Submission Information:
Series: The Legend of Zelda
Game: The Legend of Zelda: Tri Force Heroes
Console: Nintendo 3DS
Title: Takarabakoya
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Piano Psychopath (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=5401)
The sheet seems fine, but I have some suggestions for you.
- You should show the syncopation within the beats to make it easier to read. Here is an example from the first measures.
(https://www.dropbox.com/s/cg54dvrge06pzy9/Takarabakoya.jpg?dl=0)
https://www.dropbox.com/s/cg54dvrge06pzy9/Takarabakoya.jpg?dl=0 (https://www.dropbox.com/s/cg54dvrge06pzy9/Takarabakoya.jpg?dl=0)
- I think the chords in the bass line should lowered or changed when the right hand is in the lower register. The ranges clash and sounds a bit muddy.
- I think slurs and articulations would help separate the different sections. The original song has different instruments for the melody and it might help
https://www.dropbox.com/s/2l6aha1zn99zvpe/Takarabakoya1.pdf?dl=0
This might be better, though I don't like the sound of the left hand now at the part you told me to fix. I might need to change it a bit more.
Would you like some help with this sheet, Piano Psychopath?
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