Submission Information:
Series: Fire Emblem
Game: Fire Emblem Echoes: Shadows of Valentia
Console: Nintendo 3DS
Title: Echoes
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Latios212 (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4344)
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Official title as on the sound selection.
Looks spot on to me. I can't find anything to critique.
I'm positive the RH chord in m2 b1 is a F-Ab-C
Otherwise, it's great
Thank you both! I've updated that chord.
I'm hearing the chord in m2 (from the bottom up) as Eb-F-Ab-Bb-C. That's also what the chord in m6 should be.
EDIT: I'm also hearing a G below the Ab in m7 and a C between the Bb and Eb in m8.
Quote from: Static on June 09, 2017, 01:09:19 AMI'm hearing the chord in m2 (from the bottom up) as Eb-F-Ab-Bb-C. That's also what the chord in m6 should be.
aha Mael I'm not crazy those Bb's were there, just on top of your Ab'sAs for measure 7, added. I had thought that sounded a little empty before, so thanks.
As for the last measure, as much as I would like to test out how that sounds on a piano/keyboard right now, I can't. I remember the 4-note chord already sounding a little bit iffy, on the verge of becoming muddy-sounding, and I'm afraid adding another major second that low would make it sound like a mess (as well as maybe making it more awkward to stretch to hit the notes - idk). I don't think I would like to add the extra note in, but I don't have a good way of judging that right now, so I'll defer that choice over to you for the time being. I've updated the other stuff. Thanks!
One small thing: the rhythm on beats 3 and 4 of m5 should be (dotted eighth) - (sixteenth tied to eighth) - (eighth) instead of the triplet.
Looks perfect otherwise.
After some discussion on Discord, I went ahead and updated the files here for Latios with the C in the m8 chord in the LH and changed the quarter note triplet to that dotted 8th rhythm.
Looks good! Thanks!
Great sheet!
This submission has been accepted by Static (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4960).
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