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Title: [GB] Pokémon Red/Blue/Yellow - "Printer Error" by Tangy
Post by: Zeta on December 02, 2014, 06:08:44 PM
Submission Information:

Series: Pokémon
Game: Pokémon Red/Blue/Yellow
Console: Game Boy
Title: Printer Error
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Tangy (http://forum.ninsheetm.us/index.php?action=profile;u=836)

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Title: Re: [GB] Pokémon Red/Blue/Yellow - "Printer Error" by Tangy
Post by: Tangy on December 02, 2014, 06:11:22 PM
The original:


It was also in G/S/C, but yellow came first... not much to this one. ^^

edit: thanks, I got it ^^
Title: Re: [GB] Pokémon Red/Blue/Yellow - "Printer Error" by Tangy
Post by: The Deku Trombonist on December 02, 2014, 06:27:44 PM
You need to get rid of the 's' in 'https' to make the embed work.
Title: Re: [GB] Pokémon Red/Blue/Yellow - "Printer Error" by Tangy
Post by: Olimar12345 on December 03, 2014, 08:22:48 AM
Really close to being there, just a few things:

-Use the accented "é" symbol in the subtitle. (you can just copy/paste mine there)

-Remove the "c." in the tempo mark to keep it uniform with everything else on the site.

-Change the D naturals in measures 20 and 28 to C double sharps. In addition, remove all of the courtesy accidentals for the D#'s.

-Move the last measure up a system so that it is not the only measure in it's system.

-Add GameFreak to the copyright.

-Site URL should read [ http://www.ninsheetm.us/ ] (obviously without the []'s)

-Add an opening dynamic mark, even if it's just "mp" or something.
Title: Re: [GB] Pokémon Red/Blue/Yellow - "Printer Error" by Tangy
Post by: Tangy on December 03, 2014, 04:16:43 PM
Quote from: Olimar12345 on December 03, 2014, 08:22:48 AM-Add GameFreak to the copyright.

Do you mean so it looks like "Nintendo / GameFreak © 1996"?
Title: Re: [GB] Pokémon Red/Blue/Yellow - "Printer Error" by Tangy
Post by: Olimar12345 on December 03, 2014, 04:33:57 PM
That'll work. How about this:

Nintendo, The Pokémon Company, GameFreak © 1996
Title: Re: [GB] Pokémon Red/Blue/Yellow - "Printer Error" by Tangy
Post by: Bespinben on December 03, 2014, 04:35:03 PM
It's very subtle, but I think there's something of an undertone that maybe should be incorporated? It sounds like it's always an octave and a 4th below the melody.
Title: Re: [GB] Pokémon Red/Blue/Yellow - "Printer Error" by Tangy
Post by: Olimar12345 on December 03, 2014, 04:40:51 PM
Considered it, but I think it might be caused by the timbre of the soundfont used; I don't think it was intentional. Incorporating it here might make it sound wonky...
Title: Re: [GB] Pokémon Red/Blue/Yellow - "Printer Error" by Tangy
Post by: FireArrow on December 03, 2014, 04:41:06 PM
Quote from: Bespinben on December 03, 2014, 04:35:03 PMIt's very subtle, but I think there's something of an undertone that maybe should be incorporated? It sounds like it's always an octave and a 4th below the melody.

Oh god, now that you pointed it out, listening to this song gives me a headache.
Title: Re: [GB] Pokémon Red/Blue/Yellow - "Printer Error" by Tangy
Post by: Bespinben on December 03, 2014, 05:01:39 PM
Quote from: Olimar12345 on December 03, 2014, 04:40:51 PMConsidered it, but I think it might be caused by the timbre of the soundfont used; I don't think it was intentional. Incorporating it here might make it sound wonky...

I agree. I hear a similar thing listening to the ostinato of Lavender Town, now that I remember.
Title: Re: [GB] Pokémon Red/Blue/Yellow - "Printer Error" by Tangy
Post by: Tangy on December 03, 2014, 05:26:25 PM
Interesting. When I originally arranged this I based it off of the version from GSC (hence the file names... actually I just realized I forgot to change that, does it matter?), and the timbre sounds a lot cleaner. They're identical otherwise. edit: actually I think the one in yellow might be slightly faster. Gonna see if I need to fix my tempo marking h/o. edit 2: nah nevermind they're both very slightly above 150 from what I can tell but closer to 150 than 151 so I'm just gonna leave it...


Anyways, I've updated the sheets with the requested changes. Thanks! Anything else?
Title: Re: [GB] Pokémon Red/Blue/Yellow - "Printer Error" by Tangy
Post by: Olimar12345 on December 04, 2014, 02:05:15 PM
Good to go!