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- I think the chords in m. 2/4/59 would be easier to read with flats instead. Any particular reason they're written with sharps? (Also, compare 2 to m. 22)If there was a reason, I forgot. It's fixed now.[/quote]
- I'd recommend moving the f from the beginning of m. 21 to beat 3 of m. 20.Fixed.
- m. 49-50 and 51-52 sound like they should have thestaticnon-moving voices tied over similar to the previous measures.
- Beat 2 of m. 52 sounds like it should be G-Ab-B instead of F#-G-B.
- Also, a crescendo around m. 51-52 would be nice.
- D# instead of E in m. 56 RH beat 1.5?Used Eb instead to keep the intervals consistent.
- I'd suggest writing out two quarter rests instead of using a half rest in m. 57.Fixed.
Once again, Jacopo, you are going to have to do these things yourself. You can't just give us an hour-long video with no timestamps and expect us to find the original; that's not how submissions are supposed to operate, as that can take up a lot of updaters' free time, which many of them lack. Please understand that they and other arrangers like me want to help you, but you are making things more difficult for us than they need to be.A lot of these more obscure NES games don't have individual videos on YouTube for each track, and to be quite frank, a majority of people don't know a lot about other websites like Zophar's Domain and KH Insider. A full tracklist video is fine, but it should have timestamps (like this one).
You will have to find a suitable name for the song; "Track 16" is not an acceptable title. Your sheets cannot be labeled as "Track #", please start acknowledging this!Titling sheets is not an exact science. "Track #" is fine (in my opinion, it's analogous to "Sonata #" or "Symphony #"). If there is a more descriptive title that could be used (such as Dungeon Theme or something), that is usually preferred (I would do something like "Track # (Name)"). What matters is that there is consistency between other sheets from the same game.
I'm on a FFII streak, can you tell?I'm glad someone is doing it. I know I wouldn't, but that's more of my distaste for the game than the soundtrack itself... The music is still very nice.
I tried using slurs for this piece, but I'm not the best with them, so please let me know how to improve them.OK, let's see...
I plan on making many more Animal Crossing arrangements in the future, especially with the release of Animal Crossing: New Horizons approaching.I guess this means I should start arranging more too... I haven't done any AC stuff in awhile.
