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Show posts MenuQuote from: E. Gadd Industries on January 07, 2022, 04:56:34 PMThe world shall never know if that is indeed a true rickroll or not. Or at the very least, I shall never know.
Quote from: Latios212 on July 28, 2021, 03:35:08 PMThough the trill (and turn in m. 7) are displaced slightly to the right, and you might want to put a fermata in the left hand at the end to match the right hand.
- Dynamic in m. 1 could be lowered a bit to be centered between the staves
- Top voice in m. 10 beat 4 sounds like a quarter note rather than dotted quarter
- The tie into measure 14 RH points down while the outgoing tie from m. 13 points up (use the Tie Tool to flip the one in m. 14)
- The stem for the low C# on beat 2 of m. 17 seems oddly short for some reason?
Quote from: Latios212 on July 28, 2021, 03:35:08 PM- There's a couple of tiny visual quirks in the last system - the left and right ends of the first ending bracket don't line up vertically, and there's somehow a rogue tie visible inside the last whole note...?
Quote from: Static on July 18, 2021, 05:01:32 PM- I thought the title of this track was "DAN DON FUGA", as seen on the track listing here. That's also the title I see more often on YouTube and other sites. Unless it's called "Canon of Kings" in-game, I forgot.
Quote from: Static on July 18, 2021, 05:01:32 PM- The placement of the middle voice is appropriate - sometimes the best way to find out is just by testing it out on a keyboard. I think the way you wrote it is pretty comfortable to play, at least from my little bit of playing.
- I think sparse articulation works better for this piece. It's more stylistically appropriate, and beyond that, none of the notes really sound (to me at least) deliberately articulated legato or staccato. The accents are appropriately placed.
Quote from: Static on July 18, 2021, 05:01:32 PM- A turn (like in m7) indicates an up-down motion starting on A (A-Bb-A-G-A). However, in the original, it starts on Bb. This would better be written as just 32nd notes (Bb-A-G-A).
Quote from: Static on July 18, 2021, 05:01:32 PM- Maybe space out the staves on the first system of page 2, so m15 doesn't look so cramped.
- I would use another set of cross-staff lines to connect to/from beat 3 of m22 (to the Bb).
- The flat sign in m21 RH is touching the Eb above it.
Quote from: Static on July 18, 2021, 05:01:32 PM- The 2nd loop adds the harpsichord part, and while I wouldn't say its strictly necessary to include given the complexity of the sheet as it is, I can't help but wonder if there's a good way to incorporate it. At the very least, though, I would consider adding in the middle voice in the 1st ending.
Quote from: Static on July 18, 2021, 05:01:32 PM- Copyright text, page number, and running title are all outside the page margins.
Quote from: Static on July 18, 2021, 05:01:32 PMAlso, a note about those cross-staff lines, I sometimes see the dotted lines being used for voices that just cross hands (i.e. the hand does not move to play the voice in the other staff), and solid lines indicate that the hand also moves to play the notes. But I don't think this is widely distinguished, and by reading the score people will usually just do whatever makes the most sense. I think the lines, as you have them, are OK.
Quote from: legoenthusiast on January 05, 2021, 10:08:30 AMbumpty-bump
Quote from: BlackDragonSlayer on December 30, 2020, 09:15:09 PMCould someone kindly update the rankings?
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