Submission Information:
Series: Super Smash Bros.
Game: Super Smash Bros. Melee
Console: Nintendo GameCube
Title: Fire Emblem
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Zeila (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4766)
Replacement Information:
Links to Existing Sheet: MUS (http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/mus/49) | MIDI (http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/mid/49) | PDF (http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/pdf/49)
Replacement Type: Challenge (new arranger)
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The correct title should be "Fire Emblem"
hoooo boy yessssss niiiiiiice goooood choice of replacement
title updated, feedback incoming later
Hiya
- Curious, why did you insert the A in the LH in m. 24 instead of the RH like everywhere else?
- I hear the first note in the first tuplet in m. 29 as an A below the current D. (Similar to the second tuplet.) Haven't gotten there yet, but you might want to check the one at the end as well.
- The climax seems awfully quiet! At least insert a forte at m. 42 ^^ (I probably have some more to say about that section, but that's all I have time for tonight!)
(note to self: check the bass of 1-12 and everything past 34, everything else seems fine)
Also, try this for a cleaner layout: https://www.dropbox.com/s/d8oncaoo662u9sd/Fire%20Emblem%20%28Latios%29.musx?dl=1 (https://www.dropbox.com/s/d8oncaoo662u9sd/Fire%20Emblem%20%28Latios%29.musx?dl=1)
Quote from: Latios212 on September 07, 2017, 10:11:12 PMHiya
- Curious, why did you insert the A in the LH in m. 24 instead of the RH like everywhere else?
Hi. Tbh it wasn't for a good reason so I moved it to the RH
Quote from: Latios212 on September 07, 2017, 10:11:12 PM- I hear the first note in the first tuplet in m. 29 as an A below the current D. (Similar to the second tuplet.) Haven't gotten there yet, but you might want to check the one at the end as well.
I fixed that and made some more edits along with the one at the end
Quote from: Latios212 on September 07, 2017, 10:11:12 PM- The climax seems awfully quiet! At least insert a forte at m. 42 ^^ (I probably have some more to say about that section, but that's all I have time for tonight!)
I tried editing that section but if it's still not climax-y enough or too cluttered or whatever then let me know
Quote from: Latios212 on September 07, 2017, 10:11:12 PM(note to self: check the bass of 1-12 and everything past 34, everything else seems fine)
I edited m1-12 a bit
Thanks for the feedback (and the layout)!
Excellent job.
Accepted.
This submission has been accepted by Maelstrom (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4119).
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