Submission Information:
Series: Mega Man
Game: Mega Man 4
Console: Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Dive Man Stage
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: WaluigiTime64 (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4771)
Replacement Information:
Links to Existing Sheet: MUS (http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/mus/630) | MIDI (http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/mid/630) | PDF (http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/pdf/630)
Replacement Type: Challenge (new arranger)
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The correct title is "Dive Man Stage".
- m. 2 & 4: Maybe you could add a grace note in the RH into beat 3, similar to the original.
- m. 5-6: The LH is crying for some tom drum love. The silence is just uncanny.
- m. 32: The bottom note of the RH dyads should be a B-nat. Also, I'd turn the octaves into just single notes; that's a little heavy compared to the original. Finally, the LH is missing an F-nat in the last beat.
if you arrange Mega Man stuff I'll critique it :D
Good job with these MM4 replacements, Waluigi! This site needs 'em. I'll try to take care of Bright Man...
Quote from: Dudeman on March 31, 2017, 08:31:56 PM- m. 2 & 4: Maybe you could add a grace note in the RH into beat 3, similar to the original.
I kinda wanted that, and I might put it in, but it sounded weird when I did before.
Quote from: Dudeman on March 31, 2017, 08:31:56 PM- m. 5-6: The LH is crying for some tom drum love. The silence is just uncanny.
I know, and that was my main problem with the original, but it sounded so awkward when I tried... I felt like maybe an actual drum beat should be put there, but I'm not able to. I might get help with it.
Quote from: Dudeman on March 31, 2017, 08:31:56 PM- m. 32: The bottom note of the RH dyads should be a B-nat.
Oops.
Quote from: Dudeman on March 31, 2017, 08:31:56 PMAlso, I'd turn the octaves into just single notes; that's a little heavy compared to the original.
Ok.
Quote from: Dudeman on March 31, 2017, 08:31:56 PMFinally, the LH is missing an F-nat in the last beat.
Oops. Added, except as E#, not Fnat.
Quote from: Dudeman on March 31, 2017, 08:31:56 PMif you arrange Mega Man stuff I'll critique it :D
And I'll always respond to it!
Quote from: LeviR.star on March 31, 2017, 08:47:05 PMGood job with these MM4 replacements, Waluigi! This site needs 'em.
I'm on it!
Quote from: LeviR.star on March 31, 2017, 08:47:05 PMI'll try to take care of Bright Man...
Already one step ahead of you.
Quote from: WaluigiTime64 on March 31, 2017, 08:50:54 PMAlready one step ahead of you.
Dang!
Oh well... there's still Wily Stage 1... Wily Stages are my favorite themes...
Title corrected
Wah.
A few wrong notes:
- m. 16 should have C# instead of Bb under the E#'s in the RH.
- m. 22 goes G#-Fx-G# in the LH, not F#.
- The C# in the LH of m. 24 should be a Cn.
That's all. I've taken the liberty of editing that into your files. We good, or anything else you wanted to discuss?
Quote from: Latios212 on April 23, 2017, 09:29:01 AMI've taken the liberty of editing that into your files.
Oh, thank you!
Quote from: Latios212 on April 23, 2017, 09:29:01 AMWe good, or anything else you wanted to discuss?
Nah, we're cool.
This looks fantastic!
This submission has been accepted by Static (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4960).
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