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Submissions / Re: [Wii] Xenoblade Chronicles - "Gaur Plain" by Libera
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Submissions / Re: [PC] CrossCode - "First Scholars (Two Pianos)" by Greg
« on: September 17, 2019, 11:47:01 PM »
Awesome, looks much better now! Just a last couple tiny things from me before I sign off ^^
- m. 62 grace note still isn't slurred, might have missed that?
- the A>Ab movement in m. 45-46 is causing the flat to overlap the tie a bit. Actually, here I would recommend moving those two notes to the left hand similar to how you did in m. 49-50 because as of right not it's a bit confusing-looking as the flat on the A could easily be mistaken for the tied Bb.
- m. 62 grace note still isn't slurred, might have missed that?
- the A>Ab movement in m. 45-46 is causing the flat to overlap the tie a bit. Actually, here I would recommend moving those two notes to the left hand similar to how you did in m. 49-50 because as of right not it's a bit confusing-looking as the flat on the A could easily be mistaken for the tied Bb.
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Submissions / Re: [Wii] Xenoblade Chronicles - "Gaur Plain" by Libera
« on: September 17, 2019, 11:41:33 PM »- For the second chord in m. 24 and first in 25 (and subsequent places) I think it would sound better and a bit fuller if you inverted downwards a bit to avoid the major second below the melody.
I sort of understand, but changing the voicings here would mean that the harmonies can't be easily sustained without pedal and also it sounds a lot flatter having the second layer stay constant. I'd prefer to keep it as it is, basically.Makes sense for 24. For 25 and similar I still think it could benefit from including the Ab in the chord, but your choice.
- I think you should continue splitting layers in m. 69 beats 1-2. It's odd for it to suddenly combine with the top layer even though it matches that part's contour
- Similarly I think m. 71-73 could use a bit more consistency in the layering. You have half rests under beats 1-2 unlike previous places and a hidden rest in m. 73 but layer 1 still flipped upwards
I think everything should be consistent now and notes should be flipped correctly. Let me know if I've missed something though.71-73 look good and 69 better but I'd still suggest separating out the layers in 69. Not a huge deal though.
- m. 97-98 - last LH note sounds like it should be G instead of FSorry - I meant the last note in each phrase not just the last note in the measure.
Everything else looks good to me!
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Piano Arrangements / Re: Latios212's Arrangements - Fire Emblem: Three Houses and some replacements
« on: September 17, 2019, 02:54:17 AM »
Some recent performance videos!~
"A Guide for the Future" from Fire Emblem: Three Houses by Sayshi
"Life at Garreg Mach Monastery" from Fire Emblem: Three Houses by Sayshi
"A Guide for the Future" from Fire Emblem: Three Houses by SlimyWyvern
"A Guide for the Future" from Fire Emblem: Three Houses by Sayshi
"Life at Garreg Mach Monastery" from Fire Emblem: Three Houses by Sayshi
"A Guide for the Future" from Fire Emblem: Three Houses by SlimyWyvern
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Submission Center / Re: The Official Pokémon Diamond, Pearl, and Platinum Project
« on: September 17, 2019, 02:44:43 AM »Changelog, in addition to the above fixes:Battle Castle - Sebastian
- The style description should go before the tempo marking.
- The page numbers aren't positioned correctly; they should be lined up horizontally.
- m41 LH: This note should be tied to m42
- m64-65 RH: Since nothing is in the first layer, you should flip some of the 2nd layer notes.
- Change http to https.
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- m. 12 missing melody on beat 4.5.
- Adjusted a couple of slurs and ties.
Everything else looks good. Approving this one.
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Submissions / Re: [PC] CrossCode - "First Scholars (Two Pianos)" by Greg
« on: September 17, 2019, 02:04:13 AM »
No problem! And sorry for the wait. I'm going through it more now, and it looks pretty good!
- 8vb marking for piano 1 should be much more apparent and indicate that it applies to the whole piece (try "sempre 8vb" or something similar)
- m. 16 piano 2: would be easier to pull off the intended articulation if you split the first couple of beats between two hands as well (legato going between triads is difficult). Also third chord seems to be missing an F on bottom.
- m. 27 LH piano 1: courtesy naturals would be nice on the B's
- Suggest slurring the grace notes in m. 34/62
- Maybe a cross-staff line in m. 36 to indicate that the C-B phrase continues with the LH chords?
- You could still afford to decompress a bit by filling in the last page with another system. Page 4 is a bit cramped with 6 measures/system in some places and you can loosen up a couple of other parts as well with this new space.
- Lowest note isn't supposed to be tied between 45-46, right?
- I think the chord in m. 49 should have an E a fifth below the bass A
- Courtesy Gn would be nice in m. 50
- Not sure I hear the high F in the chord in m. 53
- Courtesy An would be nice in m. 57
- For the triplets in m. 62 and 64 I think it'd look better with a quarter instead of two tied eighths
- Any reason why that last note is tied over instead of having a rest on the last beat?
Thanks as always for the polish. Just one thing, re: your last comment, I cannot for the life of me hear the D that you're referring to there.Hm, okay maybe I'm imagining it
- 8vb marking for piano 1 should be much more apparent and indicate that it applies to the whole piece (try "sempre 8vb" or something similar)
- m. 16 piano 2: would be easier to pull off the intended articulation if you split the first couple of beats between two hands as well (legato going between triads is difficult). Also third chord seems to be missing an F on bottom.
- m. 27 LH piano 1: courtesy naturals would be nice on the B's
- Suggest slurring the grace notes in m. 34/62
- Maybe a cross-staff line in m. 36 to indicate that the C-B phrase continues with the LH chords?
- You could still afford to decompress a bit by filling in the last page with another system. Page 4 is a bit cramped with 6 measures/system in some places and you can loosen up a couple of other parts as well with this new space.
- Lowest note isn't supposed to be tied between 45-46, right?
- I think the chord in m. 49 should have an E a fifth below the bass A
- Courtesy Gn would be nice in m. 50
- Not sure I hear the high F in the chord in m. 53
- Courtesy An would be nice in m. 57
- For the triplets in m. 62 and 64 I think it'd look better with a quarter instead of two tied eighths
- Any reason why that last note is tied over instead of having a rest on the last beat?
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Submissions / Re: [Wii] Xenoblade Chronicles - "Gaur Plain" by Libera
« on: September 17, 2019, 01:09:41 AM »
Splendid sheet! Keeps it straightforward while maintaining the essence of the piece. Only a handful of small things to add.
- I think the layer 2 melody on beat 3 of measure 8/49 is important (the D above). I get that it's important to have the previous phrase end on the A but that's what I'd recommend.
- Last bass note in m. 22/61 sounds like a higher D instead of A
- For the second chord in m. 24 and first in 25 (and subsequent places) I think it would sound better and a bit fuller if you inverted downwards a bit to avoid the major second below the melody.
- Quarter rest in m. 36/75 could be lowered a bit
- Would suggest clef changes for beat 4 of m. 39 and 43 (RH) to lead into the subsequent phrases better
- Articulations on wrong side of the note in m. 47 beats 1-2 RH
- LH of m. 53 sounds like there's a 16th note F at the end leading into the next measure
- LH of m. 65/73 sounds like there's an An on beat 4
- LH of m. 69 sounds like the G on beat 2 should be an octave lower
- I think you should continue splitting layers in m. 69 beats 1-2. It's odd for it to suddenly combine with the top layer even though it matches that part's contour
- Similarly I think m. 71-73 could use a bit more consistency in the layering. You have half rests under beats 1-2 unlike previous places and a hidden rest in m. 73 but layer 1 still flipped upwards
- m. 86 is missing the beat 4 pickup to m. 87
- RH misaligned beat 1 in m. 88/92
- Any particular reason the LH arpeggios in m. 95+ are an octave lower than in the original? It's fine if you want it that way, but I think it adds a significant weight into the arrangement whereas in the original I view this section as a much lighter-sounding interlude in contrast to the rest of the song being particularly "heavy".
- RH in m. 96 all sounds like dyads to me?
- m. 97-98 - last LH note sounds like it should be G instead of F
- I feel like you could make m. 109-111/113-115 a bit more interesting by varying the octave of the left hand. Perhaps something like low-low-high-low-low-high to try and preserve a bit of what the original percussion insinuates?
- Can we include the Eb in the chord in m. 113/115? The way it's written now makes it sound like it's a relatively empty suspended chord instead of a Cm9.
- I think the layer 2 melody on beat 3 of measure 8/49 is important (the D above). I get that it's important to have the previous phrase end on the A but that's what I'd recommend.
- Last bass note in m. 22/61 sounds like a higher D instead of A
- For the second chord in m. 24 and first in 25 (and subsequent places) I think it would sound better and a bit fuller if you inverted downwards a bit to avoid the major second below the melody.
- Quarter rest in m. 36/75 could be lowered a bit
- Would suggest clef changes for beat 4 of m. 39 and 43 (RH) to lead into the subsequent phrases better
- Articulations on wrong side of the note in m. 47 beats 1-2 RH
- LH of m. 53 sounds like there's a 16th note F at the end leading into the next measure
- LH of m. 65/73 sounds like there's an An on beat 4
- LH of m. 69 sounds like the G on beat 2 should be an octave lower
- I think you should continue splitting layers in m. 69 beats 1-2. It's odd for it to suddenly combine with the top layer even though it matches that part's contour
- Similarly I think m. 71-73 could use a bit more consistency in the layering. You have half rests under beats 1-2 unlike previous places and a hidden rest in m. 73 but layer 1 still flipped upwards
- m. 86 is missing the beat 4 pickup to m. 87
- RH misaligned beat 1 in m. 88/92
- Any particular reason the LH arpeggios in m. 95+ are an octave lower than in the original? It's fine if you want it that way, but I think it adds a significant weight into the arrangement whereas in the original I view this section as a much lighter-sounding interlude in contrast to the rest of the song being particularly "heavy".
- RH in m. 96 all sounds like dyads to me?
- m. 97-98 - last LH note sounds like it should be G instead of F
- I feel like you could make m. 109-111/113-115 a bit more interesting by varying the octave of the left hand. Perhaps something like low-low-high-low-low-high to try and preserve a bit of what the original percussion insinuates?
- Can we include the Eb in the chord in m. 113/115? The way it's written now makes it sound like it's a relatively empty suspended chord instead of a Cm9.
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Submission Archive / Re: [GBA] Banjo-Pilot - "Lava Track" by Jack
« on: September 13, 2019, 12:08:14 AM »
Doing some formatting for you now. Some things I noticed that are included in these here files:
- Sharps were missing on some notes, like the G# in m. 12
- A# should be spelled as Bb (flatted 9th, centered around A) similar to how Fn is used for the other melodic phrases
- Rest positions are a bit wonky, and also in this sheet it would be best if they were always shown
- m. 25-27 (and 51-53) bass was wrong
- m. 29/55 beat 2 (layer 2) should be An instead of G#
Other than that, looks great! Please have a look and review the fixes.
- Sharps were missing on some notes, like the G# in m. 12
- A# should be spelled as Bb (flatted 9th, centered around A) similar to how Fn is used for the other melodic phrases
- Rest positions are a bit wonky, and also in this sheet it would be best if they were always shown
- m. 25-27 (and 51-53) bass was wrong
- m. 29/55 beat 2 (layer 2) should be An instead of G#
Other than that, looks great! Please have a look and review the fixes.
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Submissions / Re: [PC] Cave Story (Doukutsu Monogatari) - "Balcony" by Th3Gavst3r
« on: September 12, 2019, 11:51:11 PM »
I approve once the above comments have been resolved
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Submissions / Re: [3DS] Rhythm Heaven Megamix - "First Contact" by ThatHiddenCharacter
« on: September 12, 2019, 11:48:10 PM »
Cool. I approve given that whoever checks this next verifies this:
(Also think the music on page 2 could be moved down away from the header a bit more since there's ample space at the bottom, but I won't hold up the submission over it)
Also, in m24 beat 2.5 (and so on), I hear two E's play there distinctly (as does E. Gadd), but Latios does not. I was hoping that another Updater could provide some input there as well. It's at about 0:52 in the video.
(Also think the music on page 2 could be moved down away from the header a bit more since there's ample space at the bottom, but I won't hold up the submission over it)
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Submission Archive / Re: [SNES] Super Mario World 2: Yoshi's Island - "Yoshi's Island" (Replacement) by Latios212
« on: September 12, 2019, 11:39:13 PM »
- It's a bit hard to discern where the music actually starts in this song - I can pick out notes played in a free-form sort of fashion starting at around 0:20, but decided to start the sheet at 0:28 where it falls into a rhythmic and melodic pattern, and is more noticeable when listening. So I intend for what's written to be played at tempo. Let me know if you have any other better ideas.
- Hmm, while those notes may be there, they're very subtle and wouldn't transfer well to the piano because they'd distract from the surrounding notes which are much more prevalent. Still would like to keep it as I wrote it because I think that still sounds most accurate from a performance standpoint.
- I see where you're coming from, but there's still a pause between that and the next note and I'm not sure a tenuto would really change much here (it'd also be sort of out of place since this sheet is relatively clear of many articulations. Still let me know if you feel strongly otherwise though.
Thanks for looking!
- Hmm, while those notes may be there, they're very subtle and wouldn't transfer well to the piano because they'd distract from the surrounding notes which are much more prevalent. Still would like to keep it as I wrote it because I think that still sounds most accurate from a performance standpoint.
- I see where you're coming from, but there's still a pause between that and the next note and I'm not sure a tenuto would really change much here (it'd also be sort of out of place since this sheet is relatively clear of many articulations. Still let me know if you feel strongly otherwise though.
Thanks for looking!
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Submission Archive / Re: [SNES] Super Mario World 2: Yoshi's Island - "Yoshi's Island" (Replacement) by Latios212
« on: September 12, 2019, 12:43:30 AM »-Could we line the hyphen up in the middle between pp and mf? It kind of looks like an underscore at the moment.Ah yeah, the default positioning is kinda weird. I just split it into three separate dynamics and aligned them visually, which I think looks a lot better
-For the repeated bass phrase in bar 7 onwards, it sounds like you're missing notes on beats 2 and 4. Like this:I don't hear this at all. I think beat 1.75 cuts off abruptly leaving a quarter beat of silence before beat 2.25 strikesSpoiler[close]
-Maybe the slurs on the grace notes would look nicer if they attached to the grace above the line, rather than below.Great suggestion! I like the look of that a lot betterSpoiler[close]
Updated files with the above!
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Submissions / Re: [MUL] M.U.L.E. - "Main Menu" by Th3Gavst3r
« on: September 12, 2019, 12:34:54 AM »
man this is a cool song
- How does this distribution look to you? I think it evens things out a tad more
- Melody A notes should be flat in m. 10, 14, 35, 38, 42
- m. 29 - I think there's an F on beat 1 you could include in the lower layer. Also hearing the last triplet note as Ab instead of C?
- m. 34 - gonna need to fix that lower layer flat somehow
- How does this distribution look to you? I think it evens things out a tad more
Spoiler
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- m. 29 - I think there's an F on beat 1 you could include in the lower layer. Also hearing the last triplet note as Ab instead of C?
- m. 34 - gonna need to fix that lower layer flat somehow
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Submission Archive / Re: [SNES] Harvest Moon - "Winter" by Code_Name_Geek
« on: September 11, 2019, 12:19:47 AM »
All sounds good 
leaving my approval, Libera you can go ahead and get the articulations and accept.
leaving my approval, Libera you can go ahead and get the articulations and accept.
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Submission Archive / Re: [GBA] Banjo-Pilot - "Lava Track" by Jack
« on: September 10, 2019, 03:23:08 AM »
Cool cool. This looks like a pretty solid arrangement, I'll get back to you shortly with formatted files