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Messages - InsigTurtle

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Just replying to a couple of stuff before I make changes

For m.8, I did do a little bit of revoicing there, just to try and simplify things a bit.
m.19, I'll do that for sure

The notch at the end of m.11 was probably from before I redid the measure distribution, didn't notice that

m.20 I think rolling isn't necessary here, the first beat is supposed to be a C in unison there (D3ath rightfully mentioned that I should change the notehead there) so there shouldn't be any Ab and A at the same time, so I'm just gonna double check to see what you're looking at here before I make changes

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That's true, especially when the score is information-dense it becomes a lot harder to interpret the piece. I've made the spacing changes you noted.

For the first bit, it was because I heard that voice as being predominant versus the 16ths, and also I thought it'd give a nice bit of unity by keeping that voice throughout vs. switching between different instruments' parts.

Also, perhaps this might be an extra layer of information that'd be even more difficult to parse during sightreading, but I may add an indication to some of the inner voices that they are optional? I'm finding it pretty difficult to remove some parts and to still conserve that original "feel", so to speak.

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Site News / Winter Solstice Update! (Or Summer Solstice Update!) (12/21/18)
« on: December 21, 2018, 11:23:06 PM »
22:23 GMT on December 21, 2018 is the Winter Solstice in the Northern Hemisphere! (And Summer Solstice in the Southern Hemisphere1) So, to celebrate Winter, let's have some wintry sheets! (And maybe a few summery sheets!)


[3DS] Bravely Default
"The Immortal Country" by Libera

[PS2] Drakengard
"Fourth Chapter - On the Ground" by Libera

[PS1] Final Fantasy IX
"Esto Gaza" by Renaud Bergeron

[SNES] Final Fantasy VI
"The Mines of Narshe" by Static

[PS1] Final Fantasy VII
"Buried in Snow" by Renaud Bergeron

[NES] Ice Climber
"Game Start" by Yug Guy
"Stage Clear" by Yug Guy
"Stage Theme" by Yug Guy
"Title Screen / Bonus Stage” by Yug Guy

[NDS] Kirby: Squeak Squad
"Wonder of the Stars" by LeviR.star

[3DS] Luigi’s Mansion: Dark Moon
"Secret Mine" by LeviR.star

[SNES] Mario & Wario
"Level 4: Ice Cave" by LeviR.star

[PSP] Monster Hunter Freedom 2
"Pokke Village" by Latios212

[MUL] NieR
"Snow in Summer" by Libera

[SWITCH] Octopath Traveler
"Flamesgrace, Guiding Light" by Static
"The Frostlands" by Latios212

[GCN] Paper Mario: The Thousand-Year Door
"Fahr Outpost" by Static

[NDS] Pokémon Ranger
"Panula Cave" by Trasdegi
"Wintown" by Trasdegi

[SNES] Seiken Densetsu 3
"Another Winter" by Static

[PC] Spellforce: The Breath of Winter
"Cenwen" by Libera

[SNES] Super Bomberman 3
"Winterland" by LeviR.star

[SNES] Super Mario Kart
"Vanilla Lake" (Replacement) by Th3Gavst3r

[GCN] Super Mario Sunshine
"Gelato Beach" by E. Gadd Industries

[PC] The Legend of Dark Witch
"Freesia" by Static

[MUL] The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild
"Snow Bowling Minigame" by Latios212

[ARCADE] Vs. Ice Climber
"Bonus Stage" by LeviR.star


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Project Archive / Re: NSM Winter Update Project Thread
« on: December 21, 2018, 04:03:07 AM »
Also good with Fahr Outpost and Fourth Chapter - On the Ground so let's get ready to roll

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Project Archive / Re: NSM Winter Update Project Thread
« on: December 21, 2018, 01:24:30 AM »
Cool with Another Winter, Pokke Village, Snow in Summer, The Immortal Country.

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Project Archive / Re: NSM Winter Update Project Thread
« on: December 20, 2018, 01:52:32 PM »
To be honest, I heard it as an augmented chord with A natural, but you shouldn't trust me right now since it's 5 am and I've gotta sleep :P Could have been the A natural up top messing with my poor earsies wearsies oopsie woopsie did a fucksy wucksy

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Project Archive / Re: NSM Winter Update Project Thread
« on: December 20, 2018, 11:05:29 AM »
Regarding Gelato Beach, I'm hearing it as an E as well (m16). I'm cool (HAHAHA GEDDIT) with it.

Fahr Outpost - I love the harmony in this one. Not quite sure about the notation of the last chord, since the impression it gives off isn't quite like the original. A bit hard to follow which lines you're writing down in m.1-2 (even in m.6, I'm hearing a slightly different pattern in the second half of the measure).

Will add more to this, just making sure my post doesn't get lost to the heavens

Fourth Chapter ~ On the Ground - Some of your dynamics have weird placing (or maybe my Finale's messing it up), m.37's 8va appears to be clashing with repeat, m.36 LH's last dyad might be able to use ties extending to the repeat, would rewrite m.38 in a way that allows for that D to be accentuated and ring out y'know

Wintown - Only issue i have is with the last chord in m.4 there, doesn't quite sound dissonant enough

The Immortal Country - Hearing a mordent on m.53 instead of just a grace note, not really hearing the m.56 ornamentation though. Was wondering about the bass part in m.37, I'm guessing you've done that so the LH can play the lower voice in the top staff, right?

Snow in Summer - Even though I can tell why some of the harmony was left out from m.65 to 80, that still makes me sad :( Kinda hard to follow after m.81 but I'm hearing an F in m.85 as the main note that comes out (giving the top line a contour that goes like Bb Gb F Eb)

The mines of Narshe - Only comment is I'm wondering what happened to the B in m.4 (since the top line goes C to B)

Another Winter - m.13 and 14's top staff's bottom voice, i'm guessing you switched the F and G in beat 4 of m.13 and changed it slightly in m.14 to avoid 2nds right? likewise in m.25? i'm not the hugest fan of that but i think it's cool.

Pokke Village - This is nice. You could have filled some of the chords out a bit more in m.41 to end (e.g. the G in m.41, m.42) but I can understand if you avoided that since it'd be very dense. Otherwise, I like it.


Also, please respond to your feedback today so we can get things going since tomorrow is the solstice! What a happy day!

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Music / Re: Arrangement Highlights of 2018
« on: December 16, 2018, 10:35:53 AM »
I'm so glad you asked!
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Off-Topic / Re: NSM 2018 Holiday Postcards!
« on: December 14, 2018, 11:42:13 AM »
is it too late to sign up

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Just replying to a couple of things rn:

In general - some of the rests, I hid so that they wouldn't bother me when I was arranging, but I forgot to show them again.

m.11- Yeah, the chord should have been higher, and I don't really like its sound when it's in the bass, but I put it there to make it easier. I'll mess with that. The slur actually refers to the phrasing of the flute line underneath, not the koto. Tried to imply the koto line was detached by ending the phrasing the note before
m.13-14 I actually use my RH 4-5 for the tremolo, which left my thumb free for that. Since the pedal is being used there, it's also possible to sound the F and E without holding it. The bass notation, I don't quite remember either, though.
m.16 I play the bottom 5 notes with 1-5-1-2-3 with my LH, so I left it like this so other performers could use their own fingerings.
m.20  - have no clue how that second flat got there, will fix
m.21 - honestly, I think it'd be clearer just to use three staves for this section. I don't like the clashing, but having the slur underneath makes it more clear which line it's referring to.

Noticed some alignment is a bit off, will fix that too.

Also, I kept it at 80% resizing since I hate how large everything is when printed out at 100% size, but I can do some tinkering to spread it out a bit more. I rationalized keeping a ton of voices in since even though having 5 voices at the same time isn't quite idiomatic for piano, I shun tradition anyway, and it's still possible to keep the voices clear if you're precise enough with your hands.

That being said, I do realize that most people who play this will probably muddle the voices :P

EDIT: (Dec 20) updated

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Project Archive / Re: Potential Winter Update
« on: December 11, 2018, 06:22:06 AM »
What kind of potential are we talking about? Gravitational potential? Electric potential?

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- "Insig, why don't you stop spreading chords over 2 octaves?"
- "Insig, why don't you stop using extremely dense chord voicing?"

no.

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Forum Games / Re: Topic Kicking
« on: December 10, 2018, 10:11:54 AM »
inevitably... there is an end.
in the time before,
                            there has been a search for Meaning
     and it
               is feared, for the universal Meaning
, accepted by all,
                         is unknown;
                                  as such, Man has
searched for a Meaning

 but–
                                  where is it?



     -

bup

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Forum Games / Re: Questions, Questions, Questions
« on: December 10, 2018, 10:03:43 AM »
#206 - December 9, 2016
What do you daydream about?

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