Thank you MarioPianist for this inspiration! :)
This story, take it like a side dish! While you're waiting for Latios, Trains, and MarioPianists' main course, the best story, just kill time by reading this! Or don't! Whatever you want!
Please comment here and not on the other one! Thank you!
This storys character list is almost complete! Lets see whos in it, shall we?
Antagonists
Blueflower- This cunning mastermind is with Count Bleck as they attempt to break down the world and nothing will stop them as they have the Dark Prognosticus by their side.
Braixen- This adorable little fox is the pet of Blueflower. They are inseperable and work great as a team! Did you know that he will rip your throat out?
Nocturne of Shadow- This merciless slayer works for an uknown force. He claims to be working for the Shadow Queen, but is he actually? Coming with a dark past, Nocturne does not joke around and he is there to do only one thing: Get his job done.
JDMEK- This fierce villain works for Dimentio. He is a force to be reckoned with as he will bide his time and wait for someone to slip up and when they do.........
Maestro- Intelligent, Full of Knowledge and wisdom, powerful, are just the words to describe this magnificent being. He does not work for any villains, but for himself. His plot to plunge the world into eternal darkness is just getting started and he will not fail....
Altissimo- This vicious troublemaker will do anything to delay and annoy the heroes. She must not be underestimated as it will be the last thing the hero ever does. ..
Protagonists
Hero of Trains- Ah Trains. A loyal friend who can not watch her friends being hurt. She is a smart, tough, intelligent protagonist that never gives up! She will bring all the antagonists to their knees even if it may hurt her. Watch out bad guys, Trains is here. 8)
Latios- Latios is a trusty sidekick. He is a great organizer and helps others. Although he is shy, he is very friendly. Latios is the glue that holds the team together. Although he might not talk much, his great organization will help the protagonists to conquer even the most difficult of puzzles.
Pianist-Pianist is a card player and gambler at Rogueport, secretly a weapons and magic dealer. Having been attacked several times he has an untrusting nature. He prides himself on his intellect and combat ability, but refuses to take another's life, so he deals the weapons to help with the Shadow Queen. He is aggressive without reason and have nearly attacked several people. Never been in love, come close, but never got there. He is bitter, but has a caring side
The Mario Pianist- The Mario Pianist is kinda shy at first, but also has a sense of humor. He has a sarcastic humor that could get him into trouble (making jokes at the wrong time). He is a leader of some sort. Even in the most darkest and depressing of times, his words will make anyone smile and laugh. He is known for breaking tensions, though a majority of unnecessary battles will be through him making jokes at the wrong side. But who cares? Who doesn't love fighting?
MLF- MLF is a strong, but silent type that is ready to fight and can be very aggressive at times, but also very sweet and thoughtful at times. He loves peace. He is the peacemaker of the group, but when necessary, he will resort to force and violence. He is ready to carry the time and face off against any enemies who dare attack him or his team.
Don Valentino- Don Pianta.....Don Valentino! Does this ring any bell? Yes, he is the leader of the mafia of the pianta's. He is the boss of Rogueport and we will need to cooperate and respect him if we want to get to some places. We're lucky that he doesn't go out assassinating people he doesn't like and killing them in the worst ways because if he did.......
Dudeman- Dee is an outcast, shunned by the world for his strange and inexplicable powers: he can read thoughts, not in terms of words, but in terms of emotions and images. This causes him to know a lot more about a person's motivations and deepest secrets than anyone, and though he rarely speaks, what he says is/was often interpreted as intrusive and creepy, though he always cared for whomever he met. This caused many people to shun him. Even he doesn't really understand his ability, and it scares him too. He has retreated to a secluded portion of the world (I'm super unfamiliar with the world of the Paper Mario games, but I'm sure you can find a good place), where he spends his time keeping outsiders away through traps and small mental projections (a very limited but effective side-effect of his affliction). He is quiet, nervous, scared of people, but really good at heart. He just hasn't found a way to express it yet.
ThatGamer- She's funny, sarcastic, and all out weird, yet down to earth and a helping hand when people need it! She has a master sword like Link's! She's also the one who keeps the fun alive in the group, in their despair, and in their times of darkness! She will erase all doubts and reinforce them with hope! Very cool, if you ask me!
Nebbles- Nebbles like swords, big swords. She wants to use the sword to chop some enemies up! Everyone should beware! She is not afraid to use her sword against evil and will see every villain chopped up. Sometimes, I feel more pity for the villains than the heroes! Don't worry, Nebbles is here, with her team to back her up and kick the enemies butt!
Insig- Insig is shy with people he doesn't know, to being somewhat (friendly) aggressive with people he knows. He is a creative, intelligent person who tries to avoid the need for combat. He's also a difficult person to work with because while he's always open to new ideas, and he can be quite stubborn. He will use words to stop majority of fights, but if that fails, his team is ready to kick some @$$!
Tobbeh-He is calm, cool, and collected, but he is easily angered. Do not let that get to you though! He is extremely friendly to friends and he is not the one to be ditching you. He wants to be a king or a god, but will his prayers be answered? Follow through the life of Tobbeh as he ascends to the place.....of a god.
Well this is all for now. I will be putting up protagonists later and more edits will come. Thanks!
I'm excited to see the protagonists! Can't wait! :D
Quote from: ThatGamer on August 26, 2015, 01:27:05 PMI'm excited to see the protagonists! Can't wait! :D
same same same same same same same
Quote from: mayastarr041 on August 26, 2015, 10:13:33 AMNocturne does not joke around
can we save this for future reference
can't wait to see more :P
Man, Shadow and I r like teh bomb!
Oh hey, just noticed Alti got added to the list of antagonists. Neat-o!
nooooooo alti i thought you were better than this
Hey guys, just an fyi, some of you will die and will be tortured and some will be beaten up badly. If you don't want to be that tell me or that will happen!
Quote from: mayastarr041 on August 26, 2015, 08:49:20 PMHey guys, just an fyi, some of you will die and will be tortured and some will be beaten up badly. If you don't want to be that tell me or that will happen!
No worries on my part, you can do what you want to me! Thanks for the heads up!
As long as I don't die to a sex machine or something like that I'm OK.
I doubt I can die
at least until close to the end
I'm like girahim, nobody wants me to die and I don't end up dying except when my mastah deems it necessary
Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on August 26, 2015, 09:11:19 PMI'm like girahim, nobody wants me to die and I don't end up dying except when my mastah deems it necessary
XD
And I'm cool with whatever the story throws my way.
I'm fine with anything, but you should also know that I despise profanity.
Quote from: Hero of Trains on August 26, 2015, 09:17:33 PMI'm fine with anything, but you should also know that I despise profanity.
Gotcha ;)
I'll make sure that won't happen!
Quote from: Dudeman on August 26, 2015, 07:50:06 PMOh hey, just noticed Alti got added to the list of antagonists. Neat-o!
nooooooo alti i thought you were better than this
I like being an antagonist for no reason other than I like screwing shit up
Sorry
I'm just happy I can slice people up with big swords.
I'm happy to be a part of the story at all, should all be grateful for that.
Alright guys chapter 1 is up!
I already read it before you told us to read it! :D
I must say, it's very good! And glad you are adding new characters! However, the font is kind of big... :o
Hey I got to be a protagonist! Nice! The good is good and shall live and the evil is bad and shall die! Because that's how all the stories goes.
Quote from: ThatGamer on August 27, 2015, 11:20:03 AMI already read it before you told us to read it! :D
I must say, it's very good! And glad you are adding new characters! However, the font is kind of big... :o
Oopsies! Sorry! :C
Quote from: Tobbeh99 on August 27, 2015, 11:21:09 AMHey I got to be a protagonist! Nice! The good is good and shall live and the evil is bad and shall die! Because that's how all the stories goes.
And definetly! ;)
Although evil is not going down without a fight!
can you add me into the story as blueflower's pet fox
Quote from: braixen1264 on August 27, 2015, 11:45:56 AMcan you add me into the story as blueflower's pet fox
And that I will! ;D
2 questions, when can we play lol together and what do you want your role to be? Just his pet?
I may be able to play on Saturday. Anytime from about 2pm pst I guess so you can decide the time, as long as it doesn't screw up dinner time.
And yes, just his pet. His lovely pet fox. I kill things.
Quote from: mayastarr041 on August 26, 2015, 10:13:33 AMDudeman-
BRB DYING
XDDDDDDD
That is actually the funniest thing I've seen all day.
Sorry! Will get to it soon!! Honest!
Quote from: braixen1264 on August 27, 2015, 11:49:33 AMI may be able to play on Saturday. Anytime from about 2pm pst I guess so you can decide the time, as long as it doesn't screw up dinner time.
And yes, just his pet. His lovely pet fox. I kill things.
Gotcha! ;)
No worries; I found the lack of description hilarious! Plus it will leave everyone else in suspense...
And nice job on the first chapter! Everything's set up and your characters stand out from each other. Keep it up!
I just checked my desription in protagonists! Very nice! I like how I was described! :D
Great job! (Although in real life I more often use well balanced knives, which can be thrown or used in close combat as well)
But for the purposes of the story, a hammer/cannon is great!
Quote from: Hero of Trains on August 27, 2015, 11:58:12 AMGreat job! (Although in real life I more often use well balanced knives, which can be thrown or used in close combat as well)
But for the purposes of the story, a hammer/cannon is great!
In real life I don't regularly kill people... :o
Hey, I don't kill anyone! But I know how to defend myself. Also there's a ton of good books on things like lock picking and knife throwing.
Quote from: Hero of Trains on August 27, 2015, 12:04:34 PMHey, I don't kill anyone! But I know how to defend myself. Also there's a ton of good books on things like lock picking and knife throwing.
I never learned how to defend myself...
Quote from: mayastarr041 on August 27, 2015, 11:47:15 AMAnd that I will! ;D
2 questions, when can we play lol together and what do you want your role to be? Just his pet?
for the record I can usually play anytime
Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on August 27, 2015, 12:28:02 PMfor the record I can usually play anytime
Great! Didya add me yet?
Oh oh oh, I can help you with shipping your characters!
wait what who ever said shipping was involved
next up they'll start making creepy fan art
and fanfics of a fanfic
Nice you added my character description. :)
I started reading. Looks promising enough.
Thanks guys and your welcome! And fire, if you really want a ship, we can arrange thay! Maybe Trains and Dudeman?
Sorry
"Hey!" a voice rang out as I turned to see a blue Bob-omb, "You knew here?" --> "Hey!" a voice rang out as I turned to see a blue Bob-omb, "You new here?"
Uknown to her a grunt was behind her and was about to strike. --> Unknown to her, a grunt was behind her and was about to strike.
Trains sidestepped and gave him him a hard kick. --> She sidestepped and gave him a hard kick. (You don't know who the girl is yet)
The air grew darker and colder and tendrils of Shadows wrapped around us, restricting movement. --> The air grew darker and colder and tendrils of shadows wrapped around us, restricting movement.
She growled and for a moment, something weird happened. --> The queen growled and for a moment, something weird happened. (The reader can mistake "She" for Trains)
"Watch where you're going loser!" he yelled at us. --> "Watch where you're going, loser!" he yelled at us.
"We are trying tog fight the Shadow Queen and obtain the crystal stars," Trains explained as Pianist tensed again. --> "We are trying to fight the Shadow Queen and obtain the crystal stars," Trains explained as Pianist tensed again.
"We could use are not her member." --> "We could use another member."
No.
Not to be rude or anything, Dudeman's quite nice, but no shipping me with anybody. Or else I'll use my hammer/cannon and blast your brains out. Got it? Great! ;D
Also Braix, it's "We are trying to fight the Shadow Queen" ;)
Quote from: braixen1264 on August 27, 2015, 06:38:17 PMSorry
"Hey!" a voice rang out as I turned to see a blue Bob-omb, "You knew here?" --> "Hey!" a voice rang out as I turned to see a blue Bob-omb, "You new here?"
Uknown to her a grunt was behind her and was about to strike. --> Unknown to her, a grunt was behind her and was about to strike.
Trains sidestepped and gave him him a hard kick. --> She sidestepped and gave him a hard kick. (You don't know who the girl is yet)
The air grew darker and colder and tendrils of Shadows wrapped around us, restricting movement. --> The air grew darker and colder and tendrils of shadows wrapped around us, restricting movement.
She growled and for a moment, something weird happened. --> The queen growled and for a moment, something weird happened. (The reader can mistake "She" for Trains)
"Watch where you're going loser!" he yelled at us. --> "Watch where you're going, loser!" he yelled at us.
"We are trying tog fight the Shadow Queen and obtain the crystal stars," Trains explained as Pianist tensed again. --> "We are trying too fight the Shadow Queen and obtain the crystal stars," Trains explained as Pianist tensed again.
"We could use are not her member." --> "We could use another member."
Oh thank you! I just realized those! You're the best!
I should really check more thoroughly! Thanks again!
lol whoops, fixed haha
Quote from: braixen1264 on August 27, 2015, 06:38:17 PMSorry
"Hey!" a voice rang out as I turned to see a blue Bob-omb, "You knew here?" --> "Hey!" a voice rang out as I turned to see a blue Bob-omb, "You new here?"
Uknown to her a grunt was behind her and was about to strike. --> Unknown to her, a grunt was behind her and was about to strike.
Trains sidestepped and gave him him a hard kick. --> She sidestepped and gave him a hard kick. (You don't know who the girl is yet)
The air grew darker and colder and tendrils of Shadows wrapped around us, restricting movement. --> The air grew darker and colder and tendrils of shadows wrapped around us, restricting movement.
She growled and for a moment, something weird happened. --> The queen growled and for a moment, something weird happened. (The reader can mistake "She" for Trains)
"Watch where you're going loser!" he yelled at us. --> "Watch where you're going, loser!" he yelled at us.
"We are trying tog fight the Shadow Queen and obtain the crystal stars," Trains explained as Pianist tensed again. --> "We are trying too fight the Shadow Queen and obtain the crystal stars," Trains explained as Pianist tensed again.
"We could use are not her member." --> "We could use another member."
Braixen, you fool, you got it wrong still...
We are trying
to fight the shadow queen...
Quote from: Hero of Trains on August 27, 2015, 06:41:42 PMNo.
Not to be rude or anything, Dudeman's quite nice, but no shipping me with anybody. Or else I'll use my hammer/cannon and blast your brains out. Got it? Great! ;D
Also Braix, it's "We are trying to fight the Shadow Queen" ;)
Yes ma'm, I won't be shipping you with anyone! :)
I want to be in one piece! ;)
You posted that 7 seconds after I fixed it TG :P
Oops, looks like Trains and Braixen beat me too it!
see what i did there
I'm literally face palmung hard. Are not her member? *groan*
Quote from: Hero of Trains on August 27, 2015, 06:41:42 PMNot to be rude or anything, Dudeman's quite nice, but no shipping me with anybody. Or else I'll use my hammer/cannon and blast your brains out. Got it? Great! ;D
dudeman x trains action make it happen
I'm literally face palmung hard. Are not her member? *groan* --> I'm literally face palming hard. Another member? *groan*
Very funny Braix. I really need a spell checker for tissue damn site.
Very funny Braix. I really need a spell checker for tissue damn site. --> Very funny Braix. I really need a spell checker for this damn site.
okay im done
Quote from: mayastarr041 on August 27, 2015, 06:52:11 PMVery funny Braix. I really need a spell checker for tissue damn site.
You can send me the chapters before you release them so I can edit it for you.
You get spell check, I get early access! Win win!
Not you too Dudrman! Aren't you supposed to be dead? Trains shot you!
Quote from: braixen1264 on August 27, 2015, 06:55:39 PMYou can send me the chapters before you release them so I can edit it for you.
You get spell check, I get early access! Win win!
Hmmmmm. Nope! ;D
I'm kidding! You have yourself a deal!
I really want to see Trains X Dudeman actually...make it happen please, o magical book ;D
No.
Quote from: ThatGamer on August 27, 2015, 06:59:18 PMI really want to see Trains X Dudeman actually...make it happen please, o magical book ;D
You wanna be that creepy guy who writes terrible fanfiction that is shunned by the fans and creator? That's the path you are choosing. It is a dark and dangerous path that will change your very being down into your soul. It shall consume you. Stay back, wayfarer, lest you suffer its iniquities.
:)
Quote from: Dudeman on August 27, 2015, 07:00:33 PMYou wanna be that creepy guy who writes terrible fanfiction that is shunned by the fans and creator? That's the path you are choosing. It is a dark and dangerous path that will change your very being down into your soul. It shall consume you. Stay back, wayfarer, lest you suffer its iniquities.
Deep dudeman, deep.
*takes out cannon*
Don't take that cannon lightly. It stings like nothing else.
Now now Trains. That is extremely dangerous!! Very very dangerous!!
I can point this thing wherever I want. *blows hole through wall*
What did the wall do to deserve this?! :'(
It shipped me with Dudeman.
Wait, the wall did that? That's one hyper-intelligent wall. And it should be ashamed of itself. Which it can't be. 'Cause it's dead now. Sad face.
Hey trains, my dog says he thinks you and Dudeman work well together!
Don't worry sweets, she won't shoot you!
Trains doesn't like boats
I would advise against confirming a ship this early
Okay, for Trains own peace of mind, I recommend that you stop with the shipping banter. I think it's making her uncomfortable.
I honestly really like Trains, she is a very kind person. If she doesn't want to be bugged I will respect that! ;)
You guys don't have to worry about me. I'm fine. But remember, I have a cannon.
From Piltover ;)
That changes into a hammer ;) ;)
can't shoot me with a cannon
Quote from: mayastarr041 on August 27, 2015, 07:19:58 PMFrom Piltover ;)
That changes into a hammer ;) ;)
I'd ship it
Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on August 27, 2015, 07:20:16 PMcan't shoot me with a cannonI'd ship it
Same! ;)
Jayce, my first champion, whom I suck with, deserves love.
maya, can you play league this saturday? if you can, what time? i'll buy you a skin or a champ if you want
Quote from: braixen1264 on August 27, 2015, 07:23:34 PMi'll buy you a skin or a champ if you want
don't do it, buy me one instead
but shes new
If Nocturne wants it, you can give it to him! It's fine!
And around 4 pm Paris time.
can we leave the LOL talk to pm's and such thank you
sure sorry lol
Quote from: mayastarr041 on August 27, 2015, 06:30:14 PMThanks guys and your welcome! And fire, if you really want a ship, we can arrange thay! Maybe Trains and Dudeman?
Ship me with Fire
I want a ship
make it a sloop or a yacht
Quote from: blueflower999 on August 27, 2015, 08:46:59 PMShip me with Fire
Sorry bb, but I'm not in the story. You can get in on some of the Heroman action though.
Quote from: Hero of Trains on August 27, 2015, 07:18:53 PMYou guys don't have to worry about me. I'm fine. But remember, I have a cannon.
Oooooh, tsundere~
Quote from: mayastarr041 on August 28, 2015, 05:33:16 PM"WHAAAT??? Hummina hubbity hubbida hippity hoobida hammala huffala hoofala... REALLY?"
Absolute best line of the entire story. 11/10. XD
Quote from: Dudeman on August 28, 2015, 05:51:04 PMAbsolute best line of the entire story. 11/10. XD
Agreed. This thing is good. Can't wait to see it develop! It's interesting to me; never played Paper Mario before.
Glad you guys enjoyed it! I just want funny stuff to make up for the dark chapters later.
Really dark >:)
That ending bit with the guy in the chest was really amusing for some reason. Can't tell if that's one of us or a character in the game.
Quote from: blueflower999 on August 28, 2015, 09:56:40 PMThat ending bit with the guy in the chest was really amusing for some reason. Can't tell if that's one of us or a character in the game.
he's from the game-I actually remember watching my friend play this entire part and it felt very familiar. The rest of it will be a mystery to me though
I played the game last month and yes, most of the events and dialogue are taken straight from the game. Often almost word for word even.
Quote from: mayastarr041 on August 29, 2015, 02:58:26 PMBraixen shifted, yawned, and fell asleep again.
This describes me accurately