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« on: August 17, 2021, 08:51:35 PM »
Thanks for the feedback guys!
I decided to hide pedal markings and write con pedale in place
Tempo marking placement fixed
Changed the spacing although I don't think it did much
Systems looks fine on my end, I checked to make sure I didn't have a space before the s
I agree with Static regarding no G# in bar 1
Same with the E and D#
I don't hear an E in the RH on beat 2, D# is the top note in the melody
I do hear an Fn (corrected to an E# for enharmonic spelling)
C# added!
Mordent added!
Don't really hear the E in the bottom in the RH
Removed the B's
Don't hear an E in the LH
Title changed to Relaxing Cafe Theme
Changed arranged to transcribed
Fixed the rhythm notation
Fixed the 16th to triplet
Dn added!
Changed the G#9 and C#13 enharmonically
Moved the G#
changed m10 to what you notated
Removed the E
Moved the F# up
Used a dotted quarter to remove the ties (couldn't figure out how to adjust them to look clean anyway lol)