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Projects / Re: Rubikium's Replacements
« on: Today at 12:54:57 AM »
Green Star
Except for staff spacing, everything has been fixed. Please do help me with the adjustments.
Got it! Spacing adjusted - sheet is approved ;D

Projects / Re: Zeila's Replacements
« on: Today at 12:46:11 AM »
Icicle Mountain
- I think the chords in m. 39- would be nice octave doubled as well
oops yeah I meant up to 44, which you figured out

Looks good, approving! Although a couple of really tiny things you might still want to change are moving the right end of the cresc. in m. 38 left a bit and indicating how loud to get in m. 60 (perhaps ff on beat 3?).

Help! / Re: Finale NotePad note bunching issue
« on: July 13, 2020, 02:02:50 AM »
Mind sharing a picture of what you're talking about?

Help! / Re: How do I upload sheet music here?
« on: July 13, 2020, 02:02:21 AM »
Create a topic on the Piano Arrangements board (or Miscellaneous Arrangements board if it's not for piano) and share links to your arrangement files via links (like Dropbox or Google Drive) for others to see! :) Feel free to reach out if you have any questions!

No problem! Looks good now :)

Thanks, and sorry again for the wait >< I'll get through the rest of the notes now, and then later we can probably finish up the aesthetics and polishing the arrangement itself. Here goes!
- Subsequent page titles are accidentally pluralized
- Is there a reason m. 25+ is raised an octave from the original?
- m. 27 RH beat 2 - I think the lower note in the dyad should go up to F# instead of staying at C#
- Check the harmonies in m. 29 - it sounds like there are consistent parallel thirds here except for the first and last dyads. Something like this...

Similarly check m. 31 - those sound like mostly thirds as well aside from the B-E fourth at the end - and take a look at 35-36 as well. (m. 37-40 look good!)
- The chords in m. 41-44 sound like major triads I think... C major, B major, C major, D major. Same for m. 45-48 except for the last one - in order sounds like Eb, D, Eb, F, G, A, and then for the last one only the top note drops by a half step.
- F# in m. 57 should be natural
- F# in m. 62 should be an E
- RH in m. 65 should match m. 57
- F# in m. 68 should be G
- m. 69 sounds like it should be parallel sixths (B and C on the bottom). It also sounds like beat 3 is re-struck.
- For m. 71 I'm hearing something different - the D and C being the melody on top of D minor and A minor triads respectively.
- The last four RH notes of m. 74 sound like Eb-Bb-F-Bb
- Check the bass in m. 38-40, I don't think it's droning the same note repeatedly
- m. 49 bass: beat 2.5 should be G, beat 4.5 should be F. m. 50 beat 3 should be G. Same for m. 51-54
- Last three bass notes of m. 55 are all A
- m. 71-72 should have the same bass pattern as in the beginning
- m. 74/76/79 should have E flats in the bass instead of E's. D#s should be respelled as Fb in the right hand
- I'll check the spellings of the last couple measures later...
- The last measure (81) should be a 2/4 measure. There are a few more 4/4 measures after that before the song loops back to the repeat point you have in m. 9.

Let me know if you need help with any of the above :) In particular if you need to listen closely to check some of these harmonies/bass notes try something like this if you haven't already!

This is great! The unusual intervals in the arpeggios (particularly the D-Eb minor seconds) create tension in this simple arrangement without the weird fading in/out synth-y things in the original.

Just two minor comments:
- I think the chord in m. 18 is a bit more crunchy than you have written in - it sounds like it could use a D/Eb below the current notes, or something along those lines.
- Lower incoming tie in m. 26 should be flipped down like the one leaving m. 25 (similar to how you have it in the last measure).

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Projects / Re: Zeila's Replacements
« on: July 12, 2020, 01:44:38 AM »
Icicle Mountain
Yay! I'm happy to see this one. Been wanting to do it myself for a while, but never got around to it...

In particular I really like the left hand accompaniment you wrote out for m. 53-58! Anyway, feedback time:

- Those chords at the beginning are pretty punchy and seem to imply more than triads. I think it would help if the second/third/fourth chords in m. 1 had both A and G in them. For m. 3, I think the first chord should have C instead of G and the second chord should have F too.
- I think the last two chords in m. 1 should be disconnected
- m. 9 first chord sounds like it should be inverted downward (hearing ascending E F# G in those three chords)
- Move the lower layer rests in m. 5 a bit down
- G in second triplet in m. 10 should be sharp
- Yikes... those are some tricky chords in m. 15-16. I'm hearing the contour a bit different from how you wrote it, and I also think it would make sense to keep them as dense right hand chords only given the style of the piece. Here's what I'm getting - although I'm definitely not 100% confident about it, I think it could look something like this...
- Keep LH spelling consistent between m. 15/27 LH - I'd recommend A#
- I think the chords in m. 21-22 should be octave doubled
- Use Gb instead of F# in m. 22
- I think the chords in m. 39- would be nice octave doubled as well
- Measures 59-60 feel a bit empty in the RH after all the chords from before. I think it would be nice to add some harmonies and/or dynamic contrast. (Also the 3s are kind of squished together between the staves... you could do things like increase the inter-staff space or flip the 3's outside)

Projects / Re: Nine Lives' Replacements
« on: July 12, 2020, 12:43:47 AM »
Super Mario Kart - Koopa Beach
Great! Approving this one.

Projects / Re: Radiak488417's Replacements
« on: July 12, 2020, 12:40:16 AM »
Tac Challenge
Great! Approved :)

Thanks again! The adjustments to m. 15 sound good; I'd rather leave that note in m. 22 as is though. It's flipped down everywhere else and doesn't really cause any clashes here.

Projects / Re: Libera's Replacements
« on: July 11, 2020, 10:00:23 PM »
Ah yeah yup that sounds good. No problem, approved!

Projects / Re: Radiak488417's Replacements
« on: July 11, 2020, 09:58:38 PM »
Tac Challenge
Notes are all good! Messed with the usual formatting stuff since Notepad, let me know if anything's off.

Only things I would recommend before approving are unbeaming the first eighth note in the RH of measure 1 (like 5) and using slurs over the grace notes. Let me know if that sounds okay to you and I'll make the edits.

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