for your brawl gallery arrangement...
not to be rude, but did you copy it off a midi or something? that bass is so contorted and frankly (sorry), ugly sounding, it seems like you either A) placed random notes or B) ripped off a midi... i assume you know that copying midis is wrong, and if i'm wrong about you copying a midi, then i apologize...
for your glitzville arrangement, i assume you know that many of those intervals from bars 1-30 stretch FAR beyond those of a normal hand length... they could be played by the left hand, but if so, you should write them in nicely, as in put them in the bass stave...
FFX arrangement, song of prayer... i've never played FFX, but this is absurdly simple almost to the point where making a sheet is more work than actually learning/playing it... there's nothing 'wrong' with it, per-say, but it just doesnt seem quite right...
harvest moon, fall arrangement... bars 1-7, are a little on the more difficult side, i'd say that generally, they're leaning on a more impossible level... just an odd thought... i've always known harvest moon to be very calming and slow, but this arrangement doesnt seem to fit that mood at all, or even if it's not the arrangement, this "fall" song, does not seem to suit harvest moon or fall...
anyways, i guess i'll look at the other ones later, but yeah...
not to be rude, but did you copy it off a midi or something? that bass is so contorted and frankly (sorry), ugly sounding, it seems like you either A) placed random notes or B) ripped off a midi... i assume you know that copying midis is wrong, and if i'm wrong about you copying a midi, then i apologize...
for your glitzville arrangement, i assume you know that many of those intervals from bars 1-30 stretch FAR beyond those of a normal hand length... they could be played by the left hand, but if so, you should write them in nicely, as in put them in the bass stave...
FFX arrangement, song of prayer... i've never played FFX, but this is absurdly simple almost to the point where making a sheet is more work than actually learning/playing it... there's nothing 'wrong' with it, per-say, but it just doesnt seem quite right...
harvest moon, fall arrangement... bars 1-7, are a little on the more difficult side, i'd say that generally, they're leaning on a more impossible level... just an odd thought... i've always known harvest moon to be very calming and slow, but this arrangement doesnt seem to fit that mood at all, or even if it's not the arrangement, this "fall" song, does not seem to suit harvest moon or fall...
anyways, i guess i'll look at the other ones later, but yeah...