Submission Information:
Series: Super Mario
Game: Super Mario World
Console: Super Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Title Screen
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Latios212 (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4344)
Replacement Information:
Links to Existing Sheet: MUS (http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/mus/1805) | MIDI (http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/mid/1805) | PDF (http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/pdf/1805)
Replacement Type: Challenge (new arranger)
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It's been a while since I've done this, so bear with my thoughts.
- I wonder if, at M. 2, you could make the first half note a tremolo between the two notes. That way, you have the texture of the percussion (whatever instrument it is) and the harmony, instead of just two beats of the harmony.
- M. 11 through the rest is missing some harmonies, I think. There's a second voice that would probably help to make the arrangement a little bit richer :)
Sorry I've been gone so long, been jazzing for a while. Your sheet looks great!
bump for arranger
where are you
latios
Whoops, sorry.
Quote from: Pianist Da Sootopolis on September 02, 2017, 11:47:31 AMIt's been a while since I've done this, so bear with my thoughts.
- I wonder if, at M. 2, you could make the first half note a tremolo between the two notes. That way, you have the texture of the percussion (whatever instrument it is) and the harmony, instead of just two beats of the harmony.
- M. 11 through the rest is missing some harmonies, I think. There's a second voice that would probably help to make the arrangement a little bit richer :)
Sorry I've been gone so long, been jazzing for a while. Your sheet looks great!
Hi PDS, thanks for stopping by! Both of those things sound great to me, and I've updated the sheet accordingly ;D
It's superb.
Accepted
This submission has been accepted by Maelstrom (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4119).
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