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“LH chords at the end of m6 and m22 aren't playable at all.”
It’s supposed to be played by both hands (r.h. playing the top chord, l.h. playing the bottom notes).
I just left it out ‘cause it’s natural for me when I’m playing to cover the notes that my right hand can’t cover with my left hand and vice versa. I wasn’t sure how I should label that those notes should be played with the right hand.

“The bassline in m3-10 isn't really like you wrote it at all. The bass guitar hits the same notes every time in m3 and similar, and does some really interesting stuff in m9-10 that you just left out.”
I have to listen to it again, but I usually have a hard time picking out notes with my ears.

“I'm not sure tremeloes are the best approximation for what the LH is doing in m11-17...”
I’m honestly not to sure what’s going on there.

“Those repeated LH chords on b2 of every measure aren't that playable. I suggest, for, say, m2, removing the C in the chord on beat 2 and 3 and having the chord on b2.5 just be the C. This would give you the feel of the original without any repeated notes.”
I don’t find it too difficult, but if that would be a problem when I submit it to the site then I will make it easier. I have been known to have dyslexia from time to time, so correct me if I’m wrong, but there is no C in m.2 on beats 2 & 3. Unless you’re not counting the intro measure, in which case, I’d say it’s a good idea, since I do find that my hand tires quickly while playing the current left hand.

“8vbs are your friends. please use them.
There's more stuff in between m19 and 26 than you have written.
The major issue here is note beaming. Check out this thread and tell me if you need a longer explanation:
Also, please tie the half notes to whole notes in the empty measures. There is never a moment of silence in the original, so I don't know why you would have one here.
Maybe incorporate more of the drums into the LH? It would make it more interesting to play.”

I was planning on fixing this, and actually using and 8vb bass clef instead. Every other problem is due to my inexperience as a music sheet writer and arranger, I will be fixing it.

“for the love of notation, please please space your measures out further. Everything is so crammed that it ruins the spacing. Take m18, for example. Since there's no 2nd layer rests, it's impossible to tell what beat that quarter note is actually on since it's spaced the same as the half notes in m14.”
Yeah, this is also due to inexperience with Musescore and writing sheet music.

“I think fff is a bit excessive for this. mf or mp would be better imo.”
Uh, that would be due to me thinking it was extra loud since I had the volume up while arranging it.

“I'm positive the harmonies are not just 3rds all the way through the first page. There's much more going on here. Pretty sure there's always something going on in the LH, not sure why there's a few measures of rests. When things speed up, the RH is not just octaves here. There's more going on here (and not just 3rds).”
Again, this is all due to my inexperience, as this was literally my first score. I will be fixing it when I get around to it.

“Daily Life also desperately needs proper note beaming as well.”
Yeah, I only found out about proper beaming recently, I will fix this too. (I’m assuming you’re talking about Everyday Life)

Thank you for the advice :)

Fawful is There (2 pianos) - Mario & Luigi: Bowser’s Inside Story

Original song:

My arrangement:

Off-Topic / Re: The Post Your Thoughts of the Moment Thread 2
« on: October 20, 2020, 03:23:54 PM »
m o m e n t

Off-Topic / Re: The Introduction Thread
« on: October 19, 2020, 04:07:48 PM »
I’m kinda new here, and actually kinda new to arranging too, since I just started March of this year. I’m hoping to learn more about arranging and music in general here as well as contributing some of my own arrangements!

Favorite games: Xenoblade Chronicles, Kid Icarus Uprising, Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of Sky, Kirby’s Return to Dreamland.

Favorite instrument: Piano

Kid Icarus Uprising
Solo Menu -
Boss Battle 1 -

Air Ride
Frozen Hillside -

Return to Dreamland
Through the Forest -

Star Allies
Inner Sanctum -

Fire Emblem: Three Houses
Seeking New Heights -

Mario & Luigi: Partners in Time
File Select -
Title Theme -

Mario & Luigi: Bowser’s Inside Story
[new] Fawful is There (2 pianos) -

Octopath Traveler
The Cliftlands -

Paper Mario: Origami King
Folded Soldier’s First Appearance -
Toad Town in Trouble -

Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of Sky
Job Clear! -
Title Theme -

Super Smash Bros. Ultimate
The Valedictory Elegy Remix -

The Legend of Zelda: Spirit Tracks
Aboda Village -
Castle Town -
Game Over -
Story -
The Final Exam -

Xenoblade Chronicles
A Friend on My Mind -
Eryth Sea(currently undergoing revision) -
Everyday Life -
Face -
Rage, Darkness of the Heart -
Riki’s Kindness -

Definitive Edition
[new] Bionis’ Right Shoulder (Night) -

I am currently working on
- Picnic Road(Origami King)
- Autumn Mountain(Origami King)
- The Fascinating Flower Country(Bravely Default)
- Thunder Cloud Temple(Kid Icarus Uprising)
- True Mirror(Baten Kaitos)
- The Valedictory Elegy(Baten Kaitos)
- Red & Black(Bayonetta)
- Gran Dell(Xenoblade DE)

I fully support this project, Xenoblade has an amazing soundtrack.
I finished these, and I’m working on more:
Rage, Darkness of the Heart (needs revision),
Eryth Sea Day (needs revision, I’m working on the Night version too),
Everyday Life,
A Friend on My Mind,
Riki’s Kindness,

I can see that this project hasn’t been worked on for a while and I hope it gets started back up again!

Request / Re: [3DS] Kid Icarus: Uprising - "Boss Fight 1"
« on: October 12, 2020, 07:32:09 PM »
I took a shot at this song a few months ago:

Request / Re: [SWITCH] Xenoblade Chronicles - 'Bionis Shoulder (Night)'
« on: October 12, 2020, 07:28:51 PM »
Oh, hey, what a coincidence, I’m already working on this and it’s about halfway done!

Help Guides / Re: Guide Request Thread
« on: October 12, 2020, 07:20:38 PM »
Uh, I have no idea how to format my posts to attach files like music. Could you make a guide on writing posts?

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