New Arrangement! Here is the main theme from Roller Coaster Tycoon!
MID (https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B49w9S9yM4hoRTVUNWVLSHNEc0k/edit?usp=sharing)
PDF (https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B49w9S9yM4hoRWstM053YUtlenM/edit?usp=sharing)
:D
I suggest editing your first post with the new links. You can find that button at the top right of the original post.
There are some inaccuracies in the Shadow Queen arrangement -- specifically in the right hand -- that I will hopefully get to in a bit.
You are my best friend!!!!!!!
I love your paper mario arrangments!!!
Could u do some for me?
heres the link to my request page: http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4609.0
thanks!!!
ps: you are an excellent arranger!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Cant wait to see tutankoopa battle!
I love the Shadow Queen Battle Second Form!
I cant wait to see more paper mario ones!!!
Hi everyone! ;D Thanks for all the feedback about my Paper Mario sheets. I have another one. It is Huff N Puff Battle from Paper Mario 64. Next is Tutankoopa Battle. (I use Musescore, if you're wondering why there's no MUS file for my arrangements.)
Huff N Puff Battle:
PDF:http://www.mediafire.com/?c6en4nlsxxxotw0 (http://www.mediafire.com/?c6en4nlsxxxotw0)
MID:http://www.mediafire.com/?5xbjb85n9c0eftb (http://www.mediafire.com/?5xbjb85n9c0eftb)
Huff N Puff Battle
-Game name needs to be under the song title
-Composer name needs to be bold
-Misses metronome marking
Bar 3: Wow, those are some big dynamics O_O. Any change you can make them somewhat smaller?
Bar 12 (and bars that look like this one): Wrong rhythm groupings. I would recommend reading this (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4845.msg168866#msg168866) post.
Bar 19-25: Some notes here sound wrong (can't tell what they really are right now). Also, I think you should think of something else instead of those ties, because it's pretty hard to read (I almost can't see them).
Bar 26: Wrong rhythm groupings again.
Bar 27-38: Nothing really wrong here, but it sounds empty. Anything you could do to fill it up a bit?
Lava Piranha Battle
-Misses game name
-Misses arranger name
-Misses copyright
-Composer name needs to be bold
-Some ties in the sheet are barely visible
Bar 1-4: I would recommend using a second layer for the top note in the right hand
Bar 2: I don't expect anyone with a left hand that big; I should move it to the right hand.
Bar 8 and 12: I would use a 8vb notation, because few people can really read those notes in the right hand.
Bar 13-16: Nothing wrong, but it sounds empty.
Bar 26: The trill doesn't work. Also, there is a wild trill visible on the page. What is it doing there?
Bar 30-31: Same as in bar 2, impossible to play notes in the left hand.
Bar 32: The layer 2 rests here are unnecessary.
Shadow Queen Battle
-Composer names need to be bold
-Arranger name needs to italic
-Song name needs to be between quotation marks
Bar 32: Better use a eighth rest here, and not two sixteenth.
I would make your page neater by doing this:
[url=link][text][/url]
for example on your piranha battle:
[url=http://www.4shared.com/office/BSf9jWux/Lava_Piranha_Battle_Go_Mario_G.html][PDF][/url]
will turn out to be [PDF] (http://www.4shared.com/office/BSf9jWux/Lava_Piranha_Battle_Go_Mario_G.html)
hope i helped. :)
Hey, everybody! Thanks for all the feedback and thanks Bloop for providing me with what I need to work on. I will post later today (about 3-4 P.M. CST) with the updated sheets and a new sheet. Thanks! :D Also, Hot Times in Mt. Lavalava is a slow version of Escape from Mt. Lavalava, with a few changes, so I will do those eventually. They might look the same, but they're not.
Check the original post for links!
Upcoming:
Hooktail Battle (Paper Mario: The Thousand Year Door)
General Guy Battle (Paper Mario 64)
Lava Piranha Attack (Paper Mario 64)
Final Battle With Bowser pt. 1 (Paper Mario 64)
Bowser and Kammy Battle (Paper Mario The Thousand Year Door)(Wish me luck, as this is ridicuously hard!)
WOW!! I love huff n puff theme!!
Quote from: kartiomart on November 16, 2012, 03:27:19 PMYou are my best friend!!!!!!!
I love your paper mario arrangments!!!
Could u do some for me?
heres the link to my request page: http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=4609.0
thanks!!!
ps: you are an excellent arranger!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Will u please be able to do one of these??
You're welcome, pieordie. Also..
I would recommend reading this (http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=481.0) post if you want your submissions on the site, so I or anyone else doesn't have to tell this every time.
Also, like spitllama said, you should edit your first post with your arrangements. This gives people a better overview over your arrangements. Also, if you don't mind, I would like to re-arrange them in Finale so you have a .MUS file if you want your arrangements on the site.
Escape Mt. Lava Lava
-6 pages is way too much for only 32 bars. The bars with the fast melody notes could easily be 2 bars per line, and with the following things probably some places what could be 3 or 4 per line.
Bar 1: This bar is unnecessary, at least I think so. I would remove it.
Bar 2-4: There is actually pretty much wrong in these bars. This is how I would arrange it:
(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi46.tinypic.com%2F2lvbz1c.png&hash=55544fa66066998877c01aceba691b5ab7d4d419)
I don't know if musescore can do the note moving in the first bar.
Bar 5-8: The dynamic in bar 5 needs to be removed. Also, I don't hear such bass notes in the original. I would change it to the bass tune in bar 3-4. Plus, the notes in the right hand are barely readable. I don't know exactly what's the best way to change them, but I think it's this:
(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi49.tinypic.com%2Fv6ruvt.png&hash=4c35087ec16b984e41cb960250b576050b0540d0)
Bar 9-12: The dynamic in bar 9 needs to be removed. Also, I don't here those melody notes in the original. You can also try to put the bass tune from bar 3-4 here.
Bar 17-24: The notes are there in the original... But barely noticeable. Bass tune from bar 3-4 again.
Bar 23-24: I am still considering what to think about the bottom D in those bars... It looks weird to me.
Bar 25-32: Barely readable notes again. Try this:
(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi46.tinypic.com%2F2qnw95v.png&hash=20efa51d9fb3d1c7679551e9e958f777adb5db91)
Bar 32: I would put a repeat bar hear leading to bar 4 (if you're going to remove the first bar).
I can't wait until your other arrangements ;).
Thanks, Bloop and also, the new arrangements are at the top ;)
Lava Piranha Battle
Bar 2: I don't think I explained myself that good last time, I meant that the top E should be moved to the right hand, since I don't know if anyone has a left hand that big to play the bass and the E together.
Bar 7 & 12: The 8va's here are pretty high placed. I would lower them a bit,
Bar 30-31: Like in bar 2, an unplayable left hand.
Tutankoopa Battle:
-The song is in C# Minor, meaning it has 4 sharps as key signature.
-The bass tune is slightly wrong, both notation and notes. This is the bass throughout the whole song:
(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi45.tinypic.com%2Fwwhumx.png&hash=0ffd2467a05b8669f793f9750bed30542983de00)
Bar 1-4: Those bars need to be at the end of the song. Also, the notation is pretty much wrong:
(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi46.tinypic.com%2F2dl3tc2.png&hash=43097321bb41ce310ddf2b3680e6e19d926e6a4b)
The intro is this:
(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi47.tinypic.com%2Fxl9fty.png&hash=a026a852e90e6d747786aa6da37a8c381d07c4ac)
Bar 5: The E needs to be a eighth note, not a sixteenth with a rest.
Bar 6: This bar is almost the same like bar 5 in the original, but only with a layer 2 F# in it.
Bar 10: This bar needs to be exactly the same as bar 9.
Bar 12: The sixteenth notes here need to be eighth notes.
Bar 15-16 and 19-20: The C#-E combinations here need to be placed an eighth beat further.
Bar 18: The right hand in bar needs to be like this:
(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi48.tinypic.com%2F287n6o8.png&hash=30cdcb5508c7d47389a15b1ac6b24fab919088de)
Wow Bloop nice work.
Thanks. I thought I could have some sort of return to NSM. I wasn't doing here much really.
Nice Job pieordie1!
I would suggest u use finale and dropbox would be very nice. heres a link to dropbox: www.dropbox.com and i dont have a good link to finale......
Well, good job and keep up the good work!!
Hey, guys. I haven't uploaded in a while because i've been studying for my midterms, but i have been working on new sheets and my old ones. At the moment I have arranged Bowser's Rage (Bowser battle pt. 1) from PM64 and Dry Dry Ruins from PM64 and now I am working on Jade Jungle and Lava Piranha Attack.
I will probably upload at New Years with my arrangements.
Thanks for yor patience! ;D
Upcoming Sheets (the final edit)
Jade Jungle-PM64
Lava Piranha Attack-PM64
Tower-NSMBWii and Hooktail Battle-PMTTYD simultaneously
General Guy Battle-PM64
Toad Town Sewers-PM64
King of the Koopas(Bowser Battle pt.2)-PM64
Battle Fanfare-PM64
Hey You!(the other battle fanfare)-PM64
Siege on Bowser's Castle-PM64
Hurry-SMG2
Battle Theme-SMRPG
Bowser Battle-PMTTYD
ok, cant wait!!! ;D
Cool! :D
Happy new year! And also, bloop I keep on forgetting to give you permission to rearrange them for a mus file. Yes, you may.
yay.
I suggest placing (and organizing) your first post with all your arrangements, like most arrangers do. We don't have to look through the thread for arrangements, for example your Huff 'n Puff battle.
Oh well, onto the sheets.
Bowser's Rage
-The tempo marking is missing. Also, the tempo is somewhat to slow, it needs to be 145 BPM.
-W-where's the time signature? :-[
-I believe the key signature is A minor (no flats nor sharps), until bar 41, where it changes into E minor.
Bar 1-16: These bars sound pretty much empty. Maybe you could change the bass notes into pure octaves?
Bar 55: The tied E needs to be a dotted eighth note.
Bar 56: This bar is pretty much cramped. Could you wide it up a bit?
Jade Jungle
-I miss tempos and key signatures :'(
-Literally all the C's in the left hand need to be D's (except bar 25-32)
-The bass tune could better be notated like this:
(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi50.tinypic.com%2Fdmb13s.jpg&hash=cd8efd5198e8fb4e20ce5763eacc761a69ad0999)
Bar 10: The 16th F# and the 16th rest should be a staccato 8th F#.
Bar 13-16 and 21-23: You probably should put the right and left hand together in the right hand, and arrange the bass tune in these parts.
Bar 25-32:
(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi49.tinypic.com%2F10qjx4w.jpg&hash=544dd55f765b7edbf9c6407b57435063ae338db0)
Dry Dry Ruins
-Yay time signature. There's no tempo though. Tempo is 163 BPM
-I believe key signature is G major (1 sharp) OR C minor (3 flats). Anyone else who has an opinion about this?
-The left hand...
Bar 1-7, 11-20: C3-C2-G2-C3-C3-G2-C2
Bar 8-10: Bb2-Bb1-E2-Bb2-Bb2-E2-Bb1 (don't know what these are? Scientific pitch notation) (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Scientific_pitch_notation)
Bar 21-44: No idea what notes these are. I do know that they're wrong...
-Right hand:
Bar 5, 7, 9, 11: The quarter G is actually two eight G's.
Bar 12: The F# here is a dotted quarter note and a eight note.
Bar 13-15: The top notes here need to be removed.
Bar 30: (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi48.tinypic.com%2F2nvmud.jpg&hash=13b20c40f653b0b422f2d1614ae5d68de57ad92e)
Bar 35-36, 37-38: (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi49.tinypic.com%2F258rvk7.jpg&hash=a911353625c4764b319f6d5bef6fd113c0344077)
Bar 44: The tied A needs to be a dotted quarter note.
The time signature disappeared? I will check that later on , it was there in musescore.
i suggest that u start at the very beginning of jade jungle like in the original
new arrangement at first post!
Am I being an idiot, or do you only have one arrangement in the OP? I want to see your other arrangements. :(
wat
I don't really like this arrangement at all. The song itself isn't fit to be played on a piano (I remember I once arranged this song for some percussion instruments. Once), what makes the sheet 99% full wrong notes.
The sheet is unreadable (bar 1-8), unplayable (9, 10, 13, 29-41), and just plain random at how I look at it (21-28), so I won't get into nit-picky details.
That said, sorry, but I wouldn't try to submit it to the site.
Bloop's right, pie. Some songs are just not meant to be arranged for piano. And that's one of those. :P
Nice try though. Looking forward to some of your future arrangments :D
I tried looking for the song you guys were talking about.
Do you mind if I give it a try?
Quote from: Brassman388 on March 24, 2013, 12:48:58 AMI tried looking for the song you guys were talking about.
Do you mind if I give it a try?
I dont mind. I would love to see you do it. :)
New Arrangement! Here is the main theme from Roller Coaster Tycoon!
MID (https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B49w9S9yM4hoRTVUNWVLSHNEc0k/edit?usp=sharing)
PDF (https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B49w9S9yM4hoRWstM053YUtlenM/edit?usp=sharing)
:D
I will try and put all my arrangements on the first post. I need to re-upload them.
Just as at quick glance, a few things I noticed:
Expand the chords, waltzes usually have the full chords (it sounds like it in the original as well.)
Your missing a voice, it starts on Eb, by measure 7, you actually have 3 melodies. :P
I like this song, so if there's anything you need help with, just ask.
I don't know about the G5 in measure 2..
And like FireArrow said, the offbeat chords are higher for the most part and complete triads usually.
About the first few measures, I always heard the instrument playing G Ab G F Eb D B as the melody and the instrument you used in your sheet as the countermelody. Does anyone else hear it this way? Or am I just weird?
I think measure 34 is a bit off in the left hand, but I haven't listened to the original song recently, so I may be wrong.
Oh, I thought that was an Eb. >_< But yeah your right about it being the melody.