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Title: [DELETED] [NES] The 3-D Battles of WorldRunner - "World Theme" by joeberryosponge
Post by: Zeta on February 12, 2018, 02:22:02 PM
Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: The 3-D Battles of WorldRunner
Console: Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: World Theme
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: joeberryosponge (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4705)
Title: Re: [NES] The 3-D Battles of WorldRunner - "World Theme" by joeberryosponge
Post by: joeberryosponge on February 12, 2018, 02:24:33 PM
Title: Re: [NES] The 3-D Battles of WorldRunner - "World Theme" by joeberryosponge
Post by: Latios212 on February 26, 2018, 09:15:09 AM
Have you considered simplifying the left hand? The very high tempo and large jumps seem like a huge deterrent for anyone looking to learn this... it would be dramatically more accessible if you kept the left hand as single notes, for instance.
Title: Re: [NES] The 3-D Battles of WorldRunner - "World Theme" by joeberryosponge
Post by: joeberryosponge on February 27, 2018, 10:41:43 AM
Quote from: Latios212 on February 26, 2018, 09:15:09 AMHave you considered simplifying the left hand? The very high tempo and large jumps seem like a huge deterrent for anyone looking to learn this... it would be dramatically more accessible if you kept the left hand as single notes, for instance.
I've simplified the left hand and made it more accessible. Thanks!
Title: Re: [NES] The 3-D Battles of WorldRunner - "World Theme" by joeberryosponge
Post by: joeberryosponge on March 26, 2018, 09:58:55 AM
Bump
Title: Re: [NES] The 3-D Battles of WorldRunner - "World Theme" by joeberryosponge
Post by: joeberryosponge on April 30, 2018, 09:03:18 AM
bump
Title: Re: [NES] The 3-D Battles of WorldRunner - "World Theme" by joeberryosponge
Post by: InsigTurtle on June 01, 2018, 01:52:47 AM
About time someone else got to this, huh?
Just a couple of comments:
m.2 - It's still reasonable to have that inner G-A-B voice in the RH. Makes it more coherent that way. I noticed you added the D to the G chord to flesh things out, which I wouldn't personally do, but it's still fine by me.
m.10 - Mark that stress on the 3rd beat LH
m.26 - It looks like you forgot the A in the inner voice, looks like you might have accidentally deleted it?

m.6 and likewise - the A - G/C# jump in the left hand is still pretty difficult to do at that tempo, but not impossible. Just a note that you can try messing around to see if there's an easier solution.

Otherwise, looking pretty good!
Title: Re: [NES] The 3-D Battles of WorldRunner - "World Theme" by joeberryosponge
Post by: Sebastian on June 20, 2018, 10:10:39 AM
Archived for inactivity

Please try to respond to feedback within a few weeks so we're able to keep things buzzing along. Feel free to resubmit with the above feedback in mind.