Submission Information:
Series: Pokémon
Game: Pokémon Ruby Version & Pokémon Sapphire Version
Console: Game Boy Advance
Title: Oldale Town
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: dajwxp (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=3863)
Replacement Information:
Links to Existing Sheet: MUS (http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/mus/944) | MIDI (http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/mid/944) | PDF (http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/pdf/944)
Replacement Type: Challenge (new arranger)
Hey, we all know this one ^^
A couple things I noticed right away. The PDF of the first page is somewhat cut off at the bottom. Also, you don't have a second page title.
Quote from: Sebastian on August 13, 2017, 05:40:14 AMA couple things I noticed right away. The PDF of the first page is somewhat cut off at the bottom. Also, you don't have a second page title.
...well then. This is embarassing. xD
So that's what they meant with that whole "print size is different" thing. My bad, my bad ^^;
I'll fix it in a bit! ^^
-I'm not a fan of how this grew to two pages. The on-site one is proof that it can be done on one page. (I'm also not too big of a fan of the added ending if it means it must have two pages...)
-What's with the "sing" in the first measure? Do you really want performers to sing the melody instead of play it on the piano? If you're using that as a means to indicate a stylistic thing, I'd recommend changing it to "song-like" or something clearer.
-Your first system needs to be indented to accommodate the "piano" text.
-There is no copyright info present.
-Like said above, there is no second page title present.
-Measure 8 has a staccato in the RH that is flipped for no reason.
-Due to the scaling of your sheet, all of the text looks way too small. I would recommend leveling out your staff size with your page size so that it looks more balanced.
Quote from: Olimar12345 on August 31, 2017, 12:09:22 PM-What's with the "sing" in the first measure? Do you really want performers to sing the melody instead of play it on the piano? If you're using that as a means to indicate a stylistic thing, I'd recommend changing it to "song-like" or something clearer.
"Cantabile". ftfy
^there we go!
Bump for daj. I know you're out there somewhere
I'll make the edits shortly
or longly
Bump for arranger.