Submission Information:
Series: Super Mario
Game: Super Mario World
Console: Super Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: MAP 2 (Overworld)
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Brawler4Ever (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=107)
Replacement Information:
Links to Existing Sheet: MUS (http://www.ninsheetm.us/download/mus/1778) | MIDI (http://www.ninsheetm.us/download/mid/1778) | PDF (http://www.ninsheetm.us/download/pdf/1778)
Replacement Type: Edit (existing arranger remains)
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This basically just a formality. Full credits remain with G-Han; I didn't even touch the notes. :P
The reason for the replacement is that I believe that the song has the wrong name. The song plays in Donut Plains and in Chocolate Mountains in Super Mario World. I've called it "Donut Plains" with "Chocolate Mountains" as a subtitle.
I also updated the url and copyright. Everything should be accurate now.
Reference:
[EDIT] Now that I look at it, it plays in more than just Donut Plains and Chocolate Mountain. It kind of plays everywhere, so calling it World Map makes sense. :P
I dunno, I'll let the mods be the judge. :)
Just noticed:
You could fix the third beats RH quarter-8th rests to dotted quarter rest.
Done
Nice work!
I would recommend only one thing. I always avoid 1 measure systems and you have one. I would have 2 4 measure systems instead of what you have which is 3, 4, 1.
Great work!
Always look for an official soundtrack release when it comes to stuff like this. Super Mario World does indeed have an official soundtrack release, and therefore we have an official name for the track:
"MAP 2 (Overworld)"
http://www.mariowiki.com/Super_Mario_World_(album)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KIQU-lI_BC4
When there is no soundtrack release, then yes, using the most recognizable name would be the best choice (ex: the Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Blue/Red Rescue Team OST), but NSM standard dictates that when there is an official name, it must be used, which is the case here.
Thanks, bespin. Based on the SMW sheets that we have on site, and from what you said, I believe that the sheet name should be called "Overworld."
I have two sheets that I would like to present as a result; both have their pros and cons.
This (https://www.dropbox.com/s/9t1dswdiv0ocmx2/Overworld.mus?dl=0) is the sheet suggested by MLF. It has a 4 4 measure system, rather than the 4 3 1 measure system present in the original. The problem is that the tempo mark is covered by some notes, and there's nothing that I can do to change it.
Here (https://www.dropbox.com/s/21h85t1mys832vw/Overworld%20Alternative.mus?dl=0) is another form of the sheet. It runs a 3 2 measure system with a repeat. The problem is that it only plays once. Both the original and the prior sheet play twice.
I'm fine with either. I just want to know what everybody else thinks. :)
Fixed it for you
https://www.dropbox.com/s/dc67of68eyknio5/Overworld.mus?dl=0
I'd go with the 4 4 one. I think it's unnecessary to have volta brackets when it's such a short song. And don't worry about the problem of tempo mark being covered, people with higher versions of Finale can fix that for you. :)
Alrighty then! Thanks, MLF, for your edit. I've submitted your version above in MUS, MIDI, and PDF form.
Everything should be fixed now. ;D
Quote from: Tobbeh99 on June 03, 2015, 03:55:38 PMI'd go with the 4 4 one. I think it's unnecessary to have volta brackets when it's such a short song. And don't worry about the problem of tempo mark being covered, people with higher versions of Finale can fix that for you. :)
My version fixed the tempo mark problem
Quote from: Brawler4Ever on June 03, 2015, 04:40:04 PMAlrighty then! Thanks, MLF, for your edit. I've submitted your version above in MUS, MIDI, and PDF form.
Everything should be fixed now. ;D
Excellent!
Quote from: Brawler4Ever on June 03, 2015, 03:17:49 PMThanks, bespin. Based on the SMW sheets that we have on site, and from what you said, I believe that the sheet name should be called "Overworld."
You are very welcome. However, I don't think I communicated my message quite right. There is no "believing" or guessing that needs to be done. We HAVE an OFFICIAL name, which is "MAP 2 (Overworld)", not "Overworld". Don't compare to the other ones on-site -- all of them are incorrectly titled. For future reference, this is the complete list of tracks from the official OST release (which can be found in the wiki I linked above):
(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi1111.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fh475%2FBespinben%2Ftracklist_zps1hwmnweb.jpg&hash=62e4ae09f18b8f4fe78bebf01879d6e9633af4f8) (http://s1111.photobucket.com/user/Bespinben/media/tracklist_zps1hwmnweb.jpg.html)
In regards to the discussion over measure distribution, I do like the 4-and-4 layout, but it's customary to have an indent on the first system, which the new upload lacks. I do omit this sometimes as well, but only as a last resort. Instead, if you do the 3-and-2 layout (using a 1st & 2nd ending repeat structure), you can incorporate the indent, and to solve the "stretchiness" of the second system of 2 measures, just compose a 1-measure final ending, resulting in a total of 3-and-3.
Love this track! ;D
I thought measure 4 looked kinda funny with the tied eighths, so I added swing notation. Personally, I think it looks cleaner.
How's this? (https://www.dropbox.com/s/xni5ix6vbcdmnfd/MAP%202%20%28Overworld%29.mus?dl=1)
Quote from: Latios212 on June 03, 2015, 07:06:54 PMLove this track! ;D
I thought measure 4 looked kinda funny with the tied eighths, so I added swing notation. Personally, I think it looks cleaner.
How's this? (https://www.dropbox.com/s/xni5ix6vbcdmnfd/MAP%202%20%28Overworld%29.mus?dl=1)
(^o^)=b Bespin seal of approval
Sweet! I am loving this collaboration! ;D
Original post has been updated with latios' version.
Quote from: Brawler4Ever on June 03, 2015, 07:37:34 PMSweet! I am loving this collaboration! ;D
Original post has been updated with latios' version.
Amazing when we actually make progress on NSM :)
This submission has been accepted by Bespinben (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=2510).
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