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Other => Creativity Corner => Story Telling => Topic started by: RAWRZEZ~ on July 25, 2012, 07:45:04 PM

Title: Dangerous Secrets Discussion
Post by: RAWRZEZ~ on July 25, 2012, 07:45:04 PM
Anything regaurding my story please post here! Constructive Critisism is welcome, for I want to make this story the best it could be so tell me if I should fix something. Thank you for reading my story   :)
Title: Re: Dangerous Secrets Discussion
Post by: K-NiGhT on July 25, 2012, 07:55:24 PM
Needs more Marty. That is all.
Title: Re: Dangerous Secrets Discussion
Post by: RAWRZEZ~ on July 26, 2012, 07:49:51 AM
Lol XD Marty can be any character you think you are lol. Im not re-writting it just to put you in, sorry ^_^
Title: Re: Dangerous Secrets Discussion
Post by: K-NiGhT on July 26, 2012, 10:30:43 AM
Oh yeah you finished it already.
Title: Re: Dangerous Secrets Discussion
Post by: K-NiGhT on July 26, 2012, 04:06:21 PM
Lol I think they took down that little blue slide at the pool. Last year maybe?
Title: Re: Dangerous Secrets Discussion
Post by: RAWRZEZ~ on July 29, 2012, 10:38:34 AM
Lol yeah, I wrote it before I noticed that ^_^ I've only been to the pool once this year though I don't miss that slide- way too short and boring XD
Title: Re: Dangerous Secrets Discussion
Post by: K-NiGhT on July 29, 2012, 11:57:39 AM
I got a bruise on that slide once. It hurt.
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