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Submissions / Re: [NDS] The Legend of Zelda: Spirit Tracks - "Before the Final Battle" by Cashwarrior1
« on: December 01, 2023, 04:42:24 AM »So I'm hearing it as the top melody note is re-articulated for both measures (the flute for m5) while the bottom note is being held. I put them as separate layers to reflect that.Ah, okay I hear this as well.
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Rolled chord looks like a good addition. Seems like you could do the same for m33 as well? Just based off what I hear
I had thought I fixed m21 before uploading, but I guess not whoops. Also for 28, 30, and 32, I had the downbeat to reflect the bottom note of the guitar, but I think it wasn't very clear. I removed the staccatos and included them in the rolled chord.
• m6 do you hear the flute part plays the melody in triplets, and the string is as you have written? Obviously both can't be written in a good way, but I feel like the triplets are ever so slightly more prominent. Thoughts on replacing the two 16th's and 8th note pattern with three 8th note triplets?
• The slur in m9 is a little flat in shape, maybe you could pull the middle up a little bit? Arrows in my pic are direction I moved
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