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Title: [PC] Undertale - "sans." by JesterMusician
Post by: Zeta on December 19, 2015, 09:08:52 AM
Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Undertale
Console: PC
Title: sans.
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: JesterMusician (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4459)

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Title: Re: [PC] Undertale - "sans." by JesterMusician
Post by: JesterMusician on December 19, 2015, 09:52:06 AM
Title: Re: [PC] Undertale - "sans." by JesterMusician
Post by: DonValentino on December 19, 2015, 01:43:07 PM
Nooooooooooo! I was about to do this J;

lol it's ok, good work. However, needs more swag! Staccatos plz :J
Title: Re: [PC] Undertale - "sans." by JesterMusician
Post by: BrainyLucario on December 20, 2015, 08:27:22 AM
Your arrangements are always really good!!!! Keep up the great work!!!
Title: Re: [PC] Undertale - "sans." by JesterMusician
Post by: Olimar12345 on December 23, 2015, 06:57:50 PM
Really good! Do you mind moving your composer/arranger and copyright info down a bit, to more closely resemble [this] (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=481.0) example? The composer/arranger names shouldn't really be in line with the title, at least the way we format it here on NSM (especially since you have plenty of space available).

Other than that, I feel the arrangement fairs pretty well. I personally would have tried to preserve more of the light, separated, "bouncy" style emitting from daht bari sax. Right now it seems rather legato. Adjust the formatting and it'll be fine though.

Title: Re: [PC] Undertale - "sans." by JesterMusician
Post by: JesterMusician on December 24, 2015, 02:37:35 AM
Quote from: DonValentino on December 19, 2015, 01:43:07 PMNooooooooooo! I was about to do this J;

lol it's ok, good work. However, needs more swag! Staccatos plz :J
Quote from: Olimar12345 on December 23, 2015, 06:57:50 PMReally good! Do you mind moving your composer/arranger and copyright info down a bit, to more closely resemble [this] (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=481.0) example? The composer/arranger names shouldn't really be in line with the title, at least the way we format it here on NSM (especially since you have plenty of space available).

Other than that, I feel the arrangement fairs pretty well. I personally would have tried to preserve more of the light, separated, "bouncy" style emitting from daht bari sax. Right now it seems rather legato. Adjust the formatting and it'll be fine though.

I moved the names down and rearticulated the notes to emphasize the bounciness of the piece. =)
Title: Re: [PC] Undertale - "sans." by JesterMusician
Post by: Zeta on December 24, 2015, 06:30:48 AM
This submission has been accepted by Olimar12345 (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=83).

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot