Submission Information:
Series: Super Mario
Game: Luigi's Mansion: Dark Moon
Console: Nintendo 3DS
Title: Gloomy Manor
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arrangers: E. Gadd Industries (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4357) & Retropardies (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4892)
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Finally got the accidentals (hopefully) ironed out with some outside help!
This is the last of the 3 collab pieces with Retropardies!
Seb and I looked over this and I updated with the resulting files
This is just me, but what I would do is take the last 6 measures and put the RH in a bass clef so the octave dyads can be more controlled dynamically with both hands. But again, just me.
Updated with the fix Levi suggested
Good call, Levi. I like that idea.
Thanks! I'm always happy to help.
*bump*
Looks great!
m20 b3 RH - C should be a C#
m9 LH - I don't think that courtesy accidental is needed at all
Aaaaand that's it
Thanks you! Files have updated!
- Staccato is on wrong side of m. 8, 16 beat 1. Would also consider hiding those quarter rests.
- I'm on my phone right now so I can't check the original, but just want to make sure that the pickup to m. 4 really is different than the grace notes into m. 12.
http://imgur.com/a/BbYYj
Before I make any changes, this is what the original looked like, with reference to the m12 comment. That's what I thought sounded most accurate, but then Seb went over it with me and changed it to present, probz for the better: more easily readable for the pianist.
So what do I need to do, keep it as is or change it back to that, or...?
We talked, and 12 is fine as it is
I updated the files with the staccato shtuffs. And the quarter rest shtuff
Nice.
Accepted
This submission has been accepted by Maelstrom (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4119).
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