Submission Information:
Series: Kirby
Game: Kirby's Adventure
Console: Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Orange Ocean
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Static (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4960)
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Hey, sounds pretty good, Static! I love these KA arrangements of yours... :D
Oh, and nice use of the added-in dynamics. They make the arrangement more interesting.
- I thought this was strange when I was playing it - I'm hearing an Ab instead of An near the end of measure 2.
- Measure 12 An->Bbb because descending chromatically to Ab?
- The other part where I suspected something was up - those Eb's in m. 14 should be D's. Same with 18.
Great sheet! I think the B section sounds cool with pedal, but maybe that's just me haha d: in any case nice work, and the three things I mentioned above all I have to say about the sheet.
All the things you mentioned have been fixed, and I also changed some articulations to make it a little more accurate/sound better.
Also, I do agree, the pedal works really nicely there, but in the original it still sounds separated so I didn't notate one. Kind of a performer's choice thing I think.
Thanks for the feedback!
No prob!
This submission has been accepted by Latios212 (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4344).
~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot