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Looks like no one else has anything else to say about "Club 64" so when Nacho gets the url fixed, we'll move on!

URL has been fixed =)

Great Work! I don't see a thing wrong!
Except one thing: Url should be http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/.

Oh and how do you get finale and the mp3 to play together in sync, Nacho?

Will fix that.

I hit the play button on finale as the original audio starts
But there are obviously better ways to do it. That's just my quick way, and it isn't always perfectly in sync but it gets the job done

Thanks! I uploaded a new one! I didn't overdue the amount of key sigs like the 1st version..hopefully this one is ready

That definitely makes sense, but all in all I've learned through experience that the easiest for the performer to read is the way to go. In that case, should I revert to my first version where I use multiple key sigs or leave what I have as is?

I do agree with the octave move in m.10, thanks. However I strongly believe that although the enharmonic spelling may be correct in the images you posted, I can guarantee you any piano player would prefer to read the accidentals I wrote out, because of the chord changes the piece implies. I can fix it to your interpretation if that's what we are really aiming for, but I fear I'm only going to make the performer upset. About the quarter rest, I have often read professionally published piano pieces where the rest hangs there because of the layer. Again, I can fix that if it's what we're going for.

I uploaded the updated pdf and mus, with the entirety of the piece in Ab major with accidentals. Hope that is better.


-nacho

Fixed some wrong notes at meas. 10 and 18.
The bass notes may sound dissonant but those are the occurring notes in the original.
Talk about quirky music! lol. Here's the edited file

Fixed! Here's a link to my revised files. Thanks for the critique   

Sorry Nacho. Im having trouble getting your songs in the OP
Im gonna make a new layout of the Op later with your songs in too. Right now I have to take care of something.....

No worries, thank you!

Very pretty. Also, it's nice to see I'm not the only crazy person that puts in invisible pedal markings

Knock off 1 flat from the key signature. The tonic is Ab major. The reason you get those Gb's is because they're borrowed from the mixolydian mode. M. 13-18 is pretty cool. I'm questioning whether or not the key change is necessary, but from the looks of it, if we kept it in Ab for this section you'd get a lot of funky B double-flats, Cb's, and Fb's.

I thought about this too, but I wanted to minimize the amount of accidentals. But with all the mode mixture and modulations, I do agree about Ab being the key. Should I stay in one key and use accidentals or leave it as is?

Original Audio

Here are my 5 new ones to submit so you guys can add them to the OP. Originally meant to submit these individually but if this project gets its own update I'd rather submit them here! 

Approach to the Mansion
Club 64
Keeping Pace
Monty Moles Attack Petunia
Tubba Blubba's Castle

I decided making adjustments myself because talking through them by posting would take too long and not get far. Here's the mus of my suggested improvements. Hope they help.

-nacho

PS what I do to check for accuracy is to play the mus file simultaneously with the original audio. I caught the wrong bass notes immediately that way. Tempo marking is on point so kudos to you guys Very cool piece and good arrangement!

Here's the Monty Moles Attack Petunia arrangement