slower tempo. As for the accidentals, I also disagree, it's a modulation to C minor (I'll have to think about it though, considering  that measure is modulating back to E minor.)
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Super Mario RPG: Valentina (Margarie Margarita))
Post by: DonValentino on October 21, 2013, 10:26:13 AM
Quote from: FireArrow on October 20, 2013, 04:04:59 PMmodulating back to E minor.)

Exactly.

Well, yeah, I suppose, if you compare it with Bach. :)
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Big Christmas Update :D)
Post by: FireArrow on December 26, 2013, 06:22:28 PM
Yay, Christmas (shh.)

Dragon Warrior - Castle Theme: [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/21w8w74spwsal11/Castle%20Theme.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/55sduj1bh6o2mvp/Castle%20Theme.mus?dl=1&token_hash=AAF85FmGTZVR_7dLSF-FYWhdp9bkiTcHvV3zf1XF0CfLRw) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/auffkyevgwo3ebv/Castle%20Theme.mid?dl=1&token_hash=AAF69aQIOkw7PCTwgbIWudsoINEfyTN0hjvO_gbyE02zXg)  (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fWIXb677sYk)[YouTube][/url]

Wizards and Warriors - Title Theme: [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/py1gehb3jjo7des/Wizards%20and%20Warriors%20-%20Title%20Screen.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/v4jovvaulk47tol/Wizards%20and%20Warriors%20-%20Title%20Screen.mus?dl=1&token_hash=AAHy-gXkWyD-hU4aEEICSWBPPEHdBbHXxBGzYl7FR4Ze0w) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/nuwgro6679621mj/Wizards%20and%20Warriors%20-%20Title%20Screen.mid?dl=1&token_hash=AAE50yTXln-h5WgPD1Bdug5qTCCXYFrpFDXEcm5Li5zsKw)  (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OGWiNiLAy94)[YouTube][/url]

Romancing Saga - Battle 1: [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/8solq27k5703g5l/Romancing%20Saga%20-%20Battle%201.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/umxtbi55n5aqkih/Romancing%20Saga%20-%20Battle%201.mus?dl=1&token_hash=AAEQ35aDIgr4n0JkxcLtRhsIPu6BdPzlxMKl4334Ll2vEQ) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/3lecjje5g244fyf/Romancing%20Saga%20-%20Battle%201.mid?dl=1&token_hash=AAEoyXltL2vURK30XlSmR8zSrs6BCzHTKtb1w2icKqI30Q)  (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bOVdvsbMjIg)[YouTube][/url]

Final Fantasy Adventure - Final Battle (Not playable): [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/lrnsvjjxrl8pr8z/Final%20Battle.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/a69233ly695i69j/Final%20Battle.mus?dl=1&token_hash=AAHPRIsLKJ6PUT5KapCtODjsIgKhY3SFLzFMztMfgResig) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/2391e8jjhjkgdcn/Final%20Battle.mid?dl=1&token_hash=AAHLnfweeMLQHxSg9oInBL8yq_zhLZKGX2XyRUn-UKodsg)  (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=__5WHhIYuwI)[YouTube][/url]
-Theme of Another Dimension: [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/s9duok32mhvinss/Talon%27s%20Theme.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/ka284ij188g8vas/Talon%27s%20Theme.mus?dl=1&token_hash=AAH4-_VsU_-sTetZWgB9MhC-ucfwc8Ds3X4CBrM8gTzMEg) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/0pexenxkxmtdlwa/Talon%27s%20Theme.mid?dl=1&token_hash=AAGZl-vY6oY9sV6tbz4diOCx2g7DQS52K_3iw2CG_zsMxg)  (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Uh1AH4nYOxw)[YouTube][/url]

^I was too lazy to bother and make it playable, anyone up for it?  :P

Kirby Squeak Squad - Final Battle: [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/7ha0gyuep7nc2h6/Kirby%20Final%20Battle.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/mp6ozcjqlwovemu/Kirby%20Final%20Battle.mus?dl=1&token_hash=AAE--vB_AsyEizcxcAjv3rBDI2ol4uz0Iqkcsov2c9NNcQ) [MIDI] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/ifaycofxiyoy0gd/Kirby%20Final%20Battle.mid)  (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mZwzkjtB12k)[YouTube][/url]

^Sounds like crap.

Pokemon X/Y - Defenders of Kalos: [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/bfnb7masru6ki93/Heroes%20of%20Kalos.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/1kq1737w06zyvf2/Heroes%20of%20Kalos.mus?dl=1&token_hash=AAH953Fmk0H62MxyVwVWwXssRp00_KvexboZz-u9eKVGnQ) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/avqmvtidrm7w0r4/Heroes%20of%20Kalos.mid?dl=1&token_hash=AAEdwHVAAvV7G_Qy_g6SG9ndCk6ITBGTFmK7ZwQ8Cvfusw)  (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kdlTTHNQKhg)[YouTube][/url]

Skullgirls - Fugue in 3 Goddesses: [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/q8haouzlyxxh9pt/FugueinThreeGoddesses.pdf) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/nazkgoj30ew9fb6/FugueinThreeGoddesses.mus?dl=1&token_hash=AAEiURK_fAMFGF7zrNni78QUqLfOVWalowXP_UwXhKnDag) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/aoxqo4q6bu6w1hh/FugueinThreeGoddesses.mid?dl=1&token_hash=AAEK9bcLORtgdf09pjkZuIpUfMkj_Zs6o9e_JH_W_nLUVQ)  (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3WAXunakguc)[YouTube][/url]


Arrangements I'm giving up on:

In the Darkness (requested by MLF): [Mus] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/j9iqk0iypb56jjv/In%20the%20Darkness.mus?dl=1&token_hash=AAEWGTdVSaWntz3d-fZZSFYUNc3qMr5eRh0GJH6GoHzFGg)
K.K. Disco (Requested by Nebbles): [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/msj78e7p14ilvuc/K.K.%20Disco1.mus?dl=1&token_hash=AAHKOUVg009Kc0lplzcsNAyDd9V-EUDfw4FqWMd9Ic3QWw)

If someone wants to finish these, that'd be great! And Don, I'm just not gonna bother messing with Valentina: your arrangement is far superior, so just focus on getting that one on site. :))
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Big Christmas Update :D)
Post by: Sebastian on December 27, 2013, 01:33:21 PM
Could you give me a pdf of your progress of In the Darkness? I guess I'll finish it :)  I dont have finale 2012.
Title: Re: FireArrow's Arrangements: (NEW: Big Christmas Update :D)
Post by: fingerz on January 03, 2014, 05:44:47 PM
OH NICE!! Man, you've got some seriously groovy tunes there! I especially like your Thwomp Desert arrangement! I think it's perhaps a bit light in terms of chords or voices, but I'd have to check the original again just to be sure. Very well done with all of them, though! Just tidy up the rests and use quavers instead of semiquavers. :)

Question: Why DO you arrange? What makes you want to arrange? Think hard on that and let me know. :D