Submission Information:
Series: Super Mario
Game: Paper Mario: The Thousand-Year Door
Console: Nintendo GameCube
Title: Character Abilities
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: mariolegofan (http://forum.ninsheetm.us/index.php?action=profile;u=3424)
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Found my netbook :P Good thing I remembered the password
The key signature in bars 35-42 should be F, as the tonic is also F (like the first part of the song). For the rest, it's fine :p
Quote from: Bloop on October 21, 2014, 10:38:24 AMThe key signature in bars 35-42 should be F, as the tonic is also F (like the first part of the song). For the rest, it's fine :p
Sure? I did look over this one with Olimar on Tinychat...
I'm pretty sure, it's even playing the same theme from the first few bars.
Ok :)
Ill get on it
I don't remember this one, even though a copy of it is on my hard drive... o_0 But yes, a key change to F major seems appropriate.
Ok....anything else?
Would you mind changing that key for me Olimar? Fricken' Finale Notepad won't let me change it >:(
I'd suggest going over this one again, very carefully. There are little wrong notes around the place which you might pick up.
And 'Composition' is spelled incorrectly on the sheet.
Quote from: Deku Trombonist on November 07, 2014, 12:32:53 AMI'd suggest going over this one again, very carefully. There are little wrong notes around the place which you might pick up.
And 'Composition' is spelled incorrectly on the sheet.
Um......ok?
Subtitle is also incorrect. I'll see if I can go through this one more when I get to a computer.
Quote from: Olimar12345 on November 07, 2014, 07:14:55 AMSubtitle is also incorrect. I'll see if I can go through this one more when I get to a computer.
Thanks :)
I'd change the problems if I could :P
Keep me posted :)
Previous errors:
-misspelled "Composition"
-Incorrect subtitle (No "2")
-Key signature needs to be F major at 35
New stuff:
-The Bb in the RH in measures 2, 6, 10, 14, and 36 should be a B natural.
-Add staccatos to the LH quarter notes in measures 2, 4, 6, 8, 10, 12, 14, 36, 38, 40, and 42.
will do more later
Quote from: Olimar12345 on November 07, 2014, 01:03:17 PMPrevious errors:
-misspelled "Composition"
-Incorrect subtitle (No "2")
-Key signature needs to be F major at 35
New stuff:
-The Bb in the RH in measures 2, 6, 10, 14, and 36 should be a B natural.
-Add staccatos to the LH quarter notes in measures 2, 4, 6, 8, 10, 12, 14, 36, 38, 40, and 42.
will do more later
Fixed everything except the key change which notepad won't let me do. Could you do it please?
You uploaded the wrong file.
Whoops....I'll fix that when I get to a computer....tonight.
Fixed...haha :)
Sorry about that....serious brain fart :P
I'm impressed! You do good arranging. I'm on mobile atm, so I can't give you anything too deep, but I was wondering... I wonder how the sheet would look re-bared as 6/8, combining the current 2 measure phrases into 1 measure and halving the note values? You'd be keeping the same beat patterns, but just condensing the notation.
Quote from: Bespinben on November 13, 2014, 10:32:11 PMI'm impressed! You do good arranging. I'm on mobile atm, so I can't give you anything too deep, but I was wondering... I wonder how the sheet would look re-bared as 6/8, combining the current 2 measure phrases into 1 measure and halving the note values? You'd be keeping the same beat patterns, but just condensing the notation.
Hmmm....I don't know. Should I do it?
It might take some time
Quote from: Bespinben on November 13, 2014, 10:32:11 PMI'm impressed! You do good arranging. I'm on mobile atm, so I can't give you anything too deep, but I was wondering... I wonder how the sheet would look re-bared as 6/8, combining the current 2 measure phrases into 1 measure and halving the note values? You'd be keeping the same beat patterns, but just condensing the notation.
It would roughly look like this (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/59554832/nsm/Character%20Abilities12345.mus). (finale kind of lost some of the dynamics and crescendos in the process)
Quote from: mariolegofan on November 08, 2014, 07:59:14 AMFixed everything except the key change which notepad won't let me do. Could you do it please?
None of these were fixed in the file you uploaded, btw.
Quote from: Olimar12345 on November 14, 2014, 11:41:58 AMNone of these were fixed in the file you uploaded, btw.
Huh??
Dang.....I'll fix it when I get on a computer...
Quote from: Bespinben on November 13, 2014, 10:32:11 PMI'm impressed! You do good arranging. I'm on mobile atm, so I can't give you anything too deep, but I was wondering... I wonder how the sheet would look re-bared as 6/8, combining the current 2 measure phrases into 1 measure and halving the note values? You'd be keeping the same beat patterns, but just condensing the notation.
I think 6/4 would probably make more sense if you're going to go down that road.
Quote from: Olimar12345 on November 14, 2014, 11:41:58 AMNone of these were fixed in the file you uploaded, btw.
Ok. Fixed now....for sure :)
Quote from: Deku Trombonist on November 14, 2014, 10:34:58 PMI think 6/4 would probably make more sense if you're going to go down that road.
I say leave it the way it is...unless it's a big deal?
I added the key change and cleaned a few small things. Personally I think the 3/4 is fine. It could work a number of ways, though.
Quote from: Olimar12345 on November 15, 2014, 07:53:14 AMI added the key change and cleaned a few small things. Personally I think the 3/4 is fine. It could work a number of ways, though.
Thanks Bud! :)
Accepted? :)