Submission Information:
Series: Super Mario
Game: Super Mario Sunshine
Console: Nintendo GameCube
Title: F.L.U.D.D.
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: E. Gadd Industries (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4357)
PLEASE NOTE:
This is both a replacement sheet and a new sheet; it combines all three introductory FLUDD themes into one sheet, including "F.L.U.D.D.'s User Instructions" that is already on-site. Upon this sheet's acceptance, that sheet will need to be taken down.
Also, this sheet, along with several others, are considered part of the story of the game, so actual YT videos are hard to come by. LUCKILY, TheZeldaPianist has very courteously ripped the game's entire soundtrack and sent it to me! So here are the three themes:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/mukdeo5yvzwfr6c/07.%20Meeting%20F.L.U.D.D.wav?dl=1
https://www.dropbox.com/s/3twdis6374magp3/08.%20Got%20F.L.U.D.D.wav?dl=1
https://www.dropbox.com/s/k4lebxiaxb61dpe/09.%20F.L.U.D.D.%27s%20User%20Instructions.wav?dl=1
Also, I didn't know if this was considered a medley or how that worked.
Next time submit something like this as a replacement. Anyway, the sheet looks fine since it is more like a prearranged medley that follows the in-game cut-scene. It needs work though:
-Remove all key changes. The key should be C major (no flats, no sharps). A harmony change does not warrant an entire key change. Likewise, each double barline that went with a key change should go too.
-You're missing a note on the down beat of measure 3. They should all be diads.
-Measures 4 and 5 are missing down beats in the bass on beat one.
-Measures 6 and 7 are missing down beats in the bass on beats one and three.
-The "arranged by" section should state exactly as follows: "Arranged by E. Gadd Industries & WiiMan96"
Wiiman96 doesn't get bumped down to "special thanks" just because you added to it. The tutorial section is literally his arrangement. Also, unless F. L. U. D. D. is an arranger that helped make this, remove them.
-Measures 12 and 13 are missing down beats in the bass on beat one.
-Remove the lower G in the last measure, RH (it's not there in the original).
-Lower the C in the LH, last measure, down an octave.
-Maybe move the text for "powerup complete" up a bit? Seems low.
-I'd raise the text/tempo marking for the tutorial a bit. It seems too close to the music as it is currently.