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Show posts MenuQuote from: Th3Gavst3r on April 10, 2024, 08:06:38 PMI can't figure out what you're talking about with the C3 on beat 2.5It sounds quite faint, but not less faint than certain notes included elsewhere. Leaving it out works for me too
Quote from: Th3Gavst3r on April 10, 2024, 08:06:38 PMIf moved cross-staff, that Bb causes a lot of visual clutter with the B naturals on beat 4It looks okay to me at least (see attachment) and has the added benefit of showing it should be played by the RH, but again up to you
Quote from: Th3Gavst3r on April 10, 2024, 08:06:38 PMPlaying an A3 on beat 1 is impossible, and lowering it to an A2 muddies the rest of the base contour significantly. And I don't hear any new strikes on beat 4.5Sorry, I meant beat 3. Think I still hear 4.5 as well but it is rather faint.
Quote from: Bloop on April 08, 2024, 10:34:51 AMJust a few tiny things left, but everything else looks good!Now that the rests are hidden I think it should be clear
-In m16, maybe you could add some text saying L.H. for the bottom voice in the R.H. at beat 3, just to make sure it's clear the L.H. should take this?
Quote from: Latios212 on April 08, 2024, 06:24:39 PM- About the presentation of m. 3...I opted for something else entirely
Quote from: Latios212 on April 08, 2024, 06:24:39 PM- m. 20 - I don't hear the second C in the triplet at all, just sounds like a single strike of the C?I still hear these and think they are worth including
- m. 24 - this first triplet doesn't sound like a triplet, more like an echoey effect...?
Quote from: Latios212 on April 08, 2024, 06:24:39 PM- The rest in the 6/4 measure sounds like it actually lasts a whole eighth rest longer... not imagining this am I? Do you think it might also be helpful to break m. 20-21 into some smaller measures?I changed the distribution to hopefully make more sense?? Also you're right about that one measure being longer, I added fermatas like I did to other measures that were also longer
Quote from: Latios212 on March 22, 2024, 06:27:10 PM- I'd suggest sustaining notes (the G) over the rest of m. 5-6 LH instead of having restsHmm, the intent here was to show that the LH figure continues into the RH but I agree the rests are not ideal. Changed for now, but if there's a way of showing that it would be nice to incorporate that too
Quote from: Latios212 on March 22, 2024, 06:27:10 PM- Somewhat related to the above, I think m. 7 sounds to me more like this:Phrasing wise I agree, but I don't hear that new high A
Quote from: Latios212 on March 22, 2024, 06:27:10 PM- m. 15: I was also thinking this miiight be better as some kind of tuplet instead of straight eighths since the timing is kinda loose, but I'm not sure. Thoughts?I think it's fine as is, in combination with the performance direction at the start of the sheet.
Quote from: Bloop on March 23, 2024, 06:00:05 AM-m6: I hear a Bb and F in the piano on beat 3 (so stacking two more fifths on the current Ab-Eb). You can add the Bb in the L.H. and the F in the R.H.I'm only hearing the F
Quote from: Bloop on March 23, 2024, 06:00:05 AM-m20: An alternative way of distributing the piano and woodwind voices is putting the C-C-F in a second layer in the R.H., and the An-En in the L.H. I don't really have an argument for or against either (except maybe keeping the voices in separate hands), but it feels satisfying to play that way haha. Also, maybe you could write the first C in the triplet as a staccato 8th instead of 16th + 16h rest?I like this because the Bb tie looks neater Not adding staccato to accent the triplet quality better
Quote from: Bloop on March 23, 2024, 06:00:05 AM-m21: I feel like the piano + bassoon part take up more of the forefront melody rather than the high piccolos/flutes, maybe you could use those as the melody instead? (bassoon an octave higher than the original)I went for a bit of both
Quote from: Bloop on March 23, 2024, 06:00:05 AM-m23: The Eb-Bb-F fifth stack is a bit stretchy for me to play with the L.H., maybe you could put the F in the R.H. instead?Since it occurs in other places where the RH can't play it, I'd rather keep it consistently written and leave it up to the performer to decide
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