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#1
Quote from: BrainyLucario on April 21, 2016, 06:09:21 PMI need to update my PAT with that layout....Nice arrangements BTW!!!

Thank you! :)
#2
Quote from: DonValentino on April 20, 2016, 01:05:54 PMWelcome to the site! And nice works! I've seen them in your subs. Hope you enjoy your time here!

Geez, now everyone has fancy OPs but me xD

Thank you, I will!

Th3Gavst3r programmed the layout, so credits to him!
#3
Piano Arrangements / Yentl Tijssens | Arrangements
April 19, 2016, 02:21:17 PM
[MUL] Tetris

C Theme
On Site
High Score
Coming Soon
                                                                               

Layout by Th3Gavst3r
#4
Quote from: Latios212 on April 19, 2016, 10:42:10 AMSubmission title fixed. Feedback:

- Tempo marking is not functional - playback is too slow.
- There should be repeat signs - a forward one at the beginning of the second measure and an ending one at the last measure. You could also use a pickup measure.
- It sounds to me like most (if not all) of the places where you have the same note before and after a barline, they should be tied. Ex. the G in measure 2 sounds like it should be tied, not re-struck the next measure. Could be wrong though.
- You have some places where the top and bottom staff notes cross over each other. While this song is simple enough that it probably won't be a big deal, it's important to keep in mind how you would like your sheet to be played.

Hey!

Thank you for the tips. I did everything you told me to.
I'm also pretty sure the same notes behind and after the barline are repeated. :)

#5
Quote from: Th3Gavst3r on April 19, 2016, 10:16:45 AMOh crap, I see the note you made now. I've made that mistake a bunch of times myself and jumped to conclusions [emoji106]

No problem ;)

Your arrangementpage is really organised and pretty! Nicely done, I'm impressed!
#6
Quote from: Th3Gavst3r on April 19, 2016, 09:16:48 AMEither you reuploaded "High Score" or that's the wrong title lol


It's a replacement for the same song, but the original poster used the wrong title. :)
#7
Quote from: Tobbeh99 on April 19, 2016, 05:31:57 AMNice!

The way to go about the "double notes" is by writing a parenthesis on one of the notes, the one that shouldn't be played. I this case I'd write those around the LH notes. You can find parenthesis in the articulation tool.   

Thank you for the tip! I applied the parenthesis but I got a little layout problem at the end. It's also very annoying to play.
Is it a possibility to move the left hand an octave down or the right hand an octave up?
#8
Hello!

I made a new arrangement for the Tetris "Game Over" theme.
I'm unsure about a couple of things:
  • There are a couple "double notes" (notes that are the same in both hands) in the score and I'm not sure how to fix it.
  • I think the name of the song is "High Score" instead of "Game Over".
  • I'm not sure if the layout is good enough. I'm not used to working with Finale.

Here is the song on YouTube:

#9
No problem. I replaced the old ones!
#10
Quote from: Tobbeh99 on April 18, 2016, 09:55:59 AMHere's some more feedback:

Formatting:
-The text "Arranged by gameboy..." should be bold like the composer text, I believe. Not 100% sure on this.
-The copyright/URL should be in "plain" style NOT italic.
-Maybe the title should be "Type C". That's the titles they used in smash and in some other youtube videos. I know that you probably followed the other sheets on site. But this is up for discussion.

Music:
-I really can't get why you put a ff (fortissimo) as the dynamic marking? Don't you think it's too loud? I'd suggest mf as a dynamic.
- Some articulations could improve the arrangement. I'm thinking about putting staccato markings on the quarter notes in the LH.

Some wrong notes I found when listening to it closer:
M.2: LH G# should be an A
M.4: LH G# should be A
M.10 & 12: the same as M.2 & 4
M.21: the first 4 notes should be A-C#-A-F#

..Olimar posted just before me lol.

Thank you very much for the improvements! I replaced the files with yours.
#11
Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on April 18, 2016, 03:53:46 AMProtip: good enough isn't good enough.  If a sheet is good enough, that means it can still be improved.  A sheet isn't done until you look at it and instead of saying good enough, you say "this sheet is impeccable".  I still haven't learned this myself.

I get what you mean. Thank you for the tip! Right now I know nothing that I can improve to the score right now. If there is anything not good yet, you can always tell me.
#12
I reuploaded the .pdf and the .mus. I think it's good enough now to upload on the official site. Thank you PetrifiedLasagna for the help with the formatting and converting.
#13
Quote from: PetrifiedLasagna on April 17, 2016, 11:19:24 AMSounds great, but the formatting is a little bizarre. If you cut two measures from the first line and one from all the others you would have enough to warrant a second page. Also, I would recommend a molto allegro or vivace, because the tempo is more around 144 BMP.

Also, if you are having trouble with Finale (notepad?), I wouldn't mind helping you format the sheet.

Thank you very much. This is the best I could. You'll find the xml file with this link: https://onedrive.live.com/redir?resid=BC7871C6407A030C!32766&authkey=!AMexmXauMCY5FCU&ithint=file%2cxml
#14
Quote from: Tobbeh99 on April 08, 2016, 03:14:25 PMY, but it won't be able to fit on 1 page if you do so. But y, maybe make it on 2 pages with better measure distribution, maybe better but idk.


Great arrangement anyways!

You could look up [THIS] first. Your sheet needs proper formatting

Also post youtube videos of the song you've submitted, makes it easier comparing.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hfxO9RU4VGI

Hey! I edited the pdf so it fits the formatting rules. I hope it's good enough now to be uploaded. The problem is that Finale doesn't work and I can't fix it. I make my scores with Sibelius so I do have the xml file.