Submission Information:
Series: Kirby
Game: Kirby's Avalanche
Console: Super Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Title Screen
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: LeviR.star (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=5007)
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This may be my second least-favorite Kirby game, (mostly because it's hardly a Kirby game at all...) but I sure love how the title screen theme sounds on piano!
Just had a thought: should I add developer names Banpresto and Compile to the Copyright information at the bottom?
Given that they're listed on the game's Wikipedia page as developers (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kirby%27s_Avalanche), I'd say yes.
Forgot to do that. Files updated with the proper developers enclosed. Wonder how often we've forgotten to do that on other sheets...
m2 - RH slur should start on the last note in the measure, and not before.
also RH m2 - 8va should extend until the 2nd to last note, and the LH should extend one more note
Quote from: Maelstrom on September 26, 2017, 07:38:02 PMm2 - RH slur should start on the last note in the measure, and not before.
also RH m2 - 8va should extend until the 2nd to last note, and the LH should extend one more note
Thanks as always for the feedback! Files are updated; I deleted the LH slur in m2 as well.
Great sheet! One thing I notice is that the copyright information is incorrect in its order. You have "Developer, Publisher." It should be "Publisher, Developer, etc."
So, "Nintendo, HAL Laboratory, Compile, Banpresto"? I must have made similar mistakes in dozens of my sheets...
Correct.
Thanks, Seb! Changes are made.
Neat sheet! Almost there:
- Inconsistent beaming in measure 1. Make the LH match the RH by beaming them together.
- Check me on this please, but some notes in measure 2 are in the wrong octave. Make the RH 15ma and shorten it so that it doesn't include the four three eighth notes.
- The sharp signs on the top F's in the RH of measure 9 shouldn't be there.
- Last measure - to keep the intervals consistent in the RH as the chord ascends, I would respell the D as a Cx.
Quote from: Latios212 on September 27, 2017, 07:35:56 PM- Check me on this please, but some notes in measure 2 are in the wrong octave. Make the RH 15ma and shorten it so that it doesn't include the four three eighth notes.
Could you please talk to Mael about that? I think he had me change some of those octaves so that it would be easier to play.
I have an updated .musx; I'll change the files once you can talk that over with Mael. Oh, and thanks for the feedback. ;)
That's an A# minor chord in measure 8, don't spell it with a Bb.
Quote from: Latios212 on September 27, 2017, 07:35:56 PM- Check me on this please, but some notes in measure 2 are in the wrong octave. Make the RH 15ma and shorten it so that it doesn't include the four three eighth notes.
Quote from: FireArrow on September 27, 2017, 10:07:14 PMThat's an A# minor chord in measure 8, don't spell it with a Bb.
Fixed! Thanks, guys!
This submission has been accepted by Latios212 (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4344).
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