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Just a few small things that I can update for you: missing measure numbers, footer too small, fermata missing on LH of last measure
Updated these things for you since you have Notepad. Looks good!

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You could also just write the right hand using the actual heights; it never goes past four ledger lines.
Yeah I agree with this - I think it'd be bit less confusing because the left hand goes pretty high sometimes. You could use 8vas sometimes when it gets really high but for the most part it's pretty readable at pitch (and also as such you'd avoid writing ledger lines below the RH staff).

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Off-Topic / Re: NSM 2018 Holiday Postcards!
« on: Today at 12:53:38 AM »
Mine will also be a bit late, but don't worry, they're still coming~

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Submission Archive / Re: [3DS] Fire Emblem Fates - "Far Away" by Libera
« on: December 11, 2018, 02:47:01 AM »
Awesome!

Now go review more sheets.

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Changed the first couple things! (Also added an important bass note at the end of m. 30 I forgot to do last time.)

For m. 30, although he did have something written in (below) I don't think it's accurate. Regardless, I'm listening to the original again and I'm still not hearing a distinct enough movement in the lower registers to warrant detracting from the riff on the top staff.
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Submission Archive / Re: [3DS] Fire Emblem Fates - "Far Away" by Libera
« on: December 11, 2018, 02:20:58 AM »
Looks pretty good. Just a couple small things:
- Flatted mordent on the A in m. 9 similar to the previous measures?
- I think the Db in m. 15 would be better written as a C# due to the G# below. Also, the woodwind melody resolves to an E in m. 16 (first pass only) which you've excluded; could we add that back in?

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Submissions / Re: [GBC] Hamtaro: Ham-Hams Unite! - "Ham-Swap" by Altissimo
« on: December 11, 2018, 01:56:06 AM »
I don't currently have any bright ideas for that, though if anyone else does, feel free to weigh in.

I'll approve once the other stuff is taken care of!

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Can I submit another arrangement?
You currently only have one sheet in submissions, so if you'd like to add a second one feel free to do so.

Added the arranger info into the system. Accepting now!

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Submission Archive / Re: [PC] Deltarune - "Gallery" by Maelstrom
« on: December 10, 2018, 04:41:44 PM »
Game title not all caps?

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Hey, this is a great start! Solid arrangement. :)

Just looking right now, one of the things you can improve on is articulation. How are the melody notes played? Take a look and see, for instance, where staccatos would be in order - like the eighth notes in the melody of m. 2. (You also need dynamics - just an opening one would be fine here.)

Aside from that, there are some inaccuracies here and there I'm seeing (just listing some) -
- The harmonies aren't all A for the first bunch of dyads. The melody also does a triplet on beat 3.5 in the first measure.
- Is the C-D-E triad intentional in m. 2 and other places? It doesn't look like the D really belongs or adds anything.
- Measure 12, the A-C dyad on m. 12 beat 2.5 should be G-C.
- Measure 14, the first triplet should be G#-A-B.
Take another pass through it and check that you have everything right.

Additionally, it looks like there are a few odd things related to spacing probably due to Finale Notepad. Once you've gone over it for the above stuff, I'd be happy to help you improve the layout a little bit. Any questions, feel free to ask!

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This is an awesome song, I love David Wise's stuff even though I've never played DKC or anything.

Good arrangement, and I agree with everything Libera said above. Only other suggestion I have is to put a double barline at m. 2 (the segno).

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Looking over it, seems pretty solid overall.

- That chord at the end of m. 24 sounds really dissonant. Perhaps a C instead of a B natural?
- How about staccatos or something on the first chords of m. 27-29?
- Not sure about the run at m. 55 - I'm hearing E flats instead of C's for the triplets. For the second-to-last note in m. 56 I'm hearing G instead of C.
- The first chord in the last measure doesn't sound quite right. The bass is playing F but it sounds like the harmonies are doing something else.

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Submissions / Re: [GBC] Hamtaro: Ham-Hams Unite! - "Ham-Swap" by Altissimo
« on: December 10, 2018, 12:28:52 AM »
There's not a lot of room around the glissandos and too much room in m. 13, so how about reworking the measure layout like this? [file]

As for m. 13, it seems like a fine approximation, although it's far more difficult than anything else in the sheet. If you want to keep it like that, up to you.

Lastly, not totally sure, but it sounds like m. 1 and 3 repeat the G on beats 1-1.5 unlike the other video you linked. Everything else looks good.

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