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Site News / Re: New Updater! (Friday 14th of February 2020)
« on: February 29, 2020, 05:50:32 AM »

In that case!

Submission Archive / Re: [PS2] Persona 4 - "Corridor" by Samusthedude
« on: February 03, 2020, 04:30:46 AM »
I think it looks good, it is quite a lot but since I hear the stresses in the original I think it works out.

Just need a second opinion here but I personally approve

i'm hearing m14 as msf said
m48's bass i'm hearing an octave lower than written
otherwise, i have nothing else to say

my beef has vanished

Submission Archive / Re: [NDS] Harvest Moon DS - "Winter" by Code_Name_Geek
« on: February 02, 2020, 12:08:18 AM »
I think that works. I don't see any other problems so this has my approval

Submission Archive / Re: [PS2] Persona 4 - "Corridor" by Samusthedude
« on: February 01, 2020, 11:36:10 AM »
This one's almost there, I just have a couple of comments

m.22: the lone E on the third beat should be an octave higher
Intro: I don't quite understand the justification for the tenuto markings on alternate notes in the bass. I feel doing something akin to the treble clef would be better? Also, as you have a simile marking at m.5 you could also remove the tenuto markings from thereon out.

Optional stuff:
I feel like you know what you're doing, so you could add just a few optional things to really make it shine. For example, you could add phrase marks and tenuto marks to really emulate the phrasing and emphasis found in the original. Completely optional, but hey, it'd be cool.

i take it that michael jackson was not involved however

my only real beef with this is m.8, m.12 where the two voices in the top staff overlap and obscures the direction of the melody and the accomp on beat 1.5: on a pdf especially, where it's all black and white, it can be hard to tell what is going where. i'd use the note mover tool here just to boop them apart slightly so when you read it you can clearly say "oh this A is from the melody and this C is from the accomp"

Couple of comments
- I noticed your use of the (i forgot what it's called, but like in m.7 beat 2.5) is a bit inconsistent compared to what i hear
- For m.8 and other related measures, i think putting the top in another layer would be preferred (it shows how that line continues, and it's perfectly possible with the pedal you've notated)
- honestly? i'm not sure if it's just me but the courtesy flat on m.11 confuses me more than it helps, i think. looking through it, i would have already played a Db for the first beat, and seeing that courtesy accidental on the next Db would confuse me and make me second-guess myself
- m.28's first beat looks too empty compared to what i hear (a fuller D7) + misspelling

Submission Archive / Re: [MUL] Dark Souls - "Great Grey Wolf Sif" by Libera
« on: December 22, 2019, 12:05:25 PM »
only thing i'm curious about is why you didn't notate that choir coming in at m.32, since (i feel) the way it punctuates the relative peace is a bit important, so i'd add emphasis to that currently notated arpeggiated chord or something

looking good!

The only thing I'm not really a fan of here is with m.33-36 with the brass and the choir, since as is there's no real indication that they're separate voices. Otherwise, I like it!

Submissions / Re: [N64] Mario Kart 64 - "Staff Roll (Duet)" by Nine Lives
« on: November 17, 2019, 02:36:25 AM »
Accents could work, or even tenuto markings (which, even though it means to hold down for the full length, also implies some degree of emphasis on the note)

Also sorry for not being too clear on this, when I wrote "dotted eighth - dotted eighth - eighth" it was a bit of a shorthand, since in this case you'd have to split the second dotted eighth to show the beat by doing "dotted eighth - sixteenth tied to eighth - eighth"

Music / Re: Nintendo musical counterpoint?
« on: October 28, 2019, 07:15:40 AM »
For a super unambiguous example: (Super Mario RPG)

Site News / Update, Tuesday 24th of September 2019
« on: September 24, 2019, 04:28:36 AM »
I was going to put an Autumn pun, but I didn't want to Fall over backwards coming up with one.  And for you southern hemisphere folks, I'm trying but just nothing Springs to mind.

Hope y'all had a good equinox, now have some more sheets.

[GBA] Banjo-Pilot
"Lava Track" by Jack

[SWITCH] Cadence of Hyrule: Crypt of the NecroDancer Featuring The Legend of Zelda
"Zelda's Lullaby (File Select)" by Zeila

[NES] Castlevania II: Simon's Quest
"The Silence of Daylight" (Replacement) by

[PC] Cave Story (Doukutsu Monogatari)
"Balcony" by Th3Gavst3r

[PC] CrossCode
"First Scholars (Two Pianos)" by Greg

[MUL] Final Fantasy XIV: Shadowbringers
"What Angel Wakes Me" by Static

[GBA] Fire Emblem: The Blazing Blade
"Lyn's Desire" by Libera

[SWITCH] Fire Emblem: Three Houses
"Life at Garreg Mach Monastery" by Latios212

[SNES] Harvest Moon
"Winter" by Code_Name_Geek

[SNES] Kirby Super Star
"Corkboard" (Replacement) by Yug Guy

[MUL] M.U.L.E.
"Main Menu" by Th3Gavst3r

[SNES] Mario Paint
"Monkeys (Duet)" by Nine Lives

[SNES] Super Mario World 2: Yoshi's Island
"Yoshi's Island" (Replacement) by Latios212

[Wii] Super Paper Mario
"Big Blooper Appears" by ThatHiddenCharacter

[SWITCH] Super Smash Bros. Ultimate
"MEGALOVANIA" by mastersuperfan

[GB] The Final Fantasy Legend
"Wipe Your Tears Away" by

[PC] Touhou 8: Imperishable Night
"Reach for the Moon, Immortal Smoke" by Maelstrom

[PC] Undertale
"Spear of Justice (Beta)" by Zeila

[Wii] Xenoblade Chronicles
"Gaur Plain" by Libera

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